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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

Prologue

A Chevrolet car came near the corner of the highway road of Delhi where a hazel eyed girl stood holding a gun.That girl is called as Geet Singh Ahluwalia.She saw the Chevrolet car coming near her & she took the gun from her back & recoiled it & held the gun giving an alarming look.The black car stopped in front of her & the back seat door opened.Geet saw the passengers in the car & was shocked & said,"Arjun..."Arjun smiled at her & said,"Step inside Geet,I'll explain u everything."The other girl who had sat beside Geet smiled at her sweetly & said,"I appreciate ur cautiousness,come inside,my name is Dolly Singh Ahluwalia..."Geet was shocked to hear Ahluwalia surname but she entered the car & closed the door.The car drove to a farm house where Prime Minister Jagmohan Singh had resided.The car entered the farm house which had tight security.Geet,Arjun & Dolly showed their Id card & they gave their gun to the sharp shooters who checked them with metal detector.The sharp shooters took the three to Prime minister & the three saluted him & said one by one...Geet said saluting,"CID Inspector Geet Singh Ahluwalia reporting sir."Arjun said saluting,"Senior CID Inspector Arjun Sharma reporting sir.Dolly said saluting,"Senior CID Inspector Dolly Singh Ahluwalia reporting sir."

Guys this is a new story am trying to frame which had a love story too.It is an army based love story but in this Geet comes to protect Maan when he's in mission in undercover.Pls give me ur suggestion.

INDEX IS IN SECOND PAGE-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2888808/farz-thread-1?pn=2

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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Dona

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Posted: 13 years ago

another story 😊

congrats 4 dis new one👏👏

nice prolouge

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 13 years ago

one more..
now u have 4 ffs.
awesome.
just update on time...😆

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sdlife19

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Posted: 13 years ago

congrats for the new story

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

CHARACTER SKETCH

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GEET SINGH AHLUWALIYA-She's an A class CID officer & she's shunted to the corner from the working of the CID office works & is doing only peon works becoz of her brother's reputation of becoming traitor.She's also a qualified military lawyer but not practised for once also though she's life science graduate.She took the degree in military law to save her brother but didn't practise it becoz of her brother's death.

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BRIJ SINGH AHLUWALIYA-He's an army officer & has captain rank but is called as traitor becoz he can't protect the nuclear triggers & was captured when he was smuggling it outside the academy.He's brother of Geet & he's no more now.

SATHYAM SINGH AHLUWALIYA-He's the father of Geet & Brij.He's retired govt offical.

VEERA SINGH AHLUWALIYA-She's the mother of Brij & Geet & is a house wife.

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CAPTAIN MAAN SINGH KHURANA-He's an army officer & best friend of Brij.Geet's best teacher & mentor & her beloved.He goes with his dictates of his heart.He loves Geet very much & can't see her any trouble.But he not confesses his love to Geet till last becoz of killing her brother Brij.He's expert in strategy & communications.

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ARJUN SHARMA-He's colleague of Geet & thinks her as his younger sister.He's son of reputed politician & his profession also CID officer.Both Geet & Arjun are colleagues & special officers of anti-terrorism cell.His father is now working as minister of home of Delhi & his name is Vishwajit Sharma.In his office everyone fears of him becoz of his father's reputation & Arjun is as protective to Geet as a brother.He's senior to Geet.He loves Geet as his younger sister though they're not blood related.

KANCHENJUNGA MILITARY ACADEMY(KMA)-It is situated in Ambala cant,Punjab & is a reputed institution that has produced courageous soldiers from 14 yrs.Captain Brij Singh Ahluwaliya is the student & best Cadet pass out of this institution.This institution is one of the nuclear launching sites & has the base of nuclear triggers are protected safely & secretly.This academy has motto strength & honour.

BRIGADIER CHANDOK-He's the principal of KMA.He's very strict principal & he's concerned only of discipline.He has the favourite student & he was Brij Singh Ahluwaliya & he's so angry becoz of Brij the military board has come to conclusion to close the KMA.

JAGMAOHAN SINGH-He's the current prime minister of India.

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DOLLY JUNEJA OR DOLLY SINGH AHLUWALIYA-She's sister-in-law of Geet & wife of Brij.She's also CID officer & is an encounter specialist & is also the special officer of anti-terrorism cell.She's a row with her dad & came outside the home & stood on her feet by joining CID officer training & is now she's a CID officer.

ACP PRUTHVIRAJ CHAUHAN-He's the new boss of the mission in which Geet,Arjun & Dolly are present.Other officers are Muskaan Mallya,Abhijeet Adhikari,Daya Nayak,Vivek Mehra,John d'souza,Sasha Sehgal.

M.G.JUNEJA- Defence minster of India & is highly corrupted minister & is mainly involved in nuclear triggers theft & in making Brij traitor.He's the godfather of Captain Maan Singh Khurana.He has two daughters Dolly,Daljeet.First one is Dolly but he knows noting abt her whereabouts & he even not knows that she's the wife of brij Singh Ahluwaliya who he made the traitor.Second one is Daljit who has no concern abt her life or her father's reputation & is a law-breaking,rude & is concern abt the next release of album black-eyed beast.

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Dr.SAMEERA SEN-She's a psychiartist but undercover foreign spy,who has come to theft the reamining nuclear trigger from KMA.She's involved in the conspiracy of making Brij as a traitor.She's highly trained foreign spy.She has come here to theft nuclear trigger.

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MAJOR BHARGHAV-He's an army officer who says lots of life but not in front of Geet becoz she knows his background becoz he had dishounoured her best friend & made her defamed in front of society & her family.He hates Geet becoz she made him dishounour in front of his family.His policy is divide & control,but not in front of Geet.He was investigation officer during Brij's court martial case.He knows noting abt Geet that she's an CID officer.He's such an oppurtunist.

other character will come afterwards & I'll introduce it with a brief abt a character.I hope u liked the character sketch guys,don't forget to leave ur comments.

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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stuti

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Posted: 13 years ago

Great concept...
Please do continue...
Really eager to read more... 😃

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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Beena_g

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow,,u r rocking yaar..with another FF. ..too gud..This concept also i loved.Yeah it s bit same as the serial LRL..loved that serial too,am sure will love this FF too.Pls continue

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

congrats...

prologue and CS
OMG u are doing LRL here?
my jaanu's show...
so my jaanu's character Maan is gonna portray...
cont soon...

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART 1

I am a simple girl of Punjabi family from Almora.Am a CID officer A-class inspector from anti terrorism cell from Delhi branch.But due to some circumstances I've become peon in my office.I've the work of report writing,office works of bureau.Am accustomed with that only.My senior officers only call me when they want their food has been ordered & insult me by accusing that I'd mixed poison in the food.

My daily routine is to attend the office works,order my senior officers food,polish their shoes,cleam their clothes,& clean their office,even their toilets.Am not taken with the team for field work for investigating the cases.Am not welcome for my senior officers private conversations regarding the criminals becoz they think me as criminal.I've become peon in my office,yet am living.I've no friends in my office or outside or in my surroundings.Those who were with me in good terms as my friends have become enemies.

Those who are in my surroundings aren't my friends.They don't know who am I & I don't know who they are.I've got a very good job but am not satisfied but my parents are satisfied.Becoz they liked me like peon,am shunted with the all the actions of the CID office & am only called for peon works.Even the peon of our office sees me as his peon.My life has become miserable who can't change the life of mine.But am not satisfied with this life,becoz the reason behind this miserable life of mine is very strong.

My full name is Geet Singh Ahluwaliya.My age is 25,am born in the age of 1985 on June 8th.My parents are Satyam Singh Ahluwaliya & Veera Singh Ahluwaliya.I'd a brother called Brij Singh Ahluwaliya but he's no more.Now am settled in Nainital but previously we were settled in Almora.This city became a tragedy city to us becoz my brother ended his last journey from here.My Brij Singh Ahluwaliya was an army officer from military intelligence,Captain Brij Singh Ahluwaliya.

He was qualified from KMA which is situated in Ambala cantt Punjab.My brother is 3 yr older to me & he was born in 1982 on August 9th.He was secretly posted to KMA on officer on special duty.He came here to serve his people,his army & his country but was made as traitor.This became public & we've to leave Almora & we settled in Nainital.My brother was never a traitor he was patriot.But who cares,whenever I was hearing my superiors talking abt my brother,my temper would rise & I was having a big row with them abt my brother's character.This is also the main reason why I am shunted.But I had friend in my office who was saving me from everything.

His name is Arjun Sharma.He was protecting me like a brother protects his sister.He was only ray of hope which was making my miserable life easy.Becoz he was so influential person in that place & senior to me in office & in age also.He was son of the home minister of Delhi.His father's name was Vishwajit Sharma.Whenever I was having the row with superiors officers,he would stand with me together that is why they were shutting their mouths.He was saving me becoz he thought me as his own sister & I was also having emotional touch with him.

This is the reason wny other officers shut their mouths.Becoz they thought that arguing with him sentences them they transfer to the places where they don't want to go.I had taken him to my parents once & they were so impressed & so worrieless becoz of his attitude.My parents wanted me to do M.Sc but I didn't like that becoz I wanted to serve my country like my brother Brij.Then Brij suggested me of taking the course of CID.I've the memory of saying that"Geet,mein is desh ki sarhad ki raksha kartha hoon aur tum is desh ko ander se raksha karo."Like that.

But after the death of my brother,my life changed completely.My friends stopped talking with me,my colleagues hated me & my parents were humiliated.Firtst my brother's designations were taken away & after that his life was taken away.There was no report abt my brother's death.How,when,where & who killed my brother we don't know.One day I asked my friend Arjun to investigate,but he was refusing that becoz he doesn't want to loose me.I understood that becoz I had doubt that the reputed people are involved in my brother's death conspiracy & stopped badgering him.But one day a mysterious letter came into my home.In that letter this was written,

Hi Geet,

I'm ur friend,i don't want to say my name becoz in case this letter goes to wrong hands.I need talk to u face to face abt Brij's death.I can't reveal you myself becoz my life is in danger.I want to tell u the secret of Brij's death.I'm writing this to u becoz I want to talk to u.U want to protect 2 captains who were ur brother's friends,best friends,their life is in danger & u can only protect them.I want to tell u everything.If u want to meet me then place a handkerchief,a red one in front of ur house's gate & I'll come & meet u in ur house garden in disguise.I want to meet u urgently Geet,Pls don't hesitate,don't doubt on me.I want to meet u on 8th feb at 22o'clock.Pls reply fast,i'm meant pls place the handkerchief on ur gate.

See you soon on 8th Feb.22o'clock.

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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