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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ArabFlower

You write superbly👏 and I apologise for taking this long to actually comment

I have been a silent reader of yours for a while now, since lectures and assignments gave me little free time to actually voice my appreciation of the magnificent way in which you portray Zoya
From all the works I have read, you definitely gave our heroine a backbone and for that I salute you👏
I enjoy this story and get excited when I see a new chapter has been posted😳


Glad u like d story😊
Its okay dear as I understand dat u r busy wid ur studies n writing ur own stories here😊

Cvs r showing Zoya in a bad light who has no self-respect for herself n easily forgives Asad every time. I was surprised dat how can cvs show Zoya falling for Asad by just seeing his six-packs n thinking him as a Secret Agent like Bond. Which progressive girl vl fall so easily wid a person who is regressive n judges people by their clothes? They wud hv shown Zoya falling in love wid him in a different way like wen he changes his regressive opinions on his own widout Zoya's lecture. Cvs r insulting women by showing all dis.

In d 1st part, u hv read how d base of d story had been wen Asad was extremely horrible to Zoya. How long a woman tolerate such a jerk who does not respects her a bit?

Asad has now lost Najma n soon he vl lose Dilshad too wen he vl be blamed for doing some cheap things which actually was Tanveer's plan. Asad vl hv only Tanveer n his step-siblings wid his side. He vl start to realize Tanveer's real face n how his step-siblings always actually act like his 'chamchas'. He vl break his relation wid his step-siblings but vl be stuck wid Tanveer against his wishes cuz of one of d cheap plans of Tanveer. Then Asad vl be completely broken n he vl regret for being regressive n judgemental in nature dat put him in d current situation n how it made him lose Zoya forever wid no chance of getn her back.

But, Asad vl get out of his difficult situation wen he thinks dat he lost everything in life n his life is ruined. So, he vl learn d biggest lesson of his life. Dis story is abt a woman's self-respect n a man's realization of all d mistakes he committed due to his stupid beliefs.
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting update..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
zoya love that u r helping asad and family with ur taunts
asad is thinking anusing his brains now
loved how she handled the haseena problem
and how he put haseena in her place
the only problem now is that billi
oh is was watching her show and her pic and the bitch spoilt it
he eats her food in the nite isnt that love
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting update..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊


Thank u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

nice update Thank u😊
zoya love that u r helping asad and family with ur taunts Zoya has changed but she still has heart so she has turned her advice into taunts😉
asad is thinking anusing his brains now Yes, now he understands how dumb he actually was
loved how she handled the haseena problem She has turned d game on Haseena thru Asad😈
and how he put haseena in her place He even told her to stay away 4m Zoya👏
the only problem now is that billi She vl create a lot of problems for Asad n Zoya😡
oh is was watching her show and her pic and the bitch spoilt it But Asad did not drank d coffee made by her dat annoyed her again😆
he eats her food in the nite isnt that love He vl realize soon dat he loves Zoya😳
continue soon

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lovely update n also promo
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Originally posted by: kritz4ever

lovely update n also promo


Thank u😊
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I hope Zoya starts seeing the changes Asad is going through for her...
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Originally posted by: rajsmi

I hope Zoya starts seeing the changes Asad is going through for her...


Zoya is seeing changes but Tanveer vl start creating problems.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 10

Zoya sets up d punching bag in d room. She then starts doing boxing n kickboxing on d punching bag. She is enjoying doing dat. Tanveer is passing by Zoya's room. She is dressed in light pink salwar kameez wid pink dupatta covering her head. She hears some noises in Zoya's room. Lukn d door half open, she peeps inside n is shocked to see d sight. She is shocked to see Zoya punching n kicking d punching bag. Her mouth became wide wid shock.


Tanveer in light pink dress


"Ya Allah, wat dis girl is doing?" asked Tanveer to herself shockingly, (smiles evilly)I sud bring Asad n show him wat his wife is doing? He vl surely get angry wid her."

Tanveer goes in Asad's room after knocking.

"Jammy, I want to show u sumthn. U won't believe wat Zoya is doing," said Tanveer.

"Wat she is doing?" asked Asad.

"Come n see on ur own," replied Tanveer.

Tanveer takes Asad outside Zoya's room. Asad sees Zoya punching n kicking d punching bag but instead of getn angry, he smiles seeing her doing dat. He recalls a past incident during their nikaah wen Zoya was doing d same in his room n he gets angry.

-----Flashback-----

One evening during their nikaah days, Zoya is wearing a blue vest n blue shorts wid wrist bands. She is punching n kicking d punching bag. Asad enters their room n gets angry seeing her wat she was doing.

"Wat do u think u r doing, Zoya?" asked Asad angrily.

Zoya is shocked n she stops wat she was doing.

"I am doing some boxing n kickboxing, Asad. U also love to do dat na. I do dis sometimes everyday n sometimes every alternative day or weneva I feel like doing it. I hv dis hobby 4m many years. As u know, I even know karate," replied Zoya wid a smile.

"Dis does not suits a woman. I do dis cuz I am a man," said Asad angrily, "I don't want u to do all these things in my room. U r even wearing such short clothes."

Zoya gets angry now.

"Wat d hell do u mean dat dis does not suits a woman n u can do it cuz u r a man?" asked Zoya angrily, "U r such a Male Chauvinistic Pig. How can u just tell me not do dis? U r becumn too irritating n interfering. Where do u heard dat women don't do all dis n only men do dis? R u really 4m dis planet? Or r u saying dis crap to hurt me? Don't do u know dis much dat women r also in these sports? These sports r done by women for exercise n learning self-defence. And wat do mean by ur room? Its my room too. And these clothes r made for women only n no one does boxing n kickboxing in jeans, salwar-kameez n sarees. U sud respect others likes n dislikes but u r just selfish. U need to get a life."

She picks up d empty diet coke bottle 4m d table n angrily crushes it wid her right hand very easily while staring @ him wid anger in her eyes. Asad gets shocked n speechless wid dis.

"Do wateva u want. I am going to watch TV in d hall," said Asad annoyingly left d room.

-----Flashback Ends-----

Asad comes out of his thoughts n feels bad for his behaviour wid Zoya. He luks hurt but smiles again seeing wat Zoya is doing. Tanveer is puzzled seeing him smile.

"Jammy, y r u smiling?" asked Tanveer.

"Cuz I am loving wat Zoya is doing," replied Asad wid a smile, "Boxing n kickboxing r great for exercise. I also do it. U sud also do dis if u want. But u vl hv to buy suitable clothes for urself to do all dis cuz u can't do all dis in ur salwar-kameez. I think v sud go 4m here cuz its not right peeping into someone's else room widout their knowledge."

Tanveer gets annoyed by Asad smiling @ Zoya n wat he replied to her question.

At night, Zoya made veg biryani n French Fries for herself. As usual, Asad luks @ her while hiding. Tanveer too sees Asad going near d kitchen. She hides n luks @ Asad lukn @ Zoya eating d biryani n French Fries. Zoya gets up after eating. She has left some on d kitchen platform. She wahes her hands n mouths n then drinks water.

"I hv left some food which I vl eat later. I need to make a presentation now," said Zoya.

As soon as Zoya goes 4m d kitchen, Asad enters d kitchen n eats some of her biryani n French Fries. Tanveer gets annoyed watching dis. She goes to her room in anger.

Next day, Zoya is on a cover page of a fortnightly fashion magazine. Her photo on d cover page is of New Year Fashion Show. Najma shows d magazine to Zoya in her room.

"Zoya, u r on d cover page magazine," said Najma happily.

"Wow, I can't believe it," said Zoya happily.

"See wats written on d cover page- New York born NRI fashion designer Zoya Farooqui did her first fashion show in India for New Year 2013 Fashion Show," said Najma.

"Ammi, abbu, aapi n jiju vl be very happy," said Zoya.

"Of course Zoya, they vl be very happy," said Najma wid a smile.

Scene shifts to Razzaq Ali Mansion.

"Anwar, look na. Our Zoya is on d cover page," said Zeenat wid a smile.

"Hope she gets more successful," said Anwar wid a smile.

Scene shifts to Asad seeing d magazine on d coffee table in d hall. He sees Zoya's photo on d cover page. He smiles n picks it up.

"Zoya, I a very happy to see u on d cover page," said Asad wid a smile.

Tanveer who was entering d hall sees wat Asad was doing. She gets angry.

"Wat had happened to Asad? Y he is getn so drawn 2wards Zoya?" thinks Tanveer angrily.

Tanveer goes 4m there angrily. Asad keeps d magazine back on d table n goes to his office. Dilshad comes n sees d magazine on d table. She smiles happily seeing Zoya's photo.

Scene shifts to SM. Haseena, Chand n Imraan comes in SM. Haseena has a magazine in her hand. She shows d fashion magazine to SM people where Zoya is on d cover page. All r shocked to see it.

"Zoya on d magazine cover! exclaimed Razia in shock.

"Yes, I can't believe Rashid Miya dat ur bahu is so famous to come on d magazine's cover page," said Haseena.

"Haseena, Zoya may hv really worked hard to reach where she is. In spite of being 4m a rich family, she made her own identity," said Rashid wid a smile.

"But how long she vl be ur bahu, Rashid Miya?" asked Haseena, "Within 2 months, she n Asad vl be divorced."
"Haseena, y r u always after Asad n Zoya's matter?" asked Badi Bi, "Y u even brought dis magazine to show us?"

"Bi, wat wrong did I asked?" asked Haseena, "Zoya vl soon leave ur elder grandson Asad."

"Haseena, stop interfering in Asad n Zoya's matter," said Badi Bi firmly, "Asad had told u d same yesterday then also u don't stop talking abt them. Talk abt Nikhat n Imraan only."

"Bi, u all sud ask Asad n Zoya to know d problems in their marriage so dat v cud sort it out. V sud convince them not to divorce each other. Wat Asad had done to Zoya dat she is so angry wid him to not even use Khan as her surname?" asked Haseena.

"Haseena, y don't u understand a simple thing?" asked Rashid, "Stop interfering in their matter. If they don't want to tell anything y sud v force them. Plz, stay out of dis."

Haseena keeps quiet.

"Haseena, lets talk abt Nikhat n Imraan," said Razia.

2 days later, Zoya wears a yellow saree wid yellow sleeveless blouse for d office. She comes in d hall where Asad n Tanveer r there.


"Zoya," said Asad.

"Yes," said Zoya.

"Now, Haseena Bi no longer gives fairness creams to Nikhat," said Asad.

"Jammy, y Haseena Bi stopped giving fairness creams to Nikhat? Asked Tanveer, "I thought she cares for Nikhat so much. Dats y, she used to give her fairness creams dat Nikhat's skin become lighter bfore d wedding n her photos comes nice."

Asad n Zoya gets shocked @ wat she said. Asad cud not believe dat his childhood friend is saying such thing abt his sister while Zoya even though being his enemy supported Nikhat 4m her heart while pushing him wid her taunts to do sumthn for Nikhat.

"Tanveer, it was not care but only taunts n insults to Nikhat," replied Asad.

"Jammy, its not like dat. U r taking it wrong. Y Haseena Bi vl taunt n insult Nikhat? If dat was really d case then she wud not hv given her fairness creams. She don't want people to insult her future bahu so she wants to shut everyone's mouth," said Tanveer.

"Tanveer, I don't want to talk more abt dis," said Asad firmly.

"Asad, u hv really changed a bit. I can't believe dat u really care so much for ur step-sister dat u r not ready to even to listen to ur Tanu," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Zoya, Tanu was saying wrong," said Asad.

"Glad dat u realized dat," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Zoya, can u change ur decision of divorce?" asked Asad, "I am realizing how dumb I really was dat I ignored most of d things n how dumb I was being so orthodox."

Tanveer gets unhappy.

"Asad, I vl not change my decision. V can't be back 2gthr. I want to ask u a question. If ur abbu ever calls ur ammi or tries to meet her then vl u like it?" asked Zoya.

Asad is shocked n speechless wid her question.

"I got my answer, Asad," said Zoya, "Same way, I can't come back to u again."
Zoya went outside d house. Asad luks hurt while Tanveer is happy.

Tanveer clings to Asad n touches his upper arm n says, "Jammy, Zoya does not understands u. If she had really understood u then she wud hv changed her decision."
Asad feels uncomfortable @ d way Tanveer is clinging to him n touching him.

"Wat do u mean, Tanu?" asked Asad.

"Jammy, Zoya is not like d girl u wanted. U wanted a traditional n conservative girl but Zoya is a modern girl dat also a NRI 4m New York. Girls like these don't care for other's feelings. They only think abt themselves n their benefits," replied Tanveer.

Asad is not happy wid her talking abt Zoya like dat. Asad removes her hands off him which Tanveer does not likes.

"Tanveer, how can u talk abt Zoya like dis? How much do u know abt her?" asked Asad in a displeased tone, "I can't believe dat my childhood friend can be so judgemental,"

"Jammy, I can't see u hurt n she is hurting u again n again," replied Tanveer.

"If u don't want me to get hurt her then u sud stop talking wrong abt Zoya," said Asad firmly, "She is right in her place. Wat she is doing is nothing before wat all I did wid her."

"But Jammy...," Tanveer was abt to say sumthn but was cut by Asad.

"Tanveer, I don't to hear anything against Zoya," said Asad firmly, "I am going to office."

Asad goes outside d house. Tanveer is annoyed.

"From many days, Jammy supports Zoya over me, Tanveer, his childhood friend," says Tanveer annoyingly to herself, "Wat has dat girl done to my Jammy?"

At Amber, Zoya is discussing sumthn wid her employees n intern.

"Guys, v hv another show next week," said Zoya.

"V vl make dis show also rock," said Geeti.

"V all hv to work on d designs 4m now only," said Zoya.

"Don't worry Mam, v vl start working soon," said Preeti.

In d evening, Zoya is walking in a market showing some photos to people.

"Hope, I get to know abt those photos," thinks Zoya, "I can't show some photos to anyone as it might be dangerous for me."

She is not able to find out abt d photos 4m d people. She keeps d photos back in a small metal clutch which has a number locking system on it to avoid anyone else opening it. Haseena n Chand also comes in d market. They see Zoya n come to her.

"These two r again here," thinks Zoya annoyingly.

"Zoya beta," said Haseena Bi wid a smile.

"Yes," said Zoya.

"Wat happened between u n Asad? Y r u so angry wid him?" asked Haseena.

Zoya gets annoyed.

"Haseena Bi, don't interfere in my n Asad' matter," replied Zoya firmly.

Zoya is abt to walk to her car wen she stops due to Haseena.

"Zoya beta, I am sorry," said Haseena wid a smile.

"Its okay," said Zoya.

"Zoya, u r wearing such a beautiful saree. It must be so costly na?" asked Haseena wid a smile holding her saree's pallu n lukn @ it wid wide eyes, "How much it costs?"

"4m where u bought dis saree?" asked Chand wid a smile holding her pallu.

Zoya gets angry.

"Just leave my pallu. U both r embarrassing me n r making a scene here," said Zoya firmly, "And abt my saree, its given by aapi's friend as a gift. U both r irritating me now.

Haseena n Chand leaves her pallu. Zoya gets into her car n drives away.

Zoya comes home lukn annoyed. Asad is watching TV in d hall.

"Bloody loosers," said Zoya wid frustration.

"Whom u r teln dat?" asked Asad.

"Haseena Bi n Chand Bi," replied Zoya, "They met me in d market n started asking d reason y v r divorcing even though u warned Haseena Bi at it. They even embarrassed by asking d cost abt my saree n 4m where I bought by holding my pallu in d market."

Zoya tells him d whole market incident. Asad gets shocked n furious.

"They sud learn some manners on how to behave wid people in public," said Asad.

"They were too irritating," said Zoya.

"U sud ignore them n not pay much attention to them," said Asad.

"Exactly," said Zoya.

Zoya walks to her room as Asad luks @ her.

"These 2 women hv no shame. They hv embarrassed Zoya in d market wid their shamelessness," thinks Asad furiously, "How vl Nikhat live wid these mad people?"

Next day, wen Haseena, Chand n Imraan comes in SM then Asad also comes after some time. He luks furiously @ Haseena n Chand.

"I told u, Haseena Bi to stay away 4m Zoya n not to trouble but wat u did wid her yesterday was so embarrassing," said Asad furiously staring @ her.

"Asad, I had not done anything to her," said Haseena.

"Dat means Zoya is lying?" asked Asad.

"I did not said dat," replied Haseena.

"I had told u not to interfere in my n Zoya's matter but still u asked her d reason of our divorce. U both even troubled her by asking d price of her saree n holding it in d market. U both hv embarrassed my wife," said Asad teln everyone abt d incident.

Everyone is shocked.

"Dats too much, Haseena, Chand. Wat if someone does d same wid a girl 4m ur house? V hv told many times not to interfere in Asad n Zoya's matter but still u both r troubling them like u both were after knowing abt Ayaan n Asad's relation," said Badi Bi furiously.

"But Badi Bi, v just wanted to know abt her saree," said Chand.

"Dat does not mean u both can embarrass her by asking her so many questions n holding her saree as if u both hv never seen a saree in ur life," said Badi Bi.

"If u ever trouble Zoya then u vl hv to face d consequences," warned Asad.

Haseena n Chand gets scared.

"Y r u supporting ur wife so much wen she only hates u?" asked Gaffur.

"Siddiqui Sahab, I am getn back wat I had done. But dat does not means dat I vl tolerate anyone troubling n embarrassing her. Haseena Bi n Chand Bi needs to stay in their limits. Wat if someone did d same wid ur daughter, Nikhat or Nuzhat?" asked Asad.

Gaffur is shocked n speechless.

"Y r u so quiet, Siddiqui Sahab?" asked Asad staring @ him, "4m next time, u sud better think properly before asking such questions. Well, I am leaving now."

Scene shifts to Zoya's cabin. She is wearing a white shirt n blue jeans. She gets a call 4m Asad. She answers it.

"Hello," said Zoya

"I went to Ayaan's house n warned Haseena Bi n Chand Bi to not interfere in our matter," said Asad 4m his cabin.

"Thanks," said Zoya, "These 2 women r getn on my nerves."
"They won't trouble u again n if they do dat v vl not spare them," said Asad.

"Right," said Zoya.

"Okay bye," said Asad.

"Bye," said Zoya n hung up.

"Asad is really changing so much nowadays. Yesterday, he even disagreed wid his dear friend Tanu. Well Asad, u still hv to learn a lot especially abt ur dear Tanu," said Zoya wid a broad smile, "U admire her wid her quiet nature n her way of dressing. But who knows dat there is more to her than wat she shows. But Asad, u r too innocent abt dis fact."

2 days later, Asad n Zoya r in d garden @ night. Asad is in black kurta n black pyjama while Zoya is in her black nightie. Tanveer who comes out of d house sees them n gets annoyed. She hides some distance away. She cud not hear wat they r talking.

"Zoya, I hope Haseena Bi n Chand Bi hv not troubled u now," said Zoya.

"No, they hv not troubled me now," said Zoya.

"U hv helped me, Zoya," said Asad.

"How do u think I helped u, Asad?" asked Zoya lukn puzzled.

"Cuz of u, I n Ayaan did not hv to hide our relationship 4m anyone n Haseena Bi has stopped asking for things. Imraan has also stopped asking for d car," replied Asad.

"Asad, I was actually taunting u, Ayaan n others. And u tuk my taunts as advice," said Zoya wid a hearty laugh, "But u also helped me by warning those 2 women to stay away 4m me."

"So, v helped each otjer in some or other way. So, can v friends?" asked Asad wid a smile extending his hand 2wards her, "Its wat u wanted but I was so mean wid u."

"Asad wants to do friendship wid me. I can't believe it. Its just friendship so wats d big deal," thinks Zoya.

She extends her hand too n shakes his hand wid a smile.

Tanveer gets annoyed n thinks annoying, "Y they r shaking hands?"

Zoya then trips on sumthn n is abt to fall down but Asad catches her in his arms. Mitwa' plays in d bg(1st Mitwa' in dis story). Asad n Zoya r lost into each other's eyes. Asad has a soft luk on his face. Zoya feels sumthn different n also has a soft luk on her face.

"Sorry," said Asad n Zoya simultaneously before standing up properly.

Tanveer who was watching 4m a distance fumes in anger. She goes to her room in anger.

"I tried a lot to make Asad go against Zoya but he only goes nearer to her. I can't take dis anymore," said Tanveer angrily.

She then laughs like a maniac.

"If I can't make Asad go against Zoya then I vl make Zoya go against Asad n dis time I vl make Zoya vl hate Asad even more," said Tanveer wid an evil smirk.

Precap: #2 days later, Asad realizes dat he is falling in love wid Zoya n he wants Zoya back in his life. He tells dat he never fell in love wid any girl.

#Asad tells Tanveer dat he wants Zoya back in his life(not teln dat he is in love wid her). Tanveer gives him idea of getn a blue dress made for her like d same dress he tore.

#Zoya has a wardrobe malfunction during d fashion show but she holds her dress 4m falling too much to reveal her entire breasts n front body. She gets hurt due to dis.

#Zoya slaps Asad blaming him for her wardrobe malfunction.


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