Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 73

Originally posted by: InduG64

She is indeed blessed by the Gods, Zet...you phrased that beautifully. If only the Dubeys had recognized the little goddess they had all along and treasured her.

Naanimaasi and Aarti have come to form a lovely relationship...but naanimaasi finds it difficult to make Aarti face her demons. That's the reason she didn't tell her about her father's death...She was scared Aarti would take the news negatively and blame herself again...which probably would have happened too. Aarti needs someone who will make her face these issues...otherwise she can never move on in the true sense. Any misunderstanding can relapse her into her old self, as we saw in the Prashant case.

You think that was Yash? Rewally? Hmmm...!

Thanks pal... 🤗

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Another beautiful and amazing update from you, Indu ji.. 👏👏

Wow.. The way you described the house is so well and beautiful! I could imagine it all.. 👍🏼!! Aarti is so lucky to be in such house.. 😃

Owh... Naanimaasi finally made friends with Aarti... Loved their relationship! 😊

Oh my.. Dubeyji is gone now! 😭 Felt pity for Aarti for not knowing about it.. 😕 Prashant is bad here too.. !! Hmm.. Aarti moved on and last part is making me eager to know the next! Update soon! 😃😉

Thank you, Isya. 😊

Naanimaasi didn't tell Aarti about her father because she feared Aarti's reactions. Aarti is very vulnerable to self-condemnation, and the news would have only worsened it. She would be told about it much later when she would be emotionally more secure.

Originally posted by: kinny_ranvir

very good update...loved it..
who was the man at the end?

Thanks Kinny. You'll know soon enough about that man. 😊

Originally posted by: jasraj123

NICE update
good to see aarti loosening up with nani massi now

she started working with brownies
what happened to yash proposal😕😕

waiting for next update

Thanks Jasraj.

You mean about Yash's job proposal? Aarti turned it down. If you read that part when she leaves H'bad, it's mentioned that she calls Prof Sharma and requests him to convey her refusal.

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Another Amazing Update Indu 👏 👏

Thank You Indu 🤗

Thank you, Sarada.😊

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

It's superb, mind-blowing, awesome, fantastic, wonderful. So beautifully written, each and every word is truly from heart. Loved Chris, Anna and Naanimaasi. Prashant disgusting. The curse thing is excellent, it means due to Aarti's good fortune they all were safe and as she stepped out of the house bad happens. Is that Yash in the end, waiting for it.

Congo for completing one month of Samarpan. Thanks for giving us such a great emotional story.

Oh wow, you made my day with so many adjectives...Thank you so very much. Each word is from heart...you got me there pal. I keep saying that I can only write what I feel.

Thanks again. I remember after Sparsh, I wanted to take a long break, but then that was not to be...Samarpan beckoned me to explore this girl's story of surrender.😳

Originally posted by: sia221

My eyes went really wide.. reading the last part...is that Yash...?? 😲 OMG.. what happened to him..?? 😕

I thought Aarti will take up the job and their love story will start...but nothing even remotely happened that way..?? 😆 loving the unexpected twists..!! 👍🏼

Felt really nice to see Aarti slowly and steadily.. moving on in her life...gaining confidence.. in herself and others too...!! 😊

Prashant.. the good for nothing creep... !! Chris and Anna... adorable couple...!!

Had pleasure reading this update.. with a too good.. shocking end...!! 😆

Thanks...and waiting for the next part.. Indu...!! 😊

Sia...that last bit got everybody, which was not my intention at all.😊 I wanted someone to say "How come Aarti approached a strange man on her own accord, given how she is with strangers?"

Yash's parting shot to Aarti was "Bhopal awaits you." But that didn't mean it had to be now. As for their meeting and their stories to converge and begin as one, let's see...

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: rutu83

amazing- as usual

loved the description of the home 👍🏼

oh no radhama left 😔

who was that man at the end?

btw, i forgot to ask last time. in that last update- the big book that yash was reading..was it the one that arpita took from aarti?

Rutu...thank you. Aha...that last bit was a good observation. I am going to bring that up next when Yash's story begins.😊

Originally posted by: smileymj10

OMG Indu!! I thought you haven't updated yet! 😲
GOSH! I was left behind already.. 😭
I was just about to comment for the part 6, but found out that it's already part 7...

Sorry for being late, my bad! So sad about it..
Nwei, will just post comment for both, let me just read the latest update..
*SIGH 😔

EDITED:

Again, sorry for the late comment..

Another angel sent by GOD to protect Aarti. This time it was Naani Maasi. Am so glad she came before Aarti get another torture from her father's relative, Maya. Thanks Radhama for calling her!

Good to see, Yash ji was just around whenever Aarti was in trouble.
At first, it was the pepper spray, now it was the encouraging words which awakening Aarti for speaking up for herself and deciding on her own.

And GOD always has a way for them to connect with each other. How come Aarti always listen to what he said? She believes him. Is that the indication of what a true soulmate is?

Nwei, moving forward, so happy that Aarti was safe from the house of hell! Thanks to Nani maasi who takes her away from the devil. She was such a kind-hearted as well as Uncle Chris and Anna Brown. So nice to see them taking effort to change Aarti's view.

BTW, I loved the way you visualized the entire scene. I can really imagine the place. The home which Aarti was longing for.

Oh, karma at it's Best! Dubey's have gotten what they really deserve..

I thought it was the start of Aarti's happy life, but Prashant came in to harm it.

The last part seems to be a mysterious one! Is that Yash who's in disguise or the real one? Wonder what happened to him.. 😕

Looking forward for the next...

*I'll be gone on I-F for few days, this time, am really going to miss the next update. 😭
But will def catch up here immediately when I came back.

Take Care! 🤗

Thank you so much for liking the progress. Yeah, it's a relief that Aarti is finally getting what she deserved all along...a happy home and caring people who love her unconditionally.

I am going to miss you Barbie. Shall await your return. Take care. 🤗