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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update :D waiting for next soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fabuls ff. Left right left ki yaar diladiyaa. great going. plz do add me to ur pm list.
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PART 18

Ali & Kunal celebrated their victory.Ali asked,"Let's go to cafe & have some coffee...!"Kunal answered,"Oh no,mein nahi aane waala.This drill has made me weak,my body parts are paining...!"Then Kunal gave a chocolate to Ali & said seeing around,"Where's ur big bro...?"Ali answered dismissively,"I don't know,is he tells & goes out,big bro...!"Kunal said,"Anyways,he's an clever man yaar.U had gone with that Pooja leaving me with king kong.Did u know he he repaired the water pump forcefully & took the water to the bucket...?"



Ali said meekly,"Agar hum nahi jaathe toh woh beauty & beast ki story action movie me badal jaathi...!"On that time Arjun entered the room then Kunal gave him the chocolate to celebrate their victory which Arjun said carelessly,"Yeh bachchon ki khaane ki cheez hai...!"Ali said,"Khalo bro...bachchon ko khush karne ke liye khaalo...!"Kunal said smiling,"Right,papa love u...!"giving the chocolate then he saw the rum bottle on Arjun's hands.




Kunal asked innocently,"Is that black coffee...?Give me some...!"And stands but shouts with pain,"Guys my paav nahi hil raha hai...!"With shock.Ali said,"Aap shaant ho jaayiye...!Move ur fingers...!"Kunal asked with shocke,"If my leg isn't moving how my fingers be...?"Then he moved his fingers & was a bit relieved.


Ali said calmly,"It's only cramp becoz of exhaustion...!"Arjun gave his bottle of rum & said to Kunal,"Ye lo black coffee,U'll be ok...!"Kunal tried to take the bottle but Ali grabbed it immediately & smelt it & coughed with disgust & said,"I knew it...!"Giving the bottle back to Arjun & said to Kunal,"I'll bring some hot water mixed with salt,u'll be ok...!"And went outside.



Then Arjun said softly,"Drink some & apply it on the leg...!"But Ali peeped & said,"Bahi jaan,don't do that...!"Kunal said painfully,"Yeah,just make it fast bro...!"Meanwhile Maan admitted Geet to infirmary.Dr.Shalini(Dr.S) examined her.Maan saw Geet worriedly.



Dr.S said Geet's state,"Exhaustion...thakaan...isiliye faint ho gayi...aur so gayi...ab woh gehri neend mein hai aur apne ex-boy friends ko yaad kar rahi hai...agar woh log isse nahi thukraaya hota toh..shaayad...!"Then she checked Geet's BP & sighed & finished her words.



Maan who had kept his hand on his forehead said slowly,"Captain...aap kabhi serious nahi hoti...?"Dr.S teased,"Please...jab pyaar aur mohabbat ki baat aati hai then I'll always bhi serious...!"Maan said angrily,"Captain please...!"Dr.S teased,"Off oh Captain aap bahut jaldi sharma jaathe hai...!"


Maan said to change the subject,"To batayiye kya inhe aise hi transfer karna hoga...!"Dr.S teased,"Aise hi jaise aapne isse apne baahon mein laaye the...!"Maan said warningly,"Captain...!"Dr.S laughed while Maan took Geet on his strong arms & asked angrily,"Do u mind?"Dr.S said smiling,"Jao Captain...and take care...I'm mean Cadet ka khayaal rakhna...!"



Maan nodded dismissively & went from there carrying Geet in his arms.He took Geet in his arms to her hostel where all the girls saw him carrying Geet.He called to the prefect of the hostel & said to call the hostel's warden to Geet's room & went towards Geet's room.


Pooja who was talking to mom heard the knock at the door which she asked,"Kaun hai...?"Maan said politely,"Captain Maan Singh Khurana...!"Pooja hid her mobile saying to her mom that it's Gurmeet Chaudhary's phone & went & opened the door.Pooja saw the scene with mouth hanging open & asked worriedly,"Sir,Geet ko kya huva...?"😲


While Maan said politely,"Aap saamne se hategi...!"Pooja said immediately,"Yes sir...!"And she gave the way.Maan came inside & made Geet lie down on her bed carefully.Pooja asked worriedly,"Sir,Geet ko kya huva...?"Maan answered sprinking some water,"Kuch nahi bas thakaan ke wajaise apna hosh kho baithi...!"



Pooja said seeing him lovingly,"Woh toh hone hi tha...sir aap isse field se yahan thak apni baahon mein lekar aaye...!"Maan changed the subject & said,"Cadet Ghai,darwaaza khula rakhiyega...inhe taazi havaaon ki zaroorat hai...!"Then he took off her shoes while Pooja said,"Sir,aapko dekhke na mujhe Gurmeet Chaudhary ki yaad aathi hai...!


Maan asked in amazement,"Kya...?"Pooja said innocently,"Aap Gurmeet Chaudhary nahi janthe...woh GHSP serial ki star hai...!"Maan answered politely,"Cadet Ghai mein serials nahi dekhtha...!"Pooja said excitedly,"Meine toh hazaar baar dekha hai...mein toh GC ki itni badi fan hoon...!"


Maan thought that Pooja is biting his head & said interrupting her blabber,"Cadet Ghai...aap chup nahi reh sakthe toh aap baahar thandi hava kha sakthi hai...!"Pooja said nervously,"Yes sir...going sir...!"And she was abt to go outside but stopped & said,"Sir,shall I say u something?"Maan said dismissively,"Is anything remaining to tell?"



Pooja said sweetly,"Ur very nice sir...!"Maan saw with puzzle."U saved Geet,if I'd have the mobile,I'd take the picture & saved this moment in my mobile.U know that cameras will be there in the mobiles these days...!"Maan said warningly,"Cadet Ghai...!"Pooja said nervously,"Yes sir...going sir...!"Then she came back once again,"Excuse me sir...!"



Maan said angrily,"Now what?"Pooja said seeing towards Geet's dress where she had hid her mobile & said nervously,"Kuch nahi sir,mein kuch bhool gayi thi...mein usse baad mein leloongi...!"And she went from there.Maan came near Geet & corrected her pillow so that she sleeps comfortably.



First time Maan glanced Geet clearly,her eyes which were shut & her eye lashed were fluttering due to the air which blew against her face.Her white nose which was long had a black spotted dirt which he wiped it immediately.When her skin came into contact to his palm then his skin burned.



He felt shiver down his spine feeling her nose skin against his palm.Then he saw her baby pink lips which has natural pink color.She didn't wore any lipstick which he noticed intently.Those lips were inviting him to kiss it.When Maan saw Geet's serene face then unknowingly a smile crept on his lips.


Maan came forward to kiss those lips but stopped halfway & his eyes widened with shock & he went backwards immediately.Maan stood immediately & saw her serene face which shows the world's innocence & a smile crept on his lips unknowingly.then his eyes fell upon a paper which were peeping from her pilow.


Maan sat back & saw it was a photo,he didn't saw the face but read the name & date of the studio,"Ambala studio..jab mein yahan Cadet huva karta tha tab sirf Cadets yahan photos khichvaaya karthe the...aur ab yeh studio band bhi hogaya hai...!Which photo is this that has connection with KMA to Cadet Singh?"



And he tried to see that photo but on that time Lolita Sen entered & said politely,"Sir...!"Maan said stuffing the photo inappropriately inside the pillow & said standing back,"Yes...!"Lolita Sen said politely,"Mein aapki kya madad kar saktha hoon...!"Maan said bossily,"Just take care of Cadet.If she refuses to eat then also tell her to eat.Or else exhaustion will lead to weakness...!"and he went from there.



Maan hurried back to his cabin & searched a bood called 'TIMELINE,BY MICHEAL CRICHTON'.in his study table.He opened the middle of the boof & took a photo & saw the same name & date which was on the photo in Geet's room.Then he thought that something connection is there between her & the photo.



He saw the photo affectionately becoz it was the photo of his & Captain BSA holding the trophy.There was an innocent smile in Brij's face & Maan's eyes became wet.then he wiped his tears & kept the photo back in the book.



Precap-Maan knowing Geet's truth that she's the sister of Brij Singh Ahluwaliya.


Previous Part 17-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2888808/farz-thread-1


NEXT PART 19-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2888808/farz-thread-1



Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved d update dear!!!!
Loved Maan taking care of Geet!!!!
Plzzz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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achchha hi hoga jab maan ko geet k bade mein pata chal jayega toh...phir woh dono agar pass aye toh humein maaneet moments dekhne ko milega...he he he...

awesome update...


loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...



Edited by love2_soma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved da update. pooja n maans scene was good
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maan is getting attracted towards Geet...

he will come to know that she is his friend Brij's sister...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb👏
maan tkin care of geet n strts feeling 4 her too!!
waiting 4 d nxt one!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 18
nice part...
cont soon dear...

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