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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
loved it alot...

precap is shocking...i hope maan cmz at the correct time...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ana56

ufff

phir se ek shock?
the update was amazing
but what will this raghav do now?
and where is maan
plz continue soon



heheheheh ana bahut din se shock nahi di thi na..
bahut aaraam kar li tum.. ab be ready dear 😉



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Monika 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and PM...my poor Geet...feeling so bad for her...Maan and Daadi did not mean to but they have really hurt her innocent heart...Maan has still not cleared the MU ...what is this twist my dear 😲...Mohinder is trapped by Raghav's men and Geet has just walked in...what is this precap 😡...u are planning to drive us crazy my dear 😆...plz continue...TC 😊





hehehe Ratna.. after bitter fate u did so much relax na.. now be ready for your
lot of twists, sharp turns,speed breakers 😛 😆



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ishanidhi08

superb...



geet sad...😭
Mu not cleared...😔


well writte, superb...do continue soon
waiting...\


thanks for pm...




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hermoso

omg what u did . maan to abhi manofy bhi nahi kya and raghav had cum 😡 .precap sounds scary my dear . update soon .




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gcs-girl

Awesome Update
Loved it
ouch!! Geet s hurt..maan feeling guilty
urghhh raghav😡
hope maan ll save his GF
waiting for next..continue soon
thankx for pm






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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Pata nahi ab Maan kaise manayega Geet ko? Waiting for update...




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Posted: 12 years ago


(One good news for all who wanted next part of my OS Dharkan Zara Ruk Gayi Hai ..as m going to turn it in SS... hope you will support me )


PART 20


Geet heard door closed behind her. She turned and shocked to see more new faces here n there… she scered and started shaking.. her eyes started searching mohindar as till now she already understood , something was not right there.. all men were smriking and then she heard a laugh.. a laugh which was scary. She saw a man came from front among all and stood front of her.. He was chewing something in his mouth and looking her smriking..



She was feeling like creepy around her.. her mind was now fared for mohindar.. " papa kaha hai " with shake voice she asked..



" tumhaare papa bilkul thik hai … per pata nahi kitne der rahenge " raghav said staring her.



" matlab ??



"matlab ye .. ki sirf tum ab unki jaan bacha sakti ho "



Geet eyes widen… she could not understand his meaning but could guess, whatever it was, was not good.



"aa..aap kya..kah..raho ..ho..mujhe..kuch …samjh ..nahi ..aa ..raha " her voice shook..

"achha !! .. koi baat nahi ..hum samjha dete hai.. ya fir dikha dete hai " he signaled his men and those brought mohindar downstairs, geet cried to see him in ropes, tied. She run to him and hugged panicking and terrifying..



Raghav tried to hold her arm to pull her back when geet shuddered and moved back in jerk.. " don't touch me " she yelled.. " mere papa ko chor do "



"chor denge.. agar tum meri baat maan jaao " raghav said Stern



"kon si baat " she asked crying badly



" tumhe mujhse shadi karni hogi .. abhi " he said ..



Geet and mohindar shoked.. mohindar was pleading, struggling ..please don't do this…



Geet shocked .. moved back.. she was hell scared to think anything. She was denying and crying .. but when she saw raghav was stepping toward mohindar with a sharp knife, screamed. She had no option but to agree.. she agreed



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Geet was in her room. She looked to bed where a bridal dress was kept. She cried, took this dress and throw… it fell on floor so was she.. she rested her head on bed edge and cried.. .. she had already thought about all options .. There was no scape.. she cried and cried praying to her babaji …



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Raghav and men were waiting for geet when doorbell rang. That same middle age man opened. It was meera. Meera confused to see a new face in geet home and that to opening door. She hesitantly asked for geet. Man smiled and told same thing which had said to geet. He told geet is in her room. she can go up stairs and meet her. Meera convinced and entered and then she looked all men. She shocked and got scared. " Mohindar uncle aur geet thik hai na ?? ' she thought something happened to them . Raghav laughed



" chalo achha hai.. ab to dulhan ki saheli (friend) bhi aa gayi.. ab toh aur bhi achha hai ..

'dulhan ??' meera asked aghast.



Ragha- haan dulhan.. tumhe apni dost ki shadi ki khushi nahi hui ' he said laughing..



Meera understood it was something else. Geet going to marry that too this kind of, it was something more. She runs upstairs and knocked geet room. Geet first scared.



when she heard meera voice she run and opened. As she saw meera , she hugged her tight and cried loud as she could. Meera too chocked seeing her this condition. She came inside and closed door. She hugged geet back to console her. Geet was meant for meera more then her friend. Geet was her princess. She was like her younger sister. She could not see her tears. Meera somehow calmed geet down and asked everything. Geet told her sobbing.



" geet .. dekh .. geet himmat rakh .. dekh listen to me… dekh geet ase himmat haarne se kuch nahi hoga… hai na.. tujhe mohindar uncle ko bhi bachhana hai na ..hmm " meera tried to make geet understand , wiping her tears. Geet nodded meekly, looking in meera eyes..



"thik hai.. to jesa mai kahti hu wesa kar .. samjhi " then meera told her some plan.



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Meera went downstairs and told raghav bending her head " wo .. geet ko bhuk lagi hai.. usne lunch bhi nahi kiya tha to… '



Raghav- thik hai .. uske liye kuch bana do.. aur jaldi.. ' meera nodded and went to kitchen when raghav said to his men " mai zara dekh ke aata hu.. wo ready hui ya nahi " and started going to geet room when meera said



" suniye… wo ready ho gayi hai .. maine usse ready kar diya.. bas thori bhukhi thi … '



Raghav smiled . " thik hai .. '



Meera sighed and started making some food when her. eyes turned to phone again n again. She thought " phone to aana chahiye abhi.. pata nahi kab karenge.. maan please.. jaldi phone kijiye .. kahi der na ho jaaye .." she prayed to babaji.



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She prepared food and started to go to geet when phone rang. She run and picked when raghav stopped her..



"kaha ja rahi ho "



"wo.. ghar se phone aaya hoga.. maine batana bhul gayi thi ki mai thik se pahuch gayi hu "



Raghav looked to his men. His men suggested to let her talk otherwise her family might doubt, why no one picking phone. Rahgav nodded.



"thik hai .. baat karlo.. per khabardaar kuch bhi chalaki karne ki koshish ki to.. "



Meera nodded and talked...



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Maan was driving when he heard meera shaking voice " hello bhai… haa mai Geet ke ghar pahuch gayi hu… wo aaj raat mai Geet ke sath ruk jaaungi.. wo Geet ko exam ki preparation karni hai na.. aap fikar mat karma.. okk bye… and she cut. She intentionally forced on 'geet' word that no one noticed



That was enough for maan to understand ,they were in big trouble. " meera I know geet is in problem.. warna tum ye kabhi nahi bolti ki tum raat bhar waha rukogi... mujhe jaldi waha pahuchna hoga..." he thought and speed up his car, he also called his securities to reach there as soon as



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geet was in bridal dress, crying , hugging meera.. dont know why but she was missing maan badly.. " meera maan kaha hai .. wo hote to ye shaddi kabhi nahi hone dete' unknowingly she blabbered. Meera shocked first then smiled, caressing her hair.



Maan aaynge geet... jarur aayenge " meera thought then both heard a knock on door.



" jaldi chalo.. bhai ne bulaaya hai " a man shouted. Both geet and meera went downstairs. Geet was hiding behind meera.. terrified. Raghav looked her and smirked, which meera dint like, but she could not do anything. She caressed geet hand to calm her while geet was shivering.



Two men brought tied mohindar. Geet run to him panicking.



Raghav- chalo.. hume jana hai …



all looked him confused. Raghav laughed " aree humaare hone waale sasur ji (father in law) .. ab shaadi bina pandit ke to nahi ho sakti na.. aur fir humaare maa bapu (father) bhi toh honge shadi me.. to humne puri taiyaari kar li hai .. chaliyee.. kahi muhurat na nikal jaaye... " and he signaled his men to sit in jeep.



" Bhai .. is larki ka kya karna hai " one man asked seeing meera.



" isse yahi band kardo kamre me.. akhir subah koi to sabko batane wala hona chahiye na.. ki geet ka pati kon hai " and he laughed evilly...



All made geet and mohindar sit forcefully in two jeep (in one mohindar, in other geet ) , locking meera in a room. After 5 min maan reached there and knocked .. when a scream came out from inside...



Precap : I Love You

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All silent readers kindly i request you.. please at least do like if you read this FF .. it will encourage me more to write fast ...

I have replied all long comments with my special selective graphics( of course downloaded 😛) please u all check .. as i always want you all to see it.. but never u saw 😭 so today i m saying here.. and who dint get reply .. next time dear 😉 promise 😃 so never think i dont reply or see comments...



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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww lovu superb update...ye raghab ki baccha ko toh hath pair tor dena chaiye😡...geet ko sadhi karne ki bare mein soch rahe h infact soch kya rahe wo sadhi ke nikal padha😡...maan go get raghav n do char punch mar dena...waise lovu who is screaming 😕...waise i hacve a ques meera ke pass cell nehi tha ye fir geet ke pass ...call karne ki kya jarurat wolog toh msz hi kar pati agr cell hota toh❓
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago

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