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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Asad was feeling guilty that he trust tanveer & compared her to zoya
All sibling met @ mall & nuzhat insulted zoya
What a showdown from najma
She supported zoya all the way & slapped nuzhat
Asad broke all his relation to his siblings
Ayaan realised that he did wrong
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update Thank u😊
Asad was feeling guilty that he trust tanveer & compared her to zoya He is more guilty for d way he was always regressive n judgemental dat caused all d problems dat tuk away his Zoya
All sibling met @ mall & nuzhat insulted zoya She has crossed her limits😡
What a showdown from najma Najma can't tolerate these fools insulting Zoya😡
She supported zoya all the way & slapped nuzhat Najma also broke her relation wid them👏
Asad broke all his relation to his siblings Asad even slapped him for insulting Zoya👏
Ayaan realised that he did wrong He will soon realize his mistakes of insulting Zoya😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update...ayan n others saw their right place!!
Omg!! Tanveer is such a filthy character...n the precap was ewww!!
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Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

Wonderful update... Thank u😊
ayan n others saw their right place!! Asad had finally blasted them dat they never understood his feelings. Poor guy is all alone as he lost his wife, sister n mother😭.
Omg!! Tanveer is such a filthy character...n the precap was ewww!! She told lie using d holy word 'namaaz'😡. Asad will hv a flashback of Zoya doing namaaz in jeans😭.
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Part 14(A)

Asad sits in his car n recalls how Zoya made cake for his ammi to cheer her up wen she was feeling low n how his ammi got happy wid it. He recalls how he was d only one who got irritated by it just cuz Zoya was doing dat. He then recalls Zingo Hotties insulting Zoya very badly some moments ago. His eyes become moist recalling tears in Zoya's eyes.

"Dat day, Zoya cheered ammi. Now Zoya needs to be cheered up cuz she is very hurt n upset. Now who vl cheer her up? Who vl make her smile?" thinks Asad sadly.

Scene shifts to a cafe in another mall. Zoya n Najma r sitting @ a table wid a pizza, 2 chocolate pastries n 2 diet coke before them. Zoya is still lukn hurt. Najma is feeling bad to see her hurt.

"Zoya, lets eat," said Najma wid a smile, "Lets start wid d pastries. Don't think abt wat happened @ d mall."

She feeds Zoya her pastry wid her hand. Zoya smiles @ dis.

"Najma, thank u for cheering me up," said Zoya wid a smile.

"No need to thank ur friend, Zoya," said Najma wid a smile.

Zoya fed Najma her pastry wid her hand n she smiled.

Scene shifts to Ayaan's room. He sadly recalls Asad slapping him for saying cheap things abt Zoya. He then recalls Asad breaking his relation wid him, his sisters n Humeira.

"Bhaijaan, plz forgive me for never understanding u n hurting u many times. Plz forgive me for insulting Zoya. Badi Bi assumed right dat u want her back in ur life but I never tried to understand u. I only blamed Zoya for ur being hurt even though wen u always told dat its ur fault. Plz, don't go away 4m me, bhaijaan," said Ayaan sadly to himself.

Ayaan then calls Asad.

Scene shifts to Asad sitting in his room. His cell is ringing. He sees Ayaan as d caller. He recalls Ayaan badly insulting Zoya @ d mall. He gets angry n cuts d call. Ayaan gets upset.

"Bhaijaan cut my call," said Ayaan sadly.

Ayaan calls Asad again n again but Asad cuts d call. Ayaan gets unhappy.

"Bhaijaan is really very angry wid me," said Ayaan sadly.

Ayaan comes in d hall. He sees Razia n Shirin talking. They does not see him.

"Shirin, v need to get Ayaan n Humeira married off. They vl look very nice 2gthr," said Razia wid a smile.

"U r right, Bhabhi. I hope they don't get divorced like Asad n Zoya," said Shirin.

"Don't worry, Shirin. Humeira loves Ayaan n Ayaan vl too start loving her very soon," said Razia wid a smile.

Ayaan gets irritated n goes to his room before they cud see him. He is walking to n fro in his room. Humeira comes to his room.

"Ayaan, y r u lukn tensed?" asked Humeira, "I know u r very upset dat Asad bhaijaan slapped u but it happened cuz of Zoya. Don't know wat she did to his mind?"

Ayaan got annoyed. He recalled Zoya taunting her in d mall dat Humeira loves someone n making her reveal dat its him.

"Humeira, don't talk anything against Zoya. She is bhaijaan's wife. Bhaijaan slapped me cuz of my mistake. Zoya has no fault in dis. Now, leave me alone," said Ayaan calmly.

"But Ayaan, Zoya has insulted u n me 2day," said Humeira.

"Enough," said Ayaan angrily, "Y u r unnecessarily saying wrong things abt Zoya? She insulted us cuz v started it. Will u keep quiet wen someone insults u? Bhaijaan was very hurt cuz of us. Can't u see dat? Now, u r hating Zoya more cuz she told us truth abt u. Ur ammi is always talking to get us married. Now, she may hv send u to trap me."

Humeira gets shocked n hurt.

"Ayaan, wat r u saying?" asked Humeira shockingly.

"I am saying right, Humeira. Zoya said right. U still may be trying to get my attention 2wards u. Dats y u came here," said Ayaan furiously, "Now, just leave my room."

Humeira leaves his room lukn hurt.

Scene shifts to Asad sitting on d couch in his room lukn tensed. Tanveer comes inside. Asad is not aware. She goes behind d couch n starts massaging his neck n shoulders. Asad gets startled n luks back to see Tanveer massaging him wid a smile on her face. Asad gets angry n disgusted. Najma who was passing by d room sees wat was happening in Asad's room. She gets angry n disgusted seeing dat. She leaves 4m there angrily.

"Tanveer, stop doing dis," said Asad calmly.

"Jammy, u luk very tensed so I thought of relieving ur tension," said Tanveer wid a smile.

Asad gets more angry.

"Leave me alone, Tanveer. I want to rest," said Asad calmly.

"Shall I bring coffee for u, Jammy?" asked Tanveer wid a smile.

Asad recalls Tanveer spilling coffee on Zoya's photo twice. He then recalls Tanveer drugging him by spiking his coffee n doing dat cheap trick. He gets more angry.

"Tanveer, I don't want anything. Just leave me alone," said Asad wid irritation.

"Okay Jammy," said Tanveer wid a smile n leaves d room.

In d evening, Tanveer is out while others r in d hall. Asad comes in d hall.

"Bhaijaan, u must hv had a proper sleep after being massaged by ur dear Tanu," said Najma in a sarcastic voice.

Asad gets shocked.

"Najma, its not like dis," said Asad shockingly.

"Bhaijaan, I saw wid my own eyes. Ur Tanu was massaging u. I left 4m there as I angry n disgusted by dat. Glad dat Zoya left d house otherwise she wud hv been tortured mentally seeing her husband getn so close wid another woman," said Najma angrily.

"I did right by sending Zoya to her home," said Dilshad.

"Ammi, 2day I tuk Zoya to a mall to cheer her up. But I had to take her to another mall cuz he wid his step-siblings n Humeira showed up. Our step-siblings n Humeira insulted Zoya so badly dat it brought tears to her eyes," said Najma furiously teln her everything.

Dilshad gets angry.

"How dare they insult our Zoya like dat? How dare they bring tears to her eyes? Was Asad not enough dat they also started hurting Zoya? I did not said anything wen d elders of dat house insulted me always. Now, d younger ones of dat house r insulting our Zoya. Dats wat they r taught in dat house. They all don't hv any shame," said Dilshad angrily.

"I broke my relation wid them, Ammi," said Najma, "Bhaijaan had taught them many wrong things. He even told them dat they vl meet d type of people wid d way they dress."

Dilshad got angry again.

"Asad, how can ur thinking be so cheap n disgusting?" asked Dilshad angrily, "U r not suitable to be part of dis family but u r suitable to be part of dat family."

"I hope u never get Zoya back, bhaijaan," said Najma angrily.

Asad went to his room lukn hurt.

At night, Asad sees Tanveer in d garden hugging a hooded guy. He smells sumthn fishy n goes nearer. He hides n sees them. He brings his cell n adjusts d video recording.

"Jammy is so stupid dat he believed dat sumthn happened between us. He is very guilty abt dis. He even does not knows dat it was me who tampered wid Zoya's dress n put d blame on him. Its so fun using him. He always believes me blindly," said Tanveer wid a laugh.

Asad gets angry but keeps on recording. D hooded guy kisses her hand.

"Now u go before anyone sees us," said Tanveer wid a smile.

D hooded guy goes. Asad gets shocked @ wat happened now n goes inside his room. He puts a security lock code on his cell. He also forwards d recording to his laptop n 2nd cell n also puts security lock codes on them.

"I sud not tell anyone abt dis before I find more proofs against Tanveer," thinks Asad, "Who was dat guy wid Tanveer."

Next morning, Asad is lost in thoughts n lukn shattered. He can't stand Tanveer who always touches n holds him in a disgusting way. He is very sure dat nothing happened between them cuz he was unconscious. But how cud he prove dat to everyone? Just then he gets a text wid d sender as Private Number'. He decides to open d message.

Hello Asad Ahmed Khan. Surprised dat how I know u? Who does not knows u? U r a successful business n owner of Dilshad Constructions. I want to help u in ur problem. I know dat ur dear wife has left u n ur best friend is a bitch.

Asad is shocked to see d message.

He replies- Who r u? How do u know so much abt me?

D sender replies- It does not matters to u who I am, Mr. AAK. Its only matters to u how can I help u. Well, I am sending a big surprise for u. Wait a minute.

Asad is clueless wat d person is talking abt. He then get a MMS. He opens d video.

D video opens wid d same mall he went yesterday. In dat video, 2 burqa clad persons r entering d female toilet which is empty. Both of them removes their burqa who is revealed to be Tanveer wid none other than Haseena's son Imraan. They both hugs each other n start kissing each other passionately. After dat, they laughs heartily.

"Tanveer, has anyone got suspicious of u?" asked Imraan.

"No Imraan, who vl get suspicious of me? Finally, Zoya has left d house. She was a thorn in my way. I wanted to marry Asad for our big plan but he was already married to her. Now, I made everyone believe dat I n Asad consummated wid each other. And dat idiot Asad also believed it. After some days, I vl tell him dat I am pregnant wid his child which is actually ur child. Dat idiot vl believe me. He actually does not know dat I am 2 months pregnant wid ur child. I vl make him so guilty dat he vl hv to marry me," replied Tanveer wid a laugh.

Both of them puts d burqa back on their faces n comes out of d bathroom. D video ends.

Asad is shocked n angry to see d video. He again gets a text after some seconds.

So, how was d video? U r very shocked na? Well, there r more stuffs dat I can show which vl be very helpful to u but u vl not try to find my identity. U vl not act in anger wid them. U vl pretend dat u really slept wid Tanveer n is very guilty. Well, if possible try to find some proofs against Tanveer n if u get some then contact me.

Asad replies- But who r u & y r u helping me? I want to know ur identity. I even don't know whether u r a man or a woman. I want to know abt who r u.

D mystery person replies- I vl tell u abt myself wen d proper time comes. But I can tell u dis much dat Tanveer is my enemy. I hate her very much She has done very bad wid me. I am helping u cuz u r a nice man n I saw u dat day in d mall along wid others. And after some time, I saw Tanveer n Imraan entering d mall in burqa so I followed them. I don't know wat is their motive behind trapping u but I vl try to find out. Don't tell abt me to anyone n don't reveal anything to anyone as its not d proper time. U also try to find out d motive of Tanveer behind trapping u.Take care.

Asad is shocked wid d reply. He wonders who d mystery person cud be. He then receives another MMS 4m d mystery person. He is shocked n opens d video.

D video opens wid 2 burqa clad person standing @ d balcony of d 1st floor of d mall.

"Imraan, I was getn irritated wid d way Asad used to feel guilty n think of Zoya. He even started to support Zoya weneva I used to make Asad go against her by talking against her hoping dat he vl hate her more cuz he always hated a modern girl like her. But he used to support her n used to annoyed wid me sometimes. He even used to see Zoya's photo in d newspaper n I had to spill coffee on it. I even saw him eating a little bit of Zoya's food everyday wen no one was lukn. Zoya started taunting him for being so narrow minded but instead of getn angry Asad started to change cuz f her taunts. One day, I saw them shaking hands. I even saw Zoya tripping n Asad catching her in his arms. Next day, I heard Asad saying to himself dat he has fallen in love wid Zoya. Asad has really changed a lot n Zoya too started appreciating him. I was afraid dat Zoya too vl fall in love wid him. I can't let dat happen. He told me dat he wants Zoya back in his life but he did not told me dat he loves her. I decided dat if I can't make Asad go against Zoya then I sud make Zoya against Asad. And it was so easy cuz Zoya already hated him for his stupid ideologies n how he treated her earlier. So, their friendship was not strong n it was easy for me to break it. So, I gave him d dress idea n I tampered wid her dress to humiliate her publicly n getn Asad blamed for it. Zoya slapped Asad n again started hating him. Dis is called killing 2 birds wid a stone. Next day, I again spilled coffee on her photo wen I saw Zoya cumn so dat she again blames Asad for it. But don't know wat happened to Asad. For dat girl Zoya, he told me, his childhood friend Tanveer to leave his house. Then I decided dat wat I planned to do after sometime I sud do it immediately. I put sleeping drugs in his coffee n then I made it luk like dat he slept wid me. Khala even slapped him n send Zoya to her home," said Tanveer.

"Y did u choose to do dat only near d pool?" asked Imraan.

"Cuz Zoya does her breakfast @ d pool. I knew dat she vl wake up early dat day. So, I thought to give her a surprise of making her see her husband sleeping wid another woman who is his childhood friend n d type of woman he always wanted as his wife. Zoya hates him but wat happens to a woman who sees her husband sleeping wid another woman while still being married to her? Dat woman feels dat her husband is just seeing her like an object who has no emotions. Zoya vl even think dat Asad married her cuz of his ammi but he always loved me. She vl even think dat he cud not stop himself n wait till d divorce to sleep wid me. She vl also think dat he slept wid me to mentally torture her n make her cry. Again, I killed 2 birds wid a stone. Asad fell in d eyes of his own family n Zoya left d house. I was so happy to see her crying after seeing me n Jammy 2gthr in dat state. She tried to come between my plan so I threw her aside by using her own husband. Dat girl even started influencing Jammy in a positive way. Jammy never fell in love wid any girl n never wanted to fall in love. But he fell in love wid dat 'body builder in a woman's body' Zoya who spends her time wid punching bag n karate instead of doing make-up n wearing jewelleries. Wat he saw in dat Zoya dat he fell in love wid her? He fell in love wid a girl who is a modern NRI n wears jeans n short clothes, d type of girl he always hated. I was always careful dat Jammy never falls in love so dat I cud carry my plan by trapping him to marry me but Zoya spoiled it all. So, I had to punish her by publicly humiliating her by tampering wid her dress n hurting her by sleeping wid her husband. Asad 1st used to feel bad by not being close to Zoya even though they lived in d same house but he used to at least see her everyday but now he can't even do dat cuz Khala send her to her room to save being getn hurt anymore 4m her own husband," replied Tanveer .

"Tanveer, u r very brilliant," said Imraan wid a laugh.

Tanveer joined him in d laughter. They leave d mall. D video ends.

Asad gets more angry after seeing d video. He recalls Tanveer giving him d dress idea. He recalls Zoya slapping him n crying blaming him for d wardrobe malfunction. He recalls Zoya blaming him for spilling coffee on her photo in d newspaper. He recalls Zoya crying in Najma's arms after seeing him sleeping wid Tanveer. He recalls Zoya grabbing his collar n shaking him while hvng an outburst. He recalls Zoya leaving d house wid her aapi-jiju.

Asad gets a text 4m d mystery person.

Dis video may hv shocked u more. Right Mr. AAK? Ur friend turned out to be a bitch who is planning sumthn against u wid her boyfriend Imraan who is engaged to ur step-sister Nikhat. Ur friend has troubled u a lot. She even troubled ur wife a lot for no fault of her's. By seeing dis video, luks like u started doubting on Tanveer. Dats y u wanted her to leave d house. But Tanveer played a cheap trick on u. U even supported Zoya over Tanveer many times. May be u r really trying very hard to expose Tanveer. I appreciate ur efforts. Hope u succeed soon in it.

Asad replies- Yesterday, I saw Tanveer wid a hooded guy who kissed her hand. Tanveer revealed dat nothing happened between me n her. She also revealed dat she tampered wid Zoya's dress. I think dat hooded guy was surely Imraan.

D mystery person replies- OMG! Dats a very big issue. Dunno for how long she is meeting him in ur own house. Be careful cuz dat woman is very cheap n cunning.

"I really need to do sumthn more to find out abt Tanveer's plan. I don't know who is dat mystery person. Hope d mystery person reveals itself soon. Dat Tanveer has hurt me n my Zoya a lot. Zoya has suffered a lot widout any fault of her's. I vl not spare Tanveer for hurting my Zoya n making her cry. Hope I get succeed n prove to Zoya dat Tanveer is d culprit cuz she is not ready to believe me cuz of my earlier mistakes n my earlier nature. But still, I vl hv to work hard to gain Zoya's trust n love," thinks Asad wid determination.


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Part 14(B)

In d afternoon, Tanveer goes somewhere. Asad calls one of his men on his cell teln him to follow her where she goes.

Tanveer is seeing going to a maternity clinic. A man is following her. Tanveer goes to a doctor's room(D doctor who helps Tanveer wid her lies). D man luks 4m d window n puts a small camera on d window. Asad is seeing d footage on his laptop in his room.

"Doctor, can u make a fake pregnancy report?" asked Tanveer.

"Why?" asked d doctor.

"I need it urgently to fool my friend Asad Ahmed Khan into believing dat I am pregnant wid his child so he becomes guilty n agrees to marry me. He is so dumb dat he vl believe me widout thinking. I don't want to let him know dat I am 2 months pregnant wid Imraan's child. He may not even know dat pregnancy can't be detected so early," replied Tanveer.

"Okay Tanveer, ur work vl be done in 2 days," said d doctor wid a smile.

Tanveer smiled back n shook hands wid her. She left d cabin not noticing Asad's man. Asad got very angry as he saw d footage. He saves d footage in his laptop.

"I need to teach dis doctor a lesson," said Asad angrily.

Najma is in college n Dilshad is @ some friend's house. Asad calls d man n tells him to keep on following Tanveer n inform him wen she is returning to his home.

Asad goes to Tanveer's room. He starts checking her room. He finds her pregnancy reports in d drawer dat showed dat she is 2 months pregnant. He finds her other pregnancy reports. He also finds her various sonography reports. He then finds some photos of her wid Imraan. In most of d photos they r hugging n kissing each other. Some of d photos of them were of during their college days. Both of them r 22 n both studied in d same college in Kanpur. He then finds some of d medicines dat pregnant women takes. He takes pictures of everything in his cell. He even notes Tanveer's doctor's name n her contact. He luks for other things in her room. He then tidies Tanveer's room n keeps everything as it was.

"I hv got so much proofs 2day," said Asad to himself n left d room.

Tanveer came home after some time.

In d evening, all r @ home.

"Khala, its my namaaz time," said Tanveer.

"Okay," said Dilshad.

Tanveer goes to her room. Asad goes in d garden n walks to n fro. He recalls himself offering friendship to Zoya n she accepting it. He recalls Zoya falling in his arms. As he was thinking abt Zoya, he sees a guy in hood standing outside Tanveer's window. Asad stealthily goes further. He sees Tanveer takn him inside. D guy removes his hood n is none other than Imraan. They both smile @ each other. Asad then sees hugging n kissing each other passionately. D guy who smiles n removes her dupatta n throwing it on d floor. Tanveer then smiles n removes d guy's t-shirt throwing it on d floor.

"I can't wait u to be inside me, Imraan," said Tanveer in a seductive voice.

"I too can't wait to enter u, Tanu," said Imraan in a seductive voice.

"V do dis here almost everyday n no one comes to know abt us," said Tanveer wid a smile.

"Cuz they think u as a traditional n pious girl unlike Zoya who dresses like a s**t," said Imraan wid a grin.

Asad who very disgusted wid their action n talks wanted to punch Imraan for calling his Zoya a s**t but he controlled his anger. He can't believe dat Tanveer is such a cheap woman. Tanveer then closes d windows n curtains. Asad goes back to his room. He locks d door n angrily paces in his room recalling wat he saw outside Tanveer's window.

"Dis woman is so cheap n characterless. She uses 'namaaaz' as a lie to do cheap thing of sleeping wid her boyfriend. They r doing dis often in my own house n no one came to know abt it. Once I insulted Zoya for doing namaaz in jeans n top," said Asad angrily.

-----Flashback-----

During their 12 days of marriage, one evening after cumn 4m d office, Asad sees Zoya doing namaaz in their room. He gets angry cuz he saw Zoya doing namaaz in a beige top n blue jeans while covering her head wid a blue scarf. He keeps his bag down n watches her angrily. After finishing her namaaz, Zoya sees Asad in their room. She sees him lukn angry.

"U r such a characterless n shameless woman, Zoya," said Asad angrily, "U r wearing jeans n top even while doing namaaz. U hv no manners on how to dress up while doing namaaz."

Zoya got hurt as well as angry.

"Excuse me, Asad," said Zoya angrily, "Wats wrong in wearing jeans n top while doing namaaz? Its important dat v wear full clothes n do namaaz properly. I am wearing full clothes not short dresses, shorts or mini-skirts. U men can do namaaz n go to dargah, mazhar wearing western clothes like shirt, trouser, t-shirt, jeans then y can't women? I can't believe dat u belong to dis home. U belong to some home where d family members' thinking r outdated. Clothes does not matter while doing namaaz. It matters how sincerely v do it. U need to grow up, Asad. I wish u realize wat I said one day before its too late."

Asad angrily goes to d washroom. After dat, he saw her doing namaaz many times in jeans n top. He used to always get angry seeing her doing namaaz in jeans n top.

-----Flashback Ends-----

Asad sadly comes out of his thoughts wid Zoya's words 'U need to grow up, Asad. I wish u realize wat I said one day before its too late' ringing in his ears. A tear escapes his eye.

"How I was so stupid dat I never saw how sincerely Zoya used to pray. I only used to see her clothes n get angry. I used to praise Tanveer for her dressing sense thinking she does namaaz sincerely by dressing traditionally. But I was so wrong n judgemental. And 2day, d truth is before me. Zoya always used to do her namaaz sincerely while Tanveer does cheap things while using namaaz as a lie. I am so sorry, Zoya. Plz, forgive me for insulting u dat day. I wish I realized ur words dat day itself," said Asad in a repenting voice.

He opens his cupboard n finds his engagement n wedding album. He luks @ d photos wid tears in his eyes. He sees dat in most of d photos they hv blank or unhappy expression. He is trying to find photos in which both of them r smiling even if its forced smiled as told by his ammi n Najma. He then finds some engagement n wedding photos where both of them r smiling. He takes those photos n keeps it in his wallet wid tears in his eyes.

"Now, Zoya must be doing namaaz @ dis time, I sud also do d same," said Asad to himself.

He recalls seeing Zoya doing namaaz many times in dis room in jeans, top n scarf wen they lived in d same room. He sadly recalls Zoya lukn so pure n angelic while doing namaaz.

He sits down n covers his head to do namaaz.

Scene shifts to Zoya in her room wearing green top n blue jeans. She covers her head wid a blue scarf to do namaaz.

Both Asad n Zoya r doing namaaz in their respective rooms. After doing namaaz, Asad was feeling very relieved.

Scene shifts to Zoya's room. After doing namaaz, Zoya sits on her bed.

"2day, why I am feeling different after doing namaaz?" asks Zoya to herself.

Scene shifts to SM. Humeira is lukn upset in her room. Nuzhat n Nikhat r also in her room.

"Baaji, y r u so upset?" asked Nuzhat.

"Ayaan is angry wid me. He is not even talking to me," replied Humeira sadly.

"Its cuz of dat girl Zoya who ridiculed n insulted u in d mall," said Nuzhat furiously.

"It was nothing in front of wat all v said to her," came Ayaan's voice.

D trio saw Ayaan standing @ d door. He comes inside n sits wid them.

"Bhaijaan, now u r also supporting dat girl," said Nuzhat shockingly.

"Nuzhat, u sud stop saying anything against Zoya. How much v know abt her? V were always wrong to insult Zoya even after bhaijaan repeatedly told us not to blame Zoya n its his fault in wateva happened. V used to always support bhaijaan blindly not paying attention whether he is right or wrong. V always thought like a stupid dat bhaijaan can never do any mistake. But dis time, he must hv really done some mistakes. He has really hurt Zoya n he himself confessed it many times. Now, he must realized his mistake n must hv regretting it badly which is clearly seen in his eyes. Otherwise y he vl always support Zoya? Y he vl get upset of her leaving his house? V hv hurt bhaijaan n Zoya very badly," said Ayaan.

"Bhaijaan is right. I also don't think Zoya is a bad girl. She n Najma gets along so well. Zoya has saved Najma 4m d goons in d college n she even came for Najma in burqa wen she was banned by d Principal. V all know very well how bhaijaan's nature was earlier. He was regressive n judgemental. Zoya is a modern girl who wears western clothes n is a fashion designer. So, there may be differences cuz of these reasons. Zoya is not d one who vl tolerate anyone's nonsense. She must be getn disappointed wid bhaijaan's nature. Bhaijaan must hv hurt her in some ways. Dats d reason she may hv decided to end d marriage just after 12 days. Badi Ammi n Najma always liked Zoya. Zoya is d daughter of Badi Ammi's college friend(Dilshad is Zahira, Zoya's adoptive mother's n Zeenat's real mother's college friend). Bhaijaan n Zoya r born in d same year 1987 n they r only 5 months apart. Only bhaijaan may be hating her earlier cuz she is a modern NRI 4m New York who wears western clothes. So, bhaijaan may be hating her which he did very wrong. Badi Ammi liked Zoya so she got them married. Bhaijaan may hv agreed due to his ammi n Zoya may hv agreed thinking dat bhaijaan vl change one day. But bhaijaan may not hv changed n Zoya may got fed up wid him. So, she decided to divorce him cuz a girl wid self-respect vl never tolerate someone who don't respects her. Bhaijaan is very angry wid us n he vl not even tell us wat happened between him n Zoya dat she decided to divorce him. Yesterday, I saw him very hurt. Luks like he wants Zoya back but Zoya is not ready to forgive him for wateva he did wid her. He even broke his relation wid us. Along wid Zoya, Najma n Badi Ammi also hates bhaijaan. Hope everything becomes right between bhaijaan n Zoya," said Nikhat.

"Ur assumptions r right, Nikhat. I am missing bhaijaan very much. He is not even accepting my calls. He is very angry wid me. I wish I can help bhaijaan," said Ayaan.

At night, Asad who was passing by Dilshad's room hears her talking sumthn wid Najma.

"Thank God, Zoya did not told abt bhaijaan d whole truth abt her real parents n childhood. She only told him a little truth. If she had told him then bhaijaan wud hv made her life a living hell n wud hv always hurt her by calling her d daughter of a murderer," said Najma.

Asad was shocked by wat he heard. He stops to listen.

"U r right, Najma. Asad wud hv not even let her live in dis house let alone marry her. He does not knows dat Zoya's real abbu was an evil person who married her real ammi for her money while being in love wid another woman. Wen Zoya was 3, he married dat woman unknown to Zoya's ammi n they hv a daughter 4 years younger than Zoya. Zoya's abbu called her ammi n 5 year old Zoya in India @ a factory to kill them. Zoya n her ammi got to know abt her abbu's real face only dat day. Zoya's step-mother stabbed her ammi. Zoya saw her ammi stabbed wid her own eyes @ d tender age of 5. I can't imagine wat wud hv been her state. Then Zoya's abbu along wid his another wife n sister even attacked Zoya n tried to kill by throwing her between fire which was by lit @ d palce by another man. But luckily, Zoya got saved by a man who put her in orphanage. Dats y, Zoya has phobia of fire. Then, Zeenat n her parents came to Bhopal some days later n found Zoya. Then they adopted her. Asad also don't know dat Zoya came in India to search for her ammi's murderers cuz she don't want to let them live peacefully after destroying her childhood. After marriage, Zoya may hv hoped dat Asad vl change n vl accept her as she is so she cud trust him n one day tell him d whole truth but Asad never changed. Thank God, Zoya has filed for divorce cuz Asad vl never change. Once he gets to know d truth, he vl hate her even more n never even think of hvng her back in his life cuz for him, she vl only be a murderer's daughter," said Dilshad.

"Dat may be d reason Zoya does not believes in love. She thinks dat she is born out of parents who had no true love between them. Zoya's abbu, Zoya's step-mom n Zoya's step-mom wanted to kill Zoya cuz she has some property in her name," said Najma.

"Its good dat she has a great family who hv adopted her but loves like their real. They love Zoya a lot n wants her to fall in love wid a nice guy which did not happened," said Dilshad.

Asad is very shocked as he hears their convo.

"Ammi, I vl now go to my room to sleep," said Najma.

"Good Night," said Dilshad.

"Good Night," said Najma n went out of d room not noticing Asad who hides.

Asad goes to his room n locks d door. He rests on his bed.

"Zoya told me abt her past but she did not told me everything cuz of my earlier judgemental nature. But now I hv changed. I still love Zoya n want her back in my life. Wats her fault if her abbu is a murderer? She is such an innocent girl who saw her ammi getn killed wen she was just 5. Zoya was afraid to tell me anything cuz of my nature but she told ammi n Najma. They still loved Zoya. I wish I was not regressive n judgemental so dat Zoya cud trust me n tell me everything. Then I wud hv been wid her supporting her n accepting her whoever she is. Wen Zoya saw me n Tanveer 2gthr @ d pool, she may thought abt wat her abbu did wid her ammi. She may thought dat I love Tanveer n I married her only cuz of ammi like Zoya's abbu married Zoya's ammi only cuz of her money while being in love wid another woman. I want to prove my innocence to Zoya n tell my feelings to her. She may not believe in love but I sud make her understand dat she can also fall in love like her adoptive ammi-abbu n aapi-jiju. Plz Allah, return back my Zoya to me. Plz Allah, let Zoya know dat I love her," said Asad to himself in a soft voice.

Asad then gets message 4m mystery person.

Hv u got any proof against Tanveer?

Asad replies- Yes, I got some proofs against her.

D mytery person replies- Keep those proofs safely n don't tell anything to anyone. V still hv to find out abt d plan of Tanveer. I saw Imraan @ a shop. He was calling Tanveer teln her to meet her @ d godown which is next to d biscuit factory. 2mrw 8pm where they vl talk abt their plan. U sud carefully follow them widout their knowledge. May be u vl get to know abt some plans. May u may get to know abt me.

Asad is shocked by d reply.

"Who is dis mystery person?" asks Asad to himself, "I must make a call."

He calls d 'Private Number'. His call is received.

"Excuse, plz tell me who r u?" asked Asad, "Y r u not teln me abt urself?"

Asad hears a laugh of a woman n gets shocked.

"Asad Ahmed Khan, u r too curious to know abt me. Don't worry, I vl tell u abt myself," replied d woman's voice, "2mrw, I vl be there too. Catch me if u can."

D mystery woman cuts d call.

"It's a woman," said Asad shockingly, "She told me dat she vl also be there. I sud go there to find abt Tanveer n Imraan's plan then I must try to find dat mystery woman."

Just then, Asad hears a voice on d window. He is shocked to see Ayaan entering 4m his window. He gets angry.

"Ayaan, wat r u doing here?" asked Asad angrily.

"Bhaijaan, I know u r very angry wid me but I am very sorry. I know I hurt u by insulting Zoya but I hv realized my mistake. I hurt u by not trying to understand ur feelings. I just kept on blaming Zoya widout even knowing wat happened between both of u. Bhaijaan, I am sorry. Plz, forgive me. I am missing u a lot," said Ayaan in a hurtful voice.

"Ayaan, plz go 4m here. I am already hvng a lots of problem. U hv said Zoya many cheap things which no husband can tolerate being said to his wife," said Asad.

"Bhaijaan, I am really sorry for dat. I understood dat u hv really committed some mistakes dat made Zoya to file for divorce. I can't live widout talking to u," said Ayaan regretfully.

Asad saw Ayaan n noticed dat he iis really sorry for wat he did.

"Okay, I forgive u. U vl never say anything wrong abt Zoya," said Asad.

Ayaan got happy wid Asad forgiving him.

"I vl never do dat, bhaijaan," said Ayaan.

Asad n Ayaan hugged each other. AsYaan music plays in d bg.

"Bhaijaan, wat happened between u n Zoya?" asked Ayaan.
"1st promise me dat u vl not tell anyone. Not even Nikhat, Nuzhat n Humeira," said Asad.

"I promise bhaijaan dat I vl not tell anyone. I vl keep it secret like v used to keep our meetings as secret. I want to help u wid ur problems, bhaijaan,. I can't trust 3 of them especially Nuzhat n Humeira.. They might tell everything to anyone" said Ayaan.

Asad tells Ayaan everything 4m d time he meet Zoya for d 1st time till now. As he finishes teln everything, he has tears in his eyes. Ayaan is shocked as he hears everything.

"Dats all d reasons y Zoya hates me. I ruined my own life," said Asad wid tears in his eyes.

"Bhaijaan, everything vl be alright. I am wid u," said Ayaan n hugged him to comfort him.

Precap: #At d bazaar, Rashid is wid Shirin. He sees Dilshad some distance away n luks @ her sadly. Some distance away, Asad n Tanveer r walking. Asad sees Zoya in a short floral dress some distance away walking wid Zeenat. He luks @ her sadly. RaDil music plays on all of them as they r in similar situation. Tanveer sees Asad lukn @ Zoya sadly n has a evil smirk on her face. She takes Asad somewhere else in d bazaar by holding his hand so dat he stops seeing Zoya. Asad gets sad n Zoya has an evil smirk on her face. Ayaan who was standing @ a sweet shop sees everything wat Tanveer is doing wid Asad. He sees her evil smirk n gets angry. Tanveer tells Asad dat she vl come soon n goes somewhere. Ayaan goes to Asad n tells him to follow Tanveer. They follow Tanveer n find her behind a shop wall kissing Imraan passionately. They both gets disgusted by dat. Someone else has followed Tanveer. Asad gets a call 4m d mystery person teln him to include Ayaan in d plan.

#Asad sends a video to Tanveer's doctor 4m a Private Number' n send her a threatening text to refuse Tanveer to make fake pregnancy reports or d video vl go to d police. He also threatens her not to tell abt wat he said to anyone n his sight is on her. He does not even reveal his gender like d mystery person. D doctor gets scared n agrees wid him.

#At night, Asad n Ayaan goes to d godown n overhears Tanveer n Imraan's plan. They r shocked to know wat was d actual motive behind Tanveer marrying Asad n Imraan marrying Nikhat. Imraan n Tanveer leaves d place. Asad notices someone in d hood some distance away. Asad goes near d person thinking it to be d mystery person. As he goes near d person, d mystery person runs. Asad n Ayaan runs after d person. D person throws a paper @ them to distract them . In d paper, its written dat its not easy to catch her. By dat time, d person goes near a bike, wears d helmet n rides away. Asad n Ayaan r shocked n wonders who is d mystery woman. Asad then gets a call 4m d mystery woman dat he n Ayaan got to know d truth but they sud trouble them for sometime. She also tells him dat he failed to catch her but he sud try to find abt her. Asad more shocked wid wat she said.

#Next day, wen Haseena, Chand n Imraan comes to SM Haseena gets a kissing MMS of Imraan n Tanveer @ d bazaar 4m d mystery person wid d text dat she sud return all d things she asked 4m d family otherwise d MMS vl be send to everyone in d house. Haseena gets scared. D mystery person is texting Haseena 4m outside d SM unknown to anyone.


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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Asad collected proof against tanveer
Mystery woman helped asad & send him mms
Ayaan apologised asad & he told ayaan everything
He said he will help him
Precap look interesting
Hope zoya get to know soon
Continue soon
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Finally Tanveer's mask is out :-)
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super work ... :) update asap... Thanks for pm

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