Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 71

amazing- as usual

Originally posted by: ksfan2

happy to have a lively aarthi back..was that yash in the end

Thank you for the comment. As for whether that was Yash...Hmmm! If that was Yash, why was he looking the way he did? And what was he doing in Nainital? So...well...the man's identity remains questionable. Maybe we'll know in the next couple of chapters.😊

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Amazing work Indu dear loved it .superb part description about the characters was outstanding, i was totally in some other world till i finished reading this chapter. Prashant such a cheapo he made aarti scared.waiting for the next part.

Thanks Naeema. It makes me so happy when the characters , especially the ones new to PV, are accepted. I am always on tenterhooks till I read the responses. 😳

Originally posted by: scorpiodreams

thankyou so much for an awesome update. though i wanted arthi's dad to repent alive for his deeds, but i am satisfied with the end he&his family got. hate that prashant guy ... arthi should be strong and handle that fellow but not get back to her shell. wonder who is this at the bakery...pls cont soon.

Thanks pal.

It was too late for Satya to repent. It's a matter of speculation I deliberately left for the readers to decide as to how he would have taken Aarti's absence in the house if he had lived. My opinion is he would have felt relieved that she was gone. Aarti's presence was a reminder of something he didn't want, like a scar of a deep-seated wound that can't be erased but can be ignored if hidden from the eye.

OMG Indu!! I thought you haven't updated yet! 😲
GOSH! I was left behind already.. 😭
I was just about to comment for the part 6, but found out that it's already part 7...

Sorry for being late, my bad! So sad about it..
Nwei, will just post comment for both, let me just read the latest update..
*SIGH 😔

EDITED:

Again, sorry for the late comment..

Another angel sent by GOD to protect Aarti. This time it was Naani Maasi. Am so glad she came before Aarti get another torture from her father's relative, Maya. Thanks Radhama for calling her!

Good to see, Yash ji was just around whenever Aarti was in trouble.
At first, it was the pepper spray, now it was the encouraging words which awakening Aarti for speaking up for herself and deciding on her own.

And GOD always has a way for them to connect with each other. How come Aarti always listen to what he said? She believes him. Is that the indication of what a true soulmate is?

Nwei, moving forward, so happy that Aarti was safe from the house of hell! Thanks to Nani maasi who takes her away from the devil. She was such a kind-hearted as well as Uncle Chris and Anna Brown. So nice to see them taking effort to change Aarti's view.

BTW, I loved the way you visualized the entire scene. I can really imagine the place. The home which Aarti was longing for.

Oh, karma at it's Best! Dubey's have gotten what they really deserve..

I thought it was the start of Aarti's happy life, but Prashant came in to harm it.

The last part seems to be a mysterious one! Is that Yash who's in disguise or the real one? Wonder what happened to him.. 😕

Looking forward for the next...

*I'll be gone on I-F for few days, this time, am really going to miss the next update. 😭
But will def catch up here immediately when I came back.

Take Care! 🤗

Indu fantastic update!

sorry indu di for replying very late...i was caught up with my midterms..

Originally posted by: Leevi05

awesome update

wow wow wow

where is yash? he is missing?

who is the man at the end?

Thanks Leevi.

Have patience pal...Where Aarti is, can Yash be far behind???😉

Originally posted by: Abie10

Indu trust me I lost myself when you write ⭐️ that was a beautiful continuation of Aarti's story. Love it that she's away that hell. Ohh so Dubey died thank god Aarti was not there she would have heard some more curse.

Love the build up of her relation with naani maasi.. continue soon

Aww...thanks Abie. Glad you are OK with the story so far.😊