MG ff - Her Bitter fate Thread 2 link @ Pg 151

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I am Monika (lovemaaneet1). This is my first FF. Hope you will like it .Basically i am not a writer (balki mai to writer ka W bhi nahi hu 😛) but as i love Maaneet and big fan of GHSP . I feel blessed having them in my life and wanted to do to something which i never did. So result is in front of you all. Hope i will do good and for this i need your support and encouragements

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Prologue

"You like rain " Maan asked.
"No..i love rain" Geet replied.

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There was silent yet shine in her eyes. It was new for her. She loved rain. She loved dancing jumping in rain but never felt how it feels in real. She always dreamt, always thought one day she will be able to do it . This simple thing was a big dream of her.it was her fate. She wanted to live she wanted to live life with happiness with a man who could love her , do complete her and her dreams. To whom she can leave her last breath without any pain. And he came.Yes ,with lots of happiness, as she thought, but it was not for her or can say there was something more for her in store Or may be less '

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A car in full speed running on sleepy road, srachhh . A horrible unknown crash sound catched everyone's attention. All people looked at same direction .

"what happened ?"

"oohh God someone is inside"

"is he alive or dead??"

"Who is he ?? "

"oohh ..he looks new here"

" haan pahle kabi nahi dekha isse is shahar me "

" look , here his name written . Some M. Khurana ."

A man in his 60s with two men come. "kya naam likha hai ??"

"some M. Khurana darji"

"oohh... brij mohindar .. kahi yeh ... !!!!!


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Character Sketch

Geet Handa

Simple n sweet 17 yrs old girl. Soon going to complete her 18. Doing her graduation . Wants to study higher. Believe in her family and her babaji. Heavenly beautiful. Milky white fair with smooth creamy skin. Light brown sea deap eyes. Baby pink lips. Angelic body features. So innocent and nave. Never saw outer world. Her little home was whole world for her.

Maan Khurana

24 yrs old, very handsome n smart. Not very talkative . But when talks no body can stand near him. Most successfull business man . Lives in Delhi n Khurana mansion with his dadi.

Savitri khurana (Daadi )

Maan dadi. Lives with him and loves him very much . Very lovely old lady with no attitude but higher thoughts.

Daarji

Lives in hoshiyarpur. Head of family. Very stern person. His one word is enough for shutting down anyone's mouth. Very renowned in town.

Brij

Geet and Rajji only brother. Complete terror of town. Same as in show.

Mohindar and Rano Handa
Geet, Brij and Rajji papaji and maa.

Aditya (Adi)

Maan working hand. Very polite and good person.

Channi

Geet Geet best friend. Both are support of each other

More other Character will be introduced on right time ...

INDEX

Thread 2

thread 3

Part 1 - Page 3

Part 2- Page 6

Part 3- Page 10

Part 4-page 13

Part 5-Page 18

Part 6-Page 23

Part 7-Page 29

Part 8- Page 36

Part 9- Page 42

Part 10- Page 47

Part 11- Pag 54

Part 12 - page 61

Part 13- Page 68

Part 14 - Page 73

Part 15 - Page 80

Part 16 - Page 87

Part 17 - Page 92

Part 18 - Page 101

Part 19 - Page 102

Part 20 - Page 108

Part 21 - Page 114

Part 22 - Page 120

Part 23 - page 125

Part 24 - Page 132

Part 25 - Page 137

Part 26 - Page 141

Part 27 - Page 149

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Part 1

Her innocent eyes were shining, smiling .. Twinkling in moonlight. That red bricked old dharmshala of hoshiyarpur welcomed a newly wedded couple whole heartedly. They came here for shelter because rain was so much in her own . She was dancing wishing geet for her new wedding life .Geet ..Sounds so sweet ..yes she was geet ..geet of hoshiyarpur..daughter of mohindar handa and rano handa . Belongs to a very renowned family of hoshiyarpur. Her daarji was big name in that small town. His first word was last for everyone in family.

A Year Back In Hoshiyarpur

Geet was eldest daughter in family. She was beautiful, fair ...no..milky white fair, light brown eyes ..beautiful eyes, cute small nose, baby pink lips, thick lashes always gave shelter of her hazels. It was her manner she learned in her whole 17 years life, to shut them in front of every men. Talking is very far ..she was not allowed to see any other men. Same rules were for her younger sister rajji. Both were daughters of handa's. Handa, this name was more than enough for shiver of any weak heart person.

Her life was limited. A big haveli in small town , one sibling (rajji) to talk , her collage , the only place she was allowed to go apart from her house . she was in her graduation. Wanted to read more as like any normal girl with better fate.

One evening, she came to know she had a man .." A Other Man " in her life. That day She was going to her room after returning back from collage, she heard her darji talking to mohindar.

Darji-"Now she is already 17. Kab tak hum ek ladki ko ghar me baitha ke rakh sakte hai . now we should talk to his parents to arrange this marriage as soon as possible."

Mohindar- lekin darji wo abhi bachhi hai. Uski padhai bhi puri nahi hui abhi.

Darji- MOHINDAR.. DID YOU FORGET OUR FAMILY VALUES. What promise we gave to THEM. Now its right time to complete our promise. "Brij'BRIJ.. Come Here" darji called his only grandson. A complete terror of town.

Brij- haan darji

Darji- kal ladke waale aa rahe hai geet ko dekhne . Make all arrangements . They should not have any discomfort.

Brij- ji darji .

Darji- mohinder tell rano to make all preparations for tomorrow. They will be coming till evening. They will stay here only at night. Toh hume unka pura khyaal rakhna hai.Aur koi galti nahi honi chahiye. Geet ko batado.wo bhi taiyaar rahe." By saying this he went out of leaving room.

Mohindar was sad. He did not want to send her daughter this soon. He wanted to let her complete her study at least . but he coundn't do anything . he was helpless. and now he had to do hardest work of his life . he had to get her daughter agreed for this marriage. He went to geet room.

Geet- papaji please don't do this.please ..i don't want to marry this soon. Please papaji. she was sobbing, begging helplessly.

Mohindar- Geet beta ,idhar dekh. Meri taraf dekh beta. Tujhe kya lagta hai geet, hum tujhse pyar nahi karte. We all love you beta. And look this boy is very nice. He will keep you happy forever. You trust me na. "she nodded yes. Yes , she trusts her father .but was so he?? He did not know that family even. He only knows he is darji's family friend son. He was doing some business in Patiyala. This only information darji had given him . But he had no option. He had to do what darji said. He was helpless. But he had hope. Only hope, babaji will do everything good with her daughter.

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