--DOR-- Thread 1 (Parts 1-22)

Hiii,

I am (Monika)again with my second maaneet story DOR, which mean thread, string . I will not tell anything as I want you all to feel yourselves the real definition of this word "DOR" in life. How this word describe the whole reality of love. I only want to say that you all will like it for sure as you poured your precious love on my first story Her Bitter Fate

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" geet ...geet kaha ho. Dadi geet kaha hai.'

 

Kyu maan bete aaj badi jaldi office se aa gaye aap. Kya baat hai.pahle to hum khate kahte thak jaate thy ki maan bete kabi to dinner ke time pe ghar aa jaaiye aur yaha lunch bhi ghar pe hi kar rahe hai. Kya baat hai. Ye kisne jaadu kiya hai aap pe

 

Dadimaa ho gaya aapka to mai kuch bolu.

 

Haa beta boliye. Wase bhi hum to taras gaye ki kabhi aap humse bhi do baate kar liya kijiye..warna geet k aane k baad to humare liye kisi ke pass time hi nahi hai

 

Maan roled his eyes. Dadi maa ab aapki tabiyat nahi khrab ho rahi itna bolne se. Ya aap pe bhi geet ka asar ho gya hai jo rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahi

 

'Kyaaa' kya kaha maan aapne. Mai bolti hu.haa mai jayada bolti hu. Abhi batati hu. Dadimaa jaane mat dena inko.

 

And they started running like two kids.

 

 Iin dono ki khushiyo ko kisi ki nazar na lage bhagwaan. Dadi wiped her wet eyes wishing all happiness of world for her maan and geet

 

After 2 years

 

Nooo m not geet ..mai geet nahi hu mujhe jaane do...Nahiii chodo mujhe ..chodi jaane do mujhe.. maaan...chodiye mujhe, jaane do please... mujhe yaha se jana hai..please jaane do..mai geet nahi hu.

 

They had small world, full of love and happiness. They never need anything beyond it. They were happy, very happy. Their small world had all happiness what anyone could wish for. They had unperturbed past and peaceful future. But one day she lost something. Something which had his and her each and every moment of love. She remembered something which she should not. But alas! It happened. A reality which took away their each and every memory of life

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Please do likes and comment if you felt it should be continued. I am eagerly waiting for all responses.

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My Other FF 

Her Bitter Fate

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INDEX

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Character Sktch

Thread 2

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

part 8

Part 9

Part 10

Part 11

Part 12

Part 13

[Part 14

Part 15

Part 16

Part 17

Part 18

Part 19

Part 20

Part 21

Part 22

Part 22
Part 23
Part 24
Part 25
Part 26
Part 27
Part 28
Part 29
Part 30
Part 31
Part 32

Edited by geet.lover - 11 years ago

Hmm...seems interesting.Looking forward to reading the character sketch and 1st chp😊

nice start ...

nice start...

Nice start

yipeee...lovu teri second ff wowww awesome ...👏...loved it❤️...

wowww lovu...teri 2nd ff...superb start...👏😊...loved ❤️ it...

continue soon...👍🏼
Edited by soma.gurti - 11 years ago

interesting...
cont soon and pm me...

SOUNDS INTERESTING

v interesting