Os: U ME & SHARARATEIN(based on current track) - Page 5

Originally posted by: trisha19

really cute os!!

great work..👏

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

veryy nic os

Originally posted by: Sanskruti_tanha

unres

supa adorabaly cute di , i liked it soo much , aaye blushing swayam , hayye blushing sharon . so sweet 😃 loved it to the core .

Originally posted by: devlishswaron77

Wow shilpa it was beautiful OS...Swayam blushing & all, & their leg pulling & all were so cute...In short paisa vasool OS...loved it!!!!!

Originally posted by: -Suni-

Beautiful updt dear...lovd it...thnx for d PM

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

Hey Swthrt...🤗

Ur very 1st OS ...its adorable ...i am so glad that finally u are writing...ur love for SwaRon is completely visible..its like a dream every SwaRonian wants to come true ...SwaRon blissfully together ..in each others embrace...

Those sweet moments of love...his loving touch over her forehead ...expressing his selfless love for her ...the compensation kiss...the sweet and adorable young love...teasing each other ...enjoying her blush...teasing his state of embarrassment ...the fake anger...the majnu boy desperate to manaofy his siren sharon...that sweet peck on his lips marking good night ...nothing is more beautiful than showering ur love for ur beloved and knowing the fact he love u with same intensity...lovely OS swthrt...so SwaRonish ..so blissful ..

Amazingly written...u kept the innocence and love of our magical SwaRon intact ...do write more..

Love

Deepika

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

My behna 🤗

Love you loads first for attempting this os.. I love all my AT ke pantars.. Thank you guys for finally bringing out a writer out of my sister and I am really proud of her and you all.. Special love to vishu... Vishu my dear tu na hoti to ye nikammi kabhi kucch na sochti.. See what we've got, an awesome.piece of work.. Deep Di you are a true rockstar and your title suits you 100000% ... The best writer with the best ideas ever...

Now coming to the OS ... Omg how sweet was the lover boy and his love.. So adorable to see them together..
Majnu teasing to see her blush.. And Sharon opening upto him was.so needed.. Their heart talks were so adorable...they say na even silence speaks when love is in the air.. Naughty Sharon pinching him and Swayam asking for.compensation was so sweet.. The khatte meethe pal so required in a relationship... And that ek ke sath ek free wala portion was truly blush.blush type... Aww I so loved it.. And then the idea of Sharon teasing him and he manaofying was cherry on the cake and then the expression of love... I landed into swaronland... Thanks to you for this wonderful piece of work..
I'll not spare you now ... You'll have to write more and more such os's... Kyun guys???

Lots of love
Behna (Sakshi)

Omg Shilpu! 😲
Kya likha hai tu ne?! I'm pleasantly surprised wid dis. Lagta nahi ki tera pehla waala OS hai.. Current track pe likhne meon mujhse competition aa gayi ai tu 😆
I liked how you showed d naughty Sharon n Swayam n is is d best compensation ever 😳
Waise ek baat samajh mein nahi aaya tera.. Agar Swayam usse utha kar rakha hai apne dono haathon se toh woh usse chup karane ke liye fingers uske muh pe kaise lagata 😕🤣

I loved d OS shishya!! And I liked d surprise!!

Originally posted by: swaron9113

res

unres
OMG shilpa
it was so damn amazing
u beautyfull write ths os in begning.
and it continued till the end
main toh bus bluh hi kare ja rahi
thi

so well written

lovely
so romantic
so simple
yet so beautifull.

U r an amging writer shilpa.
Ab mughe bhe tere se ek aur os chaheye.
Tune vishu ke khane pe likha.
Ab mere lia likh ni to

Thanks a lot s1. . N Vishu ne baas situation diya Aur hum time pass kar rahe the but complete n post sab ke kehne pe kiya hai sab ne bahot force kiya isiliye post kiya hai..
Am glad u liked it.. Thanks a lot for dat lovely comment 😊