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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#761

awesome update sheesh

loved it a lot

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#762

PART 25

geet hugged maan tightly and maan was confused to see her crying again.

maan;;;;;;;;;;;;;geet wat happened mishti main koi sach main tumhay saza nahi de raha

geet was still crying

geet;;;;;;;;;;;;maan i love u i love u a lot u r every thing for me now

maan was confused

maan;;;;;;;;;;;; i know geet u love me i love u to a lot mishti but ur family

geet cut him

geet;;;;;;;;;;; maan i can never ever forgive them

maan;;;;;;;;;;;; look geet just try mishti u forgave me na

geet;;;;;;;;;;;;; ya i forgive u b'cause i know u r feeling guilty u r trying to redo every thing and maan u r a stranger for me on that time i'll have to be carefull but my family they through me out from their life without thinking of results wat if some thing bad happened to me kya hota agar main kisi ghalat logoon ke hath chali jati kya hota agar meray sath khuch bohat bura ho jata but nahi aisa khuch nahi socha meri family ne mujhay jeetay ji mar diya .

maan was speechless and geet again hugged him tight and maan let her cry this time

after some time.

maan;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; mishti r u done with ur RONA DHONA

geet hit maan on chest

geet;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; do u want a tight slap again

maan laughed a loud

maan;;;;;;;;;;;; i think dear mainay abhi tumhay kiss nahi kya hai

geet was shocked hearing it and see him

maan;;;;;;;;;; i mean mishty u slap me everytime i kissed u

geet;;;;;;;;;;;;; no maan i can slap u when ever i want to

maan laughed

maan;;;;;;;;;;;;;geet only u have every right on me I LOVE U

geet feel secure in maan's arms when someone coughed to gain there attention.

THE END

precap;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;phewww abb shaadi karain

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craziekudi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#763

awesome update glassdoor.. whats ur name sweety

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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#764

@glassdoor

update was awesum.. loved the way maan tried to lighten her mood...

lovely update sona..

its very difficult for her to forgive family..

still they r not repenting..

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#765

yipeee!!!!!!!🥳

finally they gonna married...

update was awsome

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537048

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Posted: 13 years ago

#766

nice really i too hate her family un logone ek baar bhi nahi socha do update soon

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#767

part 24
@glassdoor - Sheesh nice part...oh ho Geet is in trouble now...

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#768

part 25
@sona - wow that was so cool...shaadi baaki hai ab...is it the epilogue? cont soon...

PS - thanks for the pm Sona hon...

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bindu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#769

great going Sheesh nd Sona😃

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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#770

Hey Sona, no thanks love, for cont PM.

Everyone, awesome work. Loved it till date. Really amazing.

Still getting problem in hitting like button. Same thing, cell phone's net browser, problem in videos and icons. Will do it soon.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

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