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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: missglam


wow yaar awesome update.I loved it !
it was lovely the way u potrayed sid's emotions . .
I hope. . He is able to forgive himself !
Poor abhay ! He lost everything. .
Mrinalni is such a devil . .
Do pia & mrinalni resemble each other. . ? Like their faces? I hope not !
Thanks for the pm. .continue soon
tc

Thanks you darling...
Abhay has lost a lot...but he has a little light in his life now...
And his world of darkness will be broken by Piya...
Pia has no resemblance to Mrinalini...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

nice prt

thanxxx 4 d pm
n plezzz updt ur gunjun ff plezzz

Thanks Tehzee...
I know I am neglecting GunJun sorry for that...
I will update asap dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: CleviveDsouza

awesome

wow
great
continue soon
plz pm me

Thanks Clevive...
Your words humble me...
Will continue asap

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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

wow I really like this character sketch of Sid. very nice. 👏

Thanks Dishu🤗...
I always wanted Sid to be redeemed...
I like his bad-boy attitude...but wanted him to change a little too...
There is a little some one who will surely help him do that
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Selinapiya

It's Good...when will u write about Abhay?

I want to know desparetely...
update soon...😊

Thanks Selz...
Abhay will come soon...
I am still working on him...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Great update 👏

I really like your writing style... loved the way you wrote about Sid...waiting to read more... thanks for the PM dear
Tanzie 🤗

Thanks a lot Tanzie...
I enjoy your writing too...
Must say our Piya's match...
Mine is born in the combination while yours is a made into a vamp-witch by curse...haven't caught up fully with your updates...so don't know if she changes or not😊
Hope you will like my work further
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
Thankyou Asmi
I am also waiting for your updates...
Both Maaneet and AbhIya...
The many Maaneets in your siggy dabba are cute
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: kuttu

Sid repenting that would be first. and soo many things have gine wrong so what all is he going to put right. I doubt his baby brother will welcome back into the family. Anyway the guilt trip dialogues of /sid was excellent you actually made me feel sorry for the guy.

Thanks Kuttu
Sid is one character I like a lot...
His repentance is genuine
As for his baby brother...he will have to work a lot there you know...
It has humbled me to know that my words give effect😳
Stay tuned
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Ur FF is great. I loved it. Keep writing.

Thank you dear...
I will send a pm next time
Add me to your buddy list😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: pri01

Hi Nidhi thx u for this beautiful update on Sid character just love him👏👏👏. Poor Sid he has blindly believed Mrinalini and he is paying for it now. Good that he wants to repent.

The story is getting interesting so update asap dear and do PM me 😊

Thanks Priya...
Love can make us utterly blind at times...
And when you realise it the pain we go through is too much
He will repent now and there is gonna be a surprise package for him😉

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