I loved the chapter so much that I have already read it three timesđI really like the way you write,even minute details taken care of,like Aashu wipeshis sweat from back of his sleeve,I mean this is what people do when they are very anxious ,no time to take out hankey and then there was another scene when Nidhi gives Aasha to ashu,he first rubs his palms on his pants,this is most natural thing a person does when he is about to take a child in his armsđ
He stands away from everyone near the window looking out into the night with his fists stuffed into the pockets of his trousers. Anji is the only one who dares to approach him. She goes and puts a hand on his shoulder: Jeej, it won't be long now. Don't worry. Ok?A shudder runs through his body and he puts his hand around her shoulders to pull her into a one armed hug. Whether he is getting comfort from her or offering her his comfort is tough to say
Just loved it,it portrays his nervousness,his fears and then Saali jija bond beautifullyLoved all the chaos after baby was born
A completely defenceless little one utterly dependant on me and would look up to me for protection! Am I even worth such a gift? I should go..just go..turn and run..run away from them..and keep running until I am so far away that they are completely safe from me.
It shows he is still not free from the burdens of his past and is not sure of himself
But as always he has his buddy for help and support,he so well knew that Nidhi would be waiting for him and so right he was ,loved their silent way of comforting each other,just loved the way you have written how Ashu felt on first seeing his daughterđand then the way he backs away when Nidhi asks him to hand over the baby it was lovely to read Loved the way Dr.K asks Ashu to spend time with Nidhi,
Now YOU happened Ashutosh! You and your seeming indifference is what happened. She is tired. She is tired of fighting and losing the battles. Aakhir kitne din..kitne maheene apne chehre pe muskaan liye ladegi woh? She has finally accepted and given up. 10 days since she looked at your properly. 10 days since she said a word to you. 10 days since she gave you her smile.)
He very well knows whats keeping Nidhi confined to herself and her babyLoved CV Ashu interaction,Armaan and his family are such loving people,and so caring,Ashu finally accepting all his fears,his guilt and his helplessness in front of the supreme power though in AB style.
Ashu talking to his daughter was so emotional,and thn the best part of this update ,when Ashu asks Nidhi,can I hold you?that reallly wrenched my heart,I literaaly cried ,I could so see SK with his moist eyes then,and what followed was all so beautifully written,thank you so much for this wonderful chapter,waiting for next one.đ
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