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NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

First of all..

Thanx to all those dear readers who have been with me in the journey of this story's first thread...

I owe a lot to you people...

I am beginning this second thread in the hope that this can be as entertaining as the first...

With Love...

Nidha...

Credit for this gorgeous piece of art goes to Phoenix.Xeelan aka Tanz. Thank you darling.

It began with'

Years ago on a windy day, in a castle nestled between Mountains, the White Rose, a beautiful baby girl is born. Fate has it that she is born a hybrid, half witch- half vampire. Fate also takes away her mother but gives her a loving family , a dotting father , Aron and a faithful friend, Zara Dobriyal. She is Piyali Jaiswal.

Piyali sets forth on a new journey with her friend Zara Dobrial, to her mothers homeland India.

In the beautiful city of Dehradhun, her new journey begins. On her first night there she encounters a lethally handsome vampire Abhay Raichand. As fate has it, they fall in love.

Piya lives with the Dobriyals , a not so ordinary household. Because there lives the hybrid - Dhruv Raichand - Siddarth Raicahnd and Panchi Dobriyal's son and his not so human mother Panchi. With the return of Siddarth, Panchi's and Dhruv's lives become more complicated.

Siddarth is here for redemption which he discovers is a bumpy road and when he meets his son, he knows that the bump is actually a tiny mountain.

Dehradhun , is home not only to vampires but werewolves too. They are lead by the fierce alpha wolf - Jeh Khuranna. He dearly loves his sister, Alina Khuranna.

Jeh wishes for a peaceful existence , to disrupt which arrives his mother , Dippanitha Khuranna.

Zara remains with her friend through thick and thin. Piya finds new and true friends in Misha, Annie and Kabir.

Elsewhere ripples of unrest have begun, as dark forces seek to revive a sleeping lethal force. A protected scroll goes missing, in connection to which Piya's father, Aron, reaches India.

The scroll meanwhile, rests at the Ambolkar mansion, where the cunning witch Tanushree Ambolkar resides.

She is soon joined by her grandfather , Dhanraj Ambolkar. Together they seek to revive the lethal force.

All these lives are intricately intertwined. Fates intermingled.

Let's see what lies ahead..

INDEX

Chapter 25

Chapter 26

Chapter 27

Chapter 28

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3334171&TPN=9

Chapter 29

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3334171&TPN=11

Edited by FeistySoul - 12 years ago

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NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

Link to Previous Thread

Credit again to Tanz

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

Chapter 10

Edited by FeistySoul - 13 years ago

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Prima :D

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Posted: 13 years ago

congo on d 2nd thread🥳

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Resh

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Posted: 13 years ago

Congo Nidha on ur 2nd thread😳

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

Congrats Nidha on book 2 🤗 Will catch up with book 1 soon 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

congo on d 2nd thread

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Posted: 12 years ago

Congrats on the new thread..!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

congratzz on new thread😊

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Mandy

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Posted: 12 years ago

Finished reading Book 1 n eager for more 😃 Please do update when u can dear 😳 This is one of the best supernatural FFs I have ever read ⭐️

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NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

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One of the most spectacular supernatural FF I have ever read Nidha 👏

Mandy, that is way more than I deserve. I am humbled😳

This FF has made its way into my topmost fav FFs 😃 I feel like spanking myself for not having read this before When I first recieved the PM for ur FF it was well past 20th update n I knew I had a lot of catching up to do n since it was posted in FF section I forgot to keep track on it as well But when I got ur PM for 2nd book I made it a point to finish reading this n I am glad I did 😃 Ur a pro at supernatural stuff n this FF of urs is outstanding 👏

Well don't spank yourself 😆. I think we both are equal when it comes to catching up with FF's. But then again life is also important😊. I think it was by 20th update that I began noticing your comments on other ff's. They were truly good to read. You do know right how much feedbacks can boost a writer😊. The FF was moved to FF section when show was on air, in order to make the forum less congested and then I decided to continue here.

As for supernatural stuff, it's all about imagination right. It is tough but thing about supernatural is you can come up with the most impossible things. I kinda enjoy that.😳

U know what I liked the most here? The way u have woven the story around characters n not the other way round n very few writers r capable of something like that. I have come across tons of FFs that r Abhiya centric n I was pleasantly surprised to come across one where each n every character has importance.

I am glad you liked it. For me this story is never about just Abhay and Piya. Yes their love story is central and yes they make a major part. But I would also like to bring to the front every other character.😳

Everything abt it is just------- PERFECT ⭐️ I am glad to see one story whose central focus is not Abhiya romance but yes, u have given us a good deal of romance n I am glad u did 😃 Coming to the FF what can I say? Superb plot, amazing characterisation n amazing imagination 👏 Esp the part abt magic has been written out so well I could imagine it unfolding before my eyes 😊 This FF had me hooked for 2 days n I enjoyed reading it thoroughly. Right from the start your story telling had me captivated. I couldn read anything else in this while.

Again you praise looks kinda too much to me. I am really really pleased you liked it Mandy. But I don't think it is perfect. Perfection for me is Poco. I miss her a lot.

I really felt bad for Sugandh She fell for a monster n lost her life. I feel bad for Aron but I suppose Alina will be his mate? 😳

Sugandh- Aron was tragic and yes you are right about Alina and also the first one to guess it.👏

Loved the bond between Pia, Z n Aron.

Thanks . I love and enjoy focusing on every kind of relationships.

Then comes Pia n Z - WOW 😃 I never thought I'll ever like anyone else other than Misha as Pia's BFF but u proved me wrong. I love the bond between Pia n Z.

Z's character grew on me actually. Initially I didn't imagine giving her so much space. But she made her own place😆

Then I loved the bonding they shared with Anvesha n Misha too 😳 Here also though Anvesha isn a major character but u have given us a good insight into her character as well 😊

Kudos to u for that 👏 Then comes Sid. This guy is majorly screwed but this is by far the best portrayal of his character ever, be it in show or any other FF I have read. I loved Sid Panchi n I really wished he had redeemed himself for her in the show but that never happened

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SidChi were my favorite too.😭 They had a very great chemistry. But the CV's never left any stones upturned in ruining Panchi's character right😡So for my tassali I gave them a place here😃

The star of this FF for me is lil Dhruv 😳 He is such a cutie I tell ya. I love the bond he shares with everyone 😊 His n Panchi's bond is so endearing. I really hope Sid mends his folly n gets back to Panchi for Panchi may deny all she cares, but she still loves him. I hope they get back together like one happy family 😳 But y doesn Sid feel anything for him? 😕 Poor thing, wants to be loved by his dad ass well. It was really nice of Sid to want to see Panchi move on but now that he knows she had his child, she has a new place in his life n I hope Sid makes it upto her for all the pain n heartache he gave her

Like you said that guy is completely screwed in the head. Panchi was just another girl he ruined earlier. But now she holds a new place in his life.

Whether they will have a family life or not depends on Panchi. She loves him still but will she be able to forgive him?

Abhay's character was well defined too. I feel sad he had to part with Ananya but how else would he have met his true soulmate then? 😳 I know its tough for Aron to accept him but I hope he realises tat all vampires r not bad n gives his blessings to them 😳

Aron has seen the loss of his love at the hands of a vampire. To such a man it is a hard task to accept one. Even one with a golden heart.

I like Jeh more with Z n I hope they become a couple here 😊 Coming to Jeh, I am so so glad that u haven't shown him as a bad guy. Just bcoz he belongs to the enemy clan doesn mean he shd be all evil n its nice to see he doesn let his prejudice cloud the judgement.

My love for Jeh is quiet popular. I was a JiYa fan you know. But more a Jeh fan. Like every character I loved in the show CV's successfully ruined him too😭

Dhanraj Ambolkar seems to be creepy I am sure he's the big baddie here 😕 The supernatural element to this story was at its best 👏 Be it Pia n Z practicing magic or any other aspect it felt like I was watching a Hollywood flick 👏 I could go on n on but I am gonna end it here 😆 Dont wanna give u a headache or make u chase me outta here 😆 But I am afraid u have to learn to bear with my essays from now on 🤣 Please update soon na? Now tat I finished it in one go, I am eager for more 😈

Fantastic piece of writing Nidha 👏

Dhanraj is trouble I give you that.

A hollywood flick? Really Mandy, now that is too much.

Please keep writing such comments. It helps in reflecting over the characters.

Your comments will always be welcome.

As for updates darling, I will try my level best, In Sha Allah.

Right now I have a busy schedule ahead with exams and all.

I will try my level best...

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for this fabulous comment.

I am humbled

Love...

Nidha.