Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 69

Wow Indu! Can't get enough of this. Fabulous stuff!

Loved it how you described about the curse. The family always thought of Arati as a curse but when she went away the curse got hold of them. Its just the fact that life comes a full circle whatever you give and do will come back to you only. Glad that she is having a very good life in nannimaasi's house. Its very sad to see that Arati is so scared that she can't open up or trust anyone and the time she take for that is years and even then it does not look like a complete one, one small incident, it will be wavered. I wonder how Yash was able to get through her and gain her trust.

Just when the topic was getting to be very interesting, wham! to be continued 😭 oh, you really know when to stop and keep all of us in suspense on who that stranger is.😲 Anyway, thank you for the direction that you have taken Aarti in starting a new page, whenever she feels she is threatened by people and circumstances though it takes her quite a while to overcome it. Thanks again for the beautiful ride as we coast along Aarti's life journey.

SUPERB update Indu i so feel for aarti but glad she decide to work and get close to her naanimaasi. Just hoping Yash comes in the picture soon .Waiting on your next update

wow...superb update👏👏👏 ...loved it.thanx for the update and pm😊.

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

Was that Yash towards the end.

If yes then what the hell has happened to him????

Ok Dubey did die.

What a way to die just has he had hurt Aarti.

Karma came back to bite him real bad haan.

Does Aarti know that her relatives are dead?

See that is why I need to read it again.

The description of the house they moved into was heavenly.

The relationship between Naani maasi and Aarti was beautifully built.

Prashanth is an out right creep in the story by the looks of it.

I am sooo glad that Aarti moved on in life away from the hell hole she was living in.

I am just sooo happy for her.

INDU when you write I lose myself. Thank you for such endearing characters and a heart touching story.

PS: Loved Naani maasi friends too btw.

Deepti...I could come online only now after posting the chapter and saw your comment first. I feel much relieved. The transition from H'bad to Nainital was pretty tricky. Aarti's emotions and her state of mind were involved. That;s why it was imperative that Radhama stayed alongside for some time...at least till Aarti is marginally settled.

No, Aarti wouldn't know till much later that her father was dead and her dadima was paralyzed. In her frail mental condition, naanimaasi didn't want to take the risk of any news adding on to her low self-worth.

Is that Yash???? A tramp??? Hmmm...million dollar questions.😛


Thanks Deepti...😊

Originally posted by: disha_rajdev

What can I say???😕

One word...Its beautiful,Indu sis👏

A beautiful update and it makes me more eager for ur next update.😉

Thank u for the PM sis😃

Take care always🤗

Thank you Disha. Glad you liked it.🤗

Originally posted by: maha9

wow so sweet of arthi. I feel sad and at the same time happy for her character.

Uff here also prashant is bad ah !!!

Great work dear...

continue sooon

Thanks Maha.

Hmm...can't have a saint Prashant, can we?😛

Originally posted by: saf24

This was another fantastic update Indu. Loved the continuation to Aarti's life as it helps explain her actions in the present. Beautiful descriptions throughout the update. You really are gifted with words. Curious to see what happens next.

Thank you so much Saf. I am so happy you could relate the past with the present. I would have failed if the message didn't get across.