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Posted: 11 years ago


the show part... in the beginning i did miss few... but one think i agree
in the show ayaan is the one...will mention step brother ..blackmailing
coz he always feel its not enough what he get from asad...
not asad... he never mention it... went it comes to
his sibling he is blind

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Must say ... this story is a emotional ride...

but a good one...

is awareness ...

women are not week..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Must say ... this story is a emotional ride...

but a good one...

is awareness ...

women are not week..


D story is also abt a woman's self-respect n a man's realization of his mistakes😊
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Part 9(A)

AnZee hv reached d fashion show venue in d hall in their car. Najma too reached d venue in a taxi. Najma was dressed in a brown off-shoulder top n jeans. Najma goes near AnZee.


Najma's outfit


"Aapi, we sud go inside n hv our seats," said Najma.

"Yes, u r right," said Zeenat.

D anchor comes on d stage n announces d name of some fashion designers including taking Zoya Farooqui's name dat vl showcase their latest party wear designs.

Dilshad is watching a fashion channel on which d show is being telecast. Asad watches it while hiding behind d wall of d hall. Tanveer is not in d home.

Zoya wid her models n interns is backstage along wid other fashion designers waiting for her turn. Some fashion designers turns come wid some of waiting.

Ayaan too is watching d show on TV in his room. He is enjoying d show. Ayaan is called by Rashid in d hall.

"Now, I vl hv to miss it for some time," said Ayaan disappointedly n turns off d TV before going in d hall.

Scene shifts to d stage.

"Now, New York fashion designer Zoya Farooqui's party wear collection vl be showcased by her models," said d anchor.


Zoya's dress


AnZee n Najma clapped hard along wid d crowd to cheer her up. Dilshad smiles as Zoya's name is taken. Asad who is watching while hiding thinks abt how he tore Zoya's dress.

Some of model couples starts showcasing Zoya's designs. Yuvraj n Suvreen r showstoppers among d models. Zoya walks d ramp at last n goes. Zoya then walks d ramp along wid models. AnZee n Najma cheers her up while sitting in d crowd. Dilshad smiles getn happy seeing Zoya. Asad sees Zoya walking d ramp in one-shouldered orange dress n smiles. Zoya is then given a mike by d anchor to give speech while standing between d models.

"Dis is my 1st show in India. I wanted to become a fashion designer since I was 6. I wud like to give d credit of me being here in dis show to my parents, my elder sister, my brother"in-law, my friend Najma, my employees, teams of intern n models. Thank u," said Zoya.

Dilshad n Asad smiled @ her speech. Dilshad was sad dat Zoya did not tuk her name. Asad too was shocked dat Zoya did not tuk Dilshad's name but he was d reason for it.

"Zoya had wanted to become fashion designer 4m d age of 6 n I tried to ruin her childhood dream. I told her those nasty n regressive statements n I even tore her dress in anger. I wish ammi n I were also in d crowd n cheering for Zoya," thinks Asad.

Some more fashion designers showcase their designs before d show gets over. Zoya dresses back in beige top n jeans. She meets AnZee n Najma outside d venue n hugs.

"U hv done a great show, Zoya," said Zeenat wid a smile.

"V r very proud of u," said Anwar wid a smile.

"Zoya, u were really very awesome," said Najma wid a smile.

"I really love u all for cumn here to support me," said Zoya wid a smile.

They talk for some more time. After dat, Najma goes in a taxi while Zoya goes wid AnZee in their car. They stop @ a restaurant to celebrate Zoya's show. After dat, they go to their homes separately.

Next day, Nuzhat is reading newspaper in her room. In entertainment section, a page is occupied fully wid d last evening's fashion show. Nuzhat sees photos of some fashion designers who showcased their designs. She is shocked to find Zoya's photo among those fashion designers. She reads d line below her photo-New York fashion designer Zoya Farooqui showcasing her party wear designs. Nuzhat gets angry @ dat.

In KV, Dilshad n Najma r happily seeing Zoya's photo in d paper.

"Ammi, see how beautiful Zoya is luk in d photo," said Najma wid a smile.

"I am very happy for her. I wish I was there to support her," said Dilshad wid a smile.

"Ammi, Zoya is @ her right place being angry wid u. U had faith on bhaijaan dat he vl change n come out of his stupid regressive thinking n he vl start being nice wid Zoya but he disappointed u by proving u wrong. U truly loved Zoya but u sud hv never married her to bhaijaan. Dats only d mistake u did. Bhaijaan never deserved Zoya. But one day, Zoya vl surely forgive u wen she vl realize dat u truly loved her," said Najma.

Asad in his room is lukn @ Zoya's photo in d newspaper. Tanveer who is standing near his door wid 2 cups in her hand is getn jealous. She knocks on d door n Asad luks up 4m d newspaper. Tanveer enters d room n comes before him wid d cups in her hands.

"Jammy, I hv brought coffee for u," said Tanveer.

"Thanks," said Asad.

While handing his cup to him, she purposely spills some coffee on Zoya's photo.

"Tanu, wat u did?" asked Asad annoyingly.

"I am so sorry, Jammy," apologized Tanveer, "Plz, hv ur coffee."
"I am not in d mood. I want to be alone," said Asad.

"Okay Jammy," said Tanveer n left his room wid d cups of coffee.

Asad luks @ Zoya's photo which was destroyed due to coffee. He recalls Zoya playing games on his bed n offering to bring coffee for him wen he came 4m d office but he instead called out Najma to brig coffee for him n talked rudely wid Zoya teln him dat she did not need to bring coffee for him. He again luks @ Zoya's coffee spoiled n gets upset.

Tanveer who was outside Asad's room thinks annoyingly, "I wanted to hv coffee wid Jammy but due to Zoya, it got ruined. Asad did not even drank d coffee made by me."

Scene shifts to SM hall where everyone except Nuzhat r there. Nuzhat comes in d hall wid d newspaper in her hand.

"Luk @ dis, everyone. Zoya has participated in New Year's fashion show along wid other fashion designers. See, wat type of dress she is wearing. Bhaijaan has married such a characterless girl. She is such a blot in d Khan family," said Nuzhat wid frustration.

"Mind ur language, Nuzhat. She is 7 years elder than u," said Rashid angrily, "She is only doing a fashion show like other fashion designers. U sud learn some manners to talk abt ur elders. She is close to ur Asad bhaijaan's age. Show some respect for her."
"Abbu called me yesterday in d hall while I was watching d same show. Dat means I miss Zoya n some other fashion designer's show," thinks Ayaan.

"But abbu, wat must Asad bhaijaan, Badi Ammi n Najma must be going thru to hv such a girl in their family?" asked Nuzhat.

"I don't think they hv any problem wid Zoya. They may be actually proud of her dat she is doing sumthn on her own. Dilshad n Najma r surely supporting her. Dat day, Asad also said a lot of good things abt Zoya. I don't think even he has any problem wid Zoya. He must hv really hurt Zoya n he confessed it too. I think he wants Zoya back in his life. I think he is realizing wateva mistakes he did. How can u call Zoya a characterless girl wen she is just doing a fashion show? U sud better shut up n mind ur own business," said Badi Bi.

"Ammi, wat wrong did Nuzhat said? Wat vl happen to Nikhat's rishta?" asked Shirin.

"Shirin, u don't side wid ur daughter. And don't bring Nikhat's rishta in between. No one sud hv any problem wid Zoya's career as a fashion designer," replied Badi Bi.

Others except Rashid r disappointed @ wat Badi Bi said.

3 days later, Zoya returns to KV. 3 weeks hv passed since d filing of divorce. Zoya is dressed in a blue top wid white polka dots n jeans. Zoya hugs Najma ignoring Dilshad, Asad n Tanveer before going to her room.

After some time, Asad is bathing in his bathtub. He luks @ d basin n sees Zoya before him closing her eyes in embarrassment. She then throws a black towel @ him while laughing. Asad then luks for d towel on himself n realizes dat he was imagining. He recalls Zoya entering his bathroom by mistake n explaining him dat she did not knew he was here but he tuk her wrong as usual teln her annoying dat there is a limit to shamelessness.

At night, Asad stealthily goes near d kitchen n sees Zoya making coffee for herself. He is shocked to see dat Zoya is drinking black coffee dat aslo widout sugar.

Asad recalls how she used to drink coffee wid sugar n milk.

"4m how long Zoya is drinking black coffee widout sugar?" thinks Asad, "I always drink coffee like dis n now Zoya is drinking in d same way. Is she becumn bitter like me?"

He goes 4m there. He comes again after some time n sees Zoya cooking rice, dal n aloo gobi sabzi. She then starts making rotis dat r as usual not in shape n not properly cooked. Asad recalls tasting Zoya's food, throwing it angrily off d table, insulting her for making bad food n Zoya throwing d food teln everyone dat she vl cook her own food.

Zoya sits down to eat. She starts eating.

"Zoya, as usual rotis r out of shape. Rice n dal r okay but sabzi is a little too oily," said Zoya to herself while eating d food.

After some time, Zoya finishes eating n leaves d kitchen while Asad hides. Asad had noticed dat some food is still left in d utensils while only rotis r finished. Asad recalls Zoya teln him to stay away wen she burnt her n show his fake concern. Asad enters d kitchen n recalls wat he said to Zoya wen she made food for everyone.

"Ammi, its good dat I tasted it 1st. Eventhough she is a woman n daughter-in-law of dis house she cannot even cook properly. D rotis r not in proper shape n not properly cooked. Koftas r tasteless. D soup is too much spicy. Kababs n pizza r fine but don't if there is some fault in them too. I tasted 1st cuz I cannot trust her cooking."

"If she wud hv done efforts then her food wud not hv been awful."

He has a guilty expression on his face. He eats a little bit of dal, rice n sabzi made by Zoya. He finds sabzi a little too oily but he did not complains abt it.

He then drinks water n goes back to his room lukn hurt.

Next night, Asad again eats a little of wat Zoya had cooked. Zoya who returned to kitchen again after some time finds sumthn different wid her left food thinking as if someone else ate it but she brushes off her thoughts. Next night, Tanveer sees Asad going near d kitchen. She gets annoyed wid Asad wen he sees Zoya cooking n eats a little of her food wen Zoya is not around. Tanveer goes to her room annoyingly seeing all dat.

"4m wen, all these r going on? Asad is eating Zoya's food widout even Zoya knowing abt it. Jammy is getn more drawn 2wards Zoya these day," said Tanveer annoying.

Asad continues to eat a little of Zoya's food every night while Tanveer watches annoying.

A week later, 4 weeks has passed since 1st divorce signing.

Asad is sitting on his bed. He recalls Zoya destroying their wedding attires n gift item along wid throwing her engagement ring angrily. He recalls her hurt n teary face.

"I sud talk wid Zoya again n convince her to change her decision," said Asad to himself.

He goes to Zoya's room. She was wearing a light blue shirt n jeans. He knocks her door n enters her room.

"Asad, u here?" asked Zoya.

"Zoya, I know I did a lot of mistakes but I am very guilty for dat. Plz Zoya, change ur decision of divorcing me. Plz, don't leave me n my family," replied Asad.

"U again started ur drama, Asad," said Zoya wid a smile, "U sud be happy dat u r finally getn rid of me dat u always wanted. U only married cuz of ur ammi's pressure. I am sure dat even now u want me back so dat u can make ur ammi happy n prove to her dat u r not bad. U even don't know wat u really want. If ur ammi vl tell u now to divorce me n marry another girl, u vl agree to it quickly. Thinking only to make ur ammi happy, u can't even understand dat wat I want. I vl not change my decision. D earth does not revolves around u, Asad Ahmed Khan. One time, u want me out of ur life. And d other time, u want me back. (becumn angry n her tone gets angry) Wat hv u really thought of me, Asad Ahmed Khan? Do u think dat u can dump me n pick me again @ any time u desire? Y don't u understand dat I hate u? I can never forget wat u all did to me n ur presence before me vl always remind me of dat. U never treated me like a human being let alone be wife. U never wanted a modern n western clothes wearing girl na. Then y d hell u r here? U always judged me by my clothes n myself being a NRI. U may be here for another reason. U wanted me back so dat ur step-sister Nikhat does not hv any problem wid her future money hungry monster mother-in-law. U want to please her to show her dat everything is well between us."

"Zoya, I really want u back n I am not wanting u back to make anyone happy or please anyone. I vl not hurt u again, Zoya. Plz, don't divorce me," requests Asad.

"People like u cannot be trusted who supports dowry for his own step-sister. U always teach ur step-brother Ayaan wrong n disgusting things. Do u think I vl ever come back to such a man? U hv even hurt ur ammi n Najma. I hv come to India not stuck to in any marriage but for some important work. I don't want to waste my precious time by being married to a man like u. So, stop bugging me now n leave me alone," said Zoya firmly.

Asad goes out of her room lukn hurt. Asad comes to his room n sits on d couch. He luks @ his bed n sees Zoya sitting on it in her bridal wear. He recalls Zoya offering her friendship to him n how he rejects it by talking to her rudely. He recalls Zoya getn hurt due to dat. He luks @ his bed again to find Zoya disappeared 4m d bed realizing it was his imagination.

"Zoya said right dat y she wud come back to a man like me. I hv never given her any happiness but only hurt her. Cuz of me, she has changed so much. She is hardly d old Zoya. Now, I understand how it feel likes to always get insulted," said Asad to himself.

Asad recalls how Zoya was talking to him angrily wen they met for d 1st time n Asad told her dat no one talked to him like dat before. To which Zoya retorted dat dats y he became so mannerless. Zoya said true abt him. He can't expect anyone to talk wid him angrily but he can talk wid anyone how he pleases. He really has a lot of ego in himself.

3 days later, a month has passed since 1st divorce signing. Zoya is walking in d mall. She is wearing a green one-shouldered dress. Haseena n Chand who were also @ d mall sees Zoya.



Zoya's dress



"Baaji, she is Zoya. Asad s wife," said Chand.

"Come, lets talk wid her," said Haseena.

They come before her n smiles. Zoya starts doing sumthn on her I-Pad to ignore them.

"U r Zoya, Ayaan's brother Asad's wife," said Haseena wid a smile.

"So?" asked Zoya wid attitude.

"Zoya beta, I know dat u n Asad r getn divorced. But u sud understand him wat is going in his mind. U see, he expected 4m u n ur family to give him some gifts. U r 4m a rich family n u urself is a fashion designer so he may hv expected a lots of gifts 4m u. He n his family may hv been disappointed but they did not showed it on their faces. Asad told me dat in Ayaan's house dat u r divorcing him cuz he hurt u a lot but I can only understand wat may be in his mind. He must hv been upset wid u cuz u did not gave him any gifts n u tuk it in a wrong n decided to divorce him. Such things happens between a husband n a wife. U sud not hv think of divorce over such small issues. And he may be upset wid u for working outside. I did not want Nikhat to continue her studies cuz she has to sit in home only. Wat she vl do by studying further. And if she goes out to study then her complexion vl become more dark n it vl be become very hard to find a suitable bridal dress for her. Asad may be upset wid u r working outside wen none of his sisters vl get to do dat. Like me, he also wants daughter-in-law of d house to only manage n not work outside. U sud understand ur husband, Zoya beta. U sud really understand wat he may be going thru," replied Haseena.

"Haseena Bi, u done wid ur speech or sumthn is still left?" asked Zoya wid a sarcastic smile.

"No Zoya, nothing is left now," replied Haseena wid a smile, "I only want to advice u to think abt ur relationship wid Asad n think sumthn to save it otherwise Asad vl hv to face embarrassment in d society dat his wife divorced him just after 2 weeks of marriage."

"Haseena Bi, I am getn late," said Zoya wid a smile n went out of d hall.

"Chand, I hv said all these things to her for fun," said Haseena wid a smile.

Scene shifts to Zoya sitting in her car.

"Haseena Bi, do u think dat u can only hv fun? I know wat game u r playing," said Zoya wid a smirk, "Now, I am going to hv my fun in a proper way wid a proper person."

Zoya then drives her car.

Asad comes home n sees a white curtain in d hall. No one was @ home. He gets shocked. As he steps further, a video starts playing on d curtain. D video is d convo of Haseena n Zoya @ d mall. Asad sees d video n gets shocked.

"Who has set dis curtain n video here?" thinks Asad n luks around.

Just then he sees Zoya cumn 2wards him wid a smirk on her face.

"Zoya, u did dis?" asked Asad lukn puzzled.

"Yaa, its me," replied Zoya wid a wink as she came before him.

Zoya then recalls wid a smile how she was actually doing video recording on her I-Pad cuz she sensed dat Haseena n Chand vl speak some bullshit like always.

"Now, I came to know y u did not accepted my offer of friendship," said Zoya staring @ him, "U even increased ur insults n taunts on me after our marriage cuz I n my family did not gave any dowry to ur house which u had expected. So, u started hating me more n never let me leave in peace."

Asad gets shocked.

"Zoya, it nots true," said Asad, "I did not wanted any dowry 4m u."

Zoya laughs loudly n starts to circle him.

"Lie. All lies," said Zoya while circling him, "I got my answer 2day @ d mall 4m d conversation of ur darling teddy bear Haseena Bi. Well, forget Haseena Bi n just luk @ urself. V all know dat u r physically in 21st century while mentally in 17th century. U r not a bit like ur own ammi n ur own sister Najma. A person who can support his own sister's divorce n always assure his brother dat their sister vl be happy all her life if they keep on bowing to her in-laws then wat may dat person be expecting 4m his own wife? U tell ur brother dat Nikhat loves Imraan n they sud bow to their demands for her lifetime happiness. (starts laughing again) A lifetime happiness? Oh really? Dat also wid a person who never supports her n only dances to his ammi's tunes like u. So Asad, u were always insulting me so dat I understand u n give u dowry in order to be treated properly."
Zoya comes before him n stares @ him. Asad gets more shocked. He recalls all d nonsense n regressive things he said to Ayaan. He recalls how Ayaan always complained abt Haseena taunting Nikhat on her skin n her other tantrums but he tuk it coolly.

Zoya snaps her fingers @ his face n asks, "Wat r u thinking, Asad? I am sure ur beloved Haseena Bi had taught u how to make ur wife's life miserable to get ur way n to put her down? U cud not even digest d fact dat I vl work outside while none of ur sisters vl get to do so. They vl sit @ home even after their marriage n u wanted me to do d same. U know very well dat Haseena does not wants Nikhat to continue her studies n u also wanted to show everyone dat ur wife only manages house giving up her dreams for d sake of d family. I heard dat Haseena Bi is asking for a 80 lakhs car for Imraan n was also talking abt d new project of ur abbu. Indirectly, she was asking for dat house. U also expected me to give u a lot of dowry n sit @ home. Wat else can I expect 4m u, Asad?"

Asad was not able to find words to reply.

"Zoya, Haseena Bi is talking rubbish," replied Asad, "I am not like wat u r thinking."

"Then prove me wrong," said Zoya shrugging her shoulders.

"Wat?" asked Asad shockingly.

"Yaa, prove me wrong," replied Zoya wid a smirk.

"How sud I prove dat u r thinking me wrong?" asked Asad.

"Dats upto u to think. U r a very intelligent businessman who designs house n interiors of 22nd century but ur common sense is still stuck in 17th century. 1st of all, u need to bring ur common sense 4m 17th century to 21st century before thinking properly wat to do to prove me wrong. U had a troubled childhood but dat does not mean u sud use ur brain properly only in ur business n being dumb in other common things. In other common things, u can only think like a 17th century man. Ur ammi vl be so proud of u to see her son who she raised wid great difficulties is supporting dowry n expecting them 4m me too along wid thinking other disgusting n regressive stuffs. So, prove me wrong," said Zoya wid a smile.

Asad was getn shocked as well as ashamed of himself.

"Okay Zoya, I vl prove u wrong Give me some time," said Asad.

"All d best," said Zoya wid a smile.

Asad went to his room. Zoya laughed heartily. She removed d curtain while still laughing.

"Lets see, Asad. How u vl prove me wrong? How much u vl use d contents of ur top floor(brain) if its not empty? U vl be a great popcorn time for me," said Zoya wid a laugh.

Asad is pacing to n fro in his room. He recalls Haseena teln him dat she vl find another girl for him who is tradition n vl keep him happy. He then recalls wat he saw on d curtain abt Haseena teln stupid things to Zoya on how she sud understand Asad n save her marriage.

He recalls Zoya's words.

"Asad, r u innocent or stupid or both?"

"If u vl use ur brain properly, u vl understand. But u hardly use ur brain in common n useful things. Use ur brain n understand on ur own wat I mean."

"Dis Haseena Bi is a chameleon who changes colours," said Asad wid frustration, "Wat d hell she really wants? Zoya is already very angry n she is poisoning her mind even more against me. How vl Nikhat leave in dat house? Dat Haseena Bi vl only keep on demanding weneva she wants. Zoya is able to understand everything while I don't understand anything like an idiot. I need to do sumthn to prove Zoya dat she is thinking me wrong."

Asad thinks how much Zoya has changed since she has left d house by breaking her relation wid him. Wat has gotten into him dat he turned out to be like Shirin's family instead of his family wen it came to being orthodox n judging people? Wasn't he felt bad for Zoya wen he see her crying in dargah? But he showed his real face wen during their 1st meeting, he came to know dat she is 4m New York n how she was shouting @ him? She may hv thought him one of d goons of Akram n being in dat situation anyone cud think dat especially wen they r accidently run over by their car. After dat, they again had a couple of encounters wid Zoya still thinking him to be after her life. Wen she came to his house, she got to know dat he is not a goon n she started being normal wid him n trying to be friendly wid him but he always judged her by her clothes n her way of living. After marriage, he became more mean wid her dat one day she had an outburst n left d house. Asad keeps on thinking how he cud not bear d sight of her bubbly n cheerful smile n laughter. But now, her bubbly n cheerful smile n laughter turned into mocking n taunting smile n laughter. She started drinking black coffee widout sugar just like him. Asad thinks how he is missing old Zoya. But old Zoya is killed n he has killed her. But somewhere in new Zoya, old Zoya is still alive in her. Yes, she hates him n vl always hate him but still she is very good @ heart. Now, she even accuses him of expecting dowry 4m her. But he is only responsible for her thinking abt him like dis. He has to do sumthn to prove her wrong. Asad comes out of his thoughts.

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Part 9(B)

At night, Asad is walking in d garden. He gets a call 4m Ayaan.

"Hello," said Asad.

"Hello bhaijaan, dis Haseena Bi is intolerable. Some moments ago on phone, Haseena Bi has given a list of cloths n gift items to abbu. Now, abbu has told me to shop for them 2mrw. Haseena Bi just keeps on making list n list n list," said Ayaan in frustration.

"Wat?" asked Asad shockingly, "Haseena again gave a list for shopping."

Zoya comes out of nowhere n takes Asad's cell.

"Ayaan, don't forget to remove d price tag dis time," said Zoya wid a laugh.

"Zoya, wat u r doing wid bhaijaan's cell?" asked Ayaan annoyingly.

"Zoya, give my cell," said Asad but Zoya does not gives him.

Zoya runs a little away 4m him while laughing heartily n replies Ayaan wid a laugh, "Ayaan, its not important for u to know dat wat I am doing wid ur bhaijaan's cell. Its important for u to remember to remove d price tags 4m d gifts before giving to dat Hippo otherwise d volcano vl burst again n who knows she vl threaten again to break d relation."

Ayaan gets shocked. Zoya throws d cell @ Asad wid a smile n he catches it.

"Hello Zoya," said Ayaan.

"Its me, Asad," said Asad.

"Bhaijaan, wat type of a psycho u got married?" asked Ayaan wid irritation.

"Ayaan, she is not a psycho," replied Asad.

"OMG! Someone is calling me a psycho," said Zoya wid a laugh.

"Zoya, Ayaan is a kid. Don't feel bad," said Asad.

"Bhaijaan, I am not a kid," said Ayaan annoyingly.

"Ayaan, calm down. Anyways, u don't need to buy those things," said Asad.

"R u going to buy those things then?" asked Ayaan.

"Neither u nor me vl buy those things. V r 4m bride's side dat does not means v sud bow down to them. They vl only take us for granted. If they really like Nikhat then they sud not trouble us now n then. U only said na Imraan never stands for Nikhat. But he can shamelessly ask for 80 lakhs car. Does he even know how much 0(zero) 80 lakhs has? V r getn our Nikhat married not selling her. They vl keep on demanding 4m us like shameless people. If they really loved Nikhat then Haseena Bi wud not hv taunted on her skin colour n Imraan wud hv stood up for her weneva Haseena Bi taunted her," replied Asad.

Zoya again snatches Asad's phone n says wid a laugh, "Ayaan, u r too innocent. U know wat, kiddo? In our New York people run after tanning lotions instead of fairness creams to temporarily get their skin like me n Nikhat. But Haseena Bi's screws r too loose."

She again throws d cell @ Asad who catches it.

"Zoya," said Ayaan.

"Its me, Asad," said Asad.

"Bhaijaan, she called me a kiddo," said Ayaan wid frustration, "But one thing she said right dat Haseena Bi's screws r loose. Luks like she also hates dat Haseena Bi."

"As far as I know Zoya, she can't even stand a person like Haseena Bi. She vl give Haseena Bi 50 nick-names in an hour. So, she hates her too," said Asad wid a laugh.

"Wow, v both n Zoya hv sumthn in common. But tell ur female Jackie Chan not to call me kiddo again," said Ayaan.

Asad laughs @ dis.

"Female Jackie Chan," said Asad wid a laugh, "Wat a nice name for Zoya!"

Zoya's eyes became wide as she heard wat Asad said.

"Haseena Bi vl come 2mrw wid Imraan @ 11am," said Ayaan.

"I vl be there to tighten Haseena Bi's screws," said Asad.

"Okay bhaijaan, Allah Hafiz," said Ayaan.

"Allah Hafiz," said Asad n hung up.

Zoya goes inside d house widout lukn @ Asad. Asad goes to his room. He hears some noise 4m d kitchen.

"Zoya may be cooking food for herself," said Asad to himself.

Asad stealthily goes near d kitchen. He sees Zoya baking chocolate cake. He recalls Zoya entering d kitchen for d 1st time to make chocolate cake for Dilshad as she was feeling low but Asad tuk it as her irritating behaviour. Now, Zoya hates Dilshad n blames her for ruining her life by making her marry Asad in hope dat he vl change by being wid her. He recalls how he did not liked Zoya even bonding wid his ammi. Now, his wish is granted as Zoya hates Dilshad n even insulted her some times for making her to marry Asad. Y did he not thought dat Zoya actually made Dilshad smile after she was upset but he only cared abt his own ego n his stupid ideologies of Zoya not being a proper girl according to him. Asad then recalls Zoya teln him dat he needs to eat sweet wen she was baking d cake.

"I never expected to see Zoya so changed. She now hates me, ammi, Ayaan n d whole Khan family except Najma. She even eats separately n cooks her own food," thinks Asad.

Zoya finished making d cake while lukn d recipe on d internet on her I-Pad.

"Dis has gone into sleep mode," said Zoya.

Instead of parrot talking lalalalala', Zoya has changed her password making it normal. Zoya types her password to unlock her I-Pad. Asad recalls Zoya using a parrot talking password but now she changed it into a normal password. He recalls how he got irritated wid dat parrot talking password. But again, his wish is granted as Zoya changed her password. Zoya finished baking d cake n sits on a chair. She starts eating d cake along wid popcorn.

"Asad has at last started using his brain," said Zoya wid a smirk, "Lets see how far he uses his brain. Lets see wat he does to prove me wrong. I vl just watch d show n hv my popcorn."

Asad's eyes became wide as he heard wat Zoya said.

"She vl just watch d show n hv popcorn," thinks Asad astonishingly seeing Zoya happily popping some popcorns in her mouth.

He goes 4m there to his room.

Next morning, Haseena comes wid Chand n Imraan in SM.

"So, is everything there dat I made list of?" asked Haseena.

"No," replied Ayaan wid a smile.

"Wat? How came u did not bought those things?" asked Haseena shockingly.

"I think Nikhat is more important to u than those things," came Asad's voice as he entered d SM hall.

"Asad beta, u?" asked Haseena.

"Yaa me," replied Asad as he comes before her.

"Asad, I just wanted some gifts," said Haseena wid a smile.

"How much gifts u r going to ask n for how long?" asked Asad, "If u really love Nikhat then only she sud be important to u. Neither any gifts nor any car. Right Imraan?"

Haseena n Imraan gets shocked.

"Imraan, u love Nikhat so much. I hope u vl not trouble her family by asking for a 80 lakhs car," said Asad wid a smile staring @ him.

Imraan is speechless.

"Right Imraan?" asks Asad firmly.

"Yes bhaijaan, u r right," replied Imraan.

"I heard dat there r rise in dowry case," said Asad wid a smirk, "And many people r complaining abt dowry 4m annoying in-laws who take advantage of being groom's side."

Haseena, Chand n Imraan gets scared. Asad gives them a death glare.

"No no Asad beta, v vl never ask for anything in dis house. Wid great difficulty v got a girl for Imraan n v don't want to lose her," said Haseena wid a smile while getn scared.

"Good Haseena Bi dat u understood. I never asked any dowry 4m Zoya. Yesterday u met Zoya @ d mall n u were saying to her some things abt me dat u sud not hv said," said Asad.

"Asad, I don't know wat u r saying. Wat she said abt me?" asked Haseena.

"Dat I am expecting dowry 4m Zoya n I did not wanted her to work outside cuz u did not want Nikhat to study further as she has to sit @ home. U also said dat if Nikhat goes out then her complexion vl become more dark. Dat day u were teln me dat u vl find another girl for me but to Zoya u told dat she sud understand n try to save her marriage wid me by understanding abt my dowry expection 4m her n her not working outside," replied Asad.

Everyone gets shocked. Haseena n Chand's mouth becomes wide.

"Beta, I hv not said all these things to her. She may hv taken me wrong while I was trying to tell her sumthn else. How can u believe her wen she is divorcing u?" asked Haseena shockingly, "I hv only congratulated her for her fashion show but she tuk me wrong."

"Haseena Bi is such a liar. If Zoya had not shown me d video then also I wud hv believed her," thinks Asad wid frustration, "She is now making me think against Zoya like she made Zoya think against me yesterday. She is clearly n indirectly terming Zoya as a liar."

"Haseena Bi, y I vl not believe Zoya? Wat if she is divorcing me? But there is still humanity in Zoya even though she hates me. Don't u ever interfere in my n Zoya's matter again. U sud better stay away 4m Zoya n not trouble her," said Asad firmly.

All r shocked to see Asad supporting Zoya n teln Haseena to stay away 4m her.

"I am so sorry beta if I hurt u," apologized Haseena.

"Its okay, Haseena Bi. But don't do dis again," said Asad firmly.

"Its very nice of u, Haseena dat Nikhat is more important to u than any other gifts," said Badi Bi wid a smile.

"Yes yes," said Haseena Bi wid a smile.

"And never comment on Nikhat's skin colour. Also, she vl not stop her studies n she vl study further," said Asad while glaring @ her.

"Okay beta," said Haseena wid a smile.

"I am going now," said Asad n went outside d house.

"So now its decided, Haseena Bi dat money vl not unnecessarily wasted on gifts n all," said Haseena wid a smile.

"Yes Ayaan, u r right," said Haseena wid a smile.

After some time, Haseena, Chand n Imraan also goes.

"Now, they vl not irritate us wid their lists," said Ayaan.

"Hopefully, our money vl be saved," said Badi Bi.

"Wat Zoya said to Asad abt Haseena can be true?" asked Shirin.

"No Shirin, she may be lying or making stories. I don't think Haseena vl say all these things," replied Razia.

"Razia, how can u be so sure abt Haseena?" asked Badi Bi, "She is now trying to create differences between Asad n Zoya?"

"Cuz Haseena can never say such things," replied Razia, "There r already differences between them. She may be teln lies to Asad cuz she hates him."

"She may hate Asad but I don't think she vl tell lies to Asad abt Haseena," said Badi Bi.

"How can u say dat Zoya was teln truth?" asked Razia.

"Zoya is a modern girl as Asad said. So, she may be of no nonsense type who can't stand d things Haseena says or does so she was teln d truth," replied Badi Bi.

Razia is speechless.

Scene shifts to Asad in his office lost in thoughts. Just then, Akram comes wid some files.

"Sir," said Akram giving him d files.

"Thanks," said Asad.

"Sir, wat r u thinking? Is sumthn troubling u?" asked Akram.

"No," replied Asad.

"U may be upset due to ur ongoing divorce. But wat say, Sir? D girl Zoya Farooqui u married was not proper. As u know, Sir. She was abt to get married to me but she ran away 4m d wedding now she is leaving u. Girls 4m foreign r like dis only who does not knows our cultures. These girls does not care abt anyone's feelings," said Akram.

"Enough Akram," said Asad firmly, "Don't say anything wrong abt her. Zoya told me everything y she ran 4m ur wedding. She was sensing sumthn weird so she ran away. Wen she ran away, u sent goons after to marry her forcibly n now u r blaming Zoya."

Akram was shocked as Asad said dat.

"Sir, its not true. How can a girl say truth who is leaving u too?" asked Akram.

"She told d truth. If u again speak anything against her, I vl file a complaint against u," said Asad firmly.

"Okay Sir," said Akram.

In d evening, Asad comes home. Zoya also comes home after some time. She was in sleeveless green n blue churidaar. No one else was @ home. She was going to her room.


Zoya's dress


"Zoya, 2day I again went to Ayaan's house," said Asad.

Zoya turned around.

"So?" asked Zoya rolling her eyes.

"Haseena Bi vl now not ask for unnecessary gifts including 80 lakhs car," replied Asad.

"Really?" asked Zoya wid a smirk, "Wat happened there?"

Asad tells her everything.

"Wow Asad, I can't believe u all did dis but anyway u did," said Zoya wid a smile, "And dat Hippo is actually a chameleon who changes colour every time teln different people different things. By d way, Asad. There r many types of such liars in dis world."

Asad then thinks abt his convo wid Akram in d office.

"2day Akram was teln wrong things abt u," said Asad.

"U wud hv believed him cuz he is ur trusted employee n u r feeling bad for him n his family who r feeling embarrassment cuz of my stunt during d wedding," taunted Zoya.

"No, I did not believed him. I came to know how he is such a liar," said Asad.

Asad told her everything.

"So, u really did not believed him n even warned him to not talk against otherwise u vl file a complain against him," said Zoya, "Atleast, u now know dat I did right by running away."

"Yes," said Asad.

"Okay," said Zoya n went to her room.

Just then, Tanveer enters d hall.

"2day, wat all I did went well. Hope it happens every day," said Asad to himself.

"Jammyyy," said Tanveer loudly.

Asad got startled.

"Tanu," said Asad shockingly.

"Jammy, wat were u talking to urself dat everything went well?" asked Tanveer.

Asad did not know wat to reply.

"Sud I tell her or not?" thinks Asad, "Zoya n Najma r not fond of Tanveer. And Tanveer can never talk good abt Zoya. So, it better I sud not tell her anything."

"I was talking abt a meeting. It went well," replied Asad.

"But u did not said dat u hv a meeting," said Tanveer.

"D meeting was decided 2day only," said Asad.

"U said dat hope every day went well. So, do u hv meeting everyday?" asked Tanveer.

Asad was getn frustrated but he did not showed it

"Y she is asking me too much stupid questions?" thinks Asad wid frustration.

"No Tanveer, I mean every day in d office goes well n my work goes well," replied Asad.

"Ohhh Jammyyy, I know u r good in ur work," said Tanveer wid a smile while keeping her hands on his shoulders n squeezing it softly.

Asad got uncomfortable.

"Y she is annoying me so much?" thinks Asad wid frustration.

"Tanveer, I need to go to my room," said Asad removing her hands off him.

"Okay Jammy," said Asad wid a sweet smile.

Asad goes to his room while Tanveer luks @ Asad wid a smirk on her face.

Scene shifts to Zoya's room. She throws her dupatta on her bed.

"I can't believe Asad has really done all these things. He defended me 4m dat Giant Teddy Bear n Akram. Is Asad really guilty abt wat all he did to me?" asked Zoya to herself.

She gets fresh n changes into a black vest n black shorts. She then ties her hair in a ponytail n wears wrist bands.

"Time for some boxing n kickboxing," said Zoya wid a smile.

Precap: #Zoya is doing boxing n kickboxing on her punching bag. Tanveer who passes by Zoya's room gets shocked. She calls Asad in hopes to make him angry on wat Zoya is doing. Asad comes but instead of being angry he actually smiles much to Tanveer's annoyance.

#Zoya tells Asad dat he is really changing a bit. Asad tells her to change her decision abt divorce but she tells him she vl not change her decision n asks if his abbu ever calls his ammi back to him then vl he like it. Asad is shocked n speechless wid her question.

# At night, Asad n Zoya r talking in d garden. They r shaking hands for friendship. Zoya trips on sumthn n is abt to fall down but Asad catches her in his arms. Mitwa' plays in d bg(1st Mitwa' in dis story). Asad n Zoya r lost into each other's eyes. Asad has a soft luk on his face. Zoya feels sumthn different n also has a soft luk on her face. Tanveer who was watching 4m a distance fumes in anger. She goes to her room in anger.

"I tried a lot to make Asad go against Zoya but he only goes nearer to her. I can't take dis anymore," said Tanveer angrily.

She then laughs like a maniac.

"If I can't make Asad go against Zoya then I vl make Zoya go against Asad n dis time I vl make Zoya vl hate Asad even more," said Tanveer wid an evil smirk.


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Promo 2: Zoya's wardrobe malfunction, Zoya blames Asad and slaps him

Asad is sitting in his room lost in thoughts. Tanveer comes inside after knocking.

"Jammy, wats d matter?" asks Tanveer.

"Tanu, I want Zoya back in my life," replied Asad.

Tanveer gets annoyed but she smiles.

"Jammy, u sud do sumthn for her dat u destroyed like u tore her dress n u sud try to get another dress made just like dat. Zoya vl surely like it," said Tanveer.

"Nice idea, Tanveer," said Asad wid a smile.

"My ideas r always nice, Jammy wen it only works for me," thinks Tanveer wid a smirk.

Scene shifts to Asad memorizing Zoya's dress dat he tore n making a sketch of it. He then gets a dress made by a tailor.

Next day, Asad gives d dress to Zoya.


Zoya's dress


"Zoya, I was so mean by tearing ur dress dat u designed wid lots of efforts. Plz, accept dis dress which I got made after memorizing dat dress n making a sketch of dat dress. I wud like u to wear dis dress for 2day's fashion show," said Asad wid a smile.

"Okay Asad. Thank u," said Zoya wid a smile.

Scene shifts to d dressing room of d fashion show.

"Asad really changed a lot," said Zoya wid a smile, "I sud wear dis dress. Luks like he is really guilty for wat he did n he even got a dress made like dat for me."

Zoya wears d dress n gets ready.

Zoya's models walks d ramp. Wen Zoya started to walk d ramp, her dress suddenly got loose n started falling down. Zoya somehow managed to catch it not letn d dress to fall too much to reveal her front body. Vikram shouts to turn off d light. Geeti n Preeti runs to Zoya wid a shawl n takes her inside. Zoya cries in d dressing room.

"Mam, plz don't cry. V managed to turn off d lights to avoid being any picture or video taken n v vl manage it even further," said Suvreen calming her down.

"Who cud do dis?" asked Zoya wid tears in her eyes.

"Thank god, dis show is not being live telecast. Mam, v vl check CCTVs," replied Yuvraj.

They checked d CCTVs of everywhere but did not find anyone else removing Zoya's dress other than Zoya.

"No one is found here. May be, d tailor did some mistake," said Rohan.

Zoya's dress


Zoya changes into a blue strapless dress which she designed for herself to wear n continues d show. After d show, Zoya is in d dressing room lost in thoughts. She luks @ dat blue dress n sees dat someone has purposely loosen d stitching. She thinks dat no one did anything here. She then recalls how Asad gave her dress wid a smile n told her to wear d dress for d show. She then recalls how he never wanted to work outside d house dat also as a fashion designer. She also recalls how he told her dat he don't want people to say dat his wife wears disgusting clothes on d ramps. Zoya starts getn very angry.

Scene shifts to KV. Everyone r in d hall. Zoya is in red top n jeans.

"Zoya, how did ur show went?" asked Asad wid a smile.

Zoya got angry n slapped him hard across his face. Everyone gets shocked.

"Don't pretend dat u don't know anything, Asad Ahmed Khan," yelled Zoya angrily.

"Zoya, wat happened? Y did u slapped me?" asked Asad shockingly.

"U can never change, Asad," replied Zoya angrily, "U pretended to be my friend so dat u can plan cheap things against me. I never knew u can stoop dis low."

"Zoya, wat happened? Y r u so angry?" asked Dilshad.

Zoya tells them everything. All gets shocked. Najma went near Zoya to comfort her.

"Zoya, I had not done anything," said Asad I a hurtful voice.

"Don't lie, Asad," said Zoya as tears began to form in her eyes.

Tanveer smirks lukn @ them. She recalls how she sneaked into Asad's room wen no was around n loosened d stitch of Zoya's dress.

"Dis is just d start, Jammy. U vl hv to face a lot of hatred 4m Zoya. I purposely gave u d idea to get a dress made like d same Zoya's dress u tore. I hv to do many other things for dat. U wanted Zoya back in ur life na? But all u got is Zoya's slap n anger wid lot of hatred. I tried to make u go against Zoya many times but u did not went against n now I got successful to make Zoya go against u," thinks Tanveer wid an evil smirk.

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yay I am first for the first time
coming to the update it was fabulous
I love reading long long updates!
ugh kill that daayan tanveer plzz
zoya's dress was very very beautiful
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i loved the update...n the precap is even more interesting
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