THE LOCKET(3), MG FF, thread 4 link pg1, COMPLETED - Page 43

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity

so lovely update Avi...

frm now on i'm gong to b equally interested in dev-tara's story as i was in maaneet's...

both dev and tara's characters were total Awesomeness... on one side where we wd b hvng sweet n shy couple of our maaneet the chatpata and spicy couple of dev-tara wd b no less a treat to see...

the way u hv brought out the characteristics of their characters is superb...no matter how hard n tough one gets there z always a soft spot...seeing d emotional side of tara made me connect to her character more her running away frm relations and her the emotional turmoil remembering her father made me sigh deeply poor soul bt i'm sure she z soon b getting her share of happiness and can't wait to see when n how the cupid soots his arrow towards her...and boy just luvd d intellectual dev khurrana ... and wht marketing strategies... i can now actually imagine him to b maan's brother and even though this part was dedicated to dev and tara the little glimpses abt maan's character were too imp to b missed...luvd this d most "Maan is like the sun, totally unreachable"... so all in all enjoyed d whole ride alooot!!

thank u for the awesome update!!!

Originally posted by: soniaz121

awesome update loving this dev so much best dev character till now for me in a ff i have read loved the couple too both are so good u done amazing work love this ff so much waiting for next part till then tc bye love u 😊

Originally posted by: honeygrape

an update 😊

ruli-e-pedia, seriously😆 where do you get these names from Avi...😆

and sasha😡 hope she s not an evil one here...

glad that pari has a crush on Dev ...so maan is left for Geet without any hurdles😆

awesome one as always...does Dev behave like this to evry lady employee of his??

so next part will have maan😳😊

Originally posted by: thebians

Hey,

wonderful story.

kya concept hai yaar!

me totally flat dude!

please abhi kuch love shove sprinkly karo naa!

update soon.

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

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Originally posted by: sweetkj

i am flat.!!!

more later.

Originally posted by: love2_soma

so dev likes nt...n he is just enjoying her company...m in love with dis dev...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...