Os: U ME & SHARARATEIN(based on current track) - Page 4

Originally posted by: -spongy-

res

unres

OMG shilpa di

it was so damn amazing

starting main hi i was in 9th heaven

and it continued till the end

main toh bus bluh hi kare ja rahi thi

it was like swayam was talking to me [:">}

so well written

ur an amazing writer

ab toh mujhe aap ki taraf se aur bhi OS's chahiye...

lovely

so romantic

so simple

yet so beautiful

thanks for the PM

loved it

i feel lucky to come to the AT 😳

please do write more

Originally posted by: --Tanzz--

Res

*Unres*

Shilpaaa...goshhh...dear..its just Out of the world...❤️
Each and every gesture of SwaRon is too cute and Romantic...❤️
The way you put the sequences one after the other is simply outstanding...
This OS is having a different...'Mithas'...'Pyar ki mehek'...you know...this one brought a broad smile in my face...a smile of satisfaction..to see my beloved SwaRon this way...Your os made my heart bliss...I was missing these things...I am reading any work on SwaRon after months...and trust me...I think this is the best way to keep myself happy...and free of all sadness...away from everything...
Thank you for writing this piece shilpa...
really loved this...pyar bhare hugs to you for such a wonderful OS...

Originally posted by: damonTVDrocks

So romantic...😳

Originally posted by: piyu1990

lovely os shilpa

i loved each and every thing

sharon in swayam's arm, uska naughtyness ,then swayam ki demand, sharon's shyness,ek pe ek free kiss it's my fav dialog "ahem ahem one plus one free free free wow i love dis offer.."😆

sharon teasing swayam & perfect ending with kiss☺️

super duper romantic and cute

i loved it to the core

i want dis to happen in the sequence also

keep writing more shilpa..

Originally posted by: sadafarsha

Shilpu di

It was awsum amazing zabardast brilliant cute adorable

I toh just luved it alooot

Haaye kya os tha hehehehe bechara swayam kitna manane ki koshish ker raha tha and sharon was controling her laugh all the tym

Finally sharon gave a kiss and ran away

Swayam bichara confuse ho gaya ke yeh kya hua hahahahahaha

And jab usey pata chala he started dancing jumping hahahahahaha

Thait is sooo swayam i luv him alooot

Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan

Shilpu yeh tune likha h . ...tu seriously aisa bhi likh sakti h. ..I don't believed it...I was so mesmerised with the whole os I can actually picturise whole situation in front of my eyes...swayam compensation was so sweet...Sharon giving her extra kiss was so beautiful...and final surprise the kiss on lips...omg omg it was so picture perfect... I love u Re...
Do write more

P.S. i was actually missing deep kiss...and thank u to vishu who forced u to make this os...

Originally posted by: tanha29

omg omg omg!!! This was such a romantic blushy mushy OS on such a beautiful couple! The moments were lovable and super dreamy!! Lovely one shot di! Sorry im commenting from mob hence the short comment! Nice os! 😳

Originally posted by: nancynnv

At last didi aap nai OS likh hi liya...🤣

N it's too oo too too gud ...

I loved it ❤️

U write so well u should write ...n it one rocks👍🏼

Originally posted by: VruShan_SwaRon

ufff Shilpa tune toh maara daala.☺️

I dint know this will turn out to be this awesome.😲⭐️

Seriously loved this SwaRon ki natkhat sharartein.😆😆

Very good thought and very well executed.👏

Loved the way it was too descriptive.😉😳

Bas ab meri death ho gayi hai, I am in SwaRon heaven so aur nahi likh sakti.

PS:- I have sent you buddy request, so add me and Do PM me when you write another OS.🤗

Originally posted by: sanstina

Lovely Os 😊