Kriyansh OS: Just A Dream!! - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys since most of you wanted a last part for this OS...here it is...Hope you all like it.

Part 2:

Three days had passed by since that conversation had taken place. It was yet another boring day with nothing to do. But there was one thing that changed, it was sharon's behavior. From the past 2 days she was behaving differently, sometimes happy, and at other times excited. The constant smile playing on her lips made swayam happy.

Suddenly sharon came running into the multi purpose room(RH) where every one was present except rey.
Sh:guys guys i have a surprise for you all.
Sw:whoa shar, calm down..
Vi: and whats this surprise thing??
Sh: pehle batao where's rey??
Ta:vo rey kuch papers lene gaye hai..aate hi honge..
Si: but sharon batao toh baat kya hai??
Sh: nopee...pehle rey ko aane do

"Here's rey" said swayam. Just when sharon completed her sentence rey entered the RH.
Re: kya huya guys?? Any problem
Ni: thank god dude tu aagaya...ab sharon batao apna surprise
Re:shar, surprise??
Ne:ha waiting sharon rey k liye...
Sh:okay, ab jab rey aa gaya hai toh I'll tell...guys aaj shaam exactly 3pm ko mere ghar aa jana..okk...
Without saying anything further sharon left, leaving everyone confused.

Ni: yeh tha uska surprise
Sw: oye duffer, surprise toh uske ghar pe he..
Re: yeah guys, get ready by 2:30 Swayam and I will pick you up and we'll leave for her house together.
Gang: yeah...
Every one left for their homes. Here taani was feeling weird. She was feeling as if some thing major is going to take place in her life. But poor soul was unable to find out what. Putting aside her thoughts she left from there.

At rey's house, he was getting ready and unknowingly he picked out a white shirt and along with that came out kriya's mask that she had worn during their first meet. He caressed the mask lovingly. He kissed it and put it back properly. And the got back to his work. After getting ready he called up swayam and both of them left to pick up the others. Soon they reached sharon's house.

They were standing outside her house and waiting for her to open the door. Finally sharon opened the door. As soon as rey entered inside he felt some thing new. He could feel her presence, her fragrance. They made themselves comfortable on the couch and soon every one threw bombs of questions on sharon. Before sharon could answer some one called her from behind. Every was shocked to see that person.
Gang: aunty aap!!!

Sh: yes guys..meet my mom Smriti Rai prakash.
Sw: sharon tumhari mom??
Sh: ha my mom
Every one was startled and rey, he became numb. He was rooted to his place. Every one's eyes fell on rey including smriti and gautam. Even gautam knew about kriyansh.

Again they heard some one calling sharon. It was an angelic and familiar voice and to their surprise they saw her coming down. This time even she was shocked, startled and surprised. She came down towards them. There was silence prevailing in there. To break the ice sharon spoke
Sh: guys meet my sister Kriya Rai Prakash.

This was yet another blow for them.
Sw: sh..sharon tumhari sister??
Kr: ha swayam sister.
This was the first time kriya spoke. She moved forward and hugged every one and when sge came to swayam, he slapped her lightly. Every one was surprised by this act of swayam.
Sw: aisa koi karta hai?? Koi iss tarah apne best friend ko chod kar jaata hai???
Saying this he pulled her into a hug. Every one smiled this. Now came rey's turn. Every one was impatiently waiting for rey to speak some thing. Not understanding what to say, rey left ftom there. Kriya looked back towards sharon. She came and hugged her and whispered "go get him back". Saying this she sent kriya away from there. And from their behind smriti and sharon narrated the whole story.

Rey was passing by the corridor on the first floor of the house when some one pulled him inside a room. He could easily guess it was her.
"kriya" he spoke after a long time. Without replying anything she hugged him tight.
Kr: I missed you rey...She said while still hugging him.
Re: I missed u tooo...he said while tightening his grip around her. Finally after what it seemed eternity they pulled back. Then rey spoke "kyu chali gayi??"
Kr: mujhe jaana pada
She made him sit on the bed and she herself sat beside him with his hand on her waist embracing her. She then told the whole story behind her leaving.

Re:toh fir aunty kaise maani??
Kr:vo...the other day mom and I were cleaning the store room and there I found dad's pic. Then I found another pic of me, dad, mom and sharon. We were babies at that time aur mujhe pata nhi tha ki gautam rai prakash hi mere dad hai and sharon meri mom. When I asked mom about this then she told me when I and sharon were an year old a huge fight occured between mom and dad and the reason was dance. Dad was more indulged in dance at that time and he couldn't give us proper time and this made mom annoyed. So, they decided to go different paths. Dad took away sharon and mom took away me. But then she told me ki vo dad aur sharon ko bahut miss karti hai. Bas mein yeh dekh nhi saki and I called up sharon aur mom-dad ka patch up hogaya and I'm back...aapke paas.

As soon as kriya completed rey pulled her into a passionate kiss. With every second passing the kiss became deeper and wilder. Unable to breath kriya pulled back and said "I love you.." Hearing this rey again kissed her but this time it was a soft yet passionate one. Finally he pulled back and said "I'm living the worlds most beautiful dream...I love you baatcutter" This time it was kriya who pulled him into a kiss. They kissed till eternity and pulled back and went and joined the gang.
THE END

So, hows it Do leave ur reviews.
Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
it was really beautiful..
loved it a lot...
superb..😃
keep writing ..👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
beautiful os... loved and good and awesome...
os... 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
It was super duper amazing!!!
Loved loved it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
this was one of the most beautific kriyansh dreams i just lived...exhilarating...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sweetangelpayal

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unres..
Uhm m really speechless...i mean...d entire part of rey had me bawling...shit yaar hw can he not remember her...
N kria...i jus dunno wad to say...evn i shld decide nt to cry now...

in dis one though their luv is incomplete...it is complete in its own way...i mean...snifff...

Readin somethin so heart touchin aftr reallly long...

Kriyaansh...just a dream now...



u r right.

Kriyaansh...just a dream now...

and some dreams can never becomes true.😭


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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
amazing os.

wish it's really happen in d3.

i've no words to describe thoughts...sorry...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Beautiful os !
Loved it !!
Finallly KR united ! Wish it happens in D3 too... !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
it was sooo nyc...
end ki line of rey"im livin most bful dream"
was 👏...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Simple nd lovely...
Thnk u fr givin us dis wonderful story to read..

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