Astha Shlok FF -IPK-EPB - WILL LOVE HAPPEN??LAST PART updated- page 69 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Nice part.
Big scandal ia going on in the college and hia brother is involved in this.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 8

Shlok and astha are lying in their bed and thinking about eachother and the time they spent..

Shlok keeps remembering astha.. her pure beauty, sincerity and child like innocence. He asks himself if it was really what he wanted in life.. he never wanted a girl in his life. He saw his mother and his step mother and all left a deep scare in his life. But will she win him back. His trust back? Was he right in judging someone this time in his life. Shlok tells himself that he will tell astha how special she is. May be father was right, marriage will change things in my life.

Just then NA enters " son I have some work with u "

Shlok says " yes dad. Wat do I need to do"

NA politely asks " could u go to delhi tomorrow? There is land deal and I am unable to visit. If u could go early morning and u could return by evening. I know u have a lot of work as the event is in 2 days but.."

Shlok obediently " no father..there is nothing more important than ur work. I will go tomorrow morning itself. I will ask my manager to book my flight tickets now itself"

NA smiles and leaves.

Shlok tells himself that when he is back he will ask astha for marriage. He wants to call her but its too late..

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Astha keeps thinking about shlok and sees her album she made with shloks pictures.. It was dream come true. She said to herself " I will tell shlok my feelings for him. Am sure he loves me too"

Astha smiling to herself. Suddenly she remembers the incident

"I need to talk to shlok about the college incident. Its very important."

Then she ponders " but I don't know the whole thing. I don't even know who they are. What will I tell him? I need to find that girl who I met in the college"

Then she thinks " I don't know her name even".. Then she remembers the girl who died.

" I think I should visit their house. Her mom might be able to help me. Yes that's the right thing to do. Visiting college is dangerous now"

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Next morning Astha visits the house of the dead girl. Her mother opens the door.

Astha asks her " hi aunty. Do u remember me I met u at the hospital. I need to talk to u"

Her mother lets her enter " what do u need now?"

Astha consoles her " aunty I want to know what exactly happened with ur daughter. U need to help me please. I think not only ur daughter but a lot of other girls are in trouble too"

Her mother says " no dear she never told me what had happened. She always hid things from her father and me. I knew something was troubling her badly. She was in some problem."

Astha asks her if she could see her room and things. Her mother obliges

Astha in the girls room. She sees all her things and books. Suddenly she sees there is a small book in her bag.

Astha takes it starts reading. Astha is turns totally pale. She gets terrified by what she read.

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Astha starts calling Shlok.. Shlok's answers her call

Astha is terrified and says " Shlok I need to tell u something very important"

Shlok " Astha I am not able to hear u properly. I am in delhi and the network is very weak here. I have come for some work and I will return in the evening. Come home and we will talk" the call gets cut

Astha goes to the office and is very restless. She asks shloks manager " what time is his return flight?"

The manager says " he will reach by 9 astha. Whats the matter?"

Astha is totally impatient.

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Astha keeps looking at the time. Its 10pm now.. astha reaches agnihotri mansion

Astha hurriedly runs into the house. She keeps calling shlok shlok and reaches his room.

Its dark and shlok is sitting there. Astha tells " Shlok I need to tell u something important."

" the college girls death is not an incident. She was murdered. And a lot of girls are in trouble. They are drugging sme girls in the hostel and making blue films with the help of their unconsciusness . then they are using the movie they made to blackmail and harass them and make them sleep with many men. And I don't know how u will believe me but ur brother and father are running this whole thing"

Shlok suddenly gets up and says " relax astha. Don't worry. I cant understand what u are saying. First come here to me"

Astha is very tensed. So she goes forward and hugs shlok and closes her eyes and tears flow out of her eyes..

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Shlok gets into the house and sees his servant. He asks him " did astha come?"

The servant replies " she came here long back sir. She is in ur room"

Shlok starts walking to his room..

He reaches his room which is poorly lit. He sees Astha...

Shlok frowns his forhead and sees... Astha is in Varad's arms..

Shlok cannot believe it.. He starts to fume.. But he turns back.. there is anger and tear in his eyes.. he sees them once again and cannot believe that his trust on a woman is broken once again

Shlok just walks away

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The lights come on.. Astha opens her eyes and is shocked

" Varad !!!"

Varad smirks and says " yes darling its me" and tries to hold astha

Astha pushes away his hands. She is very nervous and starts looking for shlok. But she cant find him anywhere.

Astha gets scared seeing varad and remembering all that she said..

She runs away from the house

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Varad says " Don't worry. Everything is in my control. That girl Astha cant spoil anything. And shlok will never come to know of anything"

"very good my son" NIRANJAN AGNIHOTRI says with a big smirk on his face

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did u like it guys.. next part will have some dhamaka.. Ashlok's story has many hurdles to go.. 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: -babyblue-

Nice update ..

Pls add me in ur PM list..😊
Waiting for the next update ..

thanks dear.. just my first try.. hopefully i will do justice
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Aaah major heart break for Shlok! Plz fix it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ArVi-licious

Aaah major heart break for Shlok! Plz fix it soon


soon soon.. if no hate then no love 😉.. trust me u will enjoy the coming up parts.. redemption also is there
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Omg I feel sorry for both Astha and Shlok, now Astha will find it hard to convince Shlok, hope she succeeds, can't wait to read your next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What an update dear?Superb!!!!
Loved it!!!U have written very intrestingly!!!
Plz do continue and thanks for sharing!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
This story is getting more interesting ...so Niranjan is the real villain of the story ...🤢 I hate Varad ...😡 OMG .. Shlok misunderstood about Astha n Varad.. Poor Astha ...
it was a great update ..waiting eagerly for next one ..
Thanks for the PM ..🤗 loved it ..😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: namratavyas



soon soon.. if no hate then no love😉.. trust me u will enjoy the coming up parts.. redemption also is there


thanks namrata, u r doing a fab job 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
OMG Niranjan is such a crap.
I just hope everything will be fine very soon.

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