Toote Hue Khwaab ~ Check note on pg 132 ~ 17th December

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Hello Friends... how are you all?

It's me Sam, writer of "Sargoshiyan - Whisper of Love"

Though Me n Halema planned to write a story together, she got busy in her study, so from onwards i will continue this story from my IF id 😊

Basically this story came up in my mind from a Telefilm
"Amader Golpo" telecast in Bangladesh on Friendship Day
and one of the friend's personal life story attracted me 😆

But yes, I will change the plots in many ways and present here with my own twists 😉

So here I present...

Hope u all will support me in this story as well 😊

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Promos and Trailer on Page 1

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Character Sketch on Page 1

Part 1 to 5 on Page 1

Part 6 on Page 6

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Part 10+11 on Page 28

Part 12 on Page 36

Part 13 on Page 45

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Part 14 on Page 59

Part 15 on Page 71

Part 16 on Page 87

Part 17 on Page 102

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Promos and Trailer

PROMO 1

Geet's Monologue:

Life gives you thousand reasons to be happy
But still you want that one reason
That made you cry a thousand times
May be because somewhere you are incomplete
Without that part of your life
Or may be because
You somewhere found all the happiness
Stuck on that one reason..

These lines are written by me... don't copy it n post some where else or we will take legal actions

PROMO 2

Maan's Monolog:

I left you

Left you with a thought

A thought for your better future

So that you can never wait for me

Never wait for a future with me

But what did you did...

After so many years what i faced now

More guilt, more culpability

More remorse, more shame

Why are you doing this to me

(Written by Sam)

These lines are written by me... don't copy it n post some where else or we will take legal actions

Trailer:

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Prologue

It's almost mid night. A winter's cold mid night

All the lights in the outside were shut down

Both sides of the house's, are looking like dark pitch black shadows

Sometimes from here to there the barking sounds of the dogs are coming, letting others know that they are awake to take care of their masters

People make sure to shut down there windows to keep their house warm from the cold winds.

But if you look closely, you will find out that in this cold breeze, one house's only one room's window is still open. But the person's face inside that room was invisible because of the darkness.

The person is looking at the moon from last 4 hours, in deep thoughts.

It seems that the person is totally unaware of the surrounding and what is happenning around

It's her daily routine from last 4 years.

Every single day she used to rush to Handa Industry at 8 am. Come back home at around 9 pm. Then after completing her works she stands in front of the window and keep looking at the moon. Until sleep comes down to her eyes

Yes, she is Geet Handa. The only heir of the famous industrious, Mohindar Handa. The famous corporate girl well known by all the industrious in India

Geet handa, who took the entire control of the Handa industry, at an early age of 20. When she was still a student to complete her graduation

Like every day, she is now looking at the moon, in some deep thoughts.

When the moon hides behind the clouds, she comes out from her thoughts. She comes back to her bed, sits down and opens the side drawer that is attached with the bed.

A black leather diary

2008

Written above the diary

She opened the diary and came to the last side

On the date December 16^th

Dard hota hai,
Dard hota hai ye soch kar
Ye soch kar bhi ki aap ko yaad tak nehi rahe ga
Yaad tak nehi rahe ga wo sare lamhe
Unn sare lamhe,jinhe mai aap na zindegi mana tha
Aapni haar ek saans me basaya tha
Aapna mana tha aap ne jaan se bhi jyada
jin ko main kabhi nehi bhul paungi
Takleef mein hoon... hoon main dard mai
Lekin mujhe pata hai
Mujhe pata hai ki waqt ki saath aap ka dia hua ye jakham bhaar jaye ga
jaise har ek din aap mere ek ek yaadein bhul jayenge
waise hi mai aap par nafrat karne wala wo haar ek karan bhul jaungi
haan... mai aap se nafrat nehi kar paungi
kyun ki ye dukh ka rishta to aab maine chuna hai
wo rishta jo aap ne jate jate khatam kar dia
par maine iss mare huye rishte ko hi chuna hai aab
aur aab...
aab mai jiyungi to aap ki iss toote huwe rishte ki naam per...
aap ka dia hua har ek yadoo ki saath mai jiungi aab...

Kyun ki aab to bas bacha hai inn toote huwe khwaab

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She closes her eyes, as tears come out from her eyes. This is the only time when she let those tears fell down, when no one is there to see her pain, to wipe these tears.

From last four years this is the way her life is leading, just the way he left her four years ago

I know i know, very bad starting 😆

hope you guys will support us in this story

don't forget to share your opinion, as we are totally confused whether you guys are going to like this saddy saddy starting or not

Loads of Love,

~~S@m~~

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Character sketch

Geet Handa

Geet is a 24 year old young extravagant girl. But, one incident changed the whole course of her life and took away her existing flamboyant nature.

Maan Singh Khurana

Maan is a 25 year old open-minded man but with installed principles. Himself and Geet were close, but something caused him to move away from Geet, leaving her heartbroken.

Geet's Family:

Mohinder Handa (Geet's father)

Meera (Geet's cousin sister)

Maan's Family:

Savitri Devi Khurana (Daadi Maa)

Dev Singh Khurana (Maan's brother)

Anvesha Singh Khurana aka Annie (Maan's sister)

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Part 1

The plane landed on his country's acreage. His own country, motherland, his India. After so many years, finally he comes back in his own country, which he left for the sake of his bright future, his father's dream, his own dream, so get higher education to run the Khurana Empire.

Maan Singh Khurana, who was once the charming prince of college for the girls, now is heading back after whole five years in Manchester, United Kingdom. Who cannot recognise this Man? Maan Singh Khurana, who has now arrived after achieving a triple honours in Business from Manchester Business School.

He came out from the security section from the airport and immediately spotted his Daadi Ma, Dev and Annie were standing there, waving at him. He smiled to see the precious smile and the motherly glow on his Daadi Ma's face.

Finally I'm back! He murmurs to himself.

As soon as he reached near his family members, Annie came running and hugged him tightly.

"Bhai, I'm so happy, finally you are back, I missed you so much bhai!" she squealed, jumping excitedly in his arms, seeing her brother after a long time made Maan's heart melt.

"I missed you too sweetheart" wrapping his arms around her tightly, his sister was one he could not forget in a million years.

Still hugging Annie sideways, he came near Daadi Ma. The older lady has tears in her eyes to see her favourite grandchild after so many years. Maan bent down and take ashirwaad from Daadi Ma, who hugs him lovingly.

"I missed you the most Daadi Ma, but what is this? I come back after so many years to see you and you greet me with these precious drops falling from your eyes".

Savitri Devi stroked his cheek affectionately and smiled through the tears, Maan nodded in denial and wipe the tears that inwardly hurt him the most.

Dev came forward to lighten the situation up between the emotional ones.

"Arre, from where these emotional scenes are coming now?" Hi said mischievously, "Daadi Ma, are you planning to do a shooting of a film with bhai? If not, shouldn't we be heading home? Bhai looks quite tired after his Nine hour plane-jouney" Dev answered with his winning smirk.

All laughed at his words and Maan hugged his brother, who returned the hug with a wide smile. Dev rubbed his back and greeted him warmfully, "welcome back bhai"

"Now come on guys, let's go home na, we are getting late"Annie said forcefully dragging Maan by his arm, leading him into the car with herself.

All sit in the Mercedes and the start to drive towards Khurana Mansion.

In the car:

As the driver was heading towards Khurana Mansion, Maan was reminiscing his momentous childhood back in the day. The parks he played cricket at, the secret hideouts he had with his primary school friends and the ice creams he had with his high school friends at the various stalls. Then his college life, he had always been a topper in his studies from the much dull Calculus in Maths to the enthralling water polo he played as an extra-circular activity, which evidently did not go unnoticed by any girl! His gorgeous, taut, masculine body with the layer of water making him shine out of the lot.

He laughed inwardly remember the open drooling those girls did, that too frequently! Once a girl tried to grab his arm but Geet, his partner in crime from Nursery grabbed him away, thrashing a towel to my face shouting "Chi Chi Babaji!" Gosh! If she was around, he was considered dead meat! His best friend, whom he knew for more than three-quarters of his life, knew the best for him and he did not try to go against her or else he was a goner!! He truly did miss Geet, but his sudden decision to continue his studies in Manchester did shock many people, mostly Geet.

Other than the usual traditional India, he was liberated to a much freer country, England. In Manchester, the freedom of friendship and the extent of university life was the real deal! The busy City Centre, the endless restaurants and takeaways that reminded him of home and the diversity of the country appealed to him a lot. He did miss India but Manchester had become a second home to him.

As the car came to a halt at the traffic lights, he looked out dazed at what he saw.

Geet? he gasped under his breath. Was that truly her? No, that is not his partner-in-crime Geet! He had a mental dilemma. What had truly happened to this girl?! She wore her hair in a French plait and wore a plain white suit with a plain dupatta to accompany her. From a bubbly, nonchalant girl to this dull, heart-wrenching avatar scared him. Sach mein koi Saint dikh rahi hai! Aur sab isse Sunshine kehte te! Kissi rainfall se kam nahi lagti hai ab! he laughed to himself. Little did he knew that this Sunshine lost her shine with her life back in the day. He remembered his last day in India, he left her crying after an argument. She only wanted to say something that was on her heart and he did this to her.

The car came to stationary in the Khurana Driveway. Maan was remembering his goofy moments with Geet, but came out his trance when he heard his Daadi Ma's voice.

"Bete, andhar chaliye. Aap kaafi takke lag rahe ho. First go in and freshen up and catch up on sleep! You know this Jet-lag is not going to get any better if you do not sleep..." Her list of things-to-do went on until Maan spoke in between,"Daadi Maa do not worry, from now on your wish is my command!"

Annie ran in first grabbing an Aarti Thaali, doing her brother's puja. After many years he is reentering this house, his mother, Jaya, unaware of Maan's arrival ran to him and engulfed him into her arms.

"Mera Beta, Chotu ab yaad ayi hai aapko apni Mama ki?" she taunted him playfully whilst Maan gave her a kiss on her cheek and took her all-important blessings. His mum went in with the list... did he take good care of himself, did he eat well, sleep well. Maan silenced her ensuring all was fine and went up to his room and took rest.

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After freshening up from the shower his hand went into his draw and collected a picture, one most likely from his college days.

"Sweetheart, I miss you but do not worry, Your Maan is coming to you soon!"

Writer's note:

We hope you guys enjoyed this update! Here we were just setting the scene of Maan coming back from the UK after his degree and his reestablishment with his life in India opposed to Manchester. I (Halema) made Manchester seem awesome! I've been living here since I was born 😆. Next update will be soon and first time update we will ask for a target of LIKES and COMMENTS!!!

Part 2

After freshening up from the shower, his hand went into his drawer and collected a picture, one most likely from his college days.

"Sweetheart, I miss you but don't worry. Your maan is coming to you soon"

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Maan went downstairs and saw all the people waiting for him in the table.

"Come beta, we are just waiting for you only", daadi ma said

"aah after so many days we all are going to eat all together, I truly missed those days", aniee said while pouting

Maan smiled at her little sister. He missed his family, his friends and everyone

Sitting back on London and eating his every time meals in hurry, never gave him any pleasure rather than just filling his hungry stomach for working more hard.

All started eating while enjoying their togetherness the most possible ways.

Daadi ma - waise Maan, what are you planning about the London branch? I mean you are going to take care of the Indian branch of KC, right?

Maan ' for now, I will take care of the both. I mean will be here and handling the London branch from here only, until dev complete his graduation. After that, if he wants to settle here then he will take Indian branch, or else the London one. It's up to his decision.

Daadi ma ' but how will you manage everything all alone? Don't you think we also need some of your time beta? You are not going to stay here all alone, remember you have some family?

Maan ' relax daadi ma, no need to get hyper. I will go to London only when its needed, and all the works will handle Arjun, he's a good boy whom I can trust actually. Fresh graduate hai so will think about honesty rather than thinking about being a fraud and ran away with money

Dev ' ye kaun hai?

Maan ' I found him back there in London. Really a good boy graduated from my university actually. It took only 1 years to make him understand every works perfectly.

Maan continued while munching the pasta

Maan - And he's preety good in doing hardwork. We can let him handle there until you complete you studies.

Aniee ' can we stop the business talks now? Please?

Maan ' ohk ohk, no business talks right now.

After sometime maan asked everyone while mixing curry with rice.

Maan - Waise where is geet? Use pata bhi hai ki I'm coming?

Getting no response from anyone, Maan looked up and found all in tense

Maan ' Daadi ma, where's geet? Didn't you tell her that I'm coming back?

Daadi ma ' we don't know about her whereabouts

Maan ' matlab? what's it mean?

Getting no response, Maan again asked

Maan - daadi ma why are saying like that?

Daadi ma ' beta it's better for you not to think about the girl like her, don't know how she spoilt that much after being the child of Mohindar

Aniee ' but daadi ma, its not only her fault. She is innocent and easily

Daadi ma ' aniee don't talk about something what you don't know at all. And don't forget that you are to younger to talk about all these issues

Maan- wait a minute, can I know what is actually happening, and what she did?

Daadi ma ' maan complete your dinner, then take some rest, you are tired

Maan tried to ask daadi ma again but she started talking to dev about something. So maan decided to talk about it later.

Maan - What on earth happened that daadi ma is so much angry on geet.

Maan though to himself.

He looked at aniee and found her sad and playing with her foods.

So he said aniee to cheer up her mood

Maan ' aniee hurry up and finish your food, then come to my room, I have something for you

Saying so maan stood up

Daadi ma: beta khana to khatam ki jiye

Maan: I'm done daadi, good night

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Maan was taking out his dresses and other belongings from suitcases and keeping them on his wardrobe, when aniee peeped inside of his room

Aniee ' may I come in bhai?

Maan ' haan ajaa na,

Aniee came inside and took the milk glass on the side table near the bed.

Aniee ' daadi ma told you to have the milk before going to sleep

Maan ' daadi ma will never change, she knows that I hate the milk's smell, still she will make me drink it

Aniee ' you want to mix chocolate Horlicks in it?

Maan knotted his brows

Maan ' you still put 4 spoons of horlicksin one glass milk?

(Sam laughing her heart out as its my fanda to drink milks 🤣)

Aniee shrugged her shoulders

Aniee ' what can I do when I hate the milk's scent? And you know daadi ma, she will not let me sleep until I finish the milk

Maan laughed at her.

Maan ' you will never change na?

Aniee ' why will I, after 5 whole years you still hate to drink the milk, then why cant I add Horlicks on my milk?

Maan ' ohk ohk, now no need to start the fight all over again, eat as much Horlicks as you want to

Aniee ' bhai, im waiting for my gifts, aaj dena bhi hai ya nehi

Maan ' oh haan, ek kam kar, go and open that suitcase.

Aniee went and open, the whole briefcase was filled with wrapping gifts. He wrote names on every gift.

Aniee ' itni saari gifts? Bhai you brought the whole mall kya?

Maan ' hah hah, nehi, I missed you guys birthday and all, so thought to gave gifts for those 5 years

Aniee- but you always send me gifts na?

Maan ' but I was not there to see all yours smile and happiness while opening those gifts na?

Aniee- bhai aap bhi na

Aniee took out all her gifts. Total 7 different packs only for her

Aniee looked at her bhai and gave him her dazzling grin, then sat down on the bed and started to open all her gifts one after another

Aniee ' wow bhai, I was cribbing to daadi ma for buying this one

Aniee almost shouted in excitement to see the latest Samsung S4 that too all her

Maan chuckled to see his small sister's excitement

Maan -its for your uni admission, new uni life, so new mobile

Aniee ' you are the best

Aniee said while giving him a said hug. Soon she started to open another gift pack

Maan's thought went to the dinner convo. What happened all of a sudden that daadi ma was not even ready to listen Geet's name, forget about discussing the matters

He need to go to Handa mansion and talk with mohindar uncle. He needed to know everything.

He thought went to Geet. The time they both were in college. The way he saw her today, its not the geet whom he knew from his childhood, not the geet whom he left 5 years ago

Something is not right, he could guess that

He looked at aniee who's busy in opening the gifts and talking with herself, completely unaware of her surroundings

He smiled to see her. And decided to ask her

Maan- waise aniee

Aniee ' ji bhai

Aniee replied still busy on her own task

Maan ' what happened in handa house after I left?

Aniee looked up at him and chewed her lips, like hesitant to tell anything

Aniee ' wo bhai, geet did some mistake and all are angry on her.

Maan knotted his brow.

Maan- angry for 4 years?

Aniee shrugged her shoulder

Aniee- mohindar uncle is still in same condition, may be that's why all blamed her. But i don't think she's the only the person to be in fault

Maan- mohindar uncle ko kya hua? And what she did?

Maan almost snatched the red wrapping box from aniee

Aniee- bhai kya kar rahi hai aap?

Maan- aniee first tell me what happened between geet and all the people in these 4 years?

Aniee- wo bhai

PRECAP: what will be aniee'sanswer. Geet's last 4 years will reveal

Loads of Love

~~S@m~~

Part 3

Maan- waise aniee

Aniee ' ji bhai

Aniee replied still busy on her own task

Maan ' what happened in handa house after I left?

Aniee looked up at him and chewed her lips, like hesitant to tell anything

Aniee ' wo bhai, geet did some mistake and all are angry on her.

Maan knotted his brow.

Maan- angry for 4 years?

Aniee shrugged her shoulder

Aniee- mohindar uncle is still in same condition, maybe that's why all blamed her. But i don't think she's the only the person to be in fault

Maan- mohindar uncle ko kya hua? And what she did?

Maan almost snatched the red wrapping box from aniee

Aniee- bhai kya kar rahi hai aap?

Maan- aniee first tell me what happened between geet and all the people in these 4 years?

Aniee- wo bhai

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Before aniee could tell her, someone knocked the door.

Don't you bring anything for me?

Dev said while peeping his head inside Maan's room

Maan: come inside, I thought you are already sleeping

Dev- nah, I was in study room to complete some assignment

Aniee- accha? You sure you were busy in study

Dev slapped her head in order to shut her up. Maan knotted his eye brow while eyeing both of them.

Dev- Bhai don't listen to her bakwas. All time ready with useless babbling

Aniee- hawww, chi bro, I will definitely not help you in

Dev- baby you are going with me tomorrow, remember?

Aniee shut her mouth hurriedly as she knew her brother's unique styles to punish her

Maan- kya chal raha hai tum dono ki bij mai? And stop talking in code languages

Nothing bhai- both said at the same time

Maan- sure? There's nothing?

Dev- haan bhai, aap ye to bolo ki what you have brought for me?

Maan- waha bag se khud jake le lo

Dev went to open the bag to take out his gift while asking Maan about his days in UK

Dev- bhai, how you used to spend your times back there in London

Maan- Most of the time I used to come home late night. As I had to attend business parties almost every days

Dev- it's boring

Maan- if you want to make your business well known and famous, then you better try to find the interests to go there.

Aniee- bhai, aap drink karti ho?

Maan- haan, kyun?

Aniee- drinks acche log thodi na karte

Dev- baby, there's big difference between drinking and being drunker

Aniee- tumhara saar, bhai aap sacchi mai hosh mai to rehte ho na?

Maan- Aniee I have to drink a little bit in those parties, but not much

Aniee- phir thik hai

Maan- accha now you both go, I need to sleep. I'm feeling tired

Maan locked his room while bidding good night to his siblings. His thought went towards the previous convo again

Maan- tomorrow my first task is to ask daadi ma why she said those words against geet. If she still don't want to say anything, then I am going to handa house

Maan said to himself. Just then his phone rang and he got busy on that phone call

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Same time in Handa house:

Geet came out from her washroom while weeping her hair. She looked outside of her window and looked at the moon.

(Imagine geet here 😊)

It was raining from last 3 days, finally the rain stopped today. But the moon is still playing hide and seek in the sky. Geet smiled to herself when she thought about today.

She went towards her bed side drawer and brought her diary with a pen, before sitting on the window.

(imagine Geet's dress in white)

Finally my excitement reduced today. After so many days finally I saw you today. You were so happy with all. I'm so glad that you are happy. I also wanted to be there in the list of ALL. But I know you must be moved on, like you said me to do before your departure.

One tear drop fall down from her eyes. She was so happy to see Maan coming out from the airport with his family.

She so much wanted to go towards him and hugged him tight. And tell him how much she missed him. But alas! She can't do anything like that.

That's why she hide herself behind the cars and saw him leaving. What pricked the most was, Maan didn't ask about her for once. He must be moved on finally.

She again wrote on her diary,

What I can do when I myself know that all i ever wanted was what i always had? I knew what I wanted- and what I wanted was you. Too bad for me, today that is no less true that you are the one who is in my heart.No matter how many times i tell myself i'm over you, i always still find myself thinking about you. You are the one who is still inside my heart.

Geet closed the diary and looked outside. Every single relation she had changed in a blink of eyes.

The only person who trusted her was her father. Still she made him suffer in her own fault, her father is paralyzed from last 4 years.

But in these 4 years, her father never blamed her for all these ups and downs of her life. Just like always, he became a pillar to protect his child. Who trusted her more than all others who put fingers on her.

Still she made him suffer in her own fault.

Am I considering all as my fault? ' She asked herself

No she couldn't. Because loving Maan is the most beautiful memories she ever had after she lost her mother.

~~S@m~~

Part 4

It's the very first day of college life. All are so excited about their first day. Every people have their own dreams that they want to complete here.

A red Ferrari stop near the college gate making all the girls gasps. Well not for the Ferrari, but for the handsome dude who come down from the car.

All know him by his name but none of the freshener saw him before. But all can guess that it's the Maan Singh Khurana, famous businessman Anukalp Singh Khurana's elder son. And last but not least, he's the hottest dude of this entire college

As soon as Maan enter into the college, his friends come running towards him.

Yash: Maan what's the plan for the rag

Maan, yash and Rahul are the three friends who always stay together in a group and they are the final year batch who will leave the college after 7 months.

Maan: come on man, its all of your works to think. And remember, for the most beautiful girl from the fresheners, tell her to have a dance with Maan Singh Khurana. Am I clear?

Rahul: it's nothing new, right? Its common from last 2 years.

Yash: wohi to. I was telling that

Yash's words stopped inside his mouth when they see a BMW car stops near the college gate.

Rahul: its another freshener. Maan may be she is going to dance with you this time. Per konsa romantic song per?

Yash: may be she will be quite stylist as she is rich enough

The car's passenger door opened and the girl come out from the car making the trio speechless.

The girl is totally in her simple college dress with two plaits with a big smile on her face.

Totally unlike from three of them's guessing. An old driver comes out and handles her bag and she runs inside the college

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Maan's sleep broke with the ringing tune of his mobile. He smiled while remembering about the dream, about her, about his best friend geet.

Maan picked the call and answered in a sleeping tune

Maan: hey sweetheart

He listened the caller and smiled while listening

(im posting one side convo here)

Maan: sorry sweety, I was totally stuck with them yesterday and then got so much tired and just slept off

Maan: don't even ask. I'm missing you already

Maan: yes, a lot

Maan: jaan let me just talk with daadi ma about it, then only I can tell whether she will agree or not

Maan: of course not.

Maan looked at the clock and replied,

Maan: ohh shit, i'm already late jaan, I need to rush as I will join in office today

Maan: accha listen, I will call you later, now you go and sleep, as its night there na?

Maan: me too, bye, good night sweety

Maan cut the call and went to take shower and get ready for office

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The car stopped near the Handa Event Managing Office. Ramu kaka looked backward and saw the same thing. The girl is looking outside but looking at nothing specific

Ramu kaka: geet betiya

Geet came out from her thoughts when she heard him calling her

Geet: ji kaka, kuch keh rahi thi aap?

Ramu kaka: office agayi hai betiya

Geet looked outside and smiled a little, which didn't reach her eyes like it's used to before 4 years

Geet: oh haan, aap ek kam karna, 7 baje tak come here to take me, I will wait

Ramu kaka: thik hai

Geet came down from the car and entered her office

All the staffs wished her good morning while she smiled a little and entered her room.

Pinky came to her room behind her with a file in her hand.

Pinky: good morning mam

Geet: morning pinky, any new works for us?

Pinky: haan mam, three companies mailed us yesterday regarding arranging their parties. One is the new branded product's lounging party, another one is their partnership with Mehta industry they want us to arrange a lavish party, another one

Geet: pinky relax, take a breath and put these files here, I will see them all

Pinky: ohk mam

Geet: now you can go, I will call you if I need anything

Pinky: ji maam

Pinky was going when geet called her from behind

Geet: waise pinky

Pinky: mam you need anything else?

Geet: nehi nehi, how's you fever now? If you are not well then you can take a day off

Pinky: nehi mam, I am perfectly fine

Geet: ok then

Pinky gave her a long smile before exiting her room

This is Geet handa, for her every single work by her employees need to be perfect, but only after ensuring that her employees are fit and fine.

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Adi alarmed everyone as soon as the black BMW stopped near the Khurana Construction.

Yes, Maan Singh Khurana was coming today after 4 years to take the whole responsibility of the Indian branch from onwards.

Maan entered the office while all came near him with flower bouquets in order to congratulate him

Maan: what's all this for?

Sasha the head architect came near Maan and said with a smile in order to impress him

Sasha: sir we are so happy that you are finally taking the in charge here. It's just we wanted to show our happiness.

Maan looked at all and then told for everyone

Maan: it's not like I'm some new manager who just joined here, it's the khurana construction and one of the Khurana is here, so it should not be like so out of blue for you people.

And if you guys still want to show your happiness to me, and then show it in your performance, that can help Khurana Construction to earn more profits.

And yes, it will bring more advantage for your own as every employee's monthly compensation will depend on his or her own personal work scale.

Now get back into your works, as I really don't think you all need to stand in front of me to show your faces as I will only remember those faces that can actually show their brilliancy in their works.

All went back to their respective places and Maan entered his room with Adi

Maan: koi answer mila uss event company se

Adi: still not, but Maan tell me one thing, why you changed the event management at the last moment.

Maan: hai kuch baat, you go and check again if they replied or not

Adi left and Maan talked to himself

Maan: Because I want her to be a part of my dreams, that dreams for which I left everything behind. I want my best friend to organize my welcome party, as only Geet know what Maan likes

PRECAP: nehi dungi, as im not sure :P

~~S@m~~

Part 5

All went back to their respective places and Maan entered his room with Adi

Maan:koi answer mila uss event company se

Adi: still not, but Maan tell me one thing, why you changed the event management at the last moment.

Maan: hai kuch baat, you go and check again if they replied or not

Adi left and Maan talked to himself

Maan: Because I want her to be a part of my dreams, that dreams for which I left everything behind. I want my best friend to organize my welcome party, as only Geet know what Maan likes

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Geet went through the Mitra's file and then decided to take a break while reading another contact proposal. She shut off the file and forwarded her hand to pick up the coffee glass when her eyes went to the file below.

Geet: Khurana Construction

Geet mumbled while taking the file. She called Pinky inside her room. Pinky came inside

Pinky: Mam, u called me?

Geet: Haan Pinky. I was calling you to talk about this company.

Pinky: Mam, Khurana construction today send this proposal, they want us to organize their recent party as Mr. Maan Khurana is taking the place of company's MD

Geet: who send that proposal?

Pinky: it was mailed by the manager of Khurana construction Aditya Sharma

Geet: we are denying it. Reply him saying we don't have time to take any new project in our hand

Pinky: but mam, they are ready to pay as much as we want from them, and also they are a huge company, this proposal can make us more strong

Geet: it doesn't matter Pinky. We already have so many projects in this month. I don't want to take any more pressure

Pinky: ok mam

Geet: you can leave now

After Pinky left, Geet got lost in her own thoughts

Geet: Did Daadi ma told the manager to do this? Or else who will be the one? As much I know, it is only Daadi ma who's taking care of the company. But daadi ma will never want me to meet with Maan. Then why she is again after me. I left na the way they all want me to leave. Then why all these drama all over again?

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Maan almost shout in frustration

Maan: why can't they take this project?

Adi: Sir according to them, they don't have free time to organize any more party in this month. And we can't also change our party time.

Maan: give me the number, I will talk with their owner.

Adi: Geet Handa se?

Maan: Haan

Adi: Sir she never talks with people without proper appointment. If you will call then her secretary will talk with you

Maan: bull shits, I'm going there. Let's see she talks with me or not

Saying so Maan grab the car key and went out of the office in almost tornado speed, making adi startled

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Pinky: But sir, I cannot help you in this

Pinky reasoned the same thing for the 15^th time to the stranger who hell bends on meeting her boss

Maan: can you just please call her for once and let me talk with her, I'm sure she will talk with me

Pinky: I'm really sorry sir, I cannot do this. Mam will be angry on me. The only thing I can do to help you is help you in taking an appointment for the next available day

Maan: And when is it?

Pinky: let me check Sir

Pinky checked the papers and with a sorry face she looked at Maan

Pinky: Sir this week Mam is already stuck in many works, still I can make one for you in this Thursday. Ermmm for one hour only

Pinky said the last sentence meekly to see the angry man in front of her

Maan: Call your mam and tell her to come here right now

Maan hissed in sheer anger

Pinky gulped down her remaining words and picked up the phone and dialed Geet's room number

Geet: yes Pinky

Pinky: Wo mam

Maan snatched the phone from pinky

Maan: if you can give me at least 10 minutes from your so much valuables times, then can I come and talk with you

Geet: Ma.. maan, is that

Maan: Yes it's me, and thanks a lot for remembering my name, now tell your secretary to let me come in your room

Saying so Maan returned the receiver to pinky

Pinky: I'm sorry mam, wo

Geet: its ok Pinky, let him in

Pinky: you can go Sir, Room is in 3^rd floor, right side

Maan: thank you, for wasting so much of my time

Saying so Maan went towards Geet's room

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Geet heard the knocking sound and replied coldly

Geet: come in

Maan entered the room with a very angry face

Maan: why you denied arranging the party

Geet looked at Maan with the same anger

Geet: do you think I am bound to answer your questions?

Maan: what?

Geet: First of all, you barked into my office all of a sudden, harass my secretary, make a scene in my office, came to meet me without any appointment, and great now, you think I am bound to answer you whatever you are going to ask me?

Geet snapped al Maan while stood up from her chair

Maan: what's wrong with you geet?

Maan asked startled, he thought geet will again manofy him the same way he used to do it, but here this Geet is totally new to her, he never knew this geet

Geet: what's wrong with me? What's wrong with you maan? You are going to take a huge responsibility and behaving like a child in front of me

Maan: why are you talking with me like this? I thought you will be happy to see me after so many days

Geet: and why I will be? You are not an alien that I will be happy to see one

Maan: geet

Geet: can you please now tell me why you are here? I really don't have too much time in my hand

Geet said while looking at her watch

Maan: I thought you were just joking

Geet: joking on what?

Maan didn't reply to her question and asked politely

Maan: why you didn't come to meet with me for once Geet? I came after so many days and you don't even

Geet: you left and you came, what's the big deal here?

Maan: it's you who are saying it's not a big deal

Geet: yes, it's not. Now are you done? Come on maan, I mean, if you came here only to say hello to me, then you can just call me and say a hi, why the hell created so many scenes here. it's not your house, learn how to be professional

Maan: im sorry Geet, may be I came to a wrong person

Saying so Maan turned to leave, but stopped near the door

Maan: I thought I came to my best friend, who always knew what that MD seat meant for me and thought she would happily do everything for her friend, but I was wrong Geet. You changed

Saying so Maan left

But the mistake Maan did was not to turn around for a second, if he did, he would see the same Geet, the same Geet who cried every time she said no to her Maan even for a small reason. He would understand Geet can never change, it's the situation that made her change even when she don't want to

THE END

so how many chappals n rotten tomatoes now???? 😆

don't forget to press like n leave ur feedback, or else may b i will forget to write the next part as well 😡

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing updates but so much suspense

so maan liking someone else , geet likes maan ..

what is problem of dadi wid geet

waiting for revelation of past

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing start !!!!!
Really loved the concept & all the updates ...
Maan loves somebody else ...😔 maybe the girl is in manchester & geet loves maan ...
so many questions ...ufff
why dadima hating geet nw ??? where as annie was supporting her
what mistake geet did ???
will be waiting for nxt update for past to be revealed ...continue soon pls

Edited by _SnowFlakes_ - 11 years ago