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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: zynia134

Title no 3! And the story is good. Loving it already!!!"


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Very good start Juhi. Though this part is very painful for me. I just want to kill asad. The way he insulting zoya everytime made me angry. Hope u dont give more asad insulting zoya scene. But i like it because i know after this what going to happen. Waiting for zoya's outburst. Thanks for the pm. Update soon


Asad wud hv been like dis if he n Zoya wud hv been married @ d beginning of d show. Asad was always shown in d show to make mistakes n Zoya forgiving him easily but here, it vl be different. I am going to write it like a movie story or Channel V story where d heroine vl not forgive d hero so easily. Asad vl hv a very tough time. He vl hv to regret his every deeds n see d negative consequences of it before he is forgiven😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rosyluck

This is sooo good Thank u😊
Omg I just hated it when he said
Sooo many bad things to zoya Asad is shown as a jerk like initial days😡
And the worst part was when he
Tore her blue dress, but u wrote fabulously Dis blue dress issue vl come later too
I am still feeling angry bout how asad is
Treating her and I'm sure he will
Definitely regret what he is done when she
Leaves him. Asad vl be going thru hell n vl bear d negative consequences of his deeds😡. He vl not be able to live in peace😉.
Thnx for the pm and I'm glad u pm'd me cause this Welcome😃
Story just hooked me on
I love ur work do cont soon and don't forget
To pm me
I think u should choose title 1

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Originally posted by: suganti

interesting story..thanks for the pm


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Azraa01

Loving the story so far..
As for the title, Divorce on the line seems suitable..


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Originally posted by: Azraa01

Loving the story so far.
As for the title, Divorce on the line seems appropriate


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