Astha Shlok FF -IPK-EPB - WILL LOVE HAPPEN??LAST PART updated- page 69 - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: geneliataarey

amaazin update...👏👏👏

oh I soo love vn shlok gets worried 4 astha ...haaayee...
woohoo... goin out... spending time alone...😃😆
oh I wish varad again tries to kill astha... n thn shlok ol crying 4 her... I know I know im mad!!😆
please update sooon!!!😳


next update on the way... need to think a lot...i want to make it exciting for all readers.. anyways small spoiler.. Shlok is going to hurt astha very bad very soon to revenge.. so that u all can get a god redemption too.. ok interesting na,, well enjoy and give me some time so that i can type as fast as i can
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow.. amazing
HOLIDAY...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update... this varad is just too much...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 16

Its been a day and Shlok hasn't spoken to Astha.. Astha is confused with his behaviour.. He dint hurt her or dint tell her to do anything

Kalindi has recovered from the hospital and is discharged to go home..

Its morning and Astha hasn't seen Shlok since she woke up.. Astha keeps looking for him.. Suddenly shlok arrives from somewhere..

He looks at astha and then grabs her hand " lets go.."

Astha is confused " Where?? Wait relax.. u r hurting me"

Shlok puts Astha in the car and starts to drive.. Astha keeps looking out of the window to see where they are going.. they are going towards Astha's house..

Astha keeps seeing as the car stops in front of her house

Astha is confused and asks " here?"

Shlok looks at astha and starts walking towards her house door..

Both are standing in front of the door and knock

Suddely the door is opened by Astha's father.. Astha is shocked " papa.. u r here? " Astha hugs him in tears..

Astha's father fumes " where the hell were u astha? U left ur mom and went off.. and y is this Shlok with u?"

Astha is scared" Dad please let me explain to u.."

Suddenly shlok interrupts " my dear father in law.. let me explain to u.. think that ur daughter has paid me for ur bail from prison by marrying me"

Astha is in tears.."dad let me explain.."

Shlok interrupts " no astha.. u don't need to expain anything.. I brought u here to show u that ur father is free from the prison for now and ur mother at home too.. Mr.Kirloskar I think u must just bless ur daughter and let us go for now.. '

Astha's dad hold Shlok " what the hell are u talking.. how dare u marry my daughter"

Astha in tears " dad its true we married..or else u would have been in prison always.. Shlok has got ur bail done.."

Shlok grabs astha and starts walking out of the house.. Astha's father is unable to control himself in tears..

Astha walks back to her dad " dad please forgive me... I dint have a choice.. everything will be alright.. I will make sure everything is alright"

Shlok screams "astha..."

Astha frees her hand from her fathers hand and in tears walks away..

She keeps looking at the door as her father stands at the door and sees her go away with shlok..

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Astha and shlok reach home.. Astha is still in tears thinking of her dad..

" y did u do this shlok.. u had no right to talk to my father like this" astha questioned

" i don't need to answer u anything astha.. just get ready.. pack ur bags and we are leaving.. I think as of now u have to be happy that ur dad is at home with ur mother and not struggling in the prison.. for what all u have done I haven't even given u a scratch of pain..." shlok looks at her in anger

" but where are we going?" astha questions

" just pack up.. u will know soon" shlok says and leaves

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Astha is ready the next morning with her luggage and they both get into the car and leave

" where are we going shlok?" inquires astha

"Lonavla.. shlok replies

Astha keeps thinking about her parents and shloks behaviour and is upset.. she keeps looking out of the window with a tears in her eyes..

Later in the day they reach a good resort in lonavla..

They reach the reception " good evening Mr. Agnihotri" welcomes the receptionist " welcome to Mountain valley resort.. all the arrangements as per ur instructions is ready sir.."

The receptionist hands over the suite keys to shlok and they are escorted to the room.,,

Astha looks at the room its big beautiful and has good scenic view too

" why are we here shlok?" astha questions

" we got married astha.. honeymoon is necessary isn't it?"

Shlok pulls astha to his arms ..

Astha feels uncomfortable

" u dint even thank me astha.. I got ur father out of the prison.." shlok says and pushes astha away.. and leaves the room

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Varad come to know that astha and shlok have left to lonavala..

Varad meets some guy and hands over a big bundle of money to himand says " all the work should be done today ok"

The guy nods and takes the money and leaves

Varad smirks and says to himself " Shlok and Astha.. today is the end of ur story.. when Varad needs something.. he will make sure he gets it.."

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Astha is sitting in her room for a long time... Shlok never returned

Worried Astha keeps looking out of the window and door to see where is shlok

Astha locks her room and walks out of the room and reaches the reception

" excuse me.. have u seen my husband Shlok Agnihotri is his name"

The receptionist says "no madam sorry.. we dint see him"

Astha worriedly starts walking around and reaches the gate..

in the mean time Shlok is sitting in the bar and having a drink..he keeps thinking of all that happened in the past few day.. Astha drenched and waiting for him in rain..and then when she was sick.. and keeps drinking...

Astha walks out of the hotel main gate and looks around

Shlok just walks out of the bar and starts walking to the room.. suddenly he turns back to see astha standing out of the gate and looking out for something

Shlok starts walking towards her and is having a confused look..

Just then some people enter the road in a car ..

Astha looks at shlok and smiles to have found him... just then one of the guys grabs astha from the back closing her mouth and dragging her into the car...

Shlok looks shocked and starts running screaming "astha... astha.."

Shlok starts running towards the car as the guys drag astha into the car and drive away..

Shlok runs fast and gets into his car and start following them.. He keeps screaming from the car "Astha Astha..'

Astha is being held by 2 guys in the car and one guy is covering her mouth.. Astha is trying to push away the guys and she is kicking her hands hand lefs in air to free herself.. suddenly the guy's hand moves away from her mouth and she starts to cry and scream " Shlok.. Shlok save me.. who are u guys? Please leave me"

The guys drive far away to a old godown and drag astha inside and push her down on the floor... Astha is worried and in tears " who are u guys.. what do u want.. please let me go" astha folds her hands and pleads

Shlok drives to the place and starts searching for astha... suddenly one guy holds a gun on shloks head ..

The guys bring shlok also to the place and pushes him down with astha.. " sir this is the other one.. Shlok agnihotri.." the bad guy smirks

" cool.. so we have both of them..hahahah"

One of the guys grabs astha and takes her away to molest her... the other hold shlok so that he doesn't get away..

Shlok sees astha being taken away and starts to scream on the guys to leave her " leave astha.. u better don't touch her even"

The guy takes astha and takes a rope and starts to strangle her neck.. Astha starts to struggle to breathe

Shlok struggles hard and finally manages to kick away one of the guys.. he takes his gun and shoots the guy on his leg... he starts beating up the other guy very badly till he is half dead.. then he runs to save astha..

He pulls away the guy who was strangling astha and pushes him away..

Astha starts coughing and falls down as she was almost killed.. she is in a bad condition

Shlok beats the guy real hard and then points the gun on his head... " how dare u even try to hurt my wife?"

The guys get scared and run away... Shlok sees that they all ran away... and then drops the gun down..

He looks at astha.. She is bit hurt on her forehead but she is fine

Shlok goes and holds astha and hugs her tightly.. Astha is confused but then she hugs him back.. both share a passionate hug in distress..

" Are u alright? I was scared..." says shlok in tears.. " Am alright shlok" astha replies in tears too..

Suddenly shlok gets into senses and moves away from astha and says "lets go"

Astha is shocked by his behaviour change " no shlok.. I need my answers today.." astha says very strictly

" y did u save me? Y do u address me as ur wife.. when u mean nothing of this relation.. y u worried for me.. and ur tears they are not a lie either"

Shlok starts walking away.. Astha holds his hand " I need ur answers shlok

Shlok gets irritated " what do u want to know astha.. its true that I was worried for u.. i cant see u hurt... what else do u want to know"

"y shlok? Y cant u see me hurt?why are u worried for me.. what do I mean to u?"

" I care for u astha.. because... I LOVE U.." shlok says with tears in his eyes

Astha is in tears " what?"

" I know astha u wont believe me.. but trust me I really LOVE U.. u mean the world to me.. whatever I did to u please forgive me.."

Shlok goes and hugs astha.. He cups astha's face and asks " do u forgive me astha.. I will correct everything.. ur dad will never be convicted.. ur mother I will make sure she gets treated by the best doctor and everything will be fine.. our relationship started in a wrong note.. but now it will be a right one.. a true one"

Astha's tears roll down.. she feels convinced by shloks break down and shakes her head in agreement... " are u saying the truth shlok"

" trust me astha.." Shlok says in tears and hugs astha

" I love u shlok.. I always loved u.. I knew u will understand me soon.. I really love u shlok.. please I want my old shlok back"

Shlok says " please just be with me always astha..." hugging her

They hug each other for a long time.. Astha wipes of her tears and says " lets go shlok to the hotel. And we will go back tomorrow to pune and speak to our parents"

As astha starts to move away.. Shlok holds her hands and pulls her towards himself..

He slowly puts his left hand around her waist and pulls her towards himself.. he moves his other hand into astha's hair and pulls her towards him and kisses her on her lips.. Astha submits herself and kisses him back..

Astha moves back and turns away.. Shlok puts his hand around her waist and pulls her toward him.. he slowly moves away her hair and kisses her neck and ears

Steadily he takes away her earrings and puts it on the floor.. Astha closes her eyes and feels a tear rolls down her eyes..

Shlok looks at her face and wipes of that tear and carries her in his arms and takes her to a bundle of hay lying nearby and puts her on that..

Its bit dark there.. shlok lites up a small fire and takes away his shirt..

He slowly goes near astha and cups her face with one hand and takes away the other earring too.. and kisses her again..

He slowly pus her down and pulls of her sari pallu exposing her blouse.. he bends down and kisses her neck.. Astha totally submits herself to shlok.. he moves his hand over and unlocks her dori and pulls the blouse down her sleeves.. he kisses he again as they continue to make love...

They consummate and make love... A tear rolls down Astha's eyes as they climax their lovemaking... Astha and Shlok are sleeping in the hay with astha in shloks arms... they never looked so peaceful...

Its morning and they are still lying in the hay...

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Shlok opens his eyes and loks at astha and smiles... Astha just then opens her eyes too.. She says " I love u.."

Shlok smiles and says " we need to go now back to the hotel.. hope noone has stolen our things"

Astha smiles back and they both get up and leave..

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Precap : a lawyer visits Astha and hands over a letter. Astha reads it and is shocked.. J

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Posted: 11 years ago
fab update! hope its not a divorce letter! that will be just heartbreaking! thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oooh can't wait for the next update :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: neha2005

fab update! hope its not a divorce letter! that will be just heartbreaking! thanks for the pm!


i was thinking the same...😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update but why do i think Astha is being cheated?
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Posted: 11 years ago
I think shlok give her divorce papers.
You can't do this shlok...
Great update. ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: namratavyas


next update on the way... need to think a lot...i want to make it exciting for all readers.. anyways small spoiler.. Shlok is going to hurt astha very bad very soon to revenge.. so that u all can get a god redemption too.. ok interesting na,, well enjoy and give me some time so that i can type as fast as i can

UFFF...Day Dreaming I LOVE U 4 THS...😃Embarrassed
obvio intrtstng... damn intrstng!!!😉

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