Toote Hue Khwaab ~ Check note on pg 132 ~ 17th December - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago

Today's update is specially for Preeti Albert.. 😊 😳

Part 10

Geet opened the door and looked inside the dark room. It's already evening now. But no one felt is necessary to put on the light here.

As her eyes started to be familiar with the room's darkness, Geet saw her father near the window. Looking outside of the window and was in deep thoughts.

Her eyes watered to her father on that wheel chair. It only made her guiltier because it's all happened because of her.

She was about to turn her back and went outside when she heard her father asked him softly

Mohindar: will you not come inside? Or will leave just like all the time Geet?

Geet stood rooted on her place. She didn't make any sound still again he understood her presence. Like as if he could hear her thought. He answered her unsaid words.

Mohindar: I don't need to use my eyes to know where you are Geet. Won't you come inside? It's been a long I came to see your papa

Geet slowly come in front of her father and knelled down beside him

Mohindar caressed her face and smiled at her

Mohindar: hey princess.

Geet: I'm sorry papa but please don't hate me

Geet whimpered like a helpless kid

Mohindar looked at her for a brief period of time and pulled her in a hug. In return Geet hugged him tight

Mohindar: ssshhh Geet. No one can hate my princess. No one baby

Geet: they all hate me papa. I know you too hate me

Mohindar: how can I hate that precious person of my life for whom I'm living till now? Is it possible princess?

Mohindar asked her while caressing her hair and patting her back

Geet: because of me you are in this condition

Mohindar: and who said that? Geet, you can never be the reason of my illness princess. Infact you are the reason I'm still alive.

Geet looked at her papa's face hopefully

Mohindar: so that my princess can one day come to her papa and share her pains what she is bearing from so many days.

Geet only cried in reply

Mohindar: I'm so sorry princess

Geet: why are you saying sorry papa

Geet asked while wiping the tears from her papa's cheeks.

Mohindar: I wish I could save you from the pain you had to face. I couldn't able to do anything to support you

Mohindar said painfully.

Geet: no papa, please don't be sad. It's not your fault. It was my entire fault. I was wrong

Mohindar: I will never forgive him

Geet: but it's not his fault

Mohindar: stop taking his side Geet. He ruined your entire future, your happiness everything, still you are supporting him?

Geet: how can I blame him when I was the one who was in love with him?

Mohindar: he used you

Geet: no papa, he never said that he love me, nor I let him understand my feelings

Mohindar: geet you

Geet: let's forget it papa. It's been a long I was not with you

Saying so Geet put her head near her papa's chest, just like she used to do always.

Mohindar's eyes moistened to see his daughter. He hugged her daughter tightly

Mohindar: I missed you princess

Geet: me too papa. I will never ever leave you, I promise papa

Mohindar kissed her hair and engulfed her in his fatherly hug

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It's been a week after that night which changed many things. Now Handa mansion was looking like a house to its old servants. Mohindar came out from his room which itself was a big surprise for all.

Geet started to have breakfast and dinner with her father. Though she could not make it to the lunch she call home and made sure her father had lunch and took his medicines on time.

But in all these, one thing didn't change. And that is Geet's avoidance towards Maan.

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It's the inauguration day. All the people are busy with their own respective works that they had to complete before 6 pm.

Geet came to the hall before the time as she had to take a look on everything before the guests started to come. So she came early after lunch.

Meera: so you liked everything?

Geet was looking at everything while standing in middle, when Meera called her from behind.

Geet looked back and smiled at Meera

Geet: it's just perfect Meer.I loved it

Meera: hope your akroo friend will like it as well

Geet: aahh, as if we care? He just needs to make a face on every small thing. So use grammar formula 2 on him.

Meera: what?

Meera looked at her confused

Geet: he's the third person singular number here, right?

Meera nodded at her still confused at her words

Geet: use s/es after this third person singular number and simply cut him out

Saying so Geet winked. It took some time for meera to understand what she said. And then both laughed out loud

Meera: geet you are too good

Geet: that I am

"ohh, you are indeed good in grammar"

The voice made them turned back and saw Maan looking at them while folding his hands near his chest.

Meera gave a nervous smile and thought that escape would be the best option for her.

Meera: I should go and have a look on the catering

After meera left, Maan gave Geet a taunting look and said sacrificially

Maan: I never know you are this much good in grammar as it was I who used to complete your home works in math and English

Geet: that was when I was in school. Don't forget I managed to complete my education all alone when you left me all alone

Geet replied but then realized what she just said. She tried to walk past him when Maan hold her hand

Maan: will you not forgive me for that?

Geet: Maan leave my hand

Maan: for how long you will be avoiding me Geet? I'm missing our old days. Please forgive me

Geet: I am no one here for whom you should feel sorry. So leave my hand now

Maan: I was in pain Geet. I was in pain of losing dad, and I just wanted to complete my study first to fulfill dad's wish

Geet: and in your pain you never look back at other's pain

Geet snapped at him in anger

Maan: Geet, I'm sorry, I really am

Geet: and I am refuging to forgive you Maan. I hate myself that I once considered you my best friend. In your own misery you never turned back to look at me. I wanted you Maan. But you were never there for me. Not there with me when I just lost my own

She stopped herself from telling anything further

Maan: who hurt you Geet? Please tell me?

Geet: oh really? And may I know what you will do to him?

Maan: I will not leave him in peace, I promise

Geet: it was you Maan. It was always you

Saying so Geet jerked her hand away from him and move away leaving him baffled.


next part continued below

Edited by Dipti_Sam - 11 years ago
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Part 11

Geet looked at everything at the end and checked if anything needed to be changed. She then bid meera bye and was leaving the place when she met Maan near the hall entrance

Maan: where are you going? Just half hour left to start the program

Geet: works done, so I'm taking my leave

Maan: what? Won't you be here?

Geet: no, I have works, sorry maan. And yes, all the best for your future. Your family will be proud for you, especially uncle

Maan: but what if people ask for you?

Geet: sorry?

Maan: I mean, what if someone likes your company' works, and like to talk with the CEO of your company. You know I can make some more customers for your company?

Maan mentally kicked himself for coming up with this stupid cause to stop Geet for going.

Geet: well then

Geet opened her purse, making maan confused. Geet took out some visiting cards of her and gave them to him

Geet: give them my visiting card and tell them to fix a meeting by calling my assistant

Saying so Geet started to leave, but stopped abruptly hearing Maan's pleading voice

Maan: please Geet, at least be here in this day. It's an important day of my life.

Geet: your family will be here with you, it will not be a matter if I will not be here

Maan: it matters a lot to me Geet. Because you will agree or not, but you are a member of my own family. Please don't go

Geet: Maan I can't

Maan: if you ever consider me as your close one, you will be here, as you too know how many days I've waited to be in this place

Saying so Maan left, leaving Geet in tears

Geet (self-talk): you don't know how much I've waited to see you in this position, this much successful. But how will I tell you that I can't stay here. I can't stay as your family is coming here. Daadi ma hates me a lot Maan. I can never stand in front of her. Not after what happened years ago

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The inauguration program was in full swing. People from various companies came and media too was here to gather information and to find a chance to take a short interview of the Maan Singh Khurana.

People are congratulating him and welcoming him warmly. Also all were talking about the success of this party, that it's this year's most big and gorgeous party. It only made Maan proud on his Geet's sincerity and hardworking nature.

Maan smiled warmly and went near the door to welcome Daadi ma, Dev and Aniee

Maan: you guys are late

Dev: not my fault. This lady wasted 3 long hours just to get ready

Dev said pointing towards aniee

Aniee: shut up bhai. I have to look perfect on my bro's party. Bro it's awesome, you rocks

Saying so Aniee hugged Maan

Maan: thank you

Daadi ma: It's awesome. Must say Singhania company give their hundred percent here

Maan: well it's not SinghaniaDaadi ma.

Daadi ma: what? But I myself talked with them and confirmed everything that they are going to organize the party. One second, then who did it?

Maan: it's a surprise Daadi ma. Just wait for some more time

Daadi ma: okay, but I must say, whoever planned all these, that person is smart as well as has the elegance to make everything look so perfect

Said daadi ma while looking around

Maan: she has to, after all she's best in everything she does

Daadi ma: that much trust? Now I really want to meet that person

Daadi ma said while patting his cheek affectionately

Aniee: can we go inside now? I want to enjoy the party

Maan: okay baba, let's go inside

All entered inside

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Everyone was enjoying their drinks while talking with each other, when Maan walked and stood on the stage

Daadi: hello everyone, may I have your attention please?

All stopped talking and approached near the stage. Savita Devi smiled at her grandchild proudly

Maan: Dear friends. Thank you all for coming. This party is to exchange my duty from my shoulder and hand over them over to my eldest grandchild. Please welcome our company's new MD, Maan Singh Khurana

All clapped while Maan came into the stage and took the mic from Daadi ma's hand.

Maan: Firstly I thank each of you for accepting my invitation to be here today and be a part of my happy day. Yes, this is one of the happiest days of my life. Not because I got a good position, but because I've completed half of my father's dream that he dreamt about me years ago. I want to say thank you to my grandmother, who was always there in the ups and downs of my life, be with me whenever I was in need. And my family, my brother dev, my sister aniee. I love you both.

Maan looked at the entrance and saw Geet standing over there looking at him proudly.

And lastly I want to say thank you to the person, who was always there with me in every phase of my life since childhood. Even today also it because of her all are praising the Khurana for arrenging this wonderful party. Thank you Geet for being with me always. I don't know you will believe it or not, but the truth will always remain the same. No matter what happens, no matter how many days will pass away, I will always love you the way I always did. Thank you Geet for being in my life

He said looking directly on Geet.

How she wish that the love word was truly happened between them. He was looking to sincerely at her, making her heart swell with happiness, though she knew like always he said it as a friend, as his best friend.

Daadi ma shockingly looked at Maan's face and then followed his eyes and saw Geet standing over there with tears in her eyes.

As soon as Maan came down from the stage, Daadi ma stopped him

Daadi ma: Maan, what was all that? Why she's here? And why were you saying that she did all these arrangements?

Maan: yes Daadi ma, she did everything here.

Daadi ma: but Singhania's were supposed to do that, I myself talked with them

Maan: yes, but I changed that. I wanted Geet to do these entire works Daadi ma

Daadi ma: but

Mr. Kapoor: Congratulation Maan. I'm so glad for you

Maan: thank you uncle. How are you?

They keep busy on business talk so Daadi thought to ask Maan later

Geet was with Meera, talking with others who were happily saying that she did fabulous job in arranging the party

Geet: meera you stay here. I need to go to the washroom

Meera: okay you go, I'm waiting here for you

Geet came out of the party hall and was going towards the washroom, when Daadi ma called her from behind

Daadi ma: so finally, you showed your true color Geet

Precap:

Geet: Daadi ma, you are thinking wrong about me?

Daadi ma: oh really? I thought wrong about you. How fool I was to consider you as an innocent girl. But I know now how you really are


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Edited by Dipti_Sam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

double dhamaka

loved the both updates dear 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...😃...btw it is part 10 & 11...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update both parts superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb...😊
finally geet n her papa.. talk
n maan still try to talk to geet
wait 4 nxt
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Loved Geet n her Papa's talk.. they both were emotional.. Geet is so much in pain.. but one thing her dad doesn't hate her... still what has happened is still a Q'n... N Now Dadi insulting Geet... Will Maan ever come to know his Dadi now hates Geet so much... 😲 Ek pe kyon mein dono pe like karoongi..😛😆
Edited by CutieTeju - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the double updates
Poor geet she is hiding her feelings from maan
Maan loved the arrangenents
Daadi hates geet...eagerly waiting to know the reasons
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice updates
luvd it
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz maan dadima ki mu mita do...geet ko bacha lo maan...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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