WHEN DREAM BECOMES NIGHTMARE Chapter 5 pg 49 - Page 32

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meerubzara

superb update

thanks for pm


thanx for liking it 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

sayu nice up
ufff piya already dreamng about abhay lolzzz yeh toh hona tha
liked it that piya smiled yar atleast
so abhay have to save piya now
what will he do now
ohhh yar u eneded there when he came next to piya
i understand yar take ur time
and when will free update it ok


m so glad that u liked it Beeni 😳 yup... Piya pe to Abhay ka jadu chal gaya 😆 thinking to update tonight 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Awsome meeting of abhiya and s good update.


thanx 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashu1909






nice update.wow abhiya meet.


thanx for liking it dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyFanSuku

Nice up date and well written

thanx 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --faroo--

<font color="#CC66FF">wow nice updates sayu will chand and haseena r the villian in this ff i mean they will kill piya if she get to know the truth is that so ? and very nice update nice to see them feeling for each other update soon0„2</font>


thanx for liking it faroo 😳 thinking to update tonight 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

Awesuum! Just read all the 3 updates in one go!! And lovd them! 👏 I did read the prologue long back bt missd reading the updates! Anyway,cuming to the update..
Loved ayurh! Felt bad for bth pia n ayush. They r so lonely! They'r eachother's support system..abhay saved ayush! Tht's great! He made an entry just d way abhay raichand wud! 😉 and he saved ayush! Gud for a change! 😊 abhiya met bt abhay keeps vanishing! Hm..so nw abhiya does meet properly! Lets see to stop pia frm further research,wat does abhay do...
Do continue wen u get time...
Loving the storyline! Keep it up! Tk.cre.. 😊


its gr8 to see u back 😊 was really missing ur comments . Now m so happy that u r back 😊 thanx for liking the updates dear 😊 hope u will like the nxt updates too 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay

when you up date dear ...


will be updating by tonight 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 4

Its almost evening now , to be exact perhaps this is the time that gets called dusk . Sun has set down a little before , dark night is still a little far to arrive . The setting sun has left a dreamy patch of red or deep orange in the sky . Sun set in Dehradun looks so beautiful ? Piya was thinking while seating in a chair in terrace . She smiles a little , she did not know it . Perhaps she did not notice it till now . But today , today everything seems to be different to her . Today she is getting amazed on everything she is witnessing , though she herself does not know the reason . Piya was actually recalling the moments she spent with Abhay in college . A sweet smile gets painted on her face . She stands up & starts to roam around . Abhay Raichand ! When she heard about Raichands she thought he would be quiet arrogant , attitude holder type guy , but she was wrong . Abhay proved her wrong . He was so nice , so soft spoken to her , Piya could not spot a single mark of arrogance in him . Actually...if Piya's assumption is right , then he is quiet shy . Piya was really surprised when he simply denied the fact that he saved Ayush that day . At first Piya was surprised if she did any mistake , if "the saviour" was really some other person . But how it can be possible ? Those eyes...those piercing blue eyes... Piya was damn sure that she did not do any mistake . But why is he denying ? Piya had a strange feeling that time , but now ? Now she can understand the reason quiet clearly , perhaps now she has started to understand him a little bit . Perhaps he is reluctant to take the credit for what he has done , perhaps he does not like publicity or hero type image . Piya's smile gets broaden , he is really such a nice person . The more she is thinking about him , the more she is admirining him . She is really very much lucky to become friend with such person . Piya was lost deep in thought suddenly she notices a hand , waving in front of her . Piya turns to spot the owner of that waving hand and stops staring at Misha .
"I knew it , it must be you ! Who else will get such crazy ideas?" Piya says in light tone .
"Crazy idea ? What are you calling crazy huh ? I called you so many time , but you didn't replied , infact you didn't even turn back to me ! So I was just checking if you really exist in this world !" Misha says at one go .
What ?? Misha called her ? But she did not hear her voice , is Misha again trying to tease her or she was really immersed in Abhay's thought so deep that she did not listen ? Piya looks up to Misha , tries to find out is there any mischievious idea making its mark on her face , but no , it seems like Misha is not joking . Asking her now means inviting danger by own . Piya avoids the matter smartly and asks back Misha " My eyes are saying you are very happy due to some reason , may I know why ?"
Misha broadens up her eyes as suddenly she remembered something " See ! I just forgot why did I come here ! I came to give you the news that Kabir is coming back tomorrow & you can now assume why am I so happy ?"
"Oh sure ! I am just thinking how much happy Ayush will be hearing this . Finally God listened to his prayer . Now he will get a releife from your non stop torture !" Piya starts to laugh .
" Ya ya I know " Misha says in fake anger " his Kabir uncle will save him from me . "
"Hmm...don't get sad . Kabir will compensate that too " Piya says in playful tone .
"Yes ! He has to !" Misha & Piya both break down into laughter .



Mid night in Raichand Mansion

The room is almost dark , the fire in fireplace on its way to extinguish , after that the room will become totally dark , but the man inside the room was not giving attension to it , seating on the arm chair he is thinking something very deeply . He is totally lost in his thoughts . He is remembering the girl he met at college . Piya , Piya Dobriyal . She is Piya Dobriyal , came from Delhi to do a research work under Mount College . Strange ! Its really very much strange ! She preffered this small town Dehradun over Delhi for her research work ? Its really strange . And the stranger thing is her subject . She is researching on vampires ? Why ? From where she got the idea to research on this topic ? She does not have any idea how much dangerous it is . She is really needed to stop , but what to do in order to stop her ? Today at afternoon he went to talk to her , to make her understand that she should not persue with this topic anymore , though he did not have any answer if she asks back why . But...he was so much absorped in his thoughts that he did not notice someone is waiting in front of him to talk to him .
Haseena breaks the silence , she calls him in a low tone " Abhay ! "
Abhay looks up to her , again ! Again she has come here ! Why don't they leave him alone ?
Abhay replies in a stern voice " What happened ?"
"What happened ?? You are asking what happened ?" Haseena answers in an annoyed voice " what you have started Abhay ? Do you have any idea how Chand will react when he will get to know about it ?"
Abhay's annoyance too was increasing . Why these people always deliver their speech indirectly ? He asks in a cold voice" I am not in mood to solve your puzzle . Better you say clearly what you want to mean " saying this he stands up and moves towards the window .
Haseena too follows him and stops behind him " Today I got a call from your college . They are saying you have started to research on Vampires ?" Haseena's voice was giving a clear witness how much puzzled , shocked , annoyed she is .
But that does not make any change in Abhay . He calmly asks "So what ?"
"So what ?? Abhay are u crazy ? Why are you doing all these ? I mean how could you choose your research topic Vampires ? You yourself is a vampire ! Isn't it enough to know them ? Didn't you get much knowledge about them in this long 200 years that you now need to research on them ? What type of joke it is Abhay ! Do you ever think what effect it can have on other students ? What if someone else now start to research on this ? We will be exposed Abhay ! You yourself want that we get exposed ?? Why did you invite the danger by your own Abhay ? Why ?" at the end her voice reached almost shouting volume .
Abhay was listening to the long speech silently . Now he speaks up " You finished ? Now my turn . Well my answer is I am not bound to answer you , still listen this time I was feeling too lazy to make a report so chosed this subject so that I can finish off the report easily , ok ? Now please don't drag Dad between all these . I am pretty sure he too will not feel much happier by this, but the fact is my decision is not going to change . Ok ? Now am feeling a little bit tired , so going to jungle for dinner . Please don't follow me there !" Abhay completes his speech at one go and comes down to hall in his vampiric speed . Before Haseena could say anything more he leaves for jungle in same speed .

Abhay heaves a sigh of relief coming out from haveli . Everytime , everytime they want to controll him , everytime they want to make him understand that he is bound to listen to them . Why ? Why should he listen to them ? He knows very well though he forbed Haseena to tell it to Chand , still Haseena will pass this news to Chand as if its her sincere duty ! Abhay stops...yes he is very much sure Haseena will not forget to convey this news to Chand and after returning he have to face another long speech . What will he answer to Chand ? The report type excuse is just sounding too much stupid ! He is quiet sure even Haseena too did not beleive it . But what excuse he could give her ? His brain is just not working ! In order to become friendly to Piya he had to tell that he too researching on vampires , so that Piya can freely tell him how much she discovered about them , why she want to know about them and all . But he did not think what will he say when his parents will ask him regarding this . Abhay shakes his head , its really such a stupid thing he did . He would have thought about a good excuse before specially when he knows very well that they have fixed their eyes on his every move . Abhay was walking towards the jungle slowly while thinking all these . He remembers Haseena said what if anyone else now starts a research on this . He smiles a little in his mind . They do not know search already has begun , Abhay is just trying to stop that search . When Abhay asked her about her subject she was clearly annoyed by his curiosity , infact she indirectly said that what subject she will choose thats totally her matter , no one should interfare . Thats the main reason Abhay had to tell he too researching on same topic and now he is offering her to work as his partner . She asked for 1 day to make her mind . Today she will reply him , lets see what does she reply . Abhay is really praying to get a positive response from her , if she refuses it would be really tough for him to stop her . Somewhere deep in heart Abhay knows she is not researching in this topic just for curiosity , Abhay knows she has some serious motive behind this . But what ? He has to find out & for this its too much necessary to be in her company . Suddenly a bird's chirping brings him back to sense , Abhay looks up and discovers the darkness has started to fade out , soon dawn will set in . Before the sun rises he has to finish his hunt and has to go back before anyone notices him . Abhay keeps all his thinkings aside and enters the jungle .

Its now almost 5am of morning . Piya comes out from the cottage wearing her jogging suit . Wao ! At such a beautiful time she stepped out ! Night is bidding good bye , morning is still a little away to say hello . In this half dark , half lighted atmosphere everything seems to be so beautiful ! Piya inhales a deep breath , feels the freshness of air and starts her jogging . While jogging she starts to think about her coming day in college . The first task she has is to answer Abhay . Yesterday Abhay offered her to be his research partner . Piya is still confused what to answer him . 2days passed away , still Piya could not make any impressive move in her research , may be Abhay's help can speed up her work ? But...if she agrees to be Abhay's partner its quiet possible he will want to know why is she researching on this , what will she answer ? Infact on yesterday too he asked indirectly about it , she avoided that question smartly . But if they start to work together how long it would be possible to avoid ? Piya was so much engrossed in her though she did not notice she has come near the jungle while jogging . A sweet whistle brings her back to sense . She looks around , it must be some bird's voice . But from where the sound is coming ? Piys observes the nearby trees well , though she could not notice the higher branches minutely in this darkness , but still she got sure the bird is chirping inside the jungle . Suddenly she starts to feel a deep pull towards the jungle , she has become too much curious to spot that bird . But...is it safe to go there now ? Piya hesitates for sometime , the sweet whistle is still coming to her ears , finally she entered the jungle . She was looking to and fro for the bird , suddenly her eyes get stopped on a dark figure . No , thats surely not the bird , but that figure seems to be very familier to her . The feeble light of early morning was enough for her to recognise him . "Abhay !" she whispers in surprise . What is he doing here ? Thats too at this time ? She wanted to call him , but before she could utter a single word suddenly the figure got disappear from there leaving her shocked , stunned , surprised !




Hey friends a biiig sorry for delaying the update so much . I know I kept you all waiting for so many days and then gave a short update , thats also not good in quality . I am extremely sorry for this . Actually nowadays am too much busy due to studies . My day starts with tution , then colg , then evening ko my own study & labfile likhna . I get totally exhausted and feel so much tired just don't feel to write after that . Still tried to write everynight a little bit and I myself can feel it didn't turn good . I am really sorry for that & promise in next update I will try to improve it 😊 leave your precious comments after reading friends & if u liked it plz don forget to hit like button 😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yipee...i'm 1st.Very nice update yar.Pia Abhay r kheyal e dube ache...aww so cute.Next part joldi update koro
Edited by Monami_50 - 12 years ago

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