Kashmakash S2 Th 10 Epilogue Pg 69 Aug 2

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suku_07

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Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: deepa17
Good .. You also have cousins your age???

My Masi .. Yaar.. Lives in freeze land .. Chicago here in this country only .. Don't even get to visit her once in 3 years ..

Arre its my first trip too... we also hardly get chabce to see each other... though we catch up on skype... thanks to the technology ...

Well my cousin is 13 yr old but very cute and entertaining so no problem at all...

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suku_07

@suku_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Chalo ji I am off now... goodnight all...

Bye Deepa...

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rayafan17

@rayafan17

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: suku_07
Chalo ji I am off now... goodnight all...

Bye Deepa...

Bye suku ..

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Hey Suja,

No, this is not my detailed review but having read the final chapter just now, I could not help myself from writing this...

I certainly had a lot of expections from ur last chapter, and I was really scared that I would be disappointed...

but disappointed hona toh door raha, I was absolutely delighted with this chapter.. u far exceeded my expectations ... v. v. well done buddy... take a bow Suvika..

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suku_07

@suku_07

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: deepa17

Bye suku ..

Mein nahi gayi 🤣

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pansy123

@pansy123

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#326

Fab update as usual...

Liked the way he asks, "Why is she crying again? Was I too rough?"...they were to convey his state...his deep underlying insecurities...

The lines below get the message across that he is near winning his battle...

She responds to voices and her feet start kicking whenever she hears her baba's deep voice which it never fails to make him smile, grin and laugh no matter how tired he is at the end of the day. Dr Sanjay even comments that she is well ahead in the milestones for her age.

Loved the way he takes care of his daughter in Nidhi's absence...alone on his own...and the way you made him to win the battle and savour his winning...

The eyes that look at her are free of all the shadows with joy and hope shining brightly in them. He places a hard kiss on her palm

& acclaim his win by visiting Dr. R

(Nidhi makes a move to take Aasha from him so that he can shake the doctor's hand but Aasha has a tight grip on his collar and refuses to release it. Dr Rishab's grin widens.) Father's darling daughter already, I see!

Ashu's throat clogs up and he swallows a couple of times before nodding and hugging his daughter closer to his heart: Yes Dr Rishab. She is her father's darling daughter.

👏👏👏👏
👏👏

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meena_kannan

@meena_kannan

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#327

Lovely chapter sujatha, nice end to a beautiful FF, well done and looking forward to reading many more FFs from you after a well deserved break. Ofcourse waiting to read the epilogue of KSMK 2 .