MG ff - Her Bitter fate Thread 2 link @ Pg 151 - Page 61

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

awesome update dear

finally the confession

continue soon dear

Originally posted by: pari1689

finally maaneet confession...superb

Originally posted by: -padma-

Read all the parts ,loved it .
Maaneet moments were aweome
Ab ye maanav kya karega ,feeling kuch bura honewala hai bcoz title bhi wahi hint deta hai
Hoping every thing will be fine between maaneet.

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

wow what a beautiful confession...simple...sweet...

very beautiful update...

thanx for answering my last post...yes I agree that after daily job and household chores it is really very difficult to write long updates and u are updating daily also...that is why I suggested u so...as a North Indian I am comfortable in both languages...

thanx for pm...

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

Awww sooo baeutifulll its reallly a magical...finally they confessed:D

Originally posted by: chavvi16

are you kidding me you are fulfilling my wishes for this ff more than anything
wow that was one hell of a confession by our maneet
damn he is going back nooo arre inhe lekar jayiye pls pataa chala jab waapis aaye toh yeh kissi aur ki patni naa ban jaye
pls dont do that pls i beg of you do anything to her but pls dont make her anyone's else wife but maan's
that confession was just rocking
keep up the good work and we will keep commenting
thanx for pm see ya soon

Originally posted by: preeti.1

lovely update

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Monika 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and PM...loved the way Maan and Geet confessed their love ❤️...first Maan's expression of his feelings...then Geet getting all emotional 😭 and shy 😳...Maan thinking she was hurt and trying to leave...Geet stopping him with her I Love U...finally Maaneet hug...sighhh...it was all so beautiful 😍...plz continue...TC 😊

Part 22

Maan raised his arm around her and took her in his arm, in his embrace. She was his, he was not able to believe. He was in heaven and yes, heaven was also with them pouring their best wishes on them. They were blessed. They were happy. They were Complete. They were hugging each other tight. In rain they were completely drenched but both not worrying. They were lost. He hugged her as tight as could. He caressed her back, down to up feeling her. He could feel her trembling form inside his arm castle. She was filling herself with his warmth. She caressed her cheek in his chest. He felt Goosebumps. They were hearing enjoying each other's heartbeats which was jumping running in happiness, excitement

. After long time they separated. Geet's some hair strands fell on her forehead. He removed those and put behind her ear. He cupped her face and made her look to him. Her face was dark shade pink. He kept his lips on her pink cheek slowly not to hurt her as she was like a feather. Her body reacted slowly, softly. He kissed her another cheek with same care and love. She was delighted. Then he kissed her forehead. It was so warm and beautiful.

Maan- geet kuch bologi nahi. " she nodded no." kyu.. ase toh bahut bolti ho. Ab mere saamne kya ho gaya. bolti kyu band ho gayi tumhari

Geet looked him with her big deep eyes. " mai kha bolti hu..aur meti bolti kyu band hogi, wo bhi aapke saamne. Who toh aap ase dekh rahe ho isiliy' "She bit her tongue and looked down. Maan smiled

Maan- achha !! per mai toh tumhe nahi dekh raha. Tum mujhe dekhne kaha de rahi ho geet. ' she hides herself more in him if was possible.

maan- achha geet ek baat puchu. Sach bataogi." she nodded. " geet jab mai chala jaunga toh mujhe kitna yaad karogi" she became sad and nodded no

maan- toh iska mtlb mujhe yaad nhi karogi.

geet - maan yaad to tab karungi na jab kabi bhul paaungi. aap to apne saath mujhe bhi le jaa rahe ho. " he looked confused." meri aatma ( soul) aapke sath jaayegi maan. yaha toh sirf sharer(body) rahegi..woh bhi aapke intjaar me tarapte rahegi. " " geet" maaan whispered and took her in his arm not to leave ever. he couldn't thank god for this beautiful gift.he had no words. his hapiness wanted to come out and it came, in form of tears. geet felt some drops on her cheek. she looked up and saw him sheding happy tears with closed eyes. she could not bear it . she kissed his every tears. her soft lips made him smile but he dint open his eyes, wanted to celebrate this moment with his inner-self. His heart was dancing so was her. she kissed his both closed eyes and then cheek. she wanted to cheer him. she was feeling so much shy but it was his first wish. Her maan wish.

maan was enjoying her angel love . he was waiting for her next movement but it never came. he opened his eyes and saw he was alone. he looked around to find her but couldn't. " geettt" he called out but no responce. he pressed his hair back in anticipation. " geettt " again he called. then he saw a shadow behind pillar. Her white suit was more visible in moonlight. He went her from behind. She peeped a little to see him but he was not there. She looked here n there but he was no where. She came out n stepped to search him; he held her hand from behind. " mujhse chip rahi thi geet..hmmm"

geet shied ..Tried to pull her arm from his grip but he tighten more and pulled her with sudden force. She landed on his chest. Her back was touching his front. He left her hand and held her stomach from behind. Her heartbeat was racing fast and he could hear it. He was pulling her closer as there was no space left. He hided his face between her neck n shoulder inhaling her scent. She closed her eyes surrenderd herself to him. He kissed her earlobe, came below n kissed her neck then shoulder. He turned her making her facing him. He looked her, being sure is it her wish too. She was looking divine.. completely his.. maan ke rang me rangi geet. He took a movement ahead. They were very close. she could feel his breathing falling on her lips and waiting for next.. But it dint come. She understood and moved ahead a little showing him it's her wish too. He smiled and took those soft lips into his. It was so soft like feather. He kissed her lips with all his love. She was feeling most beautiful and luckiest girl of world. she parted her lips to welcome him in her life, in her heart, in her soul. They deepened kiss. They were exchanging their soul without any limitation. He increased his passion but with care as promising her to love n keep secure her forever ever. She also responded with same passion to promise him, she will surrender herself always to him forever ever.

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ENGLISH VERSION

Maan raised his arm around her and took her in his arm, in his embrace. She was his, he was not able to believe. He was in heaven and yes, heaven was also with them pouring their best wishes on them. They were blessed. They were happy. They were Complete. They were hugging each other tight. In rain they were completely drenched but both not worrying. They were lost. He hugged her as tight as could. He caressed her back, down to up feeling her. He could feel her trembling form inside his arm castle. She was filling herself with his warmth. She caressed her cheek in his chest. He felt Goosebumps. They were hearing enjoying each other's heartbeats which was jumping running in happiness, excitement

. After long time they separated. Geet's some hair strands fell on her forehead. He removed those and put behind her ear. He cupped her face and made her look to him. Her face was dark shade pink. He kept his lips on her pink cheek slowly not to hurt her as she was like a feather. Her body reacted slowly, softly. He kissed her another cheek with same care and love. She was delighted. Then he kissed her forehead. It was so warm and beautiful.

Maan- geet..dont u speak something. " she nodded no." why ' as such u talks too much ... what happed front of me'. Scared of me ..hmm??

Geet looked him with her big deep eyes. Aww' I don't speak much..and why I ll scared of you., woh u r staring me like this so' "She bit her tongue and looked down. Maan smiled

Maan- really !! but geet ..m not staring you. You not giving me chance to stare you. 'she hides herself more in him if was possible.

maan- geet..can I ask something.. will u tell truth." she nodded. " geet..will you remember me when I would not be here" she became sad and nodded no

maan- it means you wont remember me ?

geet ' maan.. I ll remember you when will forget for a minute. ..you are taking me with you as well " he looked confused." My soul would go with you maan. Here, only will exists my body maan that too will wait for you. " " geet" maaan whispered and took her in his arm not to leave ever. he couldn't thank god for this beautiful gift.he had no words. his hapiness wanted to come out and it came, in form of tears. geet felt some drops on her cheek. she looked up and saw him sheding happy tears with closed eyes. she could not bear it . she kissed his every tears. her soft lips made him smile but he dint open his eyes, wanted to celebrate this moment with his inner-self. His heart was dancing so was her. she kissed his both closed eyes and then cheek. she wanted to cheer him. she was feeling so much shy but it was his first wish. Her maan wish.

maan was enjoying her angel love . he was waiting for her next movement but it never came. he opened his eyes and saw he was alone. he looked around to find her but couldn't. " geettt" he called out but no responce. he pressed his hair back in anticipation. " geettt " again he called. then he saw a shadow behind pillar. Her white suit was more visible in moonlight. He went her from behind. She peeped a little to see him but he was not there. She looked here n there but he was no where. She came out n stepped to search him; he held her hand from behind. " mujhse chip rahi thi geet..hmmm"

geet shied ..Tried to pull her arm from his grip but he tighten more and pulled her with sudden force. She landed on his chest. Her back was touching his front. He left her hand and held her stomach from behind. Her heartbeat was racing fast and he could hear it. He was pulling her closer as there was no space left. He hided his face between her neck n shoulder inhaling her scent. She closed her eyes surrendered herself to him. He kissed her earlobe, came below n kissed her neck then shoulder. He turned her making her facing him. He looked her, being sure is it her wish too. She was looking divine.. Completely his.. maan ke rang me rangi geet. He took a movement ahead. They were very close. she could feel his fast breathing, falling on her lips and waiting for next.. But it dint come. She understood and moved ahead a little showing him it's her wish too. He smiled and took those soft lips into his. It was so soft like feather. He kissed her lips with all his love. She was feeling most beautiful and luckiest girl of world. She parted her lips to welcome him in her life, in her heart, in her soul. They deepened kiss. They were exchanging their soul without any limitation. He increased his passion but with care as promising her to love n keep secure her forever ever. She also responded with same passion to promise him, she will surrender herself always to him forever ever.

Precap - Ye toh channi ki earring hai. Veerji aapke paas kaise aayi"

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