THE LOCKET(3), MG FF, thread 4 link pg1, COMPLETED - Page 41

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok..I won't lie to you but honestly I was searching the one line containing my name in whole chapter..I thought,It would come in this chapter...😆 Chalo koi nai,I would wait for next chapter...😃
There are three prominent love stories going on right now in "TL" and its very difficult for me to choose one as my favourite..Each couple whether its dev-tara or Maaneet or Adi pinky ,has its own flavour..They all are in love/falling in love,but still they are different..I really admire you for introducing this difference..👏
Dev's explanation to Tara behind his end time amendment in her design was somewhere justifying..Honestly telling I am zero with all these "MBA" terms but Jacket example was able to make me understand DEV's point of view,though I was unable to decide whether he was right or wrong..However whole discussion,made the chapter more realistic.If you are not a MBA-ian,then I appreciate your research and effort...and if you are,then I appreciate your intelligence...!!!👍🏼
I thoroughly enjoyed the chapter avi..It started with Sasha-Tamasha and ended with dev's head in tara's lap..In between,there was pari,who brought discomfort for Dev and childhood memories for Tara..I really want to know more about Tara's past...!!!!
Waiting eagerly for more...

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...
fantastic..
thnks for the PM...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
so dev likes nt...n he is just enjoying her company...m in love with dis dev...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
hayeee ishq wala update
beautiful
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago


update was awesome...

but Maan Geet ke bina kuch bhi achcha nahin lagta...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



update was awesome...

but Maan Geet ke bina kuch bhi achcha nahin lagta...

thanx for pm...

VM nahi dekha?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

This was a janu update. The italic word is borrowed from one of my dearest friends basicquestion1.I like that..😳 usually it is jaanu meri jaan...
Anyway I am liking this Dev who has that shimmering anger under the surface watching her un lady like acts or rather her putting off his gentlemanly behavior. I now understand why was he uncomfortable at the mention of Pari. For her she might be a child isn't it? And I admire this Dev who doesn't want to indulge in anything that would get her hopes high.
Admirable.Yeah he is a gentleman who is quite popular so he is not used to her type of a person yet..
Who thought the person who called Sasha Tamasha and gave background music to everyone is a mature and sweet person beneath. I am liking the shades of this Dev.
Also, the woman who is a strong, tough nut has a vulnerable and naive side to her. You know when she was giving him back stabber names in her head, i found her adorable. But when she bit her tongue and controlled her emotions and wondered why was everyone trying to tie her into a relation, her thoughts had hit a spot.

@underlined: you would😆

This is a couple I am falling for, with every passing update Avi. While one couple is damned sweet, and the love that is between them is innocent, this is the kind which has sparks flying but also tender in its own way. Hats off for the wonderful characters Avi.
Me lubs you🤗
Me too...🤗
PS: Did I tell you I love and accept his mantra of brand? Brainy, huh? I like brainy men. Quite a rare to find na, that's why.😆

If you like him now, you are going to love him by the time I am done with him...
Thanks for being here.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
res for last two chapters :p
me here babe! 😳

Ch 8:
my my another love story is it? before i even comment on it i want to laugh my arse away...🤣
lol no dont get me wrong. i have no problem with Adi-Pinky love kahaani. i kind of felt bad the actual show left their kahaani adhoori... it is seriously going to be fun (oxymoron hehe) to watch such comical love birds. i laughed only because of the characters you chose who primarily portrayed comedy.
hmm... so its north-south love story huh? interesting... very interesting 😃 but like someone said i am not for the fact that Adi is being a bit of a coward. i completely suppoit Sujal in this 😃 he needs to man up and tell the world he loves Pinky!

i loved the conversation. and the song oh em gee 🤣 except for SP Balu's voice i was never really a fan of that song. as my bestie calls it, "cheese oozing out song" lol dont take personally its just my personal opinion 😃

Ch9:
Avi i am loving this Dev... he is all in one package re. i am still warming up to Tara but i am in lurve with Dev. ha the poor man has to manage a huge company and on top of that Miss Rulebook! i do understand she comes with a heavy package but to have completely turned sour to relations makes me cock my eyebrows.
the scene was cute and the marketing point he put forward was clever! lol i dont know if i would buy it but since his words convince me i may buy it 😳

Avi its not fair re... you cannot make me cheat on my maan. ur story is luring me to Dev and secretly i am loving it. aur mela baccha Maan... poor baby! lol

amazing as usual Avi 🤗

Edited by Maaneet099 - 12 years ago

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