Originally posted by: ican
Dear very good you have the guts to write this... Men need to change their thinking
But I have seen that people accept asad even if he behaves like an animal
Well dear don't get disappointed if you get less likes
People need to realise that however handsome a guy maybe a girl will or should like the guy only till he respects her
I will give you a suggestion when you finish this story and write a new one
Show Zoya as regressive old fashioned and 20 century
Show asad as broad minded
Whatever you want people to learn about women dignity and respect show it through asad then people will hear you too and like the story too because then in the story there will be no need to blast sad
Did you comment on the last chapter of my story
ASYA WILL MEET IN CHAPTER 10 IN MY STORY
Glad dat u liked my storyđ.
Zoya is shown different like she was shown in d show. If u hv read all d parts of d 1st thread including d promos n the detailed note which I gave along wid 4th part then u vl know more abt her character. She is a grey character in some ways which u may hv figured out. She initially pointed all d problems of Asad including hiding abt his relation wid Ayaan, Haseena's growing demands n other things just to taunt, ridicule n put him down. She wanted to show him dat how stupid he is n how she is smater than him. But later, she realized dat she is actually helping him but she did not stopped cuz she can't be evil but a girl supports d right. She even wanted to enjoy seeing how Asad deal wid d dowry problems wid Haseena. She wanted to see how much he uses his brain properly.
U may hv read d 1st part which was horrible n painful to read. 1st, I had decided to show Asad's mental torture on Zoya for 2 parts but later I reduced it to showing it till only d initial section of 2nd part as d 1st part only became too much painful. But, I guarantee u dat same things or even worse wud hv happened if Asad n Zoya had been married to d time shown in d story dat is few days after d fashion show. Many were disappointed wid me showing Zoya n Najma talking rudely wid Asad teln they cud not see Asad sad or in tears. But all cud see Zoya being hated, insulted, blamed, accused, blackmailed, taken revenge, slapped, tortured, kidnapped, manhandled, enslaved, dominated, controlled, raped by Asad n all only appreciated Asad calling him hot, handsome, arrogant n ruthless. They wud excuse Asad's actions in many stories due to his bad or horrible past which I can never justify. Even after all dat, all wud hate if Zoya wud not forgive him soon or want to revenge him. All only appreciated Asad n wud want Zoya to forgive him wid just a small sorry. Some wanted me to show Zoya forgiving Asad but it was impossible to show cuz no girl can like a guy wid such horrible mentality. I may be d only one who showed Zoya even hating n insulting Dilshad bleming her for her condition cuz she did not cared abt how she vl live wid a man like Asad. In d show too, Dilshad most of d times only cared abt winning d 10 days challenge n setting up Asad n Zoya dat also widout informing her aapi n jiju. She did not cared abt Asad's mentality or teln him to change his mentality before marrying Zoya.
Zoya vl only forgive Asad in dis story wen she realizes dat Asad has actually changed n behaves like 21st century human being rather than stuck into 2nd century. Asad n Zoya's love story vl be a slow process but its normal cuz both did not believed in love.
As for ur suggestion, I already hv another 2 FFs TOSOZ n DTEO. It vl be really very hard for me to write a story of regressive Zoya n modern but I vl try but can only make it as a SS instead of FF.
Asad n Zoya vl confess to each other in d 1st part of d 2nd thread dat is 16th part. Wat vl lead to their confession vl be a suspense. Zoya vl not be very mahaan till d end of d story.
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