Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 72

Originally posted by: inlieu

Wow Indu! Can't get enough of this. Fabulous stuff!

Thank you. That made me feel real good.😳

wonderful update\
Hope Yash and Aarti meet soon
waiting for your next update

Originally posted by: jikky_84

Loved it how you described about the curse. The family always thought of Arati as a curse but when she went away the curse got hold of them. Its just the fact that life comes a full circle whatever you give and do will come back to you only. Glad that she is having a very good life in nannimaasi's house. Its very sad to see that Arati is so scared that she can't open up or trust anyone and the time she take for that is years and even then it does not look like a complete one, one small incident, it will be wavered. I wonder how Yash was able to get through her and gain her trust.

Now who is that person at the end? Is that Yash?

This is not fair Indu, you stopped at such a point...you better update fast.

Aha Asha...you summarized the part beautifully. You are right on both accounts. It never occurred to the Dubeys that they were reading the curse factor all wrong. And yes, Aarti has trust issues...she finds it difficult to believe that she is good enough.

I am going to leave that end at that..and probably pick up later...so we'll have to wait and see who that is. However, yes...I am done with the first part of Aarti's past.

Originally posted by: Zetter

Well what can I say that I haven't already?! You've outdid yourself again 👏 👏 👏 👏...that was outstanding, I loved how once again Aarti was surrounded with angels in disguise like Chris and Anna helping Aarti to come out of her shell as well as her grandmother & Radhama 😃

Isn't it ironic that Dubeyji's family met with misfortune the moment Aarti left if only they would have seen that she was the only think that was keeping them save cause she is blessed by the Gods

Poor Aarti thought that her grandmother where like the others and went back into her shell 😔 😭 until she found out the truth that day when the perv Prashant try accosting her 😡 😡

Hmmm why do I get the feeling that the man at the end is Yash??? Awww that connect is stronger than ever and she felt it because her heart was no longer closed off 😳 😳

Okay was Yash working and he forgot his wallet in the car??? What has he been up to since the day he found out about Tanya??? My goodness I can't wait to read all about it 😛 😉

Another marvelous one my friend...You rock 🤗 🤗

She is indeed blessed by the Gods, Zet...you phrased that beautifully. If only the Dubeys had recognized the little goddess they had all along and treasured her.

Naanimaasi and Aarti have come to form a lovely relationship...but naanimaasi finds it difficult to make Aarti face her demons. That's the reason she didn't tell her about her father's death...She was scared Aarti would take the news negatively and blame herself again...which probably would have happened too. Aarti needs someone who will make her face these issues...otherwise she can never move on in the true sense. Any misunderstanding can relapse her into her old self, as we saw in the Prashant case.

You think that was Yash? Rewally? Hmmm...!

Thanks pal... 🤗

Originally posted by: cynthiagem

Just when the topic was getting to be very interesting, wham! to be continued 😭 oh, you really know when to stop and keep all of us in suspense on who that stranger is.😲 Anyway, thank you for the direction that you have taken Aarti in starting a new page, whenever she feels she is threatened by people and circumstances though it takes her quite a while to overcome it. Thanks again for the beautiful ride as we coast along Aarti's life journey.

Aww Cynthia...believe me suspense was the last thing in my mind. My reasons were different. I shall definitely continue with that "Aarti generosity" scene, but not now...a little while later and from a different angle.

That part in bold...you said it. CAn you blame the poor girl? Yet, her will to bounce back after she realizes her misunderstanding of two years should be celebrated. It shows her zest to look forward.

Originally posted by: ns1970

SUPERB update Indu i so feel for aarti but glad she decide to work and get close to her naanimaasi. Just hoping Yash comes in the picture soon .Waiting on your next update

Thanks ns.

Yash is not far behind pal...Just allow me a few words to update his past till he meets up with Aarti.😊

Originally posted by: pvejani

wow...superb update👏👏👏 ...loved it.thanx for the update and pm😊.

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

I believe this is my favourite chapter so far. Delightful read, Di.

Coming from you that's a certificate with five stars.😳 Thanks lil sis. Since your views are so few and far between, I'll treasure this one.🤗

Originally posted by: shalini28

wow another mindblowing update.

the description of the house is really great. While reading it i felt like i was there😳

loved naanimasi and her friends😳

and at the end was that yash???😕

waiting ofr the next part.😳

Thanks for the pm Indu sis🤗

Thanks Shalini. Glad you liked the chapter.😊

Originally posted by: rachna1970

wow,,beautiful update Indu

Love the u describe the beautiful home

Hope Prashant wont harm Aarti

Where is Yash dear

Who is that at the end

Pls update soon dear

Thanks Rachna.

Yash has been coming and going...I'll be touching on his life uptil he meets Aarti now.