Astha Shlok FF -IPK-EPB - WILL LOVE HAPPEN??LAST PART updated- page 69

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Hi guys.. This is my first FF.. Hope to get support from all of u 😊

basically i am gonna almost use the same concept as the show but it will turn into a different story. A love hate revenge story.


Synopsis

Aastha is a big fan of shlok. Always inspired by him and has high regards for him. Her friends always tease her but she is determined to work with him and he is the perfect man for her..

Astha is fortunate and realizes her dream of working with shlok.but future has other things in store for her. What happens when she messes up with shlok and her family's reputation. Will her dream shatter or will they fall in love?

Prologue

Astha cuts Shloks pic from the newspaper and sticks it into her album. An album full of Shlok's pictures and articles from various news papers and magazines. Gauri Laughs " oh! Astha wats all this.I will make sure that ur future husband sees this". Astha says " yeah u can show him.Cos I am gonna marry Shlok Agnihotri J haha".

" oh please astha, u don't even know him more than this pics and articles. People are not as they seem in real life. When dreams shatter they really hurt" says Gauri

"I am sure of my life Gauri. I will realize my dreams for sure. I will work for him and I know one day he will love me as much as I do"

Main Characters

Astha - A beautiful 21 year old girl.Just finished her education and wants to pursue her career.

Shlok Agnihotri - A 27 old tall and handsome guy. A business tycoon. MD of Agnihotri group of institutions. The only person he trusts is his father. He lives with his Father, step mother and Step brother.

Niranjan Agnihotri - Shloks father and chairman on agnihotri institutions.Very loving and nice guy

Varad Agnihotri - Shlok's Step brother. He hates Shlok and wants to get all the business in his name and trying to spoil everything for shlok

More characters can be seen as the story progresses


Part 1

Astha's college announces " College Day on 1st September. Venue-College Auditorium, Time - 10 am, Chief Guest - Shlok Agnihotri"

Astha couldn't believe her eyes. Was she seeing something wrong written on the board. She asked Gauri to read it for her. Gauri too couldn't believe it. It was the best thing that happened in her college since she ever joined and she had to be prepared the best for her.

Astha told to Gauri : Gauri I need to buy the best dress possible for this day. I want him to atleast notice me" Gauri laughed and said " notice u? am sure he has many girls around him. Y would he notice u? forget it it will never happen." Astha fumed and said " Destiny has its plans always. God will do his best for us"

While in the Agnihotri mansion

Shlok, His father and brother all at the dining table

Shlok said " Dad I am visiting another college in the city as their chief guest for their college day"

Varad was angry " Dad I think bro has no sense of responsibility. How can he visit other colleges. The Media is going to lash out a lot of nonsense"

Shlok angrily said " I know my responsibility and I don't need to learn them from u. Dad it will bring goodwill to our institutions if I visited them. Moreover we need to keep track of whatever competition is doing. Anyways it's a very small college. I am also planning to give out a job to the best performer of the year in that college."

Niranjan Agnihotri(NA) was impressed " Good work son. I know u will always do the right thing"

Varad Fumed as he knew soon everything will go out of his hand. He needs to make a master plan to push Shlok out of his way.

part 2 - Page 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3745143/astha-shlok-ff-ipk-epb-will-love-happen-last-part-updated-page-69?pn=2

Part 3 - PAGE 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92648870

Part 4 - Page 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3745143/astha-shlok-ff-ipk-epb-will-love-happen-last-part-updated-page-69?pn=4

part 5 - PAGE 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92825717

part 6 - page 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92868427

part 7 - page 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3745143/astha-shlok-ff-ipk-epb-will-love-happen-last-part-updated-page-69?pn=9

part 8 - page 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93014701

part 9 - page 13

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93105577

part 10 - page 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93141057

part 11 - page 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93172147


part 12 - page 18

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93208192

part 13 - page 21

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93302910

part 14 - page 24

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93336373

PART 15 - page 27

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3745143/astha-shlok-ff-ipk-epb-will-love-happen-last-part-updated-page-69?pn=28

PART 16 - page 31

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93537330

PART 17 - page 34

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93637129

part 18 - page 38

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93697173

PART 19 - page 43

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93856257

part 20 - page 46

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94023013

part 21 - page 50

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3745143/astha-shlok-ff-ipk-epb-will-love-happen-last-part-updated-page-69

part 22 - page 55

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94222670

part 23 - page 58

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94534017

part 24 - page 62

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94875372

part 25 - page 66

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95172545

last part -page 69

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95216762

a like or comment will not hurt 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful prologue and character sketch...
Plzz do continue waiting to read!!!
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It's really awesome
Pls cont soon
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Lovely start ...so Astha is already a fan of Shlok ..hmmm interesting
Awaiting next part ...guess Varad ll use dirty tricks against Shlok
Do continue soon
Edited by -Priya01 - 11 years ago
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looking forward to read it
prologue looks interesting😊
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NiCe😊
Update sOon..wOuld love to read mOre😳
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Part 2

Its September 1st today.

Astha was awake all night. Finally the day she will see the man of her dreams right in front of her. She was hoping not to faint or do something clumsy. She had requested the principal to allow her to garland shlok and she was granted the same. She had to be best dresses today she thought as she was lying on her bed hugging her favorite pillow.

Astha's mom knocks to wake her up and go to college. He dad was already at the breakfast table waiting for her.

Astha's Dad is a small time business man. They have a supermarket in one of the posh localities of Pune. The business has been good. Astha's mom has been his support always.

Astha is all ready in her beautiful pink and black salwar kameez and looks angelic with her long hair, perfect curves and Her bright eyes full of dreams .

Gauri enters " are u ready astha madam. Hope the function doesn't get over by the time u r ready"

Astha laughs and says " lets go Gauri"

In the agnihotri mansion

Shlok is all ready to leave. Varad comes to him and asks him if he can join him. Shlok agrees

Varad talks to himself " I need to be in ur good books bro and do my work slowly"

Varad is a complete creep.

At the college

Astha is ready with her garland at the enterance and is so nervous.

The car arrives. And shlok gets out of it. He is in his perfect self in his Black suit. Perfectly Sculpted body and black just enhancing it. His Sunglasses which he removes in style and gives a stare to all around.

Astha's heart beat starts to increase as Shlok approaches near her. And she comes in front of him and offers him the garland. Surprisingly he doesn't accept it. He takes it from her hand and gives it to his secretary.

Varad lowers his head for the garland to anjali. Anjali is Astha's best friend. Anjali smiles and puts the garland to varad.

Varad speaking to himself " wow nice babes. I wish to have someone for tonight. This garland gal seems good" Varad being his typical himself started hunting the girls he saw. Complete jerk.

At the function

The principal gives a welcome speech and invites Shlok on the stage.

Shlok announces that the best pass out student of the college this year will get a job in Agnihotri Institution as a manager.

Astha challenges herself and tells Gauri " Gauri . I will surely get this Job. I will work hard and make sure that I am the best pass out student."


Edited by namratavyas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is very interesting so far.
Its so different in the sense that Aastha doesn't dislike Shlok in this one. She actually wants to be with him.
Continue soon!
Edited by Allyson - 11 years ago
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Very interesting story!!!
Plzz do continue!!!
Thanks for shring it!!
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Very nice ff...astha is a go getter here...shlok...waiting to know him

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