--DOR-- Thread 1 (Parts 1-22)

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Hiii,

I am (Monika)again with my second maaneet story DOR, which mean thread, string . I will not tell anything as I want you all to feel yourselves the real definition of this word "DOR" in life. How this word describe the whole reality of love. I only want to say that you all will like it for sure as you poured your precious love on my first story Her Bitter Fate


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" geet ...geet kaha ho. Dadi geet kaha hai.'

Kyu maan bete aaj badi jaldi office se aa gaye aap. Kya baat hai.pahle to hum khate kahte thak jaate thy ki maan bete kabi to dinner ke time pe ghar aa jaaiye aur yaha lunch bhi ghar pe hi kar rahe hai. Kya baat hai. Ye kisne jaadu kiya hai aap pe

Dadimaa ho gaya aapka to mai kuch bolu.

Haa beta boliye. Wase bhi hum to taras gaye ki kabhi aap humse bhi do baate kar liya kijiye..warna geet k aane k baad to humare liye kisi ke pass time hi nahi hai

Maan roled his eyes. Dadi maa ab aapki tabiyat nahi khrab ho rahi itna bolne se. Ya aap pe bhi geet ka asar ho gya hai jo rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahi

'Kyaaa' kya kaha maan aapne. Mai bolti hu.haa mai jayada bolti hu. Abhi batati hu. Dadimaa jaane mat dena inko.

And they started running like two kids.

Iin dono ki khushiyo ko kisi ki nazar na lage bhagwaan. Dadi wiped her wet eyes wishing all happiness of world for her maan and geet

After 2 years

Nooo m not geet ..mai geet nahi hu mujhe jaane do...Nahiii chodo mujhe ..chodi jaane do mujhe.. maaan...chodiye mujhe, jaane do please... mujhe yaha se jana hai..please jaane do..mai geet nahi hu.


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When you were mine, nothing else I wanted

You were mine, Whole world was in my heart

I never need anything, which I never had

I had you only you , now I wish you to be only mine


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They had small world, full of love and happiness. They never need anything beyond it. They were happy, very happy. Their small world had all happiness what anyone could wish for. They had unperturbed past and peaceful future. But one day she lost something. Something which had his and her each and every moment of love. She remembered something which she should not. But alas! It happened. A reality which took away their each and every memory of life


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Please do likes and comment if you felt it should be continued. I am eagerly waiting for all responses.


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My Other FF

Her Bitter Fate


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INDEX

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Character Sktch

Thread 2

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

part 8

Part 9

Part 10

Part 11

Part 12

Part 13

[Part 14

Part 15

Part 16

Part 17

Part 18

Part 19

Part 20

Part 21

Part 22

Part 22
Part 23
Part 24
Part 25
Part 26
Part 27
Part 28
Part 29
Part 30
Part 31
Part 32

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shruthiR thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hmm...seems interesting.Looking forward to reading the character sketch and 1st chp😊
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yipeee...lovu teri second ff wowww awesome ...👏...loved it❤️...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww lovu...teri 2nd ff...superb start...👏😊...loved ❤️ it...

continue soon...👍🏼

Edited by soma.gurti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting...
cont soon and pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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SOUNDS INTERESTING
WAITING FOR THE STORY
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting
what happened why is geet saying she isnt geet
do update the first chapter soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratulation for new ff
interesting start
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the plot
continue soon
waiting dear
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Monika 🤗...thank u for starting a new Maaneet FF...awesome prologue...plz continue 😊

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