Os: U ME & SHARARATEIN(based on current track) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Sanskruti_tanha

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Wow shilpa it was beautiful OS...Swayam blushing & all, & their leg pulling & all were so cute...In short paisa vasool OS...loved it!!!!!

Beautiful updt dear...lovd it...thnx for d PM

Originally posted by: Hello_Vrushaan

Shilpuuu🤗...my sweety pie🤗... first of alll a big hug for dis OS🤗 ...its fantastic👏

i loved it to the coreee👏🤗

i m out of words reallyyy...OMG pleasee continueee writing u r an awesome writer👏👏👏 yaarr...seriouslyyy...this is ur first OS u nailed it,,,,touchwood i say...⭐️

and comming to OS😃

i loved each and every thing😳

sharon shyness...she hugging him tightlyy❤️...swayam demanding her for kisses😈...pehla nasha...everything is awesomeee ... and sharon teasing him😆

hmmm and lasttt my fav fav fav scene is...sharon gave kiss on his lips and went offf...that was supper romantic and awesomeee...i really loved it and swayams reaction after it sooo suited to swayams charecter...THANK uuu sooo much for dis OS yaar loved it sooo m uch...i enjoyed reading each and every lineee if it🤗

P.S

i want dis to happen in the sequence alsooo😃😃

thanks vishu making her to start dis😳

and thanks to deepu diii and snehaa😃

Originally posted by: cenation123

OH MY GOD DII YOU WROTE IT
YAYYY🥳
DIII🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
IT WAS MESMERIZING.SUCH AN ADORABLE PIECE
SWARON WERE SO ADORABLE IN THIS
LOVED THE FOREHEAD KISS IN THE BEGINNING.THE WAY THEY EXPRESSED THEIR FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER WAS JUST AWESOME TO READ AND BEAUTIFULLY PENNED DOWN.THE WHOLE TEASING PART WAS UBER CUTE..
LOVED THE PINCHING AND THEN COMPENSATION.WAAH SWAYAM KI LOTTERY EK KISS KE SAATH EK FREE.
SHARON NE SWAYAM KI BAND BAJAA DI ITNI ACCHE GUSSE KI ACTING POOR SWAYAM BECHAARA MANAA MANAA KE THAK GAYA.LOVED THE ENDING HAAYE SHE KISSED HIM AND THEN RAN AWAY AND HE STOOD LIKE A STATUE TOO SHOCKED TO MOVE.FINALLY JAB MAJNU KO HOSH AAYA TO THE JUMPING AND DANCING PART WAS SO SWAYAM.LOVED HOW YOU INCLUDED PEHLA NASHAA TOO.
DIII SUPER AWERSOME THA YE TO AB TO AAP KO AUR LIKHNA PADEGA PAKKA WARNA MAI AAPKA DIMAAG KHA JAUNGI😈
HAAYE THIS WAS AWESOMEEE👏

Originally posted by: swathi_swaron

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Shilpu yeh OS sach mein tu hi likhi kya... someone please pinch me...

it was such a cute and romantic OS dear...loved the way how you penned it down...

sharon teasing swayam, their compensations everything was so cute...

One + one free free free line reminded me of the interest wala scene of swaron...

the OS is so swaron - ish ...

loved it to the core...

please do write more...

Originally posted by: Vishaka45

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omg shilpu u finaly post it..!!!
meri taraf se tight waala hug 🤗

i have told u na u amazing writter...u surely have to write more by nw...and dont warry by nw i have bunches of situation...:-P your first attempt nailed it...with this brillent piece of work i love it frm core of my heart
nicely presented on current situation...and the way u presented in realistic manner...

By the way u have awesom flow of write up...i love swaron compensiated moment and over that sharon naughtyness... Very cutely descripd...with romantic and intense way...

Love it.

Originally posted by: pooja123456

wow...
lovely and cute os

Originally posted by: cscs

omg.

shilpa..chupi rustum..

u write so well..😊

it was lovely os..n i loved ur title..its superb..

i sooo hope v get such type of scene aftr d rain dance😊

keep writing more shilpa..

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha

amazing os