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A/N: Guys, next update will be double update dat is it vl be in 9(A) n 9(B).


Part 8

In SM, all r hvng dinner.

"2day Asad came n told d truth," said Razia wid frustration.

"But Haseena still accepted Nikhat. V sud hv told d truth long ago," said Badi Bi.

"But wat was d need for Asad to tell his divorce story?" asked Razia.

"He did not wanted to hide anything 4m Haseena," replied Badi Bi, "Wat if Haseena wud hv known d truth by herself?"

"But Badi Bi, wasn't it strange dat Asad was talking too much abt his wife n was blaming himself for d divorce?" asked Shirin.

"Ammi, bhaijaan was defending Zoya cuz he did not wanted a woman to be insulted. He respects women a lot but Zoya always hurts n insults him," replied Ayaan.

"Ayaan, it can't be true. I also know Zoya. I met her n she is not bad. She is a very kind girl," said Rashid.

"I saw hurt in his face n voice wen he was talking abt Zoya n how she left him cuz of his mistakes. May be he really committed mistakes n hurt Zoya," said Badi Bi.

"Badi Bi, how can u even doubt ur own grandson who u know 4m his childhood over a girl who came to India just 2 months ago. U r defending a girl who even insulted Badi Ammi in d market. She is just a mannerless girl who does not respects her elders," said Ayaan.

"U all saw how he got unhappy wen Haseena was offering him to find another girl for him after his divorce," said Badi Bi.

"Badi Bi, bhaijaan may hv disagreed cuz he was upset due to his marriage wid dat girl Zoya. She has surely troubled him a lot dat he fears to marry again," said Nuzhat.

"Exactly Nuzhat, don't know wat dat Miss New York did wid Asad bhaijaan?" said Humeira.

"Cuz of her, Asad vl not agree to marry any other girl," said Nuzhat.

"Bhaijaan wanted a traditional girl n she turned out to be modern. Zoya is selfish who never cared abt bhaijaan's wishes n feelings," said Humeira.

"Hope after divorce bhaijaan marries a girl of his choice n comes out of dis nightmare named Zoya," said Nuzhat.

"Exactly, she is worse than a nightmare," said Ayaan.

"V can't reach upto any conclusion until v know wat happened between both of them. And neither bhaijaan nor Zoya are teln us anything," said Nikhat.

"Asad said so much things abt his wife like she loves western clothes n mostly wears. No one in our family wore such clothes but Asad's wife wears dat. Dat day, I n bhabhi saw her in short skirt. Hope she does not become bad influence on d girls of dis house," said Shirin.

"Due to her, even Najma started wearing such clothes," said Nuzhat.

"Ya Allah!" exclaimed Razia shockingly, "Hope u girls don't start wearing such clothes."

"Don't worry Ammi, v vl not become like Zoya," said Humeira.

"How can a cloth define one's character?" asked Badi Bi, "If Dilshad chose her for Asad then she may really be a very good girl."

"Badi Bi, u r supporting dat Zoya even though u didn't saw her till now," said Ayaan, "Zoya insulted dat same woman accusing her for trapping her by making her to marry Asad. In reality, its Asad bhaijaan who is trapped wid dat misfit girl Zoya."

"I just hope wat all truth Asad said abt his relation wid dis family n abt his wife Zoya does not create any problem for us wid Haseena n her family," said Gaffur.

Next day, Ayaan calls Asad.

"Bhaijaan, I am missing u. Can I come to ur home?" asked Ayaan.

"Yaa come. Ammi has gone to her friend's house. Najma has gone to college. Zoya has gone out somewhere," replied Asad.

"Fine bhaijaan, I am coming," said Ayaan.

Scene shifts to d mall where Zoya n Zeenat r shopping. Zoya is wearing a blue strapless top n jeans.



"Thanks di, for taking me to shopping," said Zoya.

"Zoya, I was missing taking u to shopping so I called u here," said Zeenat.

"Dats so sweet of u, aapi," said Zoya.

"Zoya, u hv changed so much? R u okay in dat house?" asked Zeenat.

"Aapi, I only talk wid me Najma. Rest all, I don't care," replied Zoya.

"Zoya, lets go n hv pizza," said Zeenat wid a smile.

"Wow di, I love u so much," said Zoya wid a smile.

Scene shifts to Asad n Ayaan sitting on d hall sofa.

"Bhaijaan, Haseena Bi keeps asking abt u n dat girl," said Ayaan.

"Dat girl's name is Zoya, Ayaan," said Asad.

"Whatever," said Ayaan.

"Wat does she asks abt us?" asks Asad.

"She keeps asking y u both r divorcing," said Ayaan.

"Dats none of her business," said Asad.

Scene shifts to Zoya n Zeenat cumn out of d mall wid some shopping bags in her hands.

"Take care, Zoya," said Zeenat wid a smile.

"U too, aapi," said Zoya wid a smile.

They both went in their separate cars.

Scene shifts to KV.

"Bhaijaan, y do u tolerate Zoya's behaviour?" asks Ayaan.

"Cuz she hates me n its me who is d cause of her hatred," replied Asad.

"Bhaijaan, I know u more than urself. U cannot do anything wrong. How come u allow her to wear such clothes wen u don't like these clothes?" asked Ayaan.

"Ayaan enough," replied Asad firmly, "Y sud I stop her 4m wearing wat she wants just cuz I don't like such clothes? But now, I don't hv problems wid such clothes. Y sud I snatch her happiness? I sud respect her likes n wishes. There is no wrong in wearing such clothes."

"Bhaijaan, dat Zoya has spoiled ur mind. She even spoiled our sister Najma who also started wearing western clothes due to Zoya," said Ayaan.

"Zoya has neither spoiled my mind nor she has spoiled Najma. It was me who did not cared abt Najma's wishes n brought my own stupid ideologies before her wishes," said Asad.

Just then, they heard a car parking in d driveway.

"Who may hv come?" asked Ayaan.

"Don't know," replied Asad.

"Just then, they see Zoya entering d house talking to someone on her cell wid some shopping bags in her left hand.

"Yaa di, I vl be there. Bye," said Zoya n hung up.

Zoya luks around n is shocked to see Ayaan wid Asad. She ignores them n walks 2wards her room wen she hear's Asad's voice. Zoya turns around to face him.

"Zoya, Ayaan wanted to come here so I called him," said Asad.

"Asad, its ur house n u can anyone u want. And Ayaan is ur brother even though step," said Zoya wid a taunting smile.

Ayaan gets furious.

"Zoya, its ur house too," said Asad.

"No Asad, its not my house. My house is in New York n d one in Bhopal dat is brought by my aapi-jiju," said Zoya.

Asad gets shocked.

"Luks like u spend a lot of time in shopping," taunted Ayaan lukn @ her shopping bags.

"Its my aapi who called me for shopping. Wen I was in New York, ammi n di used to take me shopping once or twice every month. But, I am here stuck 4m 2 months n v hv shopped 2gthr d last time wen v came to Bhopal nearly 2 months ago. And at least, I and di r doing our shopping on our own n wid our own money. Not like both of u who r busy shopping for someone else 4m many many many days. U two r busy shopping for ur darling Haseena Bi dat also spending ur own money n wasting ur precious time," Zoya taunted back.

Asad n Ayaan r tongue-tied @ Zoya's taunt while Zoya smiles. They luks @ one another.

"So wat? Do u hv any problem wid dis?" asked Ayaan staring @ her.

"Wat problem vl I hv, Ayaan?" asked Zoya wid a smile, "U n ur dear bhaijaan vl hv to get used to dis duty cuz u both vl hv to do dis for all ur life for ur dear sister Nikhat."

Ayaan is annoyed wid Zoya while Asad is carefully listening to Zoya's words.

"Do u want to ruin our Nikhat's life?" asked Ayaan furiously getn up 4m d sofa.

Zoya laughed heartily.

"Don't I hv any other useful work to do?" asked Zoya wid a smile, "Even if I want to ruin Nikhat's life, I don't need to do d efforts wen there r many other people who r doing a lot of efforts for dat. (lukn @ Asad)By d way, some people needs to use their brain properly."

"Who r ruining Nikhat's life?" asked Ayaan restfully.

Zoya gave a broad smile n replied calmly wid a smile, "Calm down, Ayaan. Its upto u n Asad to think who r ruining Nikhat's life. But 1st, u all sud only pay attention to her nikaah."

"V r paying attention on her nikaah only. U don't need to say dat," said Ayaan rudely.

"All d best," said Zoya wid a smile, "By d way, I am going to leave d house in d evening."

"Wow, dats so nice of u," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"Zoya, u can't leave dis house for 2 n half months till our divorce is finalized. U hv to stay in dis house only," said Asad.

Zoya gets furious.

"I can leave d house weneva I want n u sud not stop me. I am leaving d house for some days cuz I want to spend New Year 2013 wid my aapi-jiju who r my family not u all. And if u try to stop me again then forget 2 n half months, I vl not stay in dis house for even 2 n half seconds," said Zoya furiously.

Asad laughed heartily n said wid a smile, "Zoya, even if PT Usha's soul enters ur body then also u vl not able to get out of dis house in 2 n half seconds."

Ayaan laughed @ Asad's words while Zoya got annoyed.

"Zoya, y don't u participate in Olympics 2014?" asked Ayaan wid a laugh, "U v surely win a gold medal for India."

Asad joined Ayaan in d laughter.

"Shut up," said Zoya furiously n went to her room wid her shopping bags while Asad n Ayaan lukd on shockingly.

"Bhaijaan, hv u married a superwoman who can get out of dis house in 2 n half seconds?" asked Ayaan wid a laugh.

Asad did not replied anything but just laughed wid him.

"Wat Zoya was saying 4m some time?" asked Ayaan, "I was not getn her stupid talks."

"U don't pay much attention to wat she says. U vl only get urself stuck in d puzzle of her words," said Asad.

"Actually, I am also trying to find out wat she meant by her words dat she was saying 4m some time," thinks Asad.

Zoya leaves d house in d evening for her aapi-jiju's house.

"Hey Zoya," said Zeenat wid a smile.

Zoya was wearing a red shirt n jeans.

"Aapi, jiju, I vl spend some days here n leave only after fashion show," said Zoya.

"Dats very nice, Zoya," said Anwar.

"Yaa jiju, during my 1st show I want to be around wid d people who truly cares for me not around those who tried to ruin my dreams n efforts," said Zoya.

"Zoya, u can stay here. Don't worry abt those who don't cares abt u," said Zeenat.

Next night, Zeenat, Anwar n Zoya wishes Happy New Year 2013 to each other. KV n SM people too wishes Happy New Year 2013 to each other in their homes.

Next day, on 1st January 2013 Zoya goes to office in a beige top n jeans. Zoya has a discussion meeting wid some employees, interns n models.

"Guys, v need to make dis show successful in d evening," said Zoya.

"Mam, there is one problem," said one d female employees.

"Wat?" asked Zoya.

"Mam, one of d female models who was supposed to be model Yuvraj's partner for d show is not feeling well n she can't come 2day," replied d female employee.

"Well, its not her fault. In dat case, I hv a solution. One of u girls 4m d employees n interns vl hv to take her place n I know who can take her place," said Zoya.

"Who?" asked one of d male employee.

"Suvreen," replied Zoya lukn @ Suvreen who got shocked.

"Mam, how I can do d modelling?" asked Suvreen shockingly.

"Come on, u n Yuvraj know each other very well. U just hv to walk d ramp wid him after doing some rehearsal. And I saw d show on TV of u walking d ramp in ur college before being selected as designer Rehan Charles's students n I also saw u walking d ramp in RC's show during a competition. So, u a little experienced in dat," replied Zoya wid a smile.

"Say yes Suvreen," said Preeti.

"Suvreen, please agree to dis," said Geeti.

"Okay Mam, I vl do it," replied Suvreen.

Other interns n Yuvraj got happy. Suvreen n Yuvraj shared a sweet smiled which Zoya noticed n gave a small smile.

Scene shifts to Asad n Ayaan meeting @ their adda in d lake.

"Bhaijaan, Haseena Bi can never change. She still taunts Nikhat on her skin colour. She also keeps on asking for 80 lakhs car dat she has asked a month ago. She has no shame in asking dat n Imraan does not even objects like saying dat he does not wants a car. In fact, Haseena Bi told dat Imraan liked a car n so she wants it for him. She keeps demanding things n don't how long she vl keep demanding things," said Ayaan annoyingly.

Asad gets shocked n thinks abt Zoya's taunting words.

"Asad, r u innocent or stupid or both?"

"If u vl use ur brain properly, u vl understand. But u hardly use ur brain in common n useful things. Use ur brain n understand on ur own wat I mean."

"And at least, I and di r doing our shopping on our own n wid our own money. Not like both of u who r busy shopping for someone else 4m many many many days. U too r busy shopping for ur darling Haseena Bi dat also spending ur own money n wasting ur precious time."

"Wat problem vl I hv, Ayaan? U n ur dear bhaijaan vl hv to get used to dis duty cuz u both vl hv to do dis for all ur life for ur dear sister Nikhat."

"Don't I hv any other useful work to do? Even if I want to ruin Nikhat's life, I don't need to do d efforts wen there r many other people who r doing a lot of efforts for dat. (lukn @ Asad)By d way, some people needs to use their brain properly."

"Calm down, Ayaan. Its upto u n Asad to think who r ruining Nikhat's life. But 1st, u all sud only pay attention to her nikaah."

"All d best."

Asad comes of his thoughts still lukn shocked.

"So, Zoya is trying to say all these in her taunts," thinks Asad n asks himself in mind, "Is she advicing us or warning us or both?"

"Bhaijaan, wat r u thinking?" asked Ayaan.

"Nothing," replied Asad.

"Even though Zoya hates all of us except Najma, she still cares a lot for us even if she has to give hints in her taunts. Even Tanu had not cared so much abt us. And I always compared Zoya wid Tanu just cuz Tanu is traditional n Zoya is not. Even if Zoya wants to divorce me, I sud at least try to become her friend," thinks Asad.

Scene shifts to Asad returning in KV. All r in d hall.

"Ammi, Zoya vl return after 2-3 days. 2day is her 1st fashion show," said Najma.

"I wish she succeeds in it," said Dilshad.

"She vl surely succeed, Ammi. For her dress, she had to do double efforts cuz her 1st effort was ruined by her own husband," said Najma lukn @ Asad.

Asad gets shocked n hurt @ wat Najma said.

Tanveer goes to Asad n hugs him tightly n caresses his back for a long time. For d 1st time, Asad feels weird wid her hug n how she is toughing him. He thinks dat even though Zoya was married to him, she never hugged him let alone touching him like dat.

"Jammy, u r lukn hurt. Don't be upset. I know u r very guilty," said Tanveer.

Asad broke his hug in embarrassment.

"Tanu, I need to rest for some time," said Asad.

"Wat happened, Jammy? Is there any problem?" asked Tanveer keeping her arm around his shoulder side hugging him tightly.

"I don't hv any problem, Tanveer," replied Asad firmly, "I want to rest."

"Okay Jammy, as u wish," said Tanveer removing her hand off him.

Asad goes to his room. He recalls teln Zoya dat she vl not work outside along wid other insulting n hurtful things. He then recalls himself tearing Zoya's dress n feels guilty.

"2day is Zoya's 1st fashion show. I wish everything goes well," said Asad to himself.

"How can Tanveer hug n touch her friend like dis who is married? Even if I am going to get divorced but I am still married to Zoya," said Asad shockingly to himself.

Scene shifts to Zoya getn ready in d dressing room in d evening. Thoughts of Asad's insulting words come in her mind.

"Women of dis house don't work outside. They only manage house."

Zoya then recalls Asad tearing her dress n some other hurtful words.

"I did not done anything wrong. U sud not put ur efforts in dis stupid things. U sud instead put ur efforts in learning to cook properly."

"U vl not work. U vl stay @ home. I don't want people to say dat my wife is a fashion designer who wears disgusting clothes on d ramp. U sud learn some manners on how to live like an ideal woman rather than doing these awful works."

Tears came 4m Zoya's eyes.

"I thought dat u vl become my friend, Asad," said Zoya wid tears in her eyes, "I thought dat u vl be wid me supporting me in dis show as a friend. (she wipes her tears n says in an anger tone) U can never be my friend, Asad cuz u r my enemy. U r my enemy, Asad Ahmed Khan."

Zoya then starts combing her hair.

"I vl not let ur taunts n insults spoil my mood. I vl make dis show a success. I vl show u, Asad Ahmed Khan dat wat a woman can do," said Zoya angrily while combing her hair.

Some female make-up artists n hairstylists come inside d room.

"Mam, v r here to do ur make-up n hairstyle," said one of d make-up artists.

"Okay," said Zoya wid a smile.

"After some time, Zoya gets ready.

Precap: #Zoya walks d ramp along wid models. AnZee n Najma cheers her up while sitting in d crowd. At home, Dilshad is watching Zoya on a fashion channel n smiles. Asad watches while hiding n luks @ Zoya along wid models. He too smiles.

#Next day, Nuzhat sees Zoya's fashion show photo in newspaper along wid some photos of some other fashion designer n gets shocked. She tells everyone in d house dat wat type of characterless girl bhaijaan has married. Rashid shouts @ her teln her to mind her language n she is only doing a fashion show like other fashion designers r doing. Badi Bi tells Nuzhat how can she call Zoya a characterless girl wen she is just doing a fashion show?

#Zoya returns to KV after 3 days. At night, Asad sees Zoya drinking black coffee in d kitchen widout sugar n gets shocked. Asad recalls how she used to drink coffee wid sugar n milk. He then thinks 4m how long she is drink black coffee widout sugar. He goes 4m there.

#8 days later, 4 weeks has passed since 1st divorce signing. Asad He tries to tell Zoya not to leave him but she tells him dat he sud be happy he is finally getn rid of her dat he always wanted n he only married her due to his mom's pressure n never treated her like a human being let alone be wife. She also tells him dat he never wanted a modern n western clothes wearing girls like her n he always judged her by clothes n her being modern NRI.

#3 days later, a month has passed since 1st divorce signing. Zoya is teln Asad in d hall dat he did not became her friend after their marriage n increased his insults n taunts cuz she did not gave any dowry to his house which he had expected. Asad gets shocked n tells its not true. Zoya laughs loudly n taunts him dat a person who can support his own sister's divorce n always assure his brother dat their sister vl be happy all her life if they keep on bowing to her in-laws then wat may dat person be expecting 4m his own wife? Asad gets more shocked @ luks @ Zoya who is smiling @ him in a taunting way.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago
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Very nice update. I just want to kill ayan, nuzhat and humeira. How they insult zoya. Glad that badi bi and rashid support zoya. Why asad dont shut ayan when he said those words to zoya? Loved the update. Love the way zoya taunt asad and ayan. Waiting for next part. Update soon
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Very nice update. Thank u😊
I just want to kill ayan, nuzhat and humeira. How they insult zoya. They all r idiots😡 but Nikhat is better than them😛
Glad that badi bi and rashid support zoya. Rashid knows Zoya n Badi Bi is smarter than others who knows sumthn must hv happened😃
Why asad dont shut ayan when he said those words to zoya? Asad shuts Ayaan up wen Ayaan says abt clothes n Zoya spoiling his mind n Najma. As I earlier said, Asad can't slap his brother too soon cuz he is taking Ayaan's words as frustration but care for him but a time vl time wen Asad vl slap Ayaan along wid saying things dat Ayaan never expected😉.
Loved the update. Thank u again😊
Love the way zoya taunt asad and ayan. Zoya knows how stupid they r who r readily giving their own sister to d devil's house widout thinking wat vl happen wid her wen she is insulted even in front of them. Dats also d reason Zoya does not wants to reunite wid Asad😡.
Waiting for next part. It vl take some long time as its a double update n I hv 2 other FFs😃
Update soon

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I really wanted to murder ayra & nuzzat
They are just too much
They are not trying to see the entire problem
Please I want someone to say the real problem & shut them up. May be najma. They should know how there bhaijaan behaved with zoya
I am in love with this zoya
She is really intelligent & loves the way she taunts them
She still cares for them
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