--DOR-- Thread 1 (Parts 1-22) - Page 2

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CHARACTER SKETCH

Maan singh khuraan (25 yrs)

Handsome, rich, arrogant, full of attitude but good from heart. He was owner of The Khurana Constructions. Lives in delhi with his dadi

Geet Handa (21 yrs)

Beautiful, nave, full of life. Lives in Shimla with her father. Very innocent that doesn't do differences between good or devil

Savitri devi

Maan dadi. Loves his grandson beyond her life. He was her whole world. Always support him and his decisions.

Mohindarlal handa

Geet papaji. He was a doctor. He loves her daughter more than anything. Always wants her happiness. Always cares for her and her needs.

Meera

Geet best friend. She loves geet as her own sister. Always care for her and wants to protect her from all evils.

More characters will be unfolded on right time

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PART 1

It's a story of a girl Geet Handa. Geet .. a 21 yrs girl. Beautiful, innocent , nave all these adjectives described her perfectly. Princess of all who knew her. She was a darling. Always ready to help others. Never ever hurt or gave pain to anyone. Believed in her babaji. Lovely daughter of her father Mohindarlal, who was a doctor by profession. They were very happy in their little world. They dint need anyone or anything more. But one day, something happened. A stranger came in their life and everything changed in their world'..

" damn ...damn... Yahi hona baki tha. Ek to asi sunsaan jagah (desert place), upar se ye jeep ko bhi yahi khraab hona tha. Yaha to dur dur tak koi dikhai bhi nahi de raha. Damn" he banged hard on his jeep

He he he he " a sweet giggle bloomed in air. Followed by angelic husky voice. "Meera lagta hai koi naya aaya hai. Isiliye asi baate kar raha hai. Warna har koi janta hai ki ase dur gaon me koi dur dur tak wse bhi najar nahi aata. Per isme iss bechare jeep ki kya galti. Wo usse kyu maar raha hai'. Chhh.. bechara jeep. Ek toh itne bade lambe chaude aadmi ko itni dur leke aaya uperse maar bhi kha raha hai. Kya zindhgi hai na iski Meera..chehhh

Oo LADKI..." an arrogant voice blasted. tum ho kon aur ye kya anaap shnaap bole ja rahi ho. Aur tum hoti kon ho mere baare me kuch bhi bolne wali..haa" his eyes were spitting fire.

Oyee ...mai aspko nahi iis bechare jeep ko bol rahi thi. Bechara ek to kitni dhup me khara hai uper se aap isko maare jaa rahe ho. Chot lag jati to.

Tum fikar mat karo.mujhe chot nhi lagti..he replied without looking her

Mai aapki nhI iis bechare jeep ki baat kar rahi hu. Wase bhi...mai aapse baat hi kyu kar rahi hu. Chal Meera. Collage ko der ho rahi hai..and she run from there

Ajeeb pagal ladki thi. Kuch bhi anaap shnaap bolke chal di. Ohh maan, tune to usse xyz ka rasta toh pucha hi nahi. shittt !! .. Oyeee suno..oyeee.. kya bulaau usse'...oyeee ladki. DAMNNN ! ye bhi chali gyi. Chal maan ..lag ja kaam pe

.and he started repairing his poorly damaged jeep.

After some hours

chal Meera jaldi kar. dekh kitni tej baarish hone wali hai.. bheeg jaayenge warna..jaldi kar.

aa rahi hu geet. ab tere jase tez nahi bhaga jata mujhe.

achha ji... jab gurvindar se milne jana ho tabto bada tez bhagti (run) hai..abhi mai bol rahi hu toh tez nahi bhag sakti... kyu

ohh geet tujhse koi nahi jeet sakta. achha chal ye chota rasta lete hai. mera ghar jaldi aa jaayega. barish ruk jaaye to tu apne ghar chali jana..chal

aree nhI Meera tu ja. aaj papaji bhi ghar pe nahi hai.mujhe ghar jana jaruri hai. tu ja mai bhag ke chali jaaungi

per geet dekh baarish shuru bhi ho gyi.tu kaise jaayegi.

mai chali jaaungi Meera tu fikar mat kar...chal byeee

achha geeet sunnn...kal apni notes lete aana mujhe copy karni haiii.. uff ye ladki bhi na hawa ke jaise bhagti hai

geet was running to home as fast she could but sudden rain poured very heavy so she had to have shelter under a tree when sudden she listened a sound

aakchhi... aankchii..

he he he he ...

maan again heard same giggle. he looked her and fumed. But as he was going to shout akchiii...

he he he he... she was laughing like a innocent kid, kept her soft hand on mouth, without any fake thought..just enjoying her moment

ooyee why are you laughing..Are you mad? pagal to nahi ho...he asked amazed on her act

nahi mai to ye soch rahi thi ki kahi pathar (rock) ko bhi kabhi sardi ho sakti hai kya..she replied naughtily

kya kaha.. pathar?

haa ...pathar...hindi nahi samjh aati kya.. pathar matlb...

oyee mujhe uska matlb pata hai. maine pucha mai tumhe kis angle se pathar dikhta hu...maan asked keeping his both hand on his waist

kyu aapne hi to subah bola tha na ki aapko chot nahi lagti. ab insaan ko to chot lagti hai.per pathar ko maine kabi chot lagte nahi suni... geet said with baby fake expressions

achha to mai pathar hu ..thik hai. agar mai pathar hu to tum bhi koi insaan to nahi dikhti... he answered back with winning smrik

aww kya ..kya bola aapne ..mai mai insaan nahi hu..phir kya hu ..haa boliye..bataiye..saying this geet dint know she was without knowing going closer ..More close to him.

boliye ..bataiye na...mai insaan nahi to kya hu..haa" she came face to face him.

maan looked her face which was now mere inch away from him. " she is beautiful" he thought. he was lost in her.her white smooth face, glowing skin, brown shining eyes, her baby like pink lips.. ooh she has dimple also" maan was staring her every little feature of round small face while geet looked him. he was not blinking even his eyes. ' ab isse kya ho gaya. " she was confused. 'ye to hil bhi nahi raha.. babaji kahi thand se mar war to nahi gaya." she got feared. Shakes her hand front his face. " suniye... sunyeee " but maan was still not moving . " babaji..sach me lagta hai mar gaya.dekh geet aankh bhi nahi jhapka raha ..ab mai kya karu." she moves back a little. " suniye...suniyeee aap sun rahe hai.' she patted her index finger to his shoulder slowly. suniiyeee but still maan was not moving a bit.

" geet kept her hand under his nose" saans (breathing) to chal rahi hai..matlab zinda hai. hmmm ..ab to isko hosh me laane ka ek hi raasta hai" her eyes twinkled with mischive. slowly she went close to his ear and aaa.aaaaaa ))))))))))))) ...

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