Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 70

Originally posted by: --Fairy--

Hi

Thanks for link dear

Amazing update ..loved the way you describe the beauty of house

and aarti relation and her fear

so dubey died what destiny whom they consider curse is bless for them

prashant damit

ooops hows in end line person

Thanks Fairy.

My pleasure pal...Pls do let me know how you found them.

Originally posted by: balaraba

Wow! it was such a long nd beautiful update. hope Aarti won't fall for prashant I can't see that please Yash is waiting for her don't let d devil catch u(aarti) update soon dear me loved it so much.

Balaraba, thank you.

Oh, don't you worry about Prashant. He might try to create problems for Aarti, but Aarti would never have anything to do with him...willingly.

wow another mindblowing update.

wow,,beautiful update Indu

very good update...loved it..
who was the man at the end?

NICE update
good to see aarti loosening up with nani massi now

she started working with brownies


what happened to yash proposal😕😕

waiting for next update

Another Amazing Update Indu 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

Was that Yash towards the end.

If yes then what the hell has happened to him????

Ok Dubey did die.

What a way to die just has he had hurt Aarti.

Karma came back to bite him real bad haan.

Does Aarti know that her relatives are dead?

See that is why I need to read it again.

The description of the house they moved into was heavenly.

The relationship between Naani maasi and Aarti was beautifully built.

Prashanth is an out right creep in the story by the looks of it.

I am sooo glad that Aarti moved on in life away from the hell hole she was living in.

I am just sooo happy for her.

INDU when you write I lose myself. Thank you for such endearing characters and a heart touching story.

PS: Loved Naani maasi friends too btw.

It's superb, mind-blowing, awesome, fantastic, wonderful. So beautifully written, each and every word is truly from heart. Loved Chris, Anna and Naanimaasi. Prashant disgusting. The curse thing is excellent, it means due to Aarti's good fortune they all were safe and as she stepped out of the house bad happens. Is that Yash in the end, waiting for it.

Congo for completing one month of Samarpan. Thanks for giving us such a great emotional story.