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@pinkpearl5

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Thank you for all the entries I have received so far!! ONE MORE DAY TO GO COME ON HURRY UP...CONTEST ENDS TOMORROW ON FRIDAY 10TH MAY 2013!!!

VOTING TIME!!! 😊

PLEASE CAN YOU VOTE FOR ANY ENTRIES FOR THE 16TH SCENE BY LIKING THAT ENTRY IF YOU THINK IT'S IMPRESSIVE!!! PARTICIPANTS NEED YOUR VOTES NOW!

Excuse the caps sorry 😳

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

SCENE 16...

ABHIJEET: batao PRIYA Tum nay ye kyun kiya..?😡

PRIYA: mujhy tou Us nay ye kaha tha... karny ko...😉

ABHIJEET (angry): kis nay..?😡

PRIYA: GD nay😈... (crying😭) Us nay RAHUL ko buht dino say sr. Inspector DAYA kay peechy lagaya hua tha...😉

PURVI (shock): DAYA Sir kay peechy... pr kyun..?😲

PRIYA: GD nay RAHUL ko DAYA Sir ki Blue Bhangaar Shirt churany ko kaha tha...😆 RAHUL buht aarsay say DAYA kay peechy para hua tha pr wo Shirt chura nahi pa raha tha...

ABHIJEET (murmur): DAYA Usy LOCKER mein jo rakhta hay...

VINEET: phir?😕

PRIYA: us roz RAHUL nay GD ko Call kr kay kaha kay Usy wo Blue Bhangaar Shirt mil gayii hay aur wo Usy la raha hay😃... GD nay Mujhy ek Sadharan Churi dii aur kaha kay us kay tukray tukray kr dena...😉

ABHIJEEt (tease): RAHUL kay...😈

PRIYA: Nahi Shirt kay ... 😊

ABHIJEET: tou GD nay khud kyun nahi Us Shirt kay tukray karny ka socha...😉

PRIYA: GD nay bola wo ek masoom Mashriqi Prani hay🤣, wo bhala kesay itni Munni sii Shirt ko, jis say Bacchun kay BIB banayey ja saktay hain🤣🤣, Hath laga sakta hy...😉😉😉

VINEET: phir RAHUL nahi aaya...!😕

PRIYA: nahi RAHUL aaya pr khali hath aur kaha kay aaj DAYA wo Blue Bhangaar pehan kr kisi GHUNGRO ki talash mein chala gaya hay😉😉... (rash) abhi Main us pr Gussa ho rahi thi kay achanak mujhy GD ka Phone aaya aur main SAMMOHIT ho gayii...🤣

PURVI: kesay...😲

PRIYA: PANDY JEE ki SEETI Sun kr...🥳🥳😉

ABHIJEET (interupts in tease😉): aur PANDY JEE ki SEETI itni Zor say baji kay Tum nay RAHUL ko DAYA ki Shirt samjh liya... hain na...😆😆😆

PRIYA: haan aur Us kay Pait mein Chakoo ghusa diya...😛😛

ABHIJEET: Tum nay bhaly ye Hathya SAMMOHAN ho kr ki hay😉, pr Chakoo pr Tumharay Finger Print milay hain😡, SALUNKHY Sir dubara koi Test Nahi karein gay kyunkay kal un ko apni Invisible GF say milnay jana hay...😆

aur TAREEKA JEE tou pehlay hee Bukhaar mein hain😉... ACP Sir kay tou jub say Nayey Baal aayey hain, Bureau mein wabaal mach gaya hay🤣... RAJAT tou aaj kal apnay Swabhimaan mein uljha hua hay😉... SACHIN, NIKHIL

VINEET aur PUNKAJ ko tou DAYA ki Copy karnay say Fursat mily tou kuch ho...😡 PURVi aur Main Mr India banny ki Practice kr rahy hain😉 aur SHERYA tou DAYA pr Fida honay ki Classes lay rahi hay😵... bacha DAYA

tou wo Bhaga Bhag phir raha hay kabhi CCH kay set say CID aur kabhi CID kay set say Gutur Gu... tou Tum hee say Kaam chalana paray ga😉... VINEET isy band krr do PHANSI ka Order aany tak... 😈

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Ufff...I did it...(I think)...I am dead tired after a tough working day...my mind is blank...still giving it a shot.

ENTRY 3:

Priya: Sir...woh...

At that moment Salunkhe comes in...

Salunkhe: Pradyuman, khoon is aurat ne nahi kiya!

ACP: Kya keh rahe ho Salunkhe? tumhi ne toh bataya ki khoon kitech knife se hui hai vagera.

Salunkhe: Haan, lekin jab Priya ne uspar chaku maara, use thodi der pehle kisi aur ne use chaku maara tha, bilkul usi size ke kitchen knife se.

ACP: Priya, kya yeh sach hai?

Priya: Sir, woh...main...

ACP: Sach sach batao...KYA HUA THA

Priya: Sir, maine dekha ki woh aadmi marr raha hai, aur mujhe pata tha ki CID team aa jaayegi...aur main aap logon se ek baar milna chahti thi, isliye..😉 .😳

ACP:

Daya: 😲

Abhijeet: 😲

Abhijjeet: Lekin agar tum khoon ke case mein arrest ho jaati toh...???

Priya: Mujhe pata tha ki Salunkhe sir pata laga lenge ki maine khoon nahi kiya...😛

Salunkhe: 😃 😳

Sachin: Sir ek baat samajh mein nahi aayi...agar Priya ne khoon nahi kiya toh khoon kiya kisne?

Priya: Maine dekha tha...us aadmi ne khudkhushi kar li...kyonki uski girlfriend ne kisi aur se shaadi kar li.

Daya: Toh yeh baat pehle bhi bata sakti thi...??

Priya: Sorry sir...thoda suspense badhaane mein mazaa aaya.

Trio: 🤢

(Sorry...don't throw rotten tomatoes at me 🤣)

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Sejal..but PP always for IF...

@pinkpearl5

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Awww thank you sooo much Visrom and GD for your entries!! Visrom thanks for your contribution despite a tiring day hats of to you dear!👏

TODAY IS THE LAST DAY TO SEND ME YOUR ENTRIES CONTEST WILL CLOSE SOON SO HURRY UP NOW! I REQUEST MORE PEOPLE TO VOTE BY LIKING ANY ENTRY YOU THINK IS IMPRESSIVE AND INTERESTING AND WHO SHOULD BE THE WINNER FOR WRITING THE BEST SCENE!! RESULTS WILL BE POSTED SOON CAN'T SAY EXACT DATE YET! THANK YOU 😃