WHEN DREAM BECOMES NIGHTMARE Chapter 5 pg 49 - Page 30

Originally posted by: smdosi

Finally Abhiya met! Yipeee...gr8 yaar...thnks 4d pm... :)

thanx for liking it dear 😳

Originally posted by: spn-abhay

awesum update dear😊i liked it😊wow pia-misha n ayush scene was😆wow abhiya meet😃continue soon tahnx 4 pm

thanks for liking it so much 😊 m glad that u found it interesting 😳

Originally posted by: koli97

<font color="#003399">lovely update sayu...😊wait 4 nxt update😊</font>

thanx for ur lovely comment di 😊 m glad that u liked it 😊

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

wow very nicely written. like the intro a lot

thanx for liking it dear 😊

Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya

hey sayu thax fr pm!😊!
nw bout update its gud!! i luv misha's prank!! 😉 abhay still hdn't frgt his humunity... hw sweet!! so vo khud pia se frndship krne aaya he wow!! eagarly waiting fr next update!! 😛

m glad that u liked it fairy 😛 will update tonight hopefully 😊

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story

thanx for liking it 😊 will update tonight hopefully 😊

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Wow awesome update yaar, seriously from beggining till end just loved it dear. Amazing description and intro of Raichands. Loved misha's prank wala scene, lol. Piya looking in the mirror scene, was so cute, I can imagine that scene so sweet. wow loved the convo's and now abhiya met fully it's gonna bhi interesting now. I am waiting to know what will abhay do now. Plz continue when u can dear, studies come first ok. Gr8 job dear.

awww Romi again a loong comment ! Thats why I love u tooo much 😳 m glad that u liked the update 😊 thanx for understanding my situation 😊

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay

Dear how are you ,best luck for your study ,you are just awe-some as writer ,please continue it whenver you will time ,about the story what a cute introduction you given the raichand family mind bowling ,just awe-some story ,thanks for pm

thanx for understanding my situation dear . I am glad that u liked the update 😊

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

hi!!! lagta hai would be mausaji ko dekh kar mausi ka dimag band ho gaya hai and unhone apni would be wife ko khud intrm diya sahi hai wase bhi bechari milne ke kia tadap rai thi... by d way i m sure ye abhay ab apne intro ke bade jarur ye bolega dat "stay away from ur research" dialog m thoda change hai "me" ki jagha "research" hoga...par bate wahi hai... khadus...and d way u describe raichands and their sourrounding its difnt and nice to... wase abhay phele lib se bina bole kyo chala gaya

hayee !! Kinna cute comment hai ji ! Loved ur comment 😊 thanx for liking it 😊 umm... Nahi nahi...ye Abhay purana ghisapita dialogue nahi bolega . This is brand new Abhay 😳 wait & watch 😆 lib se chala kyu gaya ?? Are suppose u r a vamp & u found a person reading books on vamps , tere himmat hoga uske samne rukne ka ?? 🤣 or may be he was puzzled what to do...he was shocked too & didn want ki uska expression koi dekhe ???? Abhay ko jake puch 😆 & sab Piya ko weird nazro se dekh rahe the thanx to her subject 😆 Tere samne koi vampires pe book padhe to will u not gaze at her surprisingly ?? Thats why 😆 Aur koi qn hai ??? 😆

Originally posted by: .rumki.

awesome update
liked pia misha's part

thanx 😳