Kriyansh OS: Just A Dream!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guys I'm here with a small OS on Kriyansh. I'm not sure how will this turn out...Do hit the like tab and leave your reviews...Hey Guys I'm here with a small OS on Kriyansh. I'm not sure how will this turn out...Do hit the like tab and leave your reviews...

***Just A dream!!***

The gang was as usual sitting in the canteen including sharon and taani. Finally rey, swayam, and sharon have made the others realize that dance can also be opted as a career option. Every one was normally chit chatting as they had no other work do to since its a free hour. Taani was also with them since she and rey had to discuss about some documents. Rey was highly irritated by the fact that taani is bossing over him.

Suddenly simmi spoke grabbing every one's attention.
Si: Rey??
Re: yeah sim..
Si: u know i just read a novel yesterday and in that the hero and heroine had been separated from each other, they had a break up due to some misunderstanding. Even though there was some MU between them and they were away from each other but the did remember each other.
Re: oh kay, so tum yeh mujhe kyu bol rahi ho??
Sw: exactly, whats rey got to do with that??
Si: Rey has to...Uska aur kriya ka bhi break up huya hai and jis tarah e rey upset that usse yeh hi lagta hai ki he loves her truly but with in few days every thing became normal and aisa lagta hai jaise ki there was no kriya in rey's life. I mean tumhe ek baar bhi uski yaad nahi aati???

Rey smiled at simmi's question and replied.
Re: yaad...yaad humein uski aati hai jisse hum bhool jaate hai. Aur mein kriya ko kabhi nhi bhoola, she lives in my heart, my soul. Just because I don't express it out that doesn't mean that I don't love her. Mein, shayad kisi aur ladki ki taraf attract ho jaun but I'll be always loving her and that attraction can never replace her love in my heart. I love her and remember her every day, every night, every time. Wish She'd be here with me forever...I wish!!! But *sigh* I guess its JUST A DREAM.

Hearing this taani's face became pale and rey observed that. He guessed that she still feels for him but he is helpless, he can't do anything for her...

*****Dehradun*****
A girl was sitting in her room with one of her close friends present.
Gi: Kriya...umm mujhe tujhse kuch puchna hai??
Yeah the girl is kriya, kriya ghai who sacrificed her love, her dance and her friends as well just for the sake of friendship!!
Kr: Ha bol Palak..

Pa:Ummm jab tu dehradun vapis ayi thi toh you were kinda lost, and sad. Tune mujhe sab kuch bataya and I guess it made your heart a little light. But now-a-days, seeing you aisa lagta hai you've forgotten Reyansh..
Before Palak could speak further Kriya cut her in.
Kr: NEVER...I can never forget him. He is my life and how can any one forget his/her life?? I know mein usske baare main khul kar express nahi karti but I love him to the core. I do love him and will be loving him till my last breath. There's just one wish..wish I could meet him some day and tell him I love him...I WISH!!!
As she said this a tear rolled down her cheek. But she quickly wiped it off and spoke "you know I've made a promise to myself..never to cry while remembering him and my friends...they were a beautiful dream occurred and they don't deserve tears...*sigh* JUST A DREAM"



So hows it???? Liked it or not??? Criticisms are also welcome...

INDEX
PART 1:PG 1
PART 2: PG 7
Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os yar...
loved it...
kash yehsa hi hota in d3 too atleast kria rey ko yaad tho hoti...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was beautiful...

just loved it...

i wish u wud continue it...

lekin its cmplt in all sense...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres..
Uhm m really speechless...i mean...d entire part of rey had me bawling...shit yaar hw can he not remember her...
N kria...i jus dunno wad to say...evn i shld decide nt to cry now...

in dis one though their luv is incomplete...it is complete in its own way...i mean...snifff...

Readin somethin so heart touchin aftr reallly long...

Kriyaansh...just a dream now...
Edited by sweetangelpayal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow yaar

beautiful os

loved it

awesome

thanks for pm...
❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome... update res of the part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os dear
just beautiful
i wish u could cont this
bt i just loved it...
Thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

awesome... update res of the part soon...


its an OS so it ends here..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautifully expressed felings...
atleast one shot something very similar to this shud hv been in d3 b4 kria's exit...
or even now...showin they still remember n love each other only... after all sirf pehla nahi, unka saccha pyaar bhi tha...
then cud hv contd the utter ... going on...
loved it..do continue and giv a happy ending if u can...
atleast this way can keep uniting kriyansh!!

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