Toote Hue Khwaab ~ Check note on pg 132 ~ 17th December

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

Wow great story please update soon
It's an amazing story to tell and ready
thanks for sharing your story with us.

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

Awesome update
N the song
Now a days I'm totally obsessed with this song
Just love the song n it's meaning :)
It was perfect for maaneet situation
Oh when I was hearing the song this ff came in my mind
N wow u put that here :D
Mere dua asmaan se ne takraya aur nahi lout aya ;) :P
I loved pia's tooty phooti English
But a lot of questions...
1st how come pia in car suddenly???
Asmaan se gira kya?? ;)
Thn ofcouse a million dollar question
Who's pia??? How can be she maans daughter?? :\

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nishamna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

it's really great part. maan is upset with the past deeds of dadi ma. he is blaming himself for all the pains of geet. i am eagerly waiting for pia's introduction. waiting for next dear

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Beautifully written !!!

Both are in pain and both only wanted others happiness and prayed for the same but still destiny played its game.

Nice chapter

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...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

Pia is sho cute... :D
Kaha se mila is cuty ko???

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tammana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

Both maan n geet r in pain n dadi ma feel guilty..n pia realy cutee:-) wait 4 nxt:-)

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priya_ya1408

@priya_ya1408

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#357

Read all the parts in one go
Interesting concept dear
And update 14 was emotional maan crying and missing geet
Continue soon dear

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Teju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

Piya maan's daughter.. Geet doesn't know abt her..? Pia is cutie pie.. makes her papa happy... Abhi bahot confusion hain... clear karo jaldi.. Maneet in pain..😭