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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zynia890


I like this story bcz its good! Nice plot it is! Thank u😊

This tanveer! I hope you don't show that rape happened in real bcz you made a post asking about it! Plz don't make it real! It will be unfair bcz I believe that he us not much faulty. He is repenting it now! Tanveer vl be found but a lot of suspense vl come out. Plz, read d summary again on d 1st page where its written dat Tanveer vl be exposed by a person who is suspense for now. Asad is guilty but still he has to learn n suffer some more n u vl see it in d cumn parts😉.

And I have a question is tanu pregnant! D answer n the suspense behind it vl be revealed in d cumn parts which u vl definitely love😛 but Asad n Zoya vl be suffering for some time😭.

And after the problem is solved are you going to show the asyas married life and romance! Asad n Zoya vl reunite but Zoya vl take time in accepting Asad's love cuz she does not believes in love😊

Plz show it and give a beautiful ending unlike CVS! Bcz you guys re too good!! D story vl not end so soon, dear. After divorce track, Asad n Zoya romance along wid thriller story vl start😉.

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb work. Update asap. Thanks fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07

superb work. Update asap. Thanks fr pm


Thank u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Zoya wardrobe malfunction & she slapped asad
Tanveer was happy to see that
Precap looks scary
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Having friends like Tanveer is all one needs to ruin life!! Poor Asad...Hope things turn for the better! Wish Tanveer leaves from his life :-(
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update Thank u😊
Zoya wardrobe malfunction & she slapped asad Tanveer planned dat😡
Tanveer was happy to see that She is a bitch😡
Precap looks scary Yes😲
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm Welcome😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rajsmi

Having friends like Tanveer is all one needs to ruin life!! Poor Asad...Hope things turn for the better! Wish Tanveer leaves from his life :-(

Things vl turn better after few part😃
Some painful parts r necessary for d story to build up😉
Tanveer vl hv some more shocking secrets😲
Dis twist is there for Asad to learn a big lesson😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Promo 3 and Promo 4 on d next page😊
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Promo 3: Tanveer's evil plan, Zoya leaves Khan Mansion

Zoya walks by d pool in d morning n gets shocked to see Asad only in his boxers wid his hair messy n lipstick marks on his chest. She sees Tanveer only in her suit(widout salwar n dupatta) wid her sleeves torn n her hair messy. Both r lying in each others's arms. Zoya gets angry n disgusted. She screams loudly. Dilshad n Najma wakes up n comes to her. They too r shocked, angry n disgusting wid d sight before them. Zoya starts getn tears in her eyes. Najma hugs her to comfort her. Asad n Tanveer opens their eyes n shocked to see their state. Asad then sees Zoya who is crying in Najma's arm. He wears his shirt n stands. He is abt to go near Zoya but is stopped by Dilshad who shows her hand to stop him 4m going near Zoya. Dilshad slaps him hard across his face while lukn angry.

"Don't u come near Zoya," roared Dilshad angrily.

"Ammi, I don't know how it happened," said Asad.

Khala, v were just talking wid each other n v don't know wen v felt asleep n how all dis happened," said Tanveer.

"Asad, u hv crossed all ur limits," said Dilshad angrily, "U only agreed to d nikaah to make me happy but u spoiled an innocent girl's life by always hurting her."

"Bhaijaan, I am ashamed to even call u my bhaijaan," said Najma wid disgust.

Tanveer is inwardly smiling seeing Zoya crying n Asad's hurt face.

"Najma, take Zoya to her room," said Dilshad.

Najma takes Zoya to her room. Zoya is still crying.

In d afternoon, d 2nd divorce session happens. Zoya is in black shirt n blue jeans. AnZee r also in KV.

"Now our Zoya vl not leave in dis house even for a moment. V r taking her home. Zoya baby, go n pack ur thingss," said Zeenat.

"Aapi, I hv already packed my things," said Zoya still lukn hurt.

Asad is very hurt but helpless while Tanveer smirks. Zoya goes in her room n brings her luggage. She hugs Najma who is very sad. She then luks @ Dilshad n hugs her too.

"Phuphi, I am so sorry. I thought u wrong. U really loved me n u really thought dat Asad vl change soon but he can never change. Its not ur fault," said Zoya while breaking down.

Dilshad was happy dat Zoya hugged her n at least called her phuphi'. She hugged Zoya back n kissed her forehead.

"Zoya beta, don't say sorry. Ur anger on me was justified. U thought I betrayed u but I really loved u so much dat I wanted u for myself as my bahu. I wud hv thought dat Asad can never change n he vl only hurt u. (eyes getn moist)Plz, go 4m here n take care of urself," said Dilshad.

They broke d hug.

"Asad, wat wrong has Zoya done to u dat u always hurt her? U did not know how much u hurt her, me, Zeenat n her ammi-abbu. U hv snatched our old Zoya 4m us," said Anwar.

"I apologize for my mistake for making Zoya to marry my son who never never respected her. Plz, take her wid u n take care of her," said Dilshad wid tears in her eyes.

"Dilshad Bi, I feel bad for u dat u hv to deal wid a son like Asad," said Zeenat.

As Zoya was going wid AnZee, Zoya luks back n goes near Asad.

She grabs his collar n says angrily thru tears, "Asad, u said dat u don't believe in love. Even I don't believe in love so I married u. I only asked for ur friendship but u rejected it rudely. U always insulted n humiliated me just cuz I am not d type of d girl u always wanted. If u really loved Tanveer then y u married me? Just to make phuphi happy. (shaking him while grabbing his collar)If u were so eager to sleep wid her then u sud hv waited till our divorce but u did it while still being married to me just to hurt me. I hate u, Asad. "

"Zoya, there is nothing between us," said Tanveer.

"U stay out of it," yelled Zoya angrily.

She keeps on shaking Asad while he luks hurt. Zeenat comes near them.

Zeenat holds Zoya back n says, "Zoya, calm down dear. Lets go."

She takes Zoya by her hand outside d house wid Anwar. Asad has some tears in his eyes seeing Zoya go. Tanveer smirks lukn @ his tears.

"Jammy, u wanted me to leave d house na. Now see, ur Zoya has left instead dat also in front of ur eyes n u were not able to stop her. Now, one more plan n u vl never be able to tell me to leave ur house ," thinks Tanveer wid an evil smirk on her face.

Asad sadly thinks abt his engagement n wedding wid Zoya. He then thinks abt how he always wanted Zoya out of his life. He gets more sad while thinking dat.

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Promo 4: Najma slaps Nuzhat for insulting Zoya

Next day after Zoya leaves d house, Asad n his step-siblings r walking in d mall.

"Bhaijaan, u r still unhappy. V hv called to cheer u up," said Humeira.

"Bhaijaan, u sud forget Zoya who just left u leaving u hurt," said Ayaan.

Asad had not told them y she left.

"Bhaijaan, u sud marry Tanveer after ur divorce. She is like d girl u always wanted. She does not wears western clothes like Zoya. If u marry Tanveer, u vl surely fall in love wid her. Jaane kyun log pyaar karte hai," said Nuzhat wid a smile n started to sing.

Asad recalls Zoya singing d same song to tease him before going out somewhere wid Najma. He gets emotional.

"Nuzhat, be quiet. People r here," said Asad.

Asad sees Zoya n Najma some distance away.


Zoya's outfit


Najma's dress


"I vl come just now," said Asad n went near them.

There were very less people around Zoya n Najma. They r shocked to see Asad in front of them. Asad n Zoya stares @ each other in a hurtful way.

"Zoya," said Asad.

Zoya n Najma turned to go but Asad holds Zoya's hand.

"Get ur filthy hand off me," said Zoya angrily brushing off his hand.

"Zoya, someone is definitely trying to separate us. I hv doubt on Tanveer," said Asad.

"1st u used to blame me for everything n now u r blaming ur own friend Tanveer. Wat do u mean by separating wen v were never 2gthr? Its u who needs to be blamed cuz of ur behaviour wid me. By d way, both don't believed in love but u actually loved Tanveer. U loved her so much dat u cud not stop urself even till our divorce. U only wanted to hurt me cuz u always hated me for being modern n not ur type. Don't ever come near me or contact me otherwise I vl file a harassment case against u," threatened Zoya angrily.

Zingo Hotties who were waiting for Asad sees him near Zoya n Najma n comes near them.

"Bhaijaan, u hv already hurt Zoya a lot. Now wat do u want?" asked Najma angrily.

"Najma, how can talk wid bhaijaan like dat?" asked Ayaan, "Ur talking wid bhaijaan like dat for dis girl who left bhaijaan n only hurt him. She is a misfit for him."
"And who d hell r u? U r Asad's chamcha," taunted Zoya.

All r shocked.

"Wat r u saying?" asked Ayaan wid frustration.

"Ayaan, u r also a womanizer who runs behind different girls n flirts wid them," replied Zoya taunting him.

"Zoya, how dare u talk like dat wid Ayaan?" asked Humeira angrily.

"Ayaan has started it," replied Zoya.

"U can only hurt people. U hv hurt Asad bhaijaan a lot," said Humeira wid frustration.

"U were d same girl na who tuk part in d college fashion show to impress her boyfriend who does not even bother abt her loving him?" asked Zoya taunting her, "U were so nervous dat u ran backstage @ 1st but later returned. Hv u got ur love, Humeira baby?"

Humeira gets hurt. She luks @ Zoya carefully n finds her voice similar to d burqa clad woman who motivated her. She realized dat Zoya n her was d same person.

"Humeira, u love someone?" asked Asad shockingly.

"Yes Asad, she loves someone who don't even know dat she loves him," replied wid a taunting laugh, "I got to know abt her as I was in burqa @ dat time."

Humeira got shocked as she got confirmed dat Zoya was only dat girl.

"Zoya, lets go 4m here," said Najma.

"Najma baaji, I can't believe u r siding wid a girl over ur own bhaijaan. By living wid dis characterless girl, u hv also started dressing like a s**t like her," said Nuzhat angrily.

Zoya got hurt. Najma boiled wid anger. Asad too got angry. Najma slapped Nuzhat hard across d face in anger.

"Mind ur language, Nuzhat," said Najma angrily, "How dare u insult Zoya by saying these cheap things to her? Its u who is a characterless girl to use these words on Zoya. U all r always blaming Zoya wen it was only bhaijaan's fault. If u al don't know anything then u all sud better shut. Hv u ever thought wat wud hv happened dat Zoya decided to end d marriage just after 12 days? U only thought abt Asad's feelings. Hv u ever thought abt Zoya's feelings? She vl also be getn divorce along wid bhaijaan. Do u even wat a person who is abt to get divorced goes through? U all think dat Zoya has hurt bhaijaan by deciding to divorce him. Hv u ever thought y she tuk dis step? U all think dat Zoya was never a proper girl foe Asad cuz she is not his type who is traditional n wears only traditional clothes. Wats wrong in wearing western clothes? Its bhaijaan n u all people who has such cheap mentality who judges people by their clothes. U all think dat how bhaijaan allows Zoya to wear western clothes n work outside d house? No one has right to rule someone's life n force their decisions on them. Zoya has her own life, wishes n dreams. Zoya has her own self-respect not like Nikhat who tolerates all d nonsense of Haseena Bi."
"Nuzhat, u sud talk wid Zoya wid respect," said Asad firmly.

"Bhaijaan, u only hv told me n Nikhat dat v vl meet d guys d way v vl dress," said Nuzhat.

Zoya n Najma lukd @ Asad wid anger. Asad regretted saying dis to Nuzhat n Nikhat.

"Bhaijaan, u gave such wrong advice to them. Cuz of u, Nuzhat insulted Zoya very badly. Zoya, lets go 4m here," said Najma wid anger n tuk her away 4m them by her hand.

Asad lukd @ them going wid hurtful eyes.

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