Os: U ME & SHARARATEIN(based on current track)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hellooo guys...
this is my first os...
it is for all my AT ki pagalpanti toli... yeh unki demand pe hai..
dis was just started for time pass but sab ne bahot force kiya to make an os on dis so here it is for all my AT members..
Situation given by My partner in crime Vishu.. so here u go...

SWARON OS: U ME AND SHARARATEIN

Situation: This os is based on current track.. As we saw in the precap the last shot swaron rain dance n here is my imagination of what happens after the dAnce..

After a romantic rain dance swayam picks sharon in her arms...
sharon feels shy and is blushing..
she rests her head on swayams chest..
swayam holds her tightly and kisses on her forehead..
sharon closes her eyes and blushes her cheeks turn red...

swayam: tum itni lal kyun ho rahi ho sharon..
sharon: *blushing more and feeling shy*


swayam: oh ho meri siren ko sharam aa rahi hai hmmm hmmm * teasing her*
sharon: swayam pls stop it.. and hids her face in his chest...
swayam: tumhe chedna mera haq hai my luv..
sharon: smiles
swayam: thank u sharon meri wishes ko puri karne ke liye meri life mein aane ke liye n mujhe apna banane ke liye..

sharon: no swayam thank u toh mujhe tumhe bolna chahiye tumne mujhe har roz itna spl feel karwate ho jaisa koi nahi karwa sakta.. tum mujhe itna pyar karte ho jaise koi nahi kar sakta..
tum hamesha mere sath the even tab jab mein tumse sirf jagda karti thi.. thank u thank u so much..
ab meri chance hai tumhare liye kuch karne ki mein forever tumhari har wish ko pura karungi..

swayam: blushing hearing sharons last line about his wishes..
sharon: aye hayeee ab tum itna lal kyun ho rahe ho..
swayam: looks in her eyes and says I LUV U SHARON
sharon: I LUV U TOO... swayam mein jab tumhare sath hoti hun toh i feel out of dis world.. sab kuch bhul ke mein baas tumhare sath tumhari bahon mein rehna chahti hun.. i feel like i ve got d whole world being in ur arms* eye lock*

sharon: tumhare sath bitaya hua har min har sec mere life ka best best time hai.. aaj tak main iss feeling se itna door thi aur tumhe bhi isse door rakha am sorry swayam..
swyam: * keeps his finger on her lips*
baas sharon ab aur nahi... lets enjoy the moment being wid each other..

*sharon smiles and nods a yes and both get lost in each others eyes*
* sharon still in swayams arms hugs him tightly and rests on his chest and swayam enjoying d moment living the moment to the fullest of having the luv of his life in his arms so close to him*

silence everywhere just two people madly in love with each other lost in each others eyes walking on silent roads..
Swayam still carrying sharon in his arms..
Suddenly swayam shouts loud*

Swayam: oooucchhh
*and he puts sharon down and she is now standing on the road..
Sharon: bursts out of laughter
*sharon had pinched him hard in masti*
Swayam: sharon tum tum bahot naughty ho
Sharon: *pretending as if she does not know Wat happened* Kya hua maine Kya kiya eh..
Swayam: tumhe Nahi pata tumne Kya kiya
Sharon: Nahi *winks at swayam*
Swayam: ruko abhi batata hun tumhe *winks*
Sharon: swayam no no..
*sharon starts running on the road and swayam runs behind him*
*Both laughing and enjoying swayam trying to catch sharon*
*finally he catches hold off her*
Swayam holds her hand pulls her near.. Sharon lands on him while she is facing in front and swayam is behind..
Swayam is holding sharon from back by her waist..
Swayam: hmmm so finally tum pakad mein aa hee gayi
Sharon: hmmm
Swayam: toh batao itna haas Kyun rahi thi.. My pain is ur laughter hmmm
Sharon: oh pls woh toh mein baas..
Swayam: baas Kya??
Sharon: Bahot silence ho gaya tha toh baas wahi tod rahi thi..
Swayam: wow my love Kya tareeka hai silence todne ka
Sharon: haan yeh SRP ka style hai
*both start laughing*

Swayam: so miss SRP aapko is shararat ke liye compensation dena padega
Sharon: *shocked* WAT?? compensation
Swayam: yes compensation my love..
Sharon: no ways no compensation ya Kuch chalo ghar
Swayam: ghar Nahi bina compensation liye mein kahin Nahi ja raha*acts as if angry*
Sharon: swayam pls chalo na road pe Kyun zid kar rahe ho
Swayam: *gusse mein* nahi miss SRP mujhe compensation abhi isi waqt yahin chahiye..
Sharon: *thinkin in mind* oh god ab Kya karu swayam toh gussa ho gaye hai..
Swayam: itna Kya soch rahi ho compensation chahiye toh chahiye warna mein yahan se hilne bhi Nahi wala
Sharon: ok 5n bolo Kya compensation chahiye
Swayam: gives a naughty smile
Sharon: *confused* aisee Kyun hass rahe ho Wats cooking in ur mind
Swayam: silently still smiling and winks
Sharon: batao toh
Swayam: silent and with his hand points towards his forehead
Sharon: *blushes*
Swayam: raises his eyebrow and isharo mein tells her to kiss him on his forehead..
Sharon: goes close to him cups his face and kisses him on his forehead..
Sharon: hmmm ab khush mil gaya compensation..
Swayam: oh no no my sweetheart itne saste mein thodi na chodunga..
Sharon: huh ab Aur Kya. .
Swayam: points towards his left cheek
Sharon: no ways swayam yeh road hai koi bhi aa sakta hai..
Swayam: raat ko itna late khali road pe koi Nahi aayega
Sharon: hmmm *thinkin of Wat to do now* ok close ur eyes..
Swayam: Kyun
Sharon: compensation chahiye ya Nahi.. Chahiye toh close ur eyes Nahi toh chalo lets go
Swayam: Nahi Nahi ruko karta hun *closes his eyes*
Sharon: slowly goes near him and kisses his left cheek
Swayam: * smiles widely while his eyes are closed*
Sharon: *gets back den goes close to him again n kisses his right cheek also*
Swayam: *shocked n den a wide smile appears on his lips*
Sharon: hugs him tightly
Swayam: opens his eyes n hugs her back tightly.. ahem ahem one plus one free free free wow i love dis offer..
Sharon: smiling n blushing n hugs him even tighter..

Suddenly sharon breaks the hug n moves far from swayam maintaining distance from him..
Swayam is shocked with this action of her.s..
Sharon: sharon rai prakash se compensation hmmm Mr swayam shekawat tumhe abhi maza chakati hun..
*sharon shows off as if she is upset n angry with Wat ever happened..
Swayam: oh god yeh Kya kar diya maine kahin too much toh demand Nahi kar liya.. Sharon suddenly itni upset..

Seeing her upset and dull Swayam thought shayad it was more than the needed and got scared.. It was last thing in his life to upset his love and there she was moving with him quitely without even uttering a word.. He moved towards her but she distant herself.. Swayam was trying to find ways to bring back smile to her face..
He saw a small plant on the road side and plucked a flower and came back running and gave it to her.. She took it silently... She was looking at him from corner of her eyes and was very hardly controlling her laughter.. On the other hand Swayam was again on the mission Sharon Manao.. He then played Pehla Nasha on his phone and asked Sharon again for a dance enacting a dance step.. Instead of taking his hand Sharon took his phone and stopped the music..
sharon thinking in her mind..

Sharon: aye hayee bechara mera majnu kitna tension mein aa gaya hai and itna hard try kar raha hai mujhe manane ki oh am loving it.. Thoda Aur maza lete hai..

She then gestured him to move aside and he does and she started walking again..he was walking behind her and she was smiling and enjoying.. He then came forward running and held his both ears and started doing sit ups.. She was about to laugh but somehow controlled herself and gave him a deadly glare..
He looked at her that look and froze in that position only and then slowly slowly he got up and asked her to move forward " after you" "whatever" she muttered and stepped forward.. They finally reached her house and it was time for her to leave.. She went up till d door turned around to look at him and found him staring on the floor with the amount of saddness in his eyes and dull face.. She felt bad for teasing him for so long so she thought "ab actuall compensation ka time aa gaya hai"

She ran towards him much to his shock and pecked his lips and went inside without even a drop of courage to look at him and he who wasnt in a position to judge what just happened kept looking at his running love..
She straight went to her room and looked out of the window to find him standing in the same position.. She chuckled.. She had left a blushing n ecstatic swayam behind.. He after sometime realized the actual incident and started jumping and dancing... She was looking at him with blushing laughing and adoring at the same time... He went back jumping and dancing in joy...


so guys how was it.. please do like and leave your comments if u liked..
and agar os bura laga toh jutte chappal all are welxome but woh sab mere friends ko marna unhone hee force kiya to post it😉😆😆

PS: Big big thank u to Deepu di n sakshi my behna.. aap dono ne mujhe bahot bahot bahot zyada help kiya.. without aap dono ki help i would not be able to complete this os at all... thank u both for helping me with the ending and with the title😊
And very big thank u to all my AT friends for giving me the confidence to post it..
swaron u all🤗
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Swthrt...🤗

Ur very 1st OS ...its adorable ...i am so glad that finally u are writing...ur love for SwaRon is completely visible..its like a dream every SwaRonian wants to come true ...SwaRon blissfully together ..in each others embrace...

Those sweet moments of love...his loving touch over her forehead ...expressing his selfless love for her ...the compensation kiss...the sweet and adorable young love...teasing each other ...enjoying her blush...teasing his state of embarrassment ...the fake anger...the majnu boy desperate to manaofy his siren sharon...that sweet peck on his lips marking good night ...nothing is more beautiful than showering ur love for ur beloved and knowing the fact he love u with same intensity...lovely OS swthrt...so SwaRonish ..so blissful ..

Amazingly written...u kept the innocence and love of our magical SwaRon intact ...do write more..

Love
Deepika


My behna 🤗

Love you loads first for attempting this os.. I love all my AT ke pantars.. Thank you guys for finally bringing out a writer out of my sister and I am really proud of her and you all.. Special love to vishu... Vishu my dear tu na hoti to ye nikammi kabhi kucch na sochti.. See what we've got, an awesome.piece of work.. Deep Di you are a true rockstar and your title suits you 100000% ... The best writer with the best ideas ever...

Now coming to the OS ... Omg how sweet was the lover boy and his love.. So adorable to see them together..
Majnu teasing to see her blush.. And Sharon opening upto him was.so needed.. Their heart talks were so adorable...they say na even silence speaks when love is in the air.. Naughty Sharon pinching him and Swayam asking for.compensation was so sweet.. The khatte meethe pal so required in a relationship... And that ek ke sath ek free wala portion was truly blush.blush type... Aww I so loved it.. And then the idea of Sharon teasing him and he manaofying was cherry on the cake and then the expression of love... I landed into swaronland... Thanks to you for this wonderful piece of work..
I'll not spare you now ... You'll have to write more and more such os's... Kyun guys???

Lots of love
Behna (Sakshi)

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shilpuuu🤗...my sweety pie🤗... first of alll a big hug for dis OS🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 ...its fantastic👏
i loved it to the coreee👏🤗
i m out of words reallyyy...OMG pleasee continueee writing u r an awesome writer👏👏👏 yaarr...seriouslyyy...this is ur first OS u nailed it,,,,touchwood i say...⭐️

and comming to OS😃
i loved each and every thing😳
sharon shyness...she hugging him tightlyy❤️...swayam demanding her for kisses😈...pehla nasha...everything is awesomeee ... and sharon teasing him😆

hmmm and lasttt my fav fav fav scene is...sharon gave kiss on his lips and went offf...that was supper romantic and awesomeee...i really loved it and swayams reaction after it sooo suited to swayams charecter...THANK uuu sooo much for dis OS yaar loved it sooo m uch...i enjoyed reading each and every lineee if it🤗

P.S
i want dis to happen in the sequence alsooo😃😃
thanks vishu making her to start dis😳
and thanks to deepu diii and snehaa😃
Edited by Hello_Vrushaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OH MY GOD DII YOU WROTE IT
YAYYY🥳
DIII🤗
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
IT WAS MESMERIZING.SUCH AN ADORABLE PIECE
SWARON WERE SO ADORABLE IN THIS
LOVED THE FOREHEAD KISS IN THE BEGINNING.THE WAY THEY EXPRESSED THEIR FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER WAS JUST AWESOME TO READ AND BEAUTIFULLY PENNED DOWN.THE WHOLE TEASING PART WAS UBER CUTE..
LOVED THE PINCHING AND THEN COMPENSATION.WAAH SWAYAM KI LOTTERY EK KISS KE SAATH EK FREE.
SHARON NE SWAYAM KI BAND BAJAA DI ITNI ACCHE GUSSE KI ACTING POOR SWAYAM BECHAARA MANAA MANAA KE THAK GAYA.LOVED THE ENDING HAAYE SHE KISSED HIM AND THEN RAN AWAY AND HE STOOD LIKE A STATUE TOO SHOCKED TO MOVE.FINALLY JAB MAJNU KO HOSH AAYA TO THE JUMPING AND DANCING PART WAS SO SWAYAM.LOVED HOW YOU INCLUDED PEHLA NASHAA TOO.
DIII SUPER AWERSOME THA YE TO AB TO AAP KO AUR LIKHNA PADEGA PAKKA WARNA MAI AAPKA DIMAAG KHA JAUNGI😈
HAAYE THIS WAS AWESOMEEE👏👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by cenation123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres

Shilpu yeh OS sach mein tu hi likhi kya... someone please pinch me...

it was such a cute and romantic OS dear...loved the way how you penned it down...

sharon teasing swayam, their compensations everything was so cute...

One + one free free free line reminded me of the interest wala scene of swaron...

the OS is so swaron - ish ...

loved it to the core...

please do write more...
Edited by swathi_swaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg shilpu u finaly post it..!!!
meri taraf se tight waala hug
🤗

i have told u na u amazing writter...u surely have to write more by nw...and dont warry by nw i have bunches of situation...:-P your first attempt nailed it...with this brillent piece of work i love it frm core of my heart
nicely presented on current situation...and the way u presented in realistic manner...

By the way u have awesom flow of write up...i love swaron compensiated moment and over that sharon naughtyness... Very cutely descripd...with romantic and intense way...

Love it.



Edited by Vishaka45 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg.
shilpa..chupi rustum..
u write so well..😊
it was lovely os..n i loved ur title..its superb..
i sooo hope v get such type of scene aftr d rain dance😊
keep writing more shilpa..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres
OMG shilpa
it was so damn amazing
u beautyfull write ths os in begning.
and it continued till the end
main toh bus bluh hi kare ja rahi
thi

so well written

lovely
so romantic
so simple
yet so beautifull.

U r an amging writer shilpa.
Ab mughe bhe tere se ek aur os chaheye.
Tune vishu ke khane pe likha.
Ab mere lia likh ni to
Edited by swaron9113 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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shilpa di
ap bohut acha lika thi ho di
it was beautiful , amazing n romantic
loved it
aaye blushing swayam n sharon
m mar jawa
pls do write more di

vishu di ty ase hi di se aur story lika wana 😉



Edited by kitty_swaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres

OMG shilpa di
it was so damn amazing
starting main hi i was in 9th heaven
and it continued till the end

main toh bus bluh hi kare ja rahi thi
it was like swayam was talking to me [:">}
so well written
ur an amazing writer
ab toh mujhe aap ki taraf se aur bhi OS's chahiye...

lovely
so romantic
so simple
yet so beautiful

thanks for the PM
loved it
i feel lucky to come to the AT 😳
please do write more

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