Os: U ME & SHARARATEIN(based on current track)

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Res

*Unres*

Shilpaaa...goshhh...dear..its just Out of the world...❤️
Each and every gesture of SwaRon is too cute and Romantic...❤️
The way you put the sequences one after the other is simply outstanding...
This OS is having a different...'Mithas'...'Pyar ki mehek'...you know...this one brought a broad smile in my face...a smile of satisfaction..to see my beloved SwaRon this way...Your os made my heart bliss...I was missing these things...I am reading any work on SwaRon after months...and trust me...I think this is the best way to keep myself happy...and free of all sadness...away from everything...
Thank you for writing this piece shilpa...
really loved this...pyar bhare hugs to you for such a wonderful OS...

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

lovely os shilpa

i loved each and every thing

sharon in swayam's arm, uska naughtyness ,then swayam ki demand, sharon's shyness,ek pe ek free kiss it's my fav dialog "ahem ahem one plus one free free free wow i love dis offer.."😆

sharon teasing swayam & perfect ending with kiss☺️

super duper romantic and cute

i loved it to the core

i want dis to happen in the sequence also

keep writing more shilpa..

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Sadaf Khalid

@sadafarsha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Shilpu di

It was awsum amazing zabardast brilliant cute adorable

I toh just luved it alooot

Haaye kya os tha hehehehe bechara swayam kitna manane ki koshish ker raha tha and sharon was controling her laugh all the tym

Finally sharon gave a kiss and ran away

Swayam bichara confuse ho gaya ke yeh kya hua hahahahahaha

And jab usey pata chala he started dancing jumping hahahahahaha

Thait is sooo swayam i luv him alooot

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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Shilpu yeh tune likha h . ...tu seriously aisa bhi likh sakti h. ..I don't believed it...I was so mesmerised with the whole os I can actually picturise whole situation in front of my eyes...swayam compensation was so sweet...Sharon giving her extra kiss was so beautiful...and final surprise the kiss on lips...omg omg it was so picture perfect... I love u Re...

P.S. i was actually missing deep kiss...and thank u to vishu who forced u to make this os...

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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Shilpu yeh tune likha h . ...tu seriously aisa bhi likh sakti h. ..I don't believed it...I was so mesmerised with the whole os I can actually picturise whole situation in front of my eyes...swayam compensation was so sweet...Sharon giving her extra kiss was so beautiful...and final surprise the kiss on lips...omg omg it was so picture perfect... I love u Re...
Do write more

P.S. i was actually missing deep kiss...and thank u to vishu who forced u to make this os...

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

omg omg omg!!! This was such a romantic blushy mushy OS on such a beautiful couple! The moments were lovable and super dreamy!! Lovely one shot di! Sorry im commenting from mob hence the short comment! Nice os! 😳