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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: FeistySoul

Mandy, that is way more than I deserve. I am humbled😳 Trust me its one os the best I have ever read on supernatural stuff here 👏

Well don't spank yourself 😆. I think we both are equal when it comes to catching up with FF's. But then again life is also important😊. I think it was by 20th update that I began noticing your comments on other ff's. They were truly good to read. You do know right how much feedbacks can boost a writer😊. The FF was moved to FF section when show was on air, in order to make the forum less congested and then I decided to continue here. Yeah I wasn active much in this forum when the show was on air I even missed out on Poco's posts which everyone claims was better than the show itself. Glad u like my comments dear Embarrassed I love analysing things be it books, movies or FFs. So now u know the secret behind me writing essays here 😆 I wish it was in PKYEK forum. Would have been easier for me to keep track coz I did recieve PMs for ur updates n I used to make it a point to read them but I would forget But now that I have caught up with all updates, I shall assure u I will be a regular here 😃

As for supernatural stuff, it's all about imagination right. It is tough but thing about supernatural is you can come up with the most impossible things. I kinda enjoy that.😳 True, with supernatural u just let ur imagination runwild 😊 I felt tat while writing Covenant as well. I myself will have no idea what is supposed to happen n I just write watever comes to my mind 😆

I am glad you liked it. For me this story is never about just Abhay and Piya. Yes their love story is central and yes they make a major part. But I would also like to bring to the front every other character.😳 Thats the best part of ur FF as I mentioned earlier on Embarrassed


Again you praise looks kinda too much to me. I am really really pleased you liked it Mandy. But I don't think it is perfect. Perfection for me is Poco. I miss her a lot. I have heard abt Poco n her FF too but when I opened to read it, I realised I have too much to read coz it was already in book 4 It was difficult for me to catch up 😭

Sugandh- Aron was tragic and yes you are right about Alina and also the first one to guess it.Clap Really? 😲 YIPPEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🥳 Pat on the back for me 👏 😆

Thanks . I love and enjoy focusing on every kind of relationships. There is more to life than romance n thats the best part of this FF Embarrassed

Z's character grew on me actually. Initially I didn't imagine giving her so much space. But she made her own place😆 I like Z more than Misha in this FF 😃
SidChi were my favorite too.Cry They had a very great chemistry. But the CV's never left any stones upturned in ruining Panchi's character right😡So for my tassali I gave them a place here😃 Even I have cursed the CVs to my heart's content for ruining SidChi track Angry


Like you said that guy is completely screwed in the head. Panchi was just another girl he ruined earlier. But now she holds a new place in his life.
Whether they will have a family life or not depends on Panchi. She loves him still but will she be able to forgive him? I hope Sid redeems himself for the sake of Panchi n Dhruv n more for himself as well I really wish Dhruv gets a complete family Embarrassed

Aron has seen the loss of his love at the hands of a vampire. To such a man it is a hard task to accept one. Even one with a golden heart. Yes its hard for Aron but hopefully Abhay can win his trust n make him realise he is the right guy for Pia Embarrassed


My love for Jeh is quiet popular. I was a JiYa fan you know. But more a Jeh fan. Like every character I loved in the show CV's successfully ruined him tooCry I have been an Abhiya shipper 😆 though I did like Jeh's character initially bit CVs ruined it Angry It was worse for me coz Jeh's character was along the lines of Jacob's n Jacob was the only reason I could endure Twilight.

Dhanraj is trouble I give you that.
A hollywood flick? Really Mandy, now that is too much.
Please keep writing such comments. It helps in reflecting over the characters.
Your comments will always be welcome.
As for updates darling, I will try my level best, In Sha Allah.
Right now I have a busy schedule ahead with exams and all.
I will try my level best...
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for this fabulous comment.
I am humbled
Love...
Nidha.
Trust me Nidha this FF is fab ⭐️ I assure u I will compose essays for ur updates pukka bcoz I loved this one a lot 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Hello all,
I should actually be immersed in my course books
But here I am giving you the next update.
You see my brain works the best when it has limited time and many things to do. Crazy much😆
This update is dedicated to Tanz for making three gorgeous signatures.
Thank you , thank you my dear lady!🤗

PS : PM's are being send to only those who have added NA_pms

Chapter 25

1509, Egypt….

He gently caressed her tresses, smiling. His long fingers traced the contours of her soft face. She was basking in his love. The love she knew was only hers. The love that gave her so much happiness. He brought his face closer to hers, immersing himself in her light blue eyes.

A painful gasp escaped her an instant later as the sharp blade plunged into her heart. She looked down at her chest.

To find the hand of her lover holding the blade and smiling triumphantly.
She looked back into his eyes, for one last time, asking why?.
A ring of fire soon engulfed them while the air was torn apart by a roaring chant.

Present day….

"Are you sure about this?" Piya bit her lip unsurely.

"Yeah! Listen Piya we haven't trained much since coming from Mount Rose. All we have done are basic spells, on things not on humans. Now if it came to a combat"

"That's the point Z! Why are you so sure that it will come to a combat? I mean it could just be we find the resting place, destroy the old guy and get away. Why are you not considering that possibility?" Piya questioned not wanting to do what Z was suggesting.

"I am not considering that possibility, Madam Piya, because the people opposite to us are D.A.R.K magicians which includes that big time bimbo Tanushree, who by the way hates us" Z replied in exasperation "Come on Piya , we have wasted almost fifteen minutes on this"
"Seventeen to be exact" said Dhruv from his perch on a tree branch.

"Thanks smart guy! Get down from that branch or your mom will commit double murder" Z warned her nephew.

"Z please! Give me some credit, I am a hybrid and besides I have grown" Dhruv spread his hands to indicate his growth.

"Yeah , by how many inches? Get down Dhruv" Z ordered "And stay shut"

Dhruv jumped down and landed neatly on the forest floor.

"Z can I at least go and hunt? I am getting bored" Dhruv whined.

" And get yourself killed ? No way" Z said.

"Oh come on!" Dhruv sighed. "Look at this" he picked a boulder more than double his weight and send it sailing across the forest.

"Do you think I will get killed so easily? Chachu has been training me!" Dhruv persisted

"I think you should let him go Z" Piya suggested.

"Fine! Just keep this ring with you. Grab onto it if you are in trouble, it will let us know" Z handed her nephew a ring "And don't go too far"

"Aye aye captain" Dhruv agreed. Pocketing the ring he gave a peck to Z and ran off .

"Now you Piya, are you going to throw me or not?" Z asked her friend.

"Z that boulder is like kilometres away, you will probably end up dead!" Piya screamed.
"I threw you Piya and you came back unscratched!" Z screeched back
"Yeah but you are different! You are a normal witch" Piya blurted out

Z walked up to her friend and held her shoulders.

"Piya just get this bloody feeling out of you okay. I trust you Piya. I know that you can do it. You will cover the exact same distance with exact same force and I will land just beside that boulder on soft grass. You are a witch , not normal maybe, but you are the best witch I know"

Piya blinked once and nodded in affirmation. She moved three paces back. Lifting her hands up she began chanting the spell in her mind. Visualising the boulder she slowly began gathering the force of air into her spell. Slowly she began directing the magic out of her. Next she focused on Z. Bringing her aim into mind she pushed the magical force towards Z.

Z was lifted of her feet and thrown back.


Z felt herself sailing in the air and began chanting the spell to stop her motion. Piya's force was much harder to fight than that of a normal witch. Z had muster in a lot of strength. All of sudden she was engulfed in a thick brown cloud.

"What the" Z swore as she scrambled down from the wolf's body.

The wolf stood up on all fours and gazed. It walked away and moved behind a large bush from where a few minutes later Jeh emerged.

"Jeh?" Z asked surprised "Have you taken up the job of stalking me"

"Dobriyal, I just saved your life. You were heading straight for that" Jeh pointed at a sharp branch jutting from a tree.

"Oh! That calls for a thank you. Though you interrupted my training" Z said "Damn! We should be practicing more"

"Z!" Piya came rushing in "Are you okay?"

"Yeah babe! I am fine just chatting with Mr. Wolf" Z said waving towards Jeh.

"Jeh! Hey…we were just" Piya began.

"Training! Yeah Z just told me and also I saw you. You girls are pretty good" Jeh complimented.

"Thanks wolfie, Piya here is gonna be a super witch soon" Z placed an arm around her friends.

"Yeah right! I will probably kill someone in that process" Piya replied glumly "I used too much force again and I also sensed you were in trouble" she pointed the red locket on her neck.

"Chill babes, I am fine. See" Z pointed at herself "You just need a little more practice"

"I don't know Z, what if I can't ever gain control over my energy? What if" Piya began.

"Piya , I don't know if my suggestion will matter, but you can learn to do things. Just never quit" Jeh suggested "Telling this from experience"
"See even Jeh agrees. We need just a little more practice Piya" Z assured her "But not today I guess, it's getting dark and we have to get home" Z stressed on the 'we'

"Meet you later then" Jeh bid the girls farewell.

Khuranna Mansion….

"Aaargh" Alina screamed as the pain sliced through her head. Her knees buckled and she hit the floor causing her body further pain.

"Please please let go off me…please" she pleaded holding her head. Tears and pain blurred her vision.

Within a few seconds she passed out on the floor of her room.

Ambolkar Mansion….

" The necessary ingredients will be here by tomorrow my Lord" Miraz reported to Dhanraj.

"Good they are coming in time. Though the material ingredients are not my concern" Dhanraj hooked his eyes onto Miraz.

Miraz had to use all of his strength to appear unperturbed.

Siddarth's House….

" I am honestly out of ideas Rose" Sid said to his friend while shuffling through some files "I can't think of any other way to ask her forgiveness other than to well ask her" he threw down a file looking defeated.

"Not that your technique is bad Siddarth but it isn't working" Rose sighed.

"How about we try another route?" she asked raising her threaded brows.

"Which?" Sid asked.

"Abhay" Rose replied.

"That sounds fantastic Rose" Sid's words were dripping with sarcasm "Except for one teensy-weensy flow , my brother HATES me"

"Well you didn't give him much reason to love now did you? But believe me Sid" Rose came before and placed a finger on his heart "Inside I am pretty much sure he still has some love left for the brother who use to defend him whenever their father scolded them. So why not unlock that love eh?"

Sid looked into her eyes with a small smile.

"Oh and do keep meeting your son occasionally" Rose added.

Igloo Ice Cream Parlour…

" Here is your order sire and yours Madam" Piya placed a cup each in front of Z and Dhruv.

"Man! Nothing like ice creams after a training" Z dug into her cup.

" This is the best mango ice cream in Dehradhoon" Dhruv quipped.

"I second that" Piya added through a mouthful

"Excuse Ma'am" a young waiter interrupted their banter a few minutes later "Here is your second cup"

"Second but we" Piya began.

"It's from the Sir there Ma'am" the guy pointed towards their payment counter.

Dhruv was the first one to look and was surprised. His father was waving at him smiling. Dhruv returned that smile though reluctantly.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Firstly I am terribly sorry for unreserving my post so late But I had read it the day u posted the update itself though u didn send me a PM 😡 😭 It was fantastic as usual Nidha 👏 Abt writing updates when u actually have limited time I think I sorta agree with u 😆 6 months ago I was working straight for 12 hrs in office but my update frequency was better 😛 Coming to the update the start was absolutely gripping n it gave me goosebumps as well 👏 Who was that evil person? Could it be Dhanraj Ambolkar? 😕 Just a wild wild wild guess 😆 I loved Pia n Z's practice sessions 😃 U write it so amazingly that it becomes easy for ur reader to visualise it 👏 The lil moment with Dhruv was endearing as well 😳 I have a feeling its T or Dhanraj behind Alina's state 😕 Also I liked the bond b/w Rose n Sid. I am glad he has one person beside him who will help on his path of repentence. Sid may think Abhay hates him for all tat he has done but somewhere deep down Abhay still cares for the brother who used to be his shield. There r unresolved issues but nothing that is impossible to attain 😳 Once Sid earn's Abhay's forgiveness n trust, things will surely take a turn for good in his life. I wonder what Mrinalini is doing rt now If Sid wants Panchi to forgive then he must first redeem himself before his son's eyes n earn his acceptance. Then I am sure Panchi will forgive him as well 😳 Fab update Nidha 👏 Please update when u get the time 😃

Edited by mandy1024 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first off all i want to know

about the starting: who, when, why?????

update was fantastic n i love the piya-Z bonding. i wonder what sid will do to gain panchi's forgiveness?

a word about the interesting comments above the update : keep up the praise and ill attend ur marriage. you guys are so cute!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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excellent nidha. while reading the part where dhruv left to hunt i was so anxious that something bad will happen to him, but thankfully it didnt.

i think Z needs to be more careful about her surroundings, else her super confidence might become her downfall in combat
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nidhs.. jaan amazing..
the story is moving to an interesting point.
I really wanna know who killed Sugandh now..

Next i think i'll go with Rose's suggestion.
Right now sirf Abhay hi uski doobti hui pyar ki kashti ko bachaa saktaa hai..

Z is being over confident. She is too impulsive and seems to be least interested in the consequences. In this case she'll soon run into trouble.

Jeh is super awesome. Like always i love him.
I want to know what's happening to Alina. I guess i need to wait for the next.

And OMG!! Just read your reply on Mandy's comment.. is it true? Alina is Aron's mate? (did u give this hint somewhere in previous chapters?)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
Z dhruv and piya scenes were so gud
like the bonding between them
what r sid planning to do?
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mandy1024

Firstly I am terribly sorry for unreserving my post so late But I had read it the day u posted the update itself though u didn send me a PM 😡 😭 It was fantastic as usual Nidha 👏 Abt writing updates when u actually have limited time I think I sorta agree with u 😆 6 months ago I was working straight for 12 hrs in office but my update frequency was better 😛 Coming to the update the start was absolutely gripping n it gave me goosebumps as well 👏 Who was that evil person? Could it be Dhanraj Ambolkar? 😕 Just a wild wild wild guess 😆 I loved Pia n Z's practice sessions 😃 U write it so amazingly that it becomes easy for ur reader to visualise it 👏 The lil moment with Dhruv was endearing as well 😳 I have a feeling its T or Dhanraj behind Alina's state 😕 Also I liked the bond b/w Rose n Sid. I am glad he has one person beside him who will help on his path of repentence. Sid may think Abhay hates him for all tat he has done but somewhere deep down Abhay still cares for the brother who used to be his shield. There r unresolved issues but nothing that is impossible to attain 😳 Once Sid earn's Abhay's forgiveness n trust, things will surely take a turn for good in his life. I wonder what Mrinalini is doing rt now If Sid wants Panchi to forgive then he must first redeem himself before his son's eyes n earn his acceptance. Then I am sure Panchi will forgive him as well 😳 Fab update Nidha 👏 Please update when u get the time 😃



Mandy never again say sorry, deal?😊
And regarding pm, please do add the ID NA_pms, I am sending pms from that.
Ah! You understand my craziness! Moi happy to find a kindred spirit😆
It could be anyone from Dhanraj to Arnab, keep guessing.
Visualising is what makes reading exciting.
I am able to do the same with yours, Tanzie's and other ff's.
Glad to know mine does produce the same effect.
Alina...keep guessing again.
Man can achieve many things alone but when he has company that he achieves better, In my humble opinion.
Abhay may hate Sid to the guts, but is it so easy to kill the kind of love he had for his brother.
I am rerouting Sid, lets see where it leads him
Thank you Mandy🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AquaNymph

Nidhs.. jaan amazing..

the story is moving to an interesting point.
I really wanna know who killed Sugandh now..

Next i think i'll go with Rose's suggestion.
Right now sirf Abhay hi uski doobti hui pyar ki kashti ko bachaa saktaa hai..

Z is being over confident. She is too impulsive and seems to be least interested in the consequences. In this case she'll soon run into trouble.

Jeh is super awesome. Like always i love him.
I want to know what's happening to Alina. I guess i need to wait for the next.

And OMG!! Just read your reply on Mandy's comment.. is it true? Alina is Aron's mate? (did u give this hint somewhere in previous chapters?)


Jaan...🤗
Sugandh? I think that was clear in the beginning...she died while giving birth...
If it's about Piya's father, I haven't yet decided...
Rose may or may not have hit the bulls eye, lets see.
Z is a bit overconfident when it comes to Piya's powers.
I agree she should tone down.
It's her unwavering love for Piya that refuses to see her friend dejected.
Alina will be slowly unraveled.
I guess that's where I will be leading.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

first off all i want to know

about the starting: who, when, why?????

update was fantastic n i love the piya-Z bonding. i wonder what sid will do to gain panchi's forgiveness?

a word about the interesting comments above the update : keep up the praise and ill attend ur marriage. you guys are so cute!


Shreya😊...
Who, when , why sab dheere aayega...
Sid will try his level best. After all he has to prove himself to Dhruv.
Aye! So we are😆
Thanks deary
Edited by FeistySoul - 12 years ago

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