--DOR-- Thread 1 (Parts 1-22) - Page 5

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

Awsome start...:)

Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
that was awesome...
though Maan was rude Geet was too good...
shes so naive and innocent and so cute...
her antics are funny...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: preeti.1

superb

Originally posted by: suhaaana

superb update
cont soon

PART 2

Geet kept her hand under his nose" saans (breathing) to chal rahi hai..matlab zinda hai. hmmm ..ab to isko hosh me laane ka ek hi raasta hai" her eyes twinkled with mischive. slowly she went close to his ear and aaa aaa ...

Maan jumped not understanding what happed. after few sec he came back in his normal and looked at her with his big fire red eyes.. his nose was shaking in anger like will kill her in no time. he was going to shout her when she innocently asked

aap zinda to ho na."

Kyaa.. tumne kya mai mara hua dikh raha hu...

nahi ..woh..aap hil bhi nahi rahe thy to mujhe lag...

achha ..to tumhe laga ki mai mar gaya.wah...iska matlab maine sahi socha tha. tum insaan ho hi nahi ." he said with anger but a lil bit mishchive too.

geet mouth wide open...kyaa ..fir aapne mujhe insaan nahi kaha. toh fir mai kya hu haa..bataiye...she again went in her usual self.

tum...tummm aakchuuu

haa..mai..mai..boliye naa.. kya bakri ki tarah mai mai kar rahe hai haa..

maan was hell angry now. He wanted to go from there otherwise he self dint know what he will do to her. So he just left to his jeep.

"aree ..ye kaha jaa raha hai" geet thought ..suniyeee.. suniyeee aap kaha jaa rahe hai ..dekhiye itni tez bearish me aage mat jaaiye. Suniyeee'." But till then maan had already gone. "hey babaji .. wo aadmi jo bhi ho uski raksha (safe) karna.. use pata bhi nahi ki iis tez bearish me yaha ke pahari raaste (hill roads) kitne khatarnaak (dangerous) ho jaate hai ." she prayed her babaji for a stranger

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'Achha hua mai waha se chala aaya. Wrana toh aaj mai pagal jauru hota. Pata nahi bhawaan bhi kaise kaise piece bana dete hai. " he was thinking and driving in heavy rain when sudden braked. "omg'who kya hai." He looked a man is fully drenched laid on road on his stomach.

Instantly maan came down from jeep and went to him . he turned him and saw he was little injured.

Maan patted him. ' suniyeee.. suniyeee' but man was unconscious. So He lifted him and took to jeep. He drove some far in search of any hospital but could not. Meanwhile that man got his conscious. He looked here and there then to maan. Maan stooped his jeep and turned to him. "aap thik hai " man nodded. " mai yaha kaise" he asked confused. Maan described him all. Man thanked him. Maan nodded and smiled a little.

Maan- ye hua kaise

Man ' pata nahi bete. Mai toh ghar jaa raha tha. Tabhi ek truck aayi piche se. mai toh side me chal raha tha. Fir bhi pata nahi kyu .. usne mujhe dhakka mara.. uske baad mujhe kuch yad nahi beta.

Maan smelled something fishy. But he didn't ask further. " aapko kaha jana hai. Mai aapko chor deta hu. Maan nodded and told him address.

Man- tum kaha jaa rahe ho beta. Itni tej bearish me. Pahle to aapko yaha nahi dekha kabhi.

Maan- ji mai yaha kisi kaam ke silsile (business purpose) me aaya hu. Who mujhe xyz jana tha per rasta nahi pata.

Man- aree who jagah toh yaha se bahut najdik(near) hai. Mai aapko rasta batata hu.' And he told him way. "tum rahte kaha ho beta"

Maan- ji..abhi tak socha nahi. Socha tha kaam khatam karke sochunga. Per ye bearish'

Man- ohh.. toh aap asa karo . mai yahi paas me rahta hu. Kaam pura hone tak tum humare yaha ruk jaao. Mujhe khushi hogi.

Maan- ji.. thanks per mai kisi hotel ya guest house me ruk jaaunga. Waise bhi jayad din ka kaam nahi hai. Agar aaj kaam ho jata toh mai do din me wapas chala jata. Aur waise bhi aapko taqlif (problem) hogi.

Man- isme pareshani ki kya baat hai. Tumne meri jaan bachayi hai to mujhe itna toh karne do. Waise bhi ye pahari jagah(hill place) hai. Yaha aapko jyada achhi jagah nahi milegi rahne ko. Aapko pareshani hogi. He anyhow convinced maan to stay with him in his house.

In evening

Geet was in kitchen preparing dinner when doorbell rung. 'papa honge' she thought and went to door. She opened it and turn without looking. " papa aaj aapne kitni der kar di. Pata hai mai kitna pareshaan ho gayi thi. Kya kya soch rahi thi . ek toh itna bura mausam (weather) upper se itni andhera (dark) . aree papa pata hai aaj kya hua'' " she went to kitchen while doing her all talk. She still dint realize her papa was not replying. " papa , aap chai lenge ya khana lagau. Khana ban gaya hai.. areee haan papa, mai aapko bata rahi thi ki aaj kya hua.. pata hai papa, aaj mujhe ek ajeeb sa aadmi mila.. wo mai jab collage se laut rahi thin a toh'. " Sudden she felt someone presence there. She said "aree papa, aap yaha kyu aa gaye" she turned back and took aback.

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With Love Monika

Originally posted by: raingurti

wowww lovu mein toh teri num 1 fan bante ja rahi hu...awesome...hehehehehe aur ye geet kitna bolti h...😆