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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

I accepted it n I vl surely PM u😊.

Nice concept.
I would love to read it.

Originally posted by: Anu_Asya

Nice concept.
I would love to read it.

Plz, suggest a title for dis story😊.

Part 1

Asad n Zoya gets married. Dilshad convinced Zoya to marry Asad teln her dat she thinks she vl best for Asad n Asad vl surely change if he marries her. Zoya agrees thinking Asad vl change soon n respect her as she is. Dilshad convinces Asad to marry Zoya. Asad does not agrees but Dilshad puts pressure on him teln him dat he sud get married like everyone. Asad agrees against his wishes. There was only engagement n nikaah ceremony.

On their wedding night, Zoya is sitting on d bed wid a blank expression. Asad comes inside. He is lukn frustrated. He comes n stands near her.

"Asad, now dat v r married. I know v fought a lot but can't v be friends?" asked Zoya.

"Listen, I never wanted to marry a girl like u but ammi made me to marry u. She put pressure on me. I don't know wat she saw in u. I am not at all interested in a modern n mannerless girl like u. And I am not all interested in being friends wid u. U can never be my wife n daughter-in-law of dis house. U r just a misfit," replied Asad rudely.

Zoya was shocked n hurt. They changed into their clothes. Asad takes his pillow n blanket n sleeps on d sofa. Next day, Asad wakes up @ 6 n sees Zoya still sleeping. He gets angry.

"How can she still sleep so much?" thinks Asad frustratingly.

Zoya wakes up @ 8 n comes to d breakfast table to eat her breakfast. Asad n Dilshad were in d kitchen. Zoya was in blue sleeveless top n jeans. Asad gets angry seeing her.

"U r still d same after marriage. First u woke up @ 8 instead of 6 n then u wear dis jeans n top," said Asad angrily.

"I wake up @ d same time every day," replied Zoya n asked, "Its my habit n wats wrong in dis jeans n top?"

"Then change ur habit as u r married now n dis is not ur New York. D ladies in our house does not wear such clothes n u r now daughter-in-law. So, go n change. I don't want to see u in such clothes. And 4m 2mrw, u better wake wen others wake up," replied Asad.

Zoya gets irritated.

"First of all, I vl wake up wen I want as I am comfortable in dat. Secondly, there is no wrong in wearing these clothes. In which century u r living? I vl not change," said Zoya.

"U saw, Ammi? How mannerless she is? I always told u dat she is not fit for dis house. She is a misfit. She does not even luks like a daughter-in-law," said Asad irritatedly.

"Asad, Zoya is more a daughter than daughter-in-law of dis house. She is ur wife now n u sud respect her wishes. U sud make her happy n not talk to her like dis," said Dilshad.

"Ammi, wat r u saying?" asked Asad shockingly.

"I am saying right, Asad. Don't force ur thoughts on her," said Dilshad firmly.

Asad goes 4m d kitchen in irritation. Zoya is lukn hurt.

"Don't worry, Zoya. Everything vl be alright," said Dilshad wid a smile.

In d evening, wen Asad comes 4m d office. He sees Zoya playing games on her I-Pad. He keeps his briefcase down. Zoya pauses her game n luks @ Asad.

"Asad, u came. I vl bring a coffee for u," said Zoya in a friendly tone.

Asad just stares @ her n calls loudly, "Najma, plz bring me coffee."

He then says rudely to Zoya, "U don't need to bring coffee for me."

Zoya feels hurt.

Next afternoon, Asad is working on a presentation on his laptop at d table. Zoya is resting on d bed. She is wearing a red off-shoulder T-Shirt n jeans.

"Do u need help in presentation if u hv much to do?" asked Zoya coming near his table.

Asad luks up n says furiously, "Did I asked ur help? I don't want ur help however I hv to do d work. A wife does not help her husband in these kinds of work. Only men can do these kind of office works. U does not luk wife n daughter-in-law 4m any angle. Ur parents hv not even taught how to behave wid others n dress up," said Asad rudely.

Zoya gets hurt.

"Don't go my parents," said Zoya raising her voice, "I just wanted to help."

"Y sud I not go to ur parents who gave birth to such a disrespectful n shameless girl?" asked Asad furiously, "I don't want any help. So, don't disturb me."

"Wat if I go to ur parents?" asked Zoya angrily, "How u vl feel?"
"Zoya, don't say dis," yelled Asad.

"U started it, Asad," said Zoya angrily n went back resting on d bed.

Asad irritatedly went back to his working.

Asad used to spend most of his days in office. He used to get irritated 4m inside weneva anyone used to congratulate him for his wedding or ask abt his wife.

"I wish she goes away 4m my life forever. She is a disgrace in my family," muttered Asad as he was working in his cabin.

A week passed of their marriage but there is still no change in their relationship. Asad n Zoya always used to hv fight n disagreement among them. Dilshad or Najma used to defend Zoya some of d times. Zoya still used to try to be friendly wid him but he always insulted her. He had his ego cuz he was regressive in thinking n hated modern girls.

At night, all sits for dinner. Zoya was wearing a white top n jeans.

"Asad, Zoya has made some food 2day. She hardly knows cooking but still she did a lot of efforts," said Dilshad.

Zoya hardly knew any cooking but still she decided to cook. They saw wat Zoya had made. She had made some rotis which was not in proper shape n was not properly made, vegetable kofta, properly made vegetable pizza, chicken kababs n chicken soup.

"Wow, let hv Zoya's foods 1^st," said Najma excitedly.

"I vl taste 1^st. I want to check it," said Asad.

He ate a morsel of kofta wid roti n made a disgusted face. He then ate a piece pizza, He then a kabab n lastly he drank a spoonful of soup. He made disgusted face again. He pushed all d food off d table made by Zoya angrily much to other's shock.

"Asad, y did u do dat?" asked Dilshad shockingly.

"Ammi, its good dat I tasted it 1^st. Eventhough she is a woman n daughter-in-law of dis house she cannot even cook properly," replied Asad angrily, "D rotis r not in proper shape n not properly cooked. Koftas r tasteless. D soup is too much spicy. Kababs n pizza r fine but don't if there is some fault in them too. I tasted 1^st cuz I cannot trust her cooking."
Zoya was very hurt.

"Bhaijaan, u hv not done right. She did a lot of efforts," said Najma.

"If she wud hv done efforts then her food wud not hv been awful," said Asad.

Zoya goes to her room widout eating anything.

"Asad, u hv hurted her," said Dilshad.

"Ammi, lets eat d food. If she vl feel hungry then she vl come," said Asad.

Dilshad n Najma lukd shocked.

Wen Asad comes in his room, he sees Zoya in her night dress sitting on their bed. She was playing wid a golden music dat had couple dancing in it.(Note: Here, Gaffur is entirely negative. D music box is given by her mom not her dad in dis story). Zoya had a smile on her face as she played it. She got startled @ Asad's angry voice.

"Stop playing wid dis stupid toy. I hv to do some important work now n I don't want to get disturbed wid dis noise. U already spoiled my mood wid ur sick food n now ur playing wid dis toy like a child to irritate me. Dats only wat u can do. U r good for nothing, Zoya. Stop playing n sleep cuz I want to concentrate on my work," taunts Asad angrily.

"Asad, wat r u saying?" asked Zoya shockingly lukn hurt.

"I am saying wats true. Now just sleep," replied Asad angrily.

Zoya closed her music box n kept in her bag. Asad turned his face in disgust n went to his table to work on his laptop. Zoya had tears in her eyes as she slept wid blanket over her.

Next day, Asad's childhood friend Tanveer arrives in KV one afternoon. Zoya is dressed in a yellow T-Shirt, black jacket n blue jeans. Tanveer was dressed in white salwar-kameez wid a dupatta covering her head.

"Asalaam Alaikum Jammy," said Tanveer happily n hugged Tanveer.

"Asaslaam Alaikum Tanu," said Asad happily hugging her back.

"I am so sorry dat I cannot come to ur wedding," said Tanveer n asks, "Who is ur wife?"

"She is my wife, Zoya," replied Asad pointing to her.

Tanveer is shocked to see Zoya's attire.

"Asalaam Alaikum, Zoya," said Tanveer wid a smile shaking her hands.

"Asalaam Alaikum, Tanveer," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Do u wear these clothes even after ur marriage?" asked Tanveer shockingly, "Jammy hates western clothes."

Anger rises on Asad's face.

"Yaa, I wear these clothes n I love them," replied Zoya.

"Najma, go n show Tanveer's room," said Asad.

Najma n Tanveer went 4m d hall.

"Ammi, she embarrassed me in front of my childhood friend Tanveer. U saw how she was shocked to see her in these clothes," said Asad frustratingly.

Zoya was hurt n Dilshad saw her face.

"Asad, y u always behave wid Zoya like dis?" asked Dilshad, "Wat has she done to u? It sud not matter to u how others react abt Zoya. Its important dat u support her."

"Ammi, I told how I want my wife to be like but she still does not changes," said Asad.

"Asad, Zoya does not needs to change. She is okay as she is," said Dilshad.

"Asad, wateva u r doing is wrong. I hate ur thinking," said Zoya.

"Yaa Zoya, u r only right in dis house," said Asad sarcastically.

In d evening, Dilshad was making kababs. Zoya came in d kitchen.

"Ammi, u r making kababs. I love it," said Zoya wid a smile.

She happily tuk a kabab to eat 4m where Dilshad was keeping d kababs after making them. Wen she tuk a bite of d kaba, she heard Asad's rude voice 4m behind.

"Can't u just wait for some time to eat wid everyone. U r taking n eating d kababs like a child while ammi is still making. Can't u hv just some patience n wait for others? U vl never learn any manners n etiquettes," came Asad's rude taunt 4m behind.

Zoya n Dilshad turned in shock.

"Asad, talk properly wid Zoya," said Dilshad firmly.

"Ammi, she never does anything good. And Zoya, u sud learn sumthn 4m Tanveer n try to be like her. She wears decent clothes unlike u. Her nature is also calm not loud like u. She is d example of a perfect woman not a bad example like u. I am ashamed to call u as my wife outside cuz u vl ruin my reputation I hv in society," said Asad rudely.

Zoya gets hurt n goes to her room.

Next morning, Zoya is wearing a yellow floral top n jeans. Asad is in d bathroom. Zoya excitedly comes in d hall n sits wid Dilshad n Najma on d sofa.

"Ammi, Najma, I wanted to give everyone surprise. I was secretly setting up my fashion house here in Bhopal 4m some months. Its named Amber. One branch of Amber is set in New York. Next month, there vl be a fashion show n I vl wear dis dress as a designer," said Zoya excitedly as she shows them a blue one-shouldered dress dat was in her hand.

"Wow, dats such a good news. My Zoya bhabhi vl be a famous designer. I am very happy for u," said Najma happily.

"I am also very happy for u, Zoya. U give dis surprise to Asad too," said Dilshad happily.

"But ammi?" asked Zoya nervously.

"Don't get nervous, Zoya. He vl surely support u," said Dilshad wid a smile.

Zoya goes to her room where Asad is sitting on his bed.

"Asad, I want to tell u sumthn," said Zoya happily.

"Tell quickly, I don't hv time," said Asad in an uninteresting voice.

"Asad, I hv set up my fashion house Amber in Bhopal. I hv also set up one Amber branch in New York. I vl be a fashion designer n for d next month's fashion show, I vl wear dis as a designer. How is dis dress?" asked Zoya wid a smile showing him d dress.

Asad got angry wat she said n he got more angry seeing d dress.

"How dare u to even think abt working outside d house dat also as a fashion desiner?" asked Asad angrily.

Zoya got shocked wid his angry reaction.

"Wats d problem in dis, Asad?" asked Zoya.

"Women of dis house don't work outside. They only manage house," replied Asad sternly.

He angrily snatched d dress 4m her hand n tore it. Zoya was shocked as well as hurt.

"U hv not done right, Asad. Y did u tear my dress?" asked Zoya in a shocked n hurtful voice, "I did a lot of efforts in designing dis dress n u tore it."

"I did not done anything wrong. U sud not put ur efforts in dis stupid things. U sud instead put ur efforts in learning to cook properly," replied Asad angrily n went out of d room.

Tears came 4m Zoya's eyes.

"Asad vl never change. He does not even respects me. He does not even wants to be friends wid me. Now, he is not respecting my wishes n tore dis dress," thinks Zoya sadly.

In d evening, Zoya is sitting on a chair in d room. Asad comes inside their room angrily wid a card in his hand.

"I got to know in office dat u ran 4m ur own wedding wid a man name Akram. He is my employee n told me abt u. Cuz of u, he n his family had to face embarrassment," said Asad angrily showing her d wedding card, "I never knew u can be dis shameless. U hv no respect for anyone. U did not thought even once before running 4m ur own wedding."

Zoya was shocked to see d wedding card.

"I had compulsion(majboori) to dis. I can explain," said Zoya.

"I don't want to hear any explanations," yelled Asad n threw d card on floor.

Zoya luks hurt.

At night, as usual Zoya is sleeping on d bed while Asad is sleeping on d couch. Zoya cries silently while sleeping thinking Asad always treated her since they met n how he began to treat her more badly 4m d time they got married. He does not even thinks her as his wife but he always insults n taunts her. He always tries to control her. He does not respects her a bit. He treats her like a dirt. Zoya decided dat she vl work n not stop 4m following her dreams. She vl again talk to Asad. If he remains d same then vl leave d house forever as she can't live her life like dis anymore.

Precap: Full on dhamaka😊.

PS: Plz guys, suggest me a proper title of dis story. I hv few options. Do suggest me which is okay. U all can give ur own title suggestions too apart 4m these options. Plz, help me😊.

My options are:

1. Realizing Your Importance(Asad missing Zoya n realizing her importance during divorce period)

2. Divorce On The Line(D story is abt Asad n Zoya's divorce period)

3. Burning In The Fire Set By Himself(Asad regrets very badly. He is in living in a hell while suffering a lot during d divorce period)

Select 4m these 3 or suggest ur own title name. Thank u😊.

Title no 3! And the story is good. Loving it already!!!"

Go with 'Divorce on the Line'


So apt!!

Very good start Juhi. Though this part is very painful for me. I just want to kill asad. The way he insulting zoya everytime made me angry. Hope u dont give more asad insulting zoya scene. But i like it because i know after this what going to happen. Waiting for zoya's outburst. Thanks for the pm. Update soon