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update next part...waiting 😡😍
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(Note-One thing I want to make you remember that geet still doesn't know maan is would be damad of this house and her would be husband. As when they had to tell her she was not available and after that everything went sudden, maan accident n all, so they forgot to tell her. And now they think that geet knows everything, who is he )

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Part 10


"Geet putter, aaj se maanji tumhare kamre me rahenge "


Kyaaa...


"geet , itna chauk kyu rahi hai. Wo maanji ko office ka kuch kaam karna hai, to unhe computer ki jarurat thi na. to daarji ne kaha ki jabtak wo yaha hai tab tak wo tere kamre me rahenge. Computer bhi to tere hi kamre me hai na beta" Rano clarified everything to her.


Maan smirked her . geet made baby face. It was first time she had to leave her room. She was very possessive for her everything. " per maa" she tried to make rano understand but rano cut her in mid. " maanji , ye hai computer, aap dekhlo , aapke kaam aa jayegi na. " rano asked to maan.


" ji ant..."


Call me maa " rano said lovingly looking him.


" ji maa" maan repilied smiling little to her. He was feeling very familiar hare. Dint know what was here, in this house but he was enjoying every moment, feeling peace which he couldn't find since long. Maan parents died in a car accident when he was only 8. He lost his childhood, his innocence everything which a child needed in this age. His daadi brought up him with so much effort and love but there was still something still a miss in his life. Today he was finding those lost treasures here, in this small town, with simple people.


" maanji.. maan beta" .. kya soch rahe hai aap. Koi taqleef to nahi na. who kya hai , ye chota shahar hai to hum jaante hai thodi taqleef..."


" nahi maa .. asi koi baat nahi"


" thik hai " aap yaha baitho hum abhi aate hai, chal geet" Rano left dragging geet with her who was fuming with anger.


Geet was listening both conversations. She felt good but it doesn't mean she will leave her room. She left with rano but as reached kitchen her volcano blasted. " maa ye konsa tareeka hua. Wo mehmaan hai na, to mehmaan jese rahe na. mere kamre me kyu rahenge."


Rano smiled knowing her daughter very well. She dint say anything.


ye lohh.. mai itna bole jaa rahi hu aur maa per to koi asar hi nahi ho raha." Maa unhe kaam to din me hai na fir raat me apne kamre me rahe na.. mere kamre me kyu rahenge" said geet with hope this time rano will listen her. But no.. rano knew her next step.


" maa .. aap sun rahi ho mai kya bole jaa rahi hu . maa unko bolo na wo apne room me rahe. Mujhe apna room nahi dena kisi ko, maa aap sun rah...


"GEETTT" she stopped suddenly. "How dare you to speak against my order. Did you forget family rules" daarji shouted.


" nahi daarji" geet replied with low voice, down eyes, scared.


" jo kaha jaaye sirf wo karo. Abhi jaao aur karma khali karo "" ji daarji" geet left from there with wet eyes without knowing, someone is watching this all.


Maan was returning his room while he saw daarji shouting his angel. He didn't like this. He felt hurt looking geet sad and crying face. He wanted to console her, take her in his arm so went behind to console her.


" geet, I am sorry" he said. Geet was taking her belongings in room when she heard maan saying sorry. She turned to him with down eyes, which was wet he knew.


" aapko maafi maangne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Mai hi kuch jayda bol gayi" she said.


" per galti to meri thi na. meri wajah se tumhe apna room chodna pada"


"asi koi baat nahi. aap asa mat sochiye. Maine gusse me aapko kitna bhala bura kah diya"


Per mujhe tumhare kisi baat ka bura nahi laga. Mujhe tumhare kisis baat ka kabhi bura nahi lag sakta geet" he said with authority in his voice.


Geet looked him without blinking. "Kyu" she asked


Maan did not reply. He looked in her eyes giving her silent answer while a small smile touched his lips...


She was confused still trying to find her answer. He was staring, lost in her eyes. Both were lost somewhere both dint know. But both were same place it was sure.


"Your eyes your wish, your closed lip speaks

Sometime want to live, sometime want to die

In your eyes, it says something

Which I will read, one day I promise"


In Patiala

"how are you beta. Daarji called two days back that you met an accident. Tu thik hai na beta" mrs.k asked her only son.


" yes mom I m fine and who said you I had an accident. Mai to hoshiyarpur gaya hi nahi" he asked with confusion.


"KYA ????" " what you mean you dint reach there??


" haan mom, mai sach kah raha hu . mai to xyz me tha. Hoshiyarpur to mai gaya hi nahi"


"ohh, then whom were they talking about. Who are there?? You know beta, mohindarji said that you met accident and they are taking care of you. What it all this beta. Kahi unhe sach ka pata to nahi chal gaya.


"I don't think so mom, kyuki agar asa hota to wo aapko phone nahi karte ye batane ke liye ki mai thik hu. Per jab mai waha gaya hi nahi to waha gaya kon." He started thinking. Tried to solve puzzle but as usual failed.


" beta, I am very scared. Kahi kuch bura na ho jaye"


" no, you don't worry mom. Mai pata lagata hu ki kiski himmat hui mere plan me dakhalandaji karne ki." He thought and left from there to hp.



Precap :"Kya kaha aapne. mai ..mai aapko sone nahi deti."'


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Hope I m doing good


Love alll for lovely comentsss and all likesss😃

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wowww speechless update lovu👏...mein toh dream mein chali gayi...😍
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just beautiful update...😊 loved it ❤️...yea maa aur beta kya plan bana raha hai...😡...gurrr...bt meri maan hai na uss ladke ka dant, haat, pair, saar todne k liye...👏...ff padh k lovu ek sawal dil mein aya???????😍...geet k room mein computer hai iska matlb fb id v hoga...mujhe de na uski id 😛😉...hhehehehehe
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Originally posted by: raingurti

wowww speechless update lovu👏...mein toh dream mein chali gayi...😍



rain wapas aaja .. abhi to aur bhi dream dekhna hai tujhe






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Originally posted by: soma.gurti

just beautiful update...😊 loved it ❤️...yea maa aur beta kya plan bana raha hai...😡...gurrr...bt meri maan hai na uss ladke ka dant, haat, pair, saar todne k liye...👏...ff padh k lovu ek sawal dil mein aya???????😍...geet k room mein computer hai iska matlb fb id v hoga...mujhe de na uski id 😛😉...hhehehehehe



hehe somuu fb id geet sirf maan ko batati hai

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