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With the upcoming EID celebrations in QH .. thought of just jotting down whatever came to my mind… Hope you like it... !!

The end of the Ramadan month had approached and the next day was going to be the Full Moon Day or the EID celebrations…Asad had gone out of his way to fulfill Zoya's wishes the last couple of days and the atmosphere in Khan House was very lively..

At night everybody in the Khan house were having their last Iftihar of the month.

Dilshad : " Asad tumne Zoya aur Najma ko gift karidliya ki nahin ?? "

Zoya and Najma look at each and were happy and excited about the gifts which they would be receiving the next day…

Zoya : " Mr. Khan aap lekar aye na. ?? Hum to excited hain.. gifted dekhne keliye.. lagta hain muje aaj need bhi nahin ayegi…"

Asad just smiles at both the crazy girls and just to pull their legs… : " Aaj to muje office mein bahut kaam tha.. kal subah to nahin de sakta hoon.. Kal chutti hain na.. kal jake kuch lekar atha hoon…"

Both the girls are really disappointed and make puppy faces and look at Dilshad and Asad…

Dilshad : " Accha Accha koi baat nahin.. aap dono ko itni bhi upset honewali baat nahin hain.. Kal subah meri taraf se tum dono ko gift milega…Asad se baad mein le le na…Ab to kush ho na…??"

Zoya and Najma both go and hug Dilshad and kiss her ...

Zoya : "Poophi aap to World ke Best Ammi ho…Love you poophi" and she looks at Asad and makes a face making him know that she is angry with him…

Asad controls his laughter looking at her . He excuses himself and goes to his room…

Zoya : " Poophi.. aap bhi ab jayiyega..Mein aur Najma yahan sab clean karke sone jathe hain…."

Dilshad : " Teek hain..kal dophar ko dawat bhi hain na.. bahut kaam rahega.. aap dono bhi jaldi dono bhi jaldi sojao…"

After Dilshad leaves, Zoya and Najma team up to cook some sweets and namkeen to surprise Dilshad in the morning so that she will have less work at hand the next day…

The next day morning by the time Najma and Zoya join Dilshad in the kitchen, Asad had left to the mosque for his prayers …

Zoya : " Poophi.. Mr. Khan chalegaye kya ??"

Dilshad smiles "Zoya.. woh jaldi ghar ajayega…aur haan.. aap do no ko itna sab kuch raat mein karne ki kya zaroot thi ??"

Najma : "Ammi.. apke liye hum dono ki taraf se.. yehi gift hain.. aaj bhi aap kitchen mein kuch nahin karegi.. Daawat ke liye mein aur Zoya sab khana pakeyene sab kuch almost ready bhi hain….. aap sirf bahar ka arrangements dekhiyega…"

Dilshad gifts beautiful dresses to both the girls.. as a gift.. " Kitchen ke kaam ke baad.. aap dono yeh pehnegi…"

Najma : " Ammi…dono salwar bahut hi accha hain..Thank you ammi "

Dilshad gets all the things arranged in their backyard for the lunch celebrations..

When both the girls had finished their work in the kitchen and stepping out of it, Asad steps into his house .

Najma : "Bhaijaan agaye.. " She rushes to him and wishes him.."Bhaijaan mera gift kahan hain…"

Asad : "Tamatar…itni badi hogayi hain..lekin gift keliye hamesha issi tarah betaab hoti ho…" He takes out a small box and gives it to her..

Najma opens it to find a beautiful pair of gold ear-rings …"Thank you Bhaijaan..Bahut hi pyaara hain…Zoya dekho na…"

Zoya :" Haan Tamatar bahut hi pyaara hain.. Tum jao ab tayyar ho jao.. tum nayi dress ke saath yeh earrings bhi pehnle na…" and she takes out another box from her jeans and gives it to Najma telling "Yeh meri taraf se Tamatar"

Najma : "WOW.. Apne bhi mereliye gift lekar ayi… " She opens it to find a gold beautiful bracelet in it…with lot of gold stars hanging out from it…Zoya.. I love it.It is beautiful…Thank you.."

After Najma leaves, Zoya goes near Asad

Zoya : "Mr. Khan .. aap mereliye kya lekar aye ??"

Asad : "Apke leyi yeh rose".. and gives her a red rose…

Zoya with a huge smile…" Bahut pyaara hain Mr. Khan.. Thank you !!!"

Looking at the simplicity of his would-be wife, Asad was very happy .. He goes behind her and bends down and whispers…" Yeh to shurwat hain.. apke liye bahut bada surprise hain.."

Zoya turns around to face him :"Really ??"

Asad : "Ji .. aap guess karte rahiye..chaliye.. ab aap bhi jaa kar tayyar hojayiye…Mehmaan ate hi honge…"

Dilshad first gets ready and instructs the servants to set the dishes on the buffet table…While she was fussing around, Asad joins her…He was dressed in a black pathani suit…

Asad : "Ammi.. Eid Mubarak.. Yeh lijiye ammi ..yeh apke liye..mere aur Zoya ki taraf se… "

Dilshad opens her gift to find a beautiful watch…..Zoya and Najma walk in as the Mother and Son duo were wishing each other…

Zoya was dressed in a white and golden colour anarkali suit while Najma was in pink.. Both were looking extremely pretty..

Najma : "Ammi .. yeh dekhiye.. Bhaijaan aur Zoya ne muje kya diya hain and she shows her earrings and bracelet…"

Zoya had tied her hair to a French roll and had placed the rose which Asad had given her on her hair…

Asad was so immersed in admiring his Zoya that he was not aware when the guests started walking in and started wishing everybody…

All the guest were enjoying the lunch and appreciating the cooks..

Guest: "Asad.. khana to bahut hi badiya hain.. kahan se mangwaya yeh sab.. Jab humare ghar mein daawat hoga tab hum bhi wahin se order karenge"

Asad : "Ji.. Sab ammi ne arrange karwaya.. Ammi .. Ammi.."

The guest repeats his request to Dilshad

Dilshaad starts smiling: " Ji Shukriya.. apko khana itna pasad aya.. lekin apke ghar ke dawat keliye unhe nahin bejh sakti hoon…"

Guest : "Aise kyun kehrahi Dilshad bhi.. aap please batayiye na…"

Dilshad calls out for Zoya and Najma : "Dekhiye.. ye meri honewali bahu Zoya aur ye meri beti Najma.. Yeh sab khana..yeh do no milkar banye hain.. "

Guest: "Mashah allah .. aap kush naseeb ho… jo itni pyaari beti aur bahu mili hain.. Dekhne bhi Masha allah dono bahut khoobsurat hain……"

Asad who was not aware that all this was cooked by his 2 dear ones felt very proud of both of them…

Later he finds Zoya alone and he gently pulls her to a corner…

Asad : " Thank you Zoya !! Guests jane ke baad.. apke kamre mein ek surprise hain apke liye…"

Zoya runs to her room to check out what it was…She finds a small pink basket with a dalmation puppy in it and a small note to its collar " Aaap shaam aat bhaje cark parking ayega…aur haan saree mein…"She finds another box with a beautiful red saree in it…

Zoya was so happy to see all these.. .. She remembers how she had described similar scene in front of the immigration office and now how Asad was making each and every dream of hers to reality.."Mr. Khan to sach mein pagal hogaye hain.. mere sab stupid wishes puri kar rahe hain…"

The lunch party extended to evening snacks party and by the time all the guests left it was around 6.30 PM…

Zoya informs Dilshad that she was going out with Asad and that they may be late….She freshens up and at sharp 8PM, she goes to the car parking area… She finds Asad in his car already waiting for her…He was dressed in blue jeans and black shirt…

Zoya : "Mr. Khan.. hum kahan ja rahe hain…??"

Asad : "Aap chaliye..yeh surprise hain… "

After an hour's drive, they reach the Bhopal lake.. Asad had arranged for a boat.. They go in the boat and when it reaches the middle of the lake, he stops …The full moon was now seen clearly in the sky and also in the water ….

Asad : "Yeh lijiye.. apka moon..chand to neeche dikh raha hain.. yahan se aap kaise lekar chalegi ghar.. yeh aap ko soch na hain…Ab to apki wish list puri hogayi hain na.. ??"

Zoya : "Aap to bahut hi smart hain Mr. Khan.. Yahaan apke saath aur is chand ko dekh kar bahut hi kushi hogayi hoon…"

Asad : "Yes.. Ab to aap mujse Nikaah karne keliye aur koi shart nahin dalegi na ??"

Zoya smiles and nods her head…

Asad takes out their engagement ring which had fallen off from her hand and slips it on her finger...He also takes out a beautiful chain with a pendant and places it around her neck…."Chand Mubarak Zoya.. aap ko aap ka chand milgaya.. aur muje mera…"

Zoya : "Aapka chand ??"

Asad cups Zoya's face and tells…"Mera chand to aap hain.. aur mein is chand ko ab kabhi juda hone nahin dunga…"

Both of them smile and hug each other.. enjoying the peaceful night and the beautiful scenary around them…

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Have written a SS as well earlier.. Please do take time to read it… and provide your feedback..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3658727/dosti-aur-pyaar-part-15-final-part-updated

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely...
tho moon wali wish bhi puri kar dji..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love your writing so much! By the end of it I had a HUGE smile on my face - I am so in love with Romantic Ahmed Khan, Zoe is a lucky gal 😆

Thank you for writing this!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: KulfiBai

I love your writing so much! By the end of it I had a HUGE smile on my face - I am so in love with Romantic Ahmed Khan, Zoe is a lucky gal 😆

Thank you for writing this!


Thank yo so much.. I am glad you liked it so much !!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww!! Its really sweet❤️ He gave her a rose😳
Specially loved "Mera chand to aap hain.. aur mein is chand ko ab kabhi juda hone nahin dunga…" Good work!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arnav26

Aww!! Its really sweet❤️ He gave her a rose😳

Specially loved "Mera chand to aap hain.. aur mein is chand ko ab kabhi juda hone nahin dunga'" Good work!!


Thank you Arnav !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Aww..sweet OS..very well written


Thank you !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mashallah! You write very well 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Awesome os di. Love it.


Thank you !!😊

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