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Posted: 13 years ago
arre bol do ki tum maan singh khurana ho nd geet se shaadi karlo
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interesting i hope maan ki geet se shaadi ho jaaye
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loved it
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continue soon dear😊
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Originally posted by: hermoso

oh , he is sumone else . handa are thinking him as damadji and asli damadji to kahi aur gulcharre uda rahe hai ...great going and story is heading very interestingly .




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Originally posted by: chavvi16

Oh come on will you reveal the name of the stranger even though we know its maan but still it would be nice to hear it from him that
I guess the dude who was making out with his gf is the supposed husband to be of Geet and not maan shame that
So he thinks of Geet as an angel how sweet
So now what this will not be good for Geet if she falls in love with maan then has to marry the other guy that would be horrible
Thanx for pm see ya soon




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Part 7

"wo kya hai ..hum aapka naam nahi jaante na isiliye kaha. aapka naam kya hai beta." rano asked


My name is Maan'. Maan singh khurana." He said with proud.

" ji maan beta. Ab kasi tabiyat hai aapki.yaha koi taqlif to nahi na"

" ji ab mai bilkul thik hu.Aap logo ka bahut bahut shukriya ki aap ne mere liye itna kuch kiya. Kal mai yaha se chala jaaunga."

" ye kasi baate kar rahe ho ji aap. Ye toh humara farz tha. Aap toh humare mehmaan ho. ase kase hum aapko jaane de sakte hai. Abi to aap puri tarah se thik bhi nahi hue" rano said.

" ji mai ab bilkul thik hu . Aap sab meri itni fikar mat kijiye." Maan said politely.

" Aap kahi nhi jaa rahe hai. Humne aapke gharwaalo se bhi baat kar li hai.jab tak puri tarah se thik nahi ho jaate aap yahi rahenge.' daarji Said with his stern voice.

Maan didn't feel good to argue further as they had saved his life. So he agreed to stay there for few days more. In his very corner of heart he too wanted to stay there but it was not known to him right now.

At night in geet room

Geet was trying to sleep. But sleep was not in her luck tonight. She was tossing turning on bed little restless. She was thinking about last night and morning incident. What was that? Why she did feel something known with him. Why she did not feel wrong ease him. Why she wanted to remove his pain as it was hurting her too. Why she caressed his hair. Why his one touch filled unkown desire in her. Why...

" babaji mujhe nahi pata wo kon hai. Phir bhi Unhe taqleef me dekh ke mujhe dard kyu hua babaji. Mai to unhe jaanti tak nahi. Aaj pahli baar unhe dekha hai. Fir bhi unki taqleef me dekh kar mujhe baichaini kyu hui. Kyu babaji. Apne 17 saal ki umra me maine asa kahbi kisi ke liye mahsoos nahi kiya jaisa unke liye kiya, ek anjaan ke liye. Fir bhi mujhe asa kyu laga jaise mai kuch galat nahi kiya. Sab sahi laga babaji. Sab sach laga. Aisa laga ki ye sab mahsoos karne ka haq sirf mujhe hai. Unki tqkleef dur karne ka bhi haq sirf mujhe hai, sirf mai unki sari dard dur kar sakti hu. Mai janti hu ye galat hai. Mere zivan me ek insaan aa chukka hai jise maine pahle kabi nahi dekha fir bhi wo meri taqdeer hai. Fir bhi mera mann iss rishty ko kyu nahi maana chahata. Kyu chahata hai ye mann ki mai apni tqkdeer ko badal du . kyu babaji .. mujhe raah dikhao babaji.. please babaji. "dint know when her eyes started dropping all her pain in form of tears. It was silent cry. Dint know when she lost in her conscious and went in deep sleep.

Here in maan room he was too still awake. He was restless too. Not because of physical pain but it was inside him something, which was making him distress. Who was she? What was her name? why she was looking me lovingly, with care.. Pure care in her eyes. why I felt she was in pain too as my pain hurting her. She wanted to cure me , ease my pain, I could see in her eyes. She caressed me and it worked as magic. Was she real angel who came here to ease me? His tired mind couldn't take more and he drifted in deep sleep.


FLASHBACK (2 DAYS BACK)----------------------------------------------


Khurana mension, Delhi (Maan house), same day when accident happened

" Adi bete aapki maan se baat hui. unka koi phone aaya" A 60 yrs old lady asked a 24 yrs boy with worry and tensed face.

Nahi dadimaa. Unka kuch pata nahi. Chal raha."

Hey bhagwaan ab hum kya kare. Humari to kuch samjh nahi aa raha. " dadi said crying.

Dadima aap chinta mat kijiye. Maan sir Mil jaayenge. Woh jaha bho honge sahi salamat honge. Aap ase himmat mat harriye dadima. Warna aapki tabiyat khrab ho jaayegi."

" Hum thik hai adi bte. Aap humari fikar mat kijiye. Aap bas humare maan ko dhud ke laa dijiye"she was still sobbing

" ji dadimaa. Mai laaunga maansir ko. Ab Aap apni medicines lijiye aur thodi der so jaaiye dadaima. Raat bhi bahut ho chuki hai. Mai aata hu. Commissioner sir se meri meeting hai abi"

Aap jaaiye adi. Hum dava kha lenge.

Ji dadima." Saying this adi left.

Adi at Commissioner place

Commissioner- hum puri koshish kar rahe hai mr . aditya , par lagta hai mr.maan highway road se gaye hi nahi. Unhone jarur koi shortcut liya hoga patiyala pahunchne ke liye. Ab problem ye hai , ki highway se kai saare shortcuts jaate hai patiyala ki taraf. To unhone kon sa rasta chuna ye pata nahi chal raha.anyway fir hum aapko umeed dilate hai mr.aditya huma mr maan ka pata jald hi laga lenge.

Adi ' Thank you sir. Hope maan sir will be all right. Now I shall take my leave" saying this he left.

FLASHBACK END -----------------------------------------------------------


At khurana mension

" kaha hai aap maan. Please jaldi aa jaaiye. Please " Dadi hold his only grandson photo close to her heart and tried to sleep but she knew, it won't going to be happen.


Precap : Maan shook his head, smiled and left saying " pagli" 😉 😉



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Hope I m doing good


Millions thanks to alll 😃


Edited by geet.lover - 13 years ago

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