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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: payalpari
yaar had slept early yesterday and got up at 9 in morning how much more rest could i do dear plz bare me from more can't rest more for now 🤔

😆😆ok jayao MAAF kiya😆

and now i'm going to kitchen for breakfast 😃see u i'll try to update hmmm i think after 2 or 3 hours thanks to my POWER CUT

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Posted: 13 years ago

#782

Originally posted by: sona-rai

😆😆ok jayao MAAF kiya😆
and now i'm going to kitchen for breakfast 😃see u i'll try to update hmmm i think after 2 or 3 hours thanks to my POWER CUT

luv yaaa 🤗so much dear cool have u r breakfast and then try and update fast me waiting eagerly for it 😉

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

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LAST PART

AFTER 4 DAYS

savitri devi called yash who's in dehli now

s.d;;;;;;;;;yash hum chah rahay hain ke maan aur geet ki shaddi abb jald ho jayae

yash;;;;;;;jaisay app kahain

s.d;;;;;;;hum ne pandit se baat ker li hai aur mahurat 2 din baad ka hai

yash;;;;;;;;;per itni jaldi

s.d;;;;;;;;;;;kya jaldi yash koi jaldi nahi hai hum theek 2 din baad barat le ker arahay hain too app KANYADAN ki tyari karain

yash;;;;;;;;;theek hai mummy ji ho jayaega abb khush

s.d;;;;;;;;;;; thats like my son hum phone rakhtay hain app barat ke sawagat ki tyari karain.

yash;;;;;ji

after call yash goes to geet's room geet was reading some book when she saw yash on her rooms doorstep with tears in his eyes.

geet;;;;;;;;DAD and hugged him tight wat happened ?why r u crying?

yash;;;;;;;when a daughter is going to her husban's house i think every father had tears in his eyes.

geet;;;;;;;;;;;dad app bhi na mujhay dara diya abhi main kahin nahi ja rahi so no moretears ok

yash;;;;;;;;;geet i want to talk to you.

geet;;;;;;;;ya dad

yash sat on geet's bed and geet sat on floor putting her head on yash's lap

yash;;;;;;;;;geet mummy ji called today and said that she called pundit ji.

geet was seeing yash confusingly

yash continued

yash;;;;;;;;;;;MAHURAT 2 din baad ka nikla hai

geet;;;;;;;;;WAT konsa mahurat kaisa mahurat

yash;;;;;;;;;ur wedding's mahurat

geet is shocked but dad

yash cut her in between

yash;;;;;;;no buts and be ready u r gona be married in 2 days with MAAN

hearing this geet blushed and yash kissed her forehead.

IN KM

maan entered in KM and saw dadi ma in sitting area maan is confused seeing her there

maan;;;;;;;;;dadi ma sab theek hai na app yahan is time?app abhi tak jag rahi hain?

s.d;;;;;;;;maan calm down i'm ok and now listen to me.i called pandit ji today

maan;;;;;;;;;why?

s.d;;;;;;;;;i ask him to give suitable date for ur wedding

maan;;;;;;;;;WAT dadi itni kya jaldi hai

s.d;;;;;;;;;;wat do u mean bye kya jaldi hai?aisay keh rahay hain jaisay hum app ki shaddi zabardasti karwa rahay hain maan hamay pagal mat banaye 2 din baad ka mahurat nikla hai and u r going to be married with GEET on mahurat.am i clear MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA?

maan smiled widely

maan;;;;;;;;;;;hmmm abb app bol rahi hain too ok

s.d;;;;;;;haan hum bohat achi tarah jantay hain ke app hamari wajah se MAJBOOR hain

maan hugged s.d tight.

WEDDING DAY

barat came with all band baja barat

yash and meera do all retuals

maan was sitting in mandap when pandit ji asked to bring bride in mandap

maan was stunned to see geet looking beautifull in her wedding dress

geet reached mandap and meera helped her to sit beside maan she looked towards maan who's still looking towards her geet smiled

after some time pundit ji asked to brides father to do kanyadan

geet with teary eyes sees toward yash but she's confused when she saw yash moving towards door and she's shocked seeing DARJI on door step.

yash come towards mandap with darji and said

yash;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;darji geet ka kanyadan karainge

geet stands up and shouted NOOO

maan held her hand but geet said

geet;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;no maan plzz no u know na why

maan;;;;;;;;;;i know mishti but i also know that u love ur family a lot.

CONT;;;;;BELOW

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#784

maan;;;;;;;;;;;;;darji called me yesterday he wants to say sorry he wants to do ur kanyadan

darji cut maan in between

darji;;;;;;;;;;;;maan betay aik min.geet putar ji hum ne jo bhi kiya mafi ke layak to nahi per aik moqa de de apnay darji ko ghalti sudharnay ka hum tujh se hath jod ker mafi mangtay hain aur yahan sab ke samnay kehtay hain putar ji hum ghalat thay hum ne apni beti per vishwas na ker ke bohat badi ghalti ki putar ji aik moqa

geet was crying hearing this she always wants to tel people that she's not wrong and today darji himself told everyone that she's innocent.

darji;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;hum ne kal maan putar ko phone kiya tha per us ne kaha hamay tujh se akelay main nahi sab ke samnay mafi mangni hogi sab ko batana hoga ke tu masoom hai teri koi ghalti nahi thi aisay hi jaisay sab ke samnay hum ne tujhay ghar se nikala tha.

geet is crying bitterly she sees maan with love and pride maan redone everything he did bad to her in past and today he ade her free from last pain of her heart which is givin to her by her own family but today b'cause of maan she's all free from every pain of her painfull heart

she moved towards darji holding maan's hand

geet;;;;;;;;mainay app ko maaf kiya darji sab khuch jo app ne kiya sab maaf kiya

darji hugged maan and geet

after that darji done geets kanyadan

the story started with ANGER,PAIN,HATERD ended with PURE LOVE AND BLISS

THE END

NEXT;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;EPILOGUE😃

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Mishu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#785

update soon next part dear :)

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#786

Originally posted by: megh_piyashi
update soon next part dear :)

abhi to kya hai😲😆

epilogue bhi ajj hi chahiye kya?😆

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Sonia KN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#787

Dear why u not sent it from starting.I hav to read n then ll comment.So plz take it pending till then 😃

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#788

Originally posted by: Jass.KN
Dear why u not sent it from starting.I hav to read n then ll comment.So plz take it pending till then 😃

sorry yar😳its ok tae ur time muahhh😃

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#789

i tried to send PM'S to all of u if i missed someone plzzz SORRY ok 🤗 🤗

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meena..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#790

awesome dear

loved it

continue soon

waiting for epilogue

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