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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, brilliant part
loved geet- rano bonding and moments
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
simply g8
awesome
loved it geet is cute while complaining
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Posted: 13 years ago
hayye kya baat hai geet ne apne maa se keh diya ki usse maan pasand hai parr now am getting even more worried for her once they find out he isnt the right person they will so force her away from maan
upar se woh asli namoona bhi toh aa raha hai geet ko dekhne uski baaton se lagta hai geet ki kismat hi kharab hai jo usse iss gadhe se shaadi karni padegi bas ab maan hi bachaa sakta hai usse
she is cribbing about maan to babaji while maan is watching all this cool na
thanx for pm uff love this ff
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Originally posted by: chavvi16

hayye kya baat hai geet ne apne maa se keh diya ki usse maan pasand hai parr now am getting even more worried for her once they find out he isnt the right person they will so force her away from maan

upar se woh asli namoona bhi toh aa raha hai geet ko dekhne uski baaton se lagta hai geet ki kismat hi kharab hai jo usse iss gadhe se shaadi karni padegi bas ab maan hi bachaa sakta hai usse
she is cribbing about maan to babaji while maan is watching all this cool na
thanx for pm uff love this ff




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Posted: 13 years ago
lovuuu teri ek aur fan aa gayi...w8inggg for update...
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Part 14


Maan came from shower hearing some sound. He thought any servant brought his cloths so he came out in his vest and trouser. But he stood stunned, his angel was arranging his room, cursing of course in between but he was enjoying. He lost in her, her innocent talks, her baby and cute expressions while cursing him everything making him loose in her. He wanted to see her forever, wanted to stop time right here.

He could not stop himself at this moment. He came from back and touched her waist. She shocked with sudden touch. He started tightening his hold on her waist. She was not getting what is happening. She started trembling. She was having goose bump. First time in her life she was feeling this kind of feel. Maan was not his sense what he doing. He was total in spell of moment. His hand moved toward her stomach. He was caressing her stomach. She closed her eyes. She was feeling beautiful. He came closer, kept his chin on her shoulder, and inhaled her hair fragrance with closed eyes. Her shampoo smelt like flower. She too is a soft, blooming flower he thought. She was shivering closing her eyes. He could feel her shaking body in his arm. He smiled. He kissed her below ear. She reacted softly raising her shoulder. He smiled. He kissed aging little more below. She was in heaven unable to think anything. He kissed her shoulder. In trance she moaned " maan". He instantly opened his eyes. This was amazing. He felt first time his was hearing his name. This soft moan brought back him from his dream world. He left her. She was still in trance closing her eyes. He came front of her. Looked her face. It was so serene, so pure. He didn't want to break her trance but he had to. But he wanted to enjoy this moment more with her. So he took an empty glass from side table and dropped. Geet jumped back "babaji" and looked him, , he was smirking, crossing his arm on his chest, standing right front of her.

"geet, tum yaha" he asked.

Geet got confused. " kya"

"maine puch tum yaha kya kar rahi ho. Kabse mai tumhe dekh raha hu, tum ajeeb shaklen bana rahi ho . tumhe hua kya ha." He asked and teased her with his mischievous eyes.

"mai..mai woh.. aap kabse yaha khade hai ? "

"kabse matlb? Mai to kafi der se yahi khada hu. Tumhi lagta tha khade khade so gayi thi. Tumhari tabiyat to thik hai na"

"ha,,haan mai thik hu. Mujhe kuch nahi hua." She tried to make confident face still trying to understand what happened some minute before. Was it my dream?? babaji, mujhe to kuch samjh nahi a raha hai.

"geet..geeet , tum fir so gayi kya. Asa karo, mere kapre do aur jaao, apne kamre me so jaao.. jaaoo" he said her pushing her slowly showing that he is seriously wanting to go her and sleep.

"ha..haan jati hu" she said confused and left thinking hard.

Maan was smiling hard. He shook his head. "geet , humesha ase hi rahna please" He closed his eyes and asked his first wish from God.

Here geet in kitchen, trying hard to understand what happened in room. "mai bol rahi hu geet, wo sab sach me hua tha. Per agar asa hai to unhone ase kyu pucha jese kuch hua hi na ho. Nahi geet , mai bol rhai hu na, wo sab sach tha. Wo sach me tere piche aayethy aur... she felt extremely shy thinking those moment. But soon she came back from la la land. " geet abhi sharmaane ka time nahi hai. wo jarur tera mazak baan rahe honge " "kyaaa" mera mazak .unki asi himmat. .ab babataungi unhe..geet handa se ulajhne ka natiza..hmm " she made determined face and engrossed in her work.

All were ready to go temple. Maan wore Indian dress. He was looking so handsome in this attire.everyone was ready and stood in hall expect geet.

"geeet ..jaldi aa beta. Der ho rahi hai" rano shouted. She was afraid what if darji gets angry.

After few minute geet came with puja thaal in her hand. Maan looked her and got lost. She was looking beautiful in her simple red suit. Holding puja thaal she was looking so pure and serene. Geet also looked him and memorized with his charm. Both were lost in their own world when rano said.

"kitni der laagdi beta. Ab chal jaldi. Der ho rahi hai "

Both came back in this world and all left for temple. In jeep Brij was on driver seat. Darji was on passenger seat. Mohindar and maan was on one side of back seat and geet and rano were front of them. Again and again maan was looking staring her but her dint. She was still angry for room incident and thinking for her revenge.

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Maan came from shower hearing some sound. He thought any servant brought his cloths so he came out in his vest and trouser. But he stood stunned, his angel was arranging his room, cursing of course in between but he was enjoying. He lost in her, her innocent talks, her baby and cute expressions while cursing him everything making him loose in her. He wanted to see her forever, wanted to stop time right here.



He could not stop himself at this moment. He came from back and touched her waist. She shocked with sudden touch. He started tightening his hold on her waist. She was not getting what is happening. She started trembling. She was having goose bump. First time in her life she was feeling this kind of feel. Maan was not his sense what he doing. He was total in spell of moment. His hand moved toward her stomach. He was caressing her stomach. She closed her eyes. She was feeling beautiful. He came closer, kept his chin on her shoulder, and inhaled her hair fragrance with closed eyes. Her shampoo smelt like flower. She too is a soft, blooming flower he thought. She was shivering closing her eyes. He could feel her shaking body in his arm. He smiled. He kissed her below ear. She reacted softly raising her shoulder. He smiled. He kissed aging little more below. She was in heaven unable to think anything. He kissed her shoulder. In trance she moaned " maan". He instantly opened his eyes. This was amazing. He felt first time his was hearing his name. This soft moan brought back him from his dream world. He left her. She was still in trance closing her eyes. He came front of her. Looked her face. It was so serene, so pure. He didn't want to break her trance but he had to. But he wanted to enjoy this moment more with her. So he took an empty glass from side table and dropped. Geet jumped back "babaji" and looked him, , he was smirking, crossing his arm on his chest, standing right front of her.

geet, you here" he asked.


Geet got confused. " what"

"I said what you doing here. Since i am looking you are making different faces. Whats matter geet" He asked and teased her with his mischievous eyes.

"mai..mai woh.. since when you are standing here ? "

" what ! Geet i am here for long . I guess you slept standing here . Are you all right'

"ha,, o yes m fine." She tried to make confident face still trying to understand what happened some minute before. Was it my dream?? babaji, mujhe to kuch samjh nahi a raha hai.

"geet..geeet , again did you sleep?. Now do one thing.. give me my cloths and go..go and sleep in your room...goo" he said her pushing her slowly showing that he is seriously wanting to go her and sleep.

"ha..haan ok.. m going" she said confused and left thinking hard.

Maan was smiling hard. He shook his head. "geet , always be like this, never change please" He closed his eyes and asked his first wish from God.

Here geet in kitchen, trying hard to understand what happened in room. "I am telling you geet, it was real. But if it was real then why did he act like nothing happened ... No geet.. m telling na.. that was real . He was in real came behind you and... she felt extremely shy thinking those moment. But soon she came back from la la land. " Geet now no time for shy.. i am sure he was making fun of you.. Whatt.. my fun.. how dare he.. now he will see who is geet handa . He will learn a lesson sure..hmm " she made determined face and engrossed in her work.

All were ready to go temple. Maan wore Indian dress. He was looking so handsome in this attire.everyone was ready and stood in hall expect geet.

"geeet ..hurry up beta. We are getting late" rano shouted. She was afraid what if darji gets angry.



After few minute geet came with puja thaal in her hand. Maan looked her and got lost. She was looking beautiful in her simple red suit. Holding puja thaal she was looking so pure and serene. Geet also looked him and memorized with his charm. Both were lost in their own world when rano said.

"what you doing beta, we got late. Now come "

Both came back in this world and all left for temple. In jeep Brij was on driver seat. Darji was on passenger seat. Mohindar and maan was on one side of back seat and geet and rano were front of them. Again and again maan was looking staring her but her dint. She was still angry for room incident and thinking for her revenge.

Precap : "kya kaha .. damad ?"


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I am thanking each n every readers for all likes and comments...

specially hugsss to --Ratna--, chavvi16 and suhaaana for lovely compliments ... Soma.gurti and raingurti for all supports... hugsss deariesss


Edited by geet.lover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yipee me first!!! Oh their romantic moment was short nd cute nd maan teasing her was just awsome bt beaware MSK our sherni will take revenge cont soon dear nd thanks 2 u for such a beautiful ff u r a fab writer loved it a lot :-)
Edited by suhaaana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
❤️lovuuu awesome blossom update muahhh...tujse cha gayi...🤗❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update..
maan and geet both getting lost in each other...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
contionue soon

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